Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD V (Chp 23 19th July 2020) - Page 30

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 17

Arnav liked her name with Raizada tagged on to it. A little start of something there?

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 17

Arnav was the best friend Aman had. Only that kind of friend would notice the signs of depression.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey Radhika,

I hope all is well at your end. Please let us know when we will get the update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey I have to completed all chaps in one go of this story and WRITING IS REALLY COMMENDABLE AND FABULOUS BUT SORRY IF IT IS OFFENDING BUT CHARACTERS OF THIS story ARE VERY I DON'T LIKE ANY CHARACTER of THIS STORY THAT MUCH NOT EVEN ARNAV AND KHUSHI

Arnav in this story seems very petty and very weak and flippable person to me . After destroying khushi present and future let's say indirectly he has guts to say sorry as if his sorry will bring back her LosT dreams and years. And lets assume if he had NOT met khushi accidentally would he have been felt sorry, would he have been tried to find her to say sorry NO HE WUD NOT. AND THAT'S END OF THE STORY.

And suddenly everyone wants to make ammends of their past mistake as if their mistake had not changed someone reality.

Aman, Arnav, Payal and poonam are one of a kind of person I don't think I would ever want to meet in my life who think they will say sorry get rid of their guilt and goes on their way.PETTY PERSONS

BUT AGAIN IT'S KHUSHI FAULT TOO SHE IS TOO GREAT THAT I DON'T I WANNA ANY PERSON TO BE. THE GIRL WHO HAD SUCH A BRIGHT FUTURE WHAT SHE IS DOING NOW "MITHAI KI DUKAN" NOT THAT ANYTHING IS WRONG IN THAT BUT SHE was CAPABLE OF MORE THING and people responsible for her this present realty albeit half came saying sorry to he SHE BRUSHES IT OFF LIKE "PAST KI BAAT" AS IF THAT PAST KI BAAT HAD NOT CHANGED HER REALTIY.

IMAGINE TO HIDE UR OWN INSECURITIES U MAKE A 14 YEAR GIRL RESPONSIBLE FOR UR SUICIDE AND BRUSHES IT OFF LIKE A JOKE I DON'T THINK ANYONE CAN GO MORE LOW THAN THIS.

BUT AGAIN THIS IS KHUSHI FAULT TOO SHE GAVE TOO MUCH IMPORTANCE TO OTHERS THAN HER AND THAS MAKE HER A PITIFUL PERSON.

I KNOW THIS IS ARSHI STORY BUT FIRST TIME I DON'T WANT THIS ARNAV FOR KHUSHI .SHE DESERVE MORE BETTER .

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey I have to completed all chaps in one go of this story and WRITING IS REALLY COMMENDABLE AND FABULOUS BUT SORRY IF IT IS OFFENDING BUT CHARACTERS OF THIS story ARE VERY I DON'T LIKE ANY CHARACTER of THIS STORY THAT MUCH NOT EVEN ARNAV AND KHUSHI

Arnav in this story seems very petty and very weak and flippable person to me . After destroying khushi present and future let's say indirectly he has guts to say sorry as if his sorry will bring back her LosT dreams and years. And lets assume if he had NOT met khushi accidentally would he have been felt sorry, would he have been tried to find her to say sorry NO HE WUD NOT. AND THAT'S END OF THE STORY.

And suddenly everyone wants to make ammends of their past mistake as if their mistake had not changed someone reality.

Aman, Arnav, Payal and poonam are one of a kind of person I don't think I would ever want to meet in my life who think they will say sorry get rid of their guilt and goes on their way.PETTY PERSONS

BUT AGAIN IT'S KHUSHI FAULT TOO SHE IS TOO GREAT THAT I DON'T I WANNA ANY PERSON TO BE. THE GIRL WHO HAD SUCH A BRIGHT FUTURE WHAT SHE IS DOING NOW "MITHAI KI DUKAN" NOT THAT ANYTHING IS WRONG IN THAT BUT SHE was CAPABLE OF MORE THING and people responsible for her this present realty albeit half came saying sorry to he SHE BRUSHES IT OFF LIKE "PAST KI BAAT" AS IF THAT PAST KI BAAT HAD NOT CHANGED HER REALTIY.

IMAGINE TO HIDE UR OWN INSECURITIES U MAKE A 14 YEAR GIRL RESPONSIBLE FOR UR SUICIDE AND BRUSHES IT OFF LIKE A JOKE I DON'T THINK ANYONE CAN GO MORE LOW THAN THIS.

BUT AGAIN THIS IS KHUSHI FAULT TOO SHE GAVE TOO MUCH IMPORTANCE TO OTHERS THAN HER AND THAS MAKE HER A PITIFUL PERSON.

I KNOW THIS IS ARSHI STORY BUT FIRST TIME I DON'T WANT THIS ARNAV FOR KHUSHI .SHE DESERVE MORE BETTER .

