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Posted: 6 years ago
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Betrayal And Patch Up
I remember the last time we met,
Not even a single gaze of u I could get,
For once, I wanted u to look in my eyes,
To see if my promises were lies.

After scolding and saying goodbye u went,
Not thinking what ur presence meant,
My heart was wounded, it was a gift u sent,
Loving and getting hurt is a new trend.

I went on my knees begging u not to go,
U pushed me away and nodded in a no,
I looked at u with teary eyes,
My heart kept asking why u did so?

U said that my tears are fake,
Better don't shed a lake,
U r a gold digger no one wants to take,
Go away for God's sake.

With this I went numb,
For leaving me like this, I will prove u r dumb,
I wished u good luck showing my thumb,
My heart said u will again come.

Years passed by with this break up,
But the broken pieces of my heart didn't patch up,
Not even for once I got a hiccup,
How did u so easily gave up?

Walking down the road I was going somewhere,
I saw u were standing there,
Meeting eyes with u was a dare,
This was something happened when I was unaware.

U said sorry and pleaded with your eyes,
Then I recalled all your lies,
Then I took a deep sigh,
I said don't keep ur hopes high.

I tried to run but u held my hand,
And made me wear a friendship band,
U said if not lovers can we be friends?
I nodded in a no, my eyes were fully drenched.

I said do u know what leaving u meant?
Look in my eyes, these are the tears I held.
Somewhere these words made him melt,
He wiped her tears and knelt.

Forgive me, he said pleading,
Her heart again started bleeding,
She laughed sarcastically and asked what r u getting?
Go away and find a girl of ur matching.

He broke down hearing this,
He said do u know how much u were missed?
He hugged her cryingly for a while,
With this, she got a faint smile.

She hugged him back happily,
This moment felt heavenly,
They both went smilingly,
And promised to stay together loyally.

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sharda_123 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#2
Lovely superb awesome lines dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice poem superb lines loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#4
This is so beautiful. You can feel the heartbreak.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#5
when she got betrayed by him I felt sad seeing her heart break.i got irritated when he hurt her more saying that her tears were fake.so cruel.it was unexpected that he returned to her.good that he realised her value n regretted leaving her.liked him pleading her to forgive him.finally she melted n accepted him back.their reunion was lovely.hope he doesn't leave her again.your poem had all emotions explained beautifully.I was anxious to know what's going to happen next while reading the lines
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Excellent and so Emotional too
her hurt just grew deeper but
happiness to came to her
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Posted: 6 years ago
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👏 👏 well done
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aww beautiful poem dear!!! I loved it... I'm not a good listener or a reader of poem... But enjoyed it very much... It consists different emotions... Love, happiness, excitement...Thanks dear for the PM...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry for late reply dear

Fabulous written dear 👏👏


I feel the pain while reading


Please write more poems dear


Well done


Happy that they are together at last

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