First of all hats off to you... for a mind blowing update...😅😅😅😅
I don’t understand where do I begin... each and every word of the update is amazing
You have mastery in describing the exact feelings of the characters... whether it’s Arjun, riya, Sameer aisha or rest of the team members
Everyone was right where they stand... no one is wrong according to their own version
Riya... girl what to say about her... her character was in layers... each layers had its own ‘raaz’... you know what her character was reminded me sakshi in bichhde kinare... not exactly but there’s something I think they’re similar...
I love the way you have portrayed her dilemma... one part of her wanted Arjun to be close to her and other part wanted to get away from him
Poor girl she was fighting with herself
She has fallen in love with her boss... no doubt about it... but also scared to lose him... she wasn’t going to tolerate his hates... after knowing the truth... and I am sure the truth was going to be very big and bitter... bigger and bitter than their sweet love..
Arjun... the warrior... jo har chakravyuh todta hai wo prem jaal me fasne wala hai... her cold behavior was hurting him... even he started falling for her...
perfect song for their situation was “dil sambhal ja Zara phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu”
Btw he guessed right about her behavior that either she’s afraid, knowing her past he would hate her and also she had involved in something he hated...
Dialogue of the update was Arjun’s “ I promise I won’t do anything, you don’t want me to” the way you described how Arjun was saying.., ye line to dhaai karke dil pe la gai
Poor rathod... everyone was upset from him... except Aisha... what an understanding person she was... hope rathod recognizes her feelings and also think rationally... I think he also believes in sikander otherwise he would not react the way he did hearing his name... his denial about sikander was his believing in Arjun... I think he can’t accept that someone can beat his Arjun... too much expectations...
At last about the case... it’s getting more and more interesting... let’s see who’s behind all these...
Thanks for pm
Thank you so much for yet another beautiful comment!!!! These really make my day (or night in this case)
Itni tareef? Haye I'm blushing 😳
I've always wanted to write a female lead with more shades than the male lead and this story just naturally came up with the opportunity. And yes, I agree that it's similar to Sakshi from Bichhde Kinare in terms of being mysterious but for completely different reasons
Whether Arjun loves her yet or not is not clear. But he finds peace in her and wants her close because she makes him forget all the tragedies of his life. And her withdrawal is scaring him that he might lose the peace he got after years
@bold: OMG I was thinking the same thing. The second I wrote the prologue I knew this was the song I would dedicate to this story. But for some reason I couldn't link the song in the last update. Thanks for mentioning and I will most probably update the song in the next one. Good connection you made there.
Rathore does not believe in Sikandar. He knows that someone else killed Roshni but it angers him that Arjun is running after a person who doesn't exist instead of catching the real killer. And so he takes out his frustrations on Arjun by blaming him.