Abhimaan aur Labedh (This is the serious translation of P&P)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Abhimaan aur Labedh (This is the serious translation of P&P)

A&L

Chapter 1 Paneer and Prudence

Shikha Purohit chopped the coriander swiftly… “khat khatkhat khat…. The knife tapped against the cutting board. Her husband slowly turned the page on Navbharat times. Two half read books sat on the old mango wood coffee table

The blazing Jaipur heat beat down on the kitchen window, and it was only 8 AM.

“Ek aur chai milegi?”

“Nahi… aaj to nahi” she said shaking her head wiping herbrow

“Main kuch karwaaoon?”

“Nahi, shaam ko aapka akhbaar ka imtehaan hai number laayenpoorey aap” she yelled over the exhaust

Sharad laughed at her mockery

He read and read and read some more… when ever he was home.He worked as a sound engineer (by training) at Akashvani Jaipur.

They had 4 children… ALL daughters

Payal Prakriti Pooja and Punita

And he had aging parents

“Shaam ko kaun si subzi laayen?” he enquired

“Phool gobi laayen 3 kilo, aur matar 2 kilo” she mocked again

He laughed not taking offence

The winter vegetables in Jaipur were priced around Rs.300 akilo during summer

“Paneer aur seb bhi le lete hain do do kilo” he laughed

She pulled the weight off the cooker, it scowled and cursed andspit steam she shook her hand cursing and buried it in the wet towel hidingunder her gas… briefly

“Ammaji kin azar ka chashma laayen” she yelled

He nodded

“Aur betiyon ke liye var” she mumbled

He was in the kitchen with his empty tea cup

“Saare Engineer challenge ya ek do doctor ya vilayet waalebhi”

“APNI tarah hon.. mahiney ki 20 taareeq taq jinki tankha khatam ho jaaye” she laughed😆

He tapped her head laughing

“Is tu tu main main mein hamari bus miss ho jaayegi”

Bauji groaned and growled in the living room divan

“Payal aayin neeche?” Shikha enquired

“Nahi” he shook his head

The house was independent but TINY and two floored

The first had 2 rooms and the ground had 3

Two of which were filled with Mr Sharad’s books

He inhaled them. Day and night noon or shine

Payal peeked “Ma hamare who baalon ke liye jo humne lep banaya who frig mein nahi hai” she scowled

She was absolutely gorgeous, light skinned as loved by most in India, curly hair, skinny and flawless.

“Kriti ko poochha? Unhoney saaf ki kal raat ko frig jab lite gayi” her mother said quickly rolling out rotis

The power cut last night had destroyed their sleep completely

KRITEEEEE Payal yelled

“Betaaa chillaao nahi” Shikha ordered

Sharad was leaning on the wall in the steaming kitchen reading some Bhairon Mandir flyer

He needed something to read every second

“KRITEEE” Payal screamed

Down came Prakriti, taller than payal, long silky hair in a careless braid nothing remarkable… except her mind

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Posted: 6 years ago
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You know Nisha, the ever popular, Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorite books ever!! I think I have seen almost every adaptation of it-the favorite being the one with Colin Firth, of course!!🤣My mother may have asked me why I even saw the 1940 adaption with Greer Garson and Laurence Olivier-I mean it was in black and white! I even sat thru Death comes to Pemberly on PBS a couple of years ago. The obsession with P&P is quite sad.🤪

Knowing your writing talents, and just the scope available in P&P, I am thrilled to read the sizzling intro to your A&L! Its going to keep me excited and greedy for updates. No pressure at all😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Woow a new one ... all the best nisha

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Pride n prejudice!!!!!!

I

Darcy was my first book crush😂😂😂

My friends even gifted me a new edition of the novel once....

We had a small portion of it in our higher sec curriculum and my englizh tea her was also a huuuge fan of p&p🤣🤣

Thank u nisha for the new one..... 😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Index place holder

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Wow ! Congrats Nisha on the new story 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nisha.. bring it on. levin samidha aur avi ka baby to paida karwa do.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Once again I love the names of the characters..... all your stories so far do👌🏻👌🏻

But yeah please let Avi and Samidha’s baby be born😀

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hmmm i did like mr darcy when read

Lets see how desi one pans out

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ok so I understood abhimaan but wht is labedh ??

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