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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Indian101

it is addictive and tat prt waz awesome!!

awwwwwww oh thanks both of u. u guys are soo sweet!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Indian101

i think she wrote tat cauz of the previews and also cauz she wanted romance in the story!! m i rite or wrong and yea plz cont. fast!!

hold on are u aasking me oR Esha. Lolz if me ya i took them to see a scary movie so i could have something cute in bwt them 😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
guys the next part will be up in abt 30 mins! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 20 years ago

A: Good night!

K: Good nite!

Angad leaves while Kripa goes back to reading, and sleeps after an hour or so.

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Angad knocks on Kripa room, but there no answere.

A: Kripa? Still no answere. He opens the door and peaks in. Kripa is sound asleep.

He walks in and sits on the bed. Her hair is covering her face. Angad removes her and looks at her smiling her.

A: (Thinking) She is sooo beatuiful!

A: Kripa....

K: Hmmm?!

A: Kripa wake up!

K: Angad please 10 mins more

A: No. dekho its already 10'o clock.

Kripa wakes up quickly...

K: Oh god dus, she looks at her watch and then gives angad a I-WILL-KILL-U look.

A: Sorry kripa,

Kripa slipping back into bed: Kya angad its only 7.

A: KRIPA ITS 7!

K: So?!

A: Gosh kripa. Tum soti rahi main jaa raha ho... Angad gets up getting ready to leave when kripa grabs his hand her eyes closed.

K: Angad, please gussa mat ho.

A: Kripa please, main tumahara guest ho aur main tumse pelha uta aur tumhe utana aaya.

Kripa: Now sitting up: How sweet, see u are not my guest.

A: Kripa u are impossible and he walks away. And ya, main poora ek ganta main jogging karna jaaraha ho, if u want to come tag alonge, and he leaves the room kinda upset slamming the door behind him.

K: Uff... Bhi waha kya gussa hai!

She falls back into bed...

K: No. i should go with him. She gets up and quickly wears a black tank top and black pants, and ties her hair up in a pony. She goes down stairs and sees angad drinking tea, while her mom is reading the news papar.

K: Good mornin Mom, she kisses her cheek, and sarcastically good mornin' Angad.

N: Good mornning beta.

A: Smiling, good mornin' kripa. Bauth jaldi nahie utgyi.

N: Haan beta, waisa tho ye kabi 9, 9:30 sa pelha uthie

K: Dont worry mom ab sa every morning jab tak main yaha ho main haar rooz subha saat baja uthogi.

N: Good habit Kripa, rite anagd

A: Ya aunty. He has a i dont care look in his eyes.

A: Aunty, main jogging karna jaraho.

N: Ok beta bye.

A: Bye aunty, Bye Kripa.

K: Wait main bhi aa rahi hoo, bye mom.

Anagd is outside by now.

K: Angad, Angad, Angad. ANGAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A: Kya hai, kyun chila rahi ho, main behara nahie ho.

K: Oh ho angad abhi tak naraz ho.

A: ofcourse not. he smiles and keeps walking.

K: Angad, please.

K: (Wispers) Mujhe to gaana bhi nahie aata. Angad turns and looks at her.

A: Kripa tum pagal ho, ab chalo. And they jog to the beach.

After 30 minutes they are still jogging when Kripa drops on the floor.

Angad also stops.

A: Kya hua.

K: Angad i am tires.

A: Already.

K: What do u mean by already, its been 30 mins.

A: Fine. lets rest.

And they both sit down facing the water, Kripa puts her head on his sholder.

They follow this rotuin everyday, and its the day before Kripa leaves now, and they are sitting on the beach at 6 in the evening, Kripa's head on Angad's sholder.

K: Anagd, i am really goona miss you.

A: Me to!

K: U better! Angad u know hum ek dosra ko about ek minha pelha mila tha and look hum kitna good friends hai.

A: Yep best friends.

A: Ok, lets celebrate our friendship.

K: Kaisa, lets see,

A: a dinner and then a movie.

K: Movie?

A: Why? nahie jana.

K: But anagd wont it be too late, i have to wake up tommorow.

A: No u dont, tumahari packing done, aur ur flight is not till 9 at night.

K: Lakin anagd.

A: I dont care u are going.

K: Fine!

A: Now thats like my good friend. And they leave after about an hour, have dinner and then go watch a movie.

And they get back home a 12:30.

And they go off to their rooms.

Kripa is not being able to sleep and anagd is even thinking about her. Kripa leaves to go to Anagd room, and angad also goes to see Kripa. Krips reaches his door when he opens it before her knocking it.

A: Kripa, tum yaha?

K: Ya aur mujhe pata ha ki tum mujse hi milna aa raha tha.

Heading to his bed.

A: Nahie, then thinking (maina jooth kyun boola)

K: JOOTH!

A: Fine, main tumha he milna aa raha tha.

K: See, i knew it!

A: Ok batao tum yaha kyun aaya.

K: Waisa hi, i felt like it.

A: Ok! so....

K: So....

A: So are u exicted!

K: sounding sad: VERY EXICTED!

A: Ya, vo tho tumahari awaaz sa hi pata chalraha hai.

Kripa looks at anagd and then just hugs him tightly.

A: I am gonna miss u.

K: Ya me too! Tum mera saath nahie aa saktha.

A: No, lakin maybe next year main bhi Yale main aaply kar saktha ho!

K: Good idea, or maybe main wapis aajao gi.

A: No kripa, tum aapna 4 years compleat kara bina nahie aaogi.

K: Ok baba, fine.

A: Good! Kripa hugs him even tighter now.

A: Kripa ab mujhse chor do please!

K: Ok, and she leaves him

A: Thanks nahie tho meri tho abhi jaan hi nichal jati.

K: Kyun?

A: Tum itna tight hug karta ho ka poocho maat.

K: Angad shut up.

Angad smiles!

They talk till 3 in the morning, and then kripa falls a sleep on Angad's sholder, he carries her to her room, puts her into bed kisses her forehead and then goes to bed him self.

I WILL CONT TOMMOROW!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Evee

kisses..hugs....but no pyaar??? kaisa ye pyar hai???

nyways great job...

lolz.... naa pucho kaisa yeh pyaar hai, pyaar hai, ek unkaha eshaas hai. Aaisa yeh pyaar hai!

waa, kya baat hai neha! Give me a hand guys! šŸ‘ šŸ˜†

Edited by armaans4ever - 20 years ago
neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
hehe guys i was just kidding u didnt have to give me a hand! 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was soo sweet...lakin kripa kaise ja sagti hain? angad ka kya hoga??😭
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Indian101

i think she wrote tat cauz of the previews and also cauz she wanted romance in the story!! m i rite or wrong and yea plz cont. fast!!

i was just describing movie naina & had no comments on story of this fanfic

this part was also too good(as usual)

plz cont fast

waiting for next part

lots of love

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: armaans4ever

lolz.... naa pucho kaisa yeh pyaar hai, pyaar hai, ek unkaha eshaas hai. Aaisa yeh pyaar hai!

waa, kya baat hai neha! Give me a hand guys! šŸ‘ šŸ˜†



wah wah wah, kya shayri hai !šŸ˜†
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Posted: 20 years ago


tommorrow! u mean we wil have to wait12 hours for u to continue ! not fair !😭😭 plz write more today.......................... 😃

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