ROSID FF:RAIN IN THE DESERT - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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interesting cs....so many money minded people...uff..hope roli would change everyone! waiting for next ponne!! update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice cs...in short can say bharadwaj clan is controlled by money minded women..that is the reason Sid became like this ...simar is so wicked good that Sid opposes her... Roli will have to work hard to change Sid's thought by living in between these money minded people.... waiting for the updates...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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CHAPTER 1:

Early morning .Just now the sun has rised .We can see a big wall with electrical fencing.There is big black and brown with a name board Bharatwaj manison.As we enter in we can see a fountain at the center.The entrance we can see a beautiful sceneary with trees planrs creeps etc.The bonsai trees lined the perfect lawn in their wooden boxes. In the centre there was a pond as large as a small lake with flowering lily pads.We can see an artifical lakes with lily and lotus.There are many trees behind .Small birds are drinking water near the pond and sitting in the trees.The outside of the house gives a pleasent feelings while if see about the condition of people living inside the mansion is not pleasent.



The mansion was beautiful.It had oil painttings and carvings in the wall.It was so silent when we enter the hall of the house which had a beautiful lattern.From the sun backed outside.The air conditioning in the house was comfortable.We can hear noise from the east side of the house.We can see there is a puja room.There are people standing in line and praying to he god.



We see peoples standing in two rows.At first row standing close to the idol and praying.We can see a women sitting in wheel doing the aarathi to god.Behind her we can see a middle aged couple and a young couple,two girls of age 22 and 5.Slowly the women doing aarathi give the plate to the middle aged couple Sharmista and shekhar have says her.Ji mataji says them starts the aarathi.Then the plate is given to the young couple Prem and Simar.Then finnaly the two girls jhanvi of 22 yrs and anjali of 5 yrs also do the same.



Behind them in a very good distances people stand .Their appreance was much different than the people standing infront of them.The people infront clothings are new mordern and costly while the people behind them are wearing a simple rugged clothes.There 3 peoples standing behind.A middle aged couple and a man of late twnties.The man is standing and sleeping.He seems to be without any feelings .While the middle aged couples face was tired,exhausted and their face showed an immense pain.



The aarathi session was completed .Jhanvi showed the aarathi from distance to the three Rajendhar and Sujatha and their son Satyendar.They just looked at standing away.All were going to move .Sharmista was about to push the wheel chair of Mataji .But Simar stopped showing her hand.I will take her said Simar and pushed her to her room.After sometimes Simar came out her with a paper in her hand.


Sharmistha who was standing there noticed that as she was disturbed by mataji and simar activities these day.She followed simar to her room.Simar kept it in her locker and closed the door.She went outside to have the breakfast.While sharmista tries to open the locker with the pin as she sees simar pin.She tries hard and hard but she couldnt.She thinks what the pin could be and she hears a clapping sound.She sees Simar she gets shocked.Sima...sim...Simar she says .Simar grabs sharmistas hands and pulls near her.Simar shouts her.Maaji what do you think im a fool dont know you,i know you are following me says her.See Maaji i really love says her with smirk.She comes closer near her and tucks the hair strands of Sharmistha back .She makes her chin up and says i will be a good until you obey me otherwise you know what...you will be thrown away like your Sister in law sujatha says her smiling.


Sharmistha with irritated angry and hateful face pulls her hands back and tries to move but simar pulls her and hugs her.She slowly takes a key from her hip.You know maaji if we leave a person who commits mistake he will do it again so....here after your jewels are mine says her.Simar shouts sharmista while she says if you be quiet i will try to give you when you need but if you speak up then.Sharmistha leaves the room angrily.


Simar smiles evily and says you all are trapped.At the breakfast table all are having the food .Finally breakfast time gets compelete.Simar searches for something and she gets.She looks at prem and shouts call her.Prem asks simar relax and say what happend while she shouts call her or i will says her.Maa suji maa calls prem.Sujatha elder bahu of the house comes running.What is this shouts simar.What happend beta asks sujatha.Where is my juice shouts.Then it comes to rememberance to sujatha she forget to make the juice.Woh...woh....says her.Kya haan shouts simar.Beta i forget please wait two minutes will prepare says her.Simar shouts do you think im a fool,or am i like yours sons doing nothing im a MD of bharatwaj groups i have work and you waste my time shouts her.Sorry beta says her.Simar sees rajendhar with a plate with food sitting at a distance away from them looking at sujatha plight.She goes near hhim and pulls the plates and throws away.Today you will be given no breakfast shouts her.Prem now gets angry unable to stop shouts simar what is this.While Simar says premji how much times should i make you remember says her.Prem keeps quiet.Rajendhar and sujatha are left with tears.Prem ,jhanvi and shekhar gets tears.Sharmistha seems unaffected .Simar and all leaves for their work.While satyendar getting up from his sleep shouts maa maa give me coffee and lies on the sofa.Sujatha says bhagwanji why are you making me suffer this much.My husband just cares for his promise,i thought my sons will make my head up but they are still making me suffer.


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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

Nice update dr stupid Simar doing over ..poor sujatha and rajender and their son where's sid and roli wait for roil's entry .... can't wait update soon prethu 💕

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Hate simar 😡 😡😡 sharmishta is a complete puppet in simar 😡 hand poor sujata and rajendr waiting for rosid entry

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Congratulations on your new FF


Concept is so Interesting

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

A Very Interesting and Fabulous

Character Sketch

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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

I hate simar going over... Don't worry sujata everything will be fine when roli come... Where is roli and sid entry... Eagerly waiting for next update...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Simar is cruel and cunning. Feeling pity for sujata. Eagerly waiting for our RoSid's entry. Give it soon please.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

Interesting Character sketch....Looking forward for the updates.

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