Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD V (Chp 23 19th July 2020) - Page 26

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Posted: 5 years ago

These songs are truly trademarked by this story for me. I can say with confidence that whenever and wherever these songs play in the future, a thought of this story will on the forefront and smile is bound to follow.

You know how it is said that the moment between a couple seems so personal that you avert your eyes, I experience that same feeling during the hand holding in the first date, all the teasing and that India Gate moment. Its just so pure, genuine and wholesome, sigh! You, your writing makes it all magical! The little nuggets of their progress are one of a kind, and yet not, and that is what makes it special.

One of the things I really admire is how frank Khushi is. Her conversations with anyone for that matter is candid and honest. For all that tumultuous relationship with Arnav since the New Ons days, she sounds so relieved when she says to Akash that they have finally become friends.

The whole mystery surrounding Shyam, Mihir, AR is one filled with intrigue. The rising information from Akash’s PI as well as from Anand, made it even more gripping! I am looking forward to the payoff of this plot!

Damn, Arjoon really is in a pickle. While the lying has to be dealt with, I hope all of this doesn’t backfire from all ends!

The Raizada Lunch part was fun! Never thought I would associate the word fun with the clan, but as they say, Never Say Never!

Poonam seems aware of Anand’s cancer, that seems one of the influences that has led to the change in her behaviour and their relationship. With the amends, fairness and normalcy, she is definitely leaning towards the good on the scale of good vs evil.

The entire 2nd date is perfect. Felt a gamut of emotions that I can’t disassociate from one another, I think the word perfect encompasses it all! 😳

While the comment above falls more or less in the random category, here are some more random thoughts -

-The way Arnav is absolutely smitten by Khushi is just swoon worthy! ☺️

-The Anand segment made me realise that while business and busyness are just differentiated by one letter, the two words perfectly complement one another.

-Also, the entire segment of Anand is extremely insightful and gives so much perspective; the para where Anand reflects over A&K is particularly far-sighted and thoughtful.

-That line about Arnav being a ‘Phone a Friend’, how savage! 😂

-Really, what is up with Shyam, Poonam and Roy? All of it looks so fishy.

-Anjali, Preeto and NK are such devoted A&K shippers, their presence is always brings joy!


Super chapter! 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

I love N.k bus !!! ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful update ❤️

Really loved the long descripted update and how you unraveled all the suspenses . I think everyone’s pov was much needed.

You are a brilliant storyteller!! Love all your characters .

I am in awe of N.K . Such a cutie really.

P.s : Where can i get khushi’s customized jeans 😛

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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely update, the wait was worth to see you continue this story and how beautifully you pen down each chapter!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Your notes are becoming as interesting as the story itself.

Good to know that the Cyclone turned out to be a bit of wind and few drops of rain.

Glad to hear that your neighbours recovered from Corona.

My sister was saying two +ve cases were found on either side of her house. I can understand the anxiety.

Great, you stocked up the house with some basic essentials.

Coming to the story, loved to read the POVs of some important characters. Looking forward to the others' POVs as well.

That was very nice of you to take your husband's opinion on the chapters. Poor guy got sacked in the virtual world for giving an honest opinion. Give Joon the best job possible to make it up with your husband, will you?

Your play list has very heartwarming lyrics. I love to listen to them in a loop.

Whenever I listen songs like Bahon Mein Chale Aao, I search for them in Youtube, try to download them and add them to my play list.

Your Hinglish is fine with me.

I think voting for the chapters is important in Wattpad and I think we all can at least Vote for all the chapters.

Cheers......

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Posted: 5 years ago

I hope they find a way towards each other and you shown how dysfunctional families really are and how the twists and turns of reality makes or breaks you. , I love the hidden nuances in your stories and the silent audiences are there recording each scene as they unfold , very well thread together looking fwd to the next part , stays safe

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Posted: 5 years ago

So NK and his mom have orchestrated the whole thing, with a lot of input from Anand?? I am super intrigued and incredibly grateful to them too!

Eagerly looking forward to the next part 😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

I felt a little letdown that the date was not a date in a true sense but then felt elated as you eased us into a comfort zone with glimpses of where everyone is and what their thoughts are. This was one of those relaxed and comfort chapters which did not make a lot of splash barring the news of Anand's health condition😒. That was a quite a revelation. We also got an insight into Anand's backgorund and also made us get a better understanding on the missing funds.

I missed Aman 😕, even though he was mentioned in the passing. After last week, I was so wishing that there is some way that you can add more of him to the story.

NK - you're such a darling🤗 for nudging Arnav towards Khushi all those years ago. I am super excited that the world around Arshi is looking forward for the relationship to work between them. Just like NK nothing is certain between these two, so I'm going to keep my finger's crossed and not jinx anything.

I was so worried if Akash would say "Ladka aur Ladki kabhi dosth nahein ban sakthe..." when Kushi said "hum mein dosti ho gayi hai..". Anjali seriously a namoona who has no filter on her mouth🤣. As Anand put in, it's Arjoon only who can keep her grounded. About Arjoon, he lost his job and is has kept it under the wraps to not distress his wife - can anyone get sweeter than that❤️? Hope things work out for Arjoon pretty soon.

But sometimes we need people like Anjali who make light of serious topics at the same time being subtle about passing hints.

Preetho is the epitome of a friend who knows no boundaries of friendship, but knows knows the exact boundaries of a true friend. It's amazing how even with the mention of AAA, she sets the comfort level on cruise whenever she is around. Khushi should be thankful for having friends around but she should be grateful for having Preetho around.

Dang it - phir se late entry maara Arnav ne. Thank heavens it didn't get cancelled especially after all the effort Khushi put in getting dressed which did get noticed by Arnav, earning her some cute compliments😊. And yes Im ready to visit to all the fun places in and around Delhi with some great "pyaar" related blockbuster numbers being played by the RJ.

Thank you writerji - this was that kind of special chapter where you end up yearning for more at the end.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey radhika,

Very sorry for the late comment dear.. AD was brutal..

This update revealed many things..

Anand raizada is badly sick. They haven't revealed it to anjali and arnav. It's going to be bad when they come to know.. they deserve to know about their parents whether it's good or bad.. and poonam's behaviour towards kushi is to some extent justified given his playboy image.. but she should've checked the facts.. and looks like he is a victim of media.. what is he planning to do with Mihir?? did he discuss about arnav and kushi with anuradha?? And that's how they planned the accidental meet up of arshi at T&S?? Is he trying to right his wrongs? so nice of NK.. I'm a big fan of NK bhai now 😆


Is lavanya akash's love interest? but why didn't he propose her 😕 and i've one more doubt here.. what happened between payal and him and why was arnav disappointed?? Will wait to know this..

I love this anjali di.. too straight forward.. i'm glad to hear poonam raizada's approval for arnav's marriage with anyone he is "kushi" with.. thanks di 🤗

Looks like shyam is now a close ally of poonam raizada 😲 and both sister and brothers hot lines from CC to GK are going strong 😆


Payal is interviewing Arjun bose.. interesting.. waiting to know about it..


That was a sweet and cute date.. they have come a long way 😊❤️

you have a way with words radhika 👏 this was a hilarious update.. your AAA and kbc mein phone a friend cracked me up 🤣and the retro songs are amazing ❤️


Waiting for the next dear.. hope everything is going fine at your end 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Any update on update?🙂

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