ARNAV AND POONAM GET AWAY VERY EASILY EVEN AFTER RUINING KHUSHI AND AFTER YEAR PASSED THEY HAVE SUDDENLY CONSCIENCE THAT THEY HAVE WRONGED HER.

Arnav love or it seems pity to me is NOT THE SOLUTION OF KHUSHI MISERY, HER RUINED DREAMS AND IT'S NOT EVEN SEEMS LOVE TO ME HE WAS READY TO MARRY HIS BEST FRIEND SOME DAYS AGO AND SUDDENLY AFTER SOME MEETING WITH KHUSHI HE REASLISE HE LOVES HER and that's bullshit the girl who was not even his friend back then even after studying high school and college in same vincity the girl who he has not spoken nicely even back then and suddenly he loves her His whole family is hypocrite except anjali. ANAND is saying sorry now for her wife behavior if he was so much guilty y he didn't do anything back then agreed he was ill but that's not an excuse .

AND AGAIN THERE IS KHUSHI WHO AGREE OR NOT IS A PUSHOVER SHE TOOK EVERYONE SHIT WITHOUT PROTESTING AND THAT'S MAKE HER LIFE MISERABLE MORE THAN ANYTHING. I EXPECTED MORE FROM HER NOT A HALWAI GIRL WHO LOOKS SO MISERABLE THAT EVERY DAMN ONE EITHER TAKE ADVANTAGE of HER OR PITY HER. I EXPECTED SHE WAS A STRONG GIRL WHO EVEN AFTER ALL THAT COLLEGE DRAMA WOULD COLLECT HER BROKEN PIECES AND MAKE HER PARENTS PROUD WHO DID MORE THAN ANYTHING FOR HER ESPECIALLY HER DAD heck SHE WAS A "Champion" for him but what she did. SHE DID GIVE MORE IMPORTANCE TO OUTSIDERS THAN HER PARENTS WHO EXPECTED MORE FROM HER BUT SHE LET THEM DOWN AND now SHE IS BUSY ROMANCING raizada.NOT FOR ANYONE BUT SHE SHOULD have TRIED MORE TO COMPLETE HER DREAMS FOR HER DAD AT LEAST BUT SHE DIDN'T AND THAT MAKE HER A WEAK CHARACTER.

Akash said their classmates were not bad but u can't kill someone and say it was not their intention they r not bad at heart.it doesn't work that way.

I DON'T KNOW BUT IT SEEMS U R TRYING TO JUSTIFY THEIR WRONGDOINGS WITH A SORRY AND ROMANCE BETWEEN ARSHI. I KNOW ARSHI IS OTP BUT ARNAV GET IT VERY EASY WHETHER IT IS HIS DREAM OR KHUSHI FORGIVENESS. HE COMPLETED HIS DREAM BUT WHAT ABOUT KHUSHI SHE HAS LOST EVERYTHING HER DREAMS, HER FATHER'S DREAM, HER FATHER TRUST WHICH IS MOST PAINFUL.

AND EVERYONE IS COMING BACK AND SAYING SORRY TO HER I WOULD SAY F@@K OFF OR I WOULD HAVE BEEN COLLECTED MY BROKEN PIECES , HAVE BEEN MAKE SOMETHING OF ME TO PROUD OF AND LOOKED IN THEIR EYES ND SAY TRY HARD U ALL CAN'T BREAK ME. SUCCESS IS THE BEST REVENGE.

I DON'T KNOW WHAT U WANT TO SHOW BUT IF U WANT TO SHOW A CINDERELLA TYPE STORY IT IS NOT APPEALING HERE IT IS PITIFUL.

AND I DON'T SEE ANY SPARK BETWEEN THIS ARNAV AND KHUSHI.

PAYAL IS ATLEAST SOMEONE WHO IS NOT HYPOCRITE SHE IS SAME WITH ALMOST EVERYONE HER SARCASTIC SELF AND THAT IS MORE ACCEPTABLE THAN ANYONE AND LAVANYA SHE IS TRUE HYPOCROTE KHUSHI IS HER FRIEND IF SHE IS BELOW HER BUT SHE IS NOT IF SHE IS EQUAL OR ABOVE HER.

IT SEEMS IN THIS STORY U WANT TO JUSTIFY PEOPLE SNOBBISH BEHAVIORI wish khushi had not gone to horizon school and had not met all that people then maybe her life would have been different a better different. But alas!

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 18

NK and Jun are speculating why Anjali has invited Khushi. Wish I knew what Anjali's thought process is on this. She doesn't have to keep reminding Arnav about the difficulties of a relationship between him and Khushi.

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 18

Arnav doesn't know for now that Poonam endorsed Khushi as the coach. That will come as a surprise.

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 18

Arnav has just found out that Poonam knows about Khushi's appointment as the coach. She didn't reveal her endorsement though.

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 18

Why did Minu recommend Khushi for the job? Khushi does not know her. Was it Aman who engineered the whole thing?

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 18

Akash didn't exactly say what happened between him and Payal, so how does Arnav know what it was?

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