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Posted: 20 years ago

wow this was remarkable good going keep up the good work

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Posted: 20 years ago

awww...thats so sweet...i luved it!! plz continue!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
woooooowwww i love it plzzzzzzzzzz continue👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
K: To win I have to answere the question that I u asked.

A: Kya?

K: Angad mujhse pooch ki aagar is waqt main bhi kar sakti tho kya karthi.

A: Kya karti..

Kripa moves closer to Angad, she kisses his cheeks and hugs her. Main kethi that I LOVE U... I love u angad, main tumse bauth pyaar karthi ho, I cant live w/o u.

Angad hugs her back now... Aur yeh choti si baat kenha main tumne itni deer lagadi.

K: I'm sorry...

A: Its ok... aur haan, I love u too.

Angad picks Kripa up and swings her around in his arms...Kripa is really happy and cant stop laughing. Finally Angad puts Kripa down. And they head outside, its still rainning outside but now the rain looks and feels dirrerent, eariler the rain was heavy, hard, stormy, dangerious, yet now the rain was sweet, and romantic, caml and beautiful. Kripa opens her arms and welcomes the rain on her, while Angad just watches her, he leans over and gives her a soft kiss saying I love u. Kripa looks at him and hugs him.

K: Angad maina kabhi soocha bhi nahie tha ki hum dono, jo mila tha like best friends es dil ek doosra sa pyaar karaga.

A: Kripa, shayad yeh hamari kismat thi.

Kripa smiles to her self and they head home. When They get there Prithvi, Karan, and Nisha are gone. There is a note for Kripa and Angad there.

Kripa, Angad, yeh sab ek drama tha jo maina aur Karan na racha tha taki tum dono ko pata chala tum ek doosra sa kitna pyaar kartha ho, Prithvi aur Angad ki dosti ek itafaak thi,aur jab humna prithvi ko saari baat bataie, he agreed, he never loved u. He acted. We will see you later, Karan and Nisha

Kripa and Angad look st each other and start laughing after reading the note, they laugh and fall on the sofa out of controll... Angad looks at a chirpy and happy Kripa, who looks back at him and there eyes meet. Kripa stops laughing and moves closer to Anagd putting her head on his chest and he puts his arms around her, and they sit there for a long time, and then fall asleep... Hugging each other.

Next mornning.

The sun comes up, the water from the rain is dried and its a nice day. Anagd wakes up and finds kripa next to him, the sun is bugging her, he blocks the sun with his hand and kripa looks relaxed, and then removes his hand so the sun is touching kripa's face again. He does that a few times hoping kripa would wake up, but out sleeping beauty dosent wake up instead she hides her face into angad's chest. Anagd knows Kripa is awake but is trying to fall asleep again.

A: My sleeping beauty, utho..

K: Nahie.. mujhe aur soona hai.

A: Kya Kripa... jab humari shaadi hogi, tho subha tum aaram sa so rahi hogi aur main aangar aao ga chai la ka, phir main tumahara paas betho ga aur tumahra uthoga. "Kripa utho.. uhto kripa... dekho subha hogyi hai, tumha kaam pa bhi jaana hai" Phir tum kahogi, "Nahie Angad, thori deer aur" Phir jab tum nahie tuho ga tho main tumahara dono gaalo pai ek pyaari ki do ga. Phir bhi tum nahie uhto go tho....

K: Bas bas. bauth hai...

A: Nahie aaga suno... Phir main... Kripa puts her hand of his mouth...

K: Angad, tum bauth shataan ho. Aur mujhe pata bhi nahie tha.

A: Tho ab pata chal gya.

K: Very funny, she hugs him back closing her eyes and falling asleep again. Angad sees her and shakes her...

A: Kripa UHTO nahie tho main jaa raha hoo.

K: Angad tum jaao taki main aur kuch ganta ka liya so sako.

A: Kripa.. i'll kill.

K: Go ahead. Angad grons and then hugs her back tighter kissing her head.

A: I love u soooo much.

K: AND I Love sleeping soooo much!
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Posted: 20 years ago
awww that was so cute and shweet.
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Posted: 20 years ago

thats was very nice!! plz continue!!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: happe

awww that was so cute and shweet.



hey happy where have u been! Glad to have to back! And thanks! See i didnt make u wait too long they know they love each other now and they know it too! 😉 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
lolz so do, i! In this fan fic Kripa is me, her name is just Kripa! I should change it to Neha! 😆 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
Awesome job Kripa, oops I mean Neha😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow just read the 3 parts... gr8 job!!!!!!!!!!!! esp the beach part.... n da song peheli baar dil yeh bekarar huwa hai... wow superb!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

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