Originally posted by: 2111_shweta
Tere comment ki length mere ek chapter jitni hai😆 (not Vivah, but previous FF)
Abh Rey and Shivam mein kya fight? Aisa toh kuch kiya nahi hai Rey ne ki Shivam uspe bhadke. But then this bickering adds fun.😛
Rey and Taani mein imperfections hai jo saath hone pe balance ho jate hai! Le aur philosophy!😆
Armaan is the ultimate thug yaar! He is unmatchable!
Well luv, abh uski awaaz hai hi aisi ki jo sune usse pyaar hojaye
I wrote the lifting part and went nah its too fairytale. Phir I edited to this. Felt more real.
See yeh sab line hai na organically nikalti hai. Bolte time samajhta nahi. Realise hota hai just after saying it. Also side note, I have had a lot of such lines in this story. Just yeh likh ke mein khud hass padi thi toh I gave an explanation for it as I wanted others to get the double meaning of it🤪
Aur ek drink se kisko chadti hai? I'm so sick of seeing that in shows and movies ki ek shot liya aur chad gayi!
I wanted to make something grand, like Taani mentioned earlier. But, this felt good. Simple but effective!
Gaadi mein kiss kiya aur raat hogayi thi, abh nahi dikhi. Samajh le na!😆
Taani taking Rey to meet her father? Me: Huh, what❓
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