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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: aptl123

First of all hats off to you... for a mind blowing update...😅😅😅😅

I don’t understand where do I begin... each and every word of the update is amazing

You have mastery in describing the exact feelings of the characters... whether it’s Arjun, riya, Sameer aisha or rest of the team members

Everyone was right where they stand... no one is wrong according to their own version

Riya... girl what to say about her... her character was in layers... each layers had its own ‘raaz’... you know what her character was reminded me sakshi in bichhde kinare... not exactly but there’s something I think they’re similar...

I love the way you have portrayed her dilemma... one part of her wanted Arjun to be close to her and other part wanted to get away from him

Poor girl she was fighting with herself

She has fallen in love with her boss... no doubt about it... but also scared to lose him... she wasn’t going to tolerate his hates... after knowing the truth... and I am sure the truth was going to be very big and bitter... bigger and bitter than their sweet love..

Arjun... the warrior... jo har chakravyuh todta hai wo prem jaal me fasne wala hai... her cold behavior was hurting him... even he started falling for her...

perfect song for their situation was “dil sambhal ja Zara phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu”

Btw he guessed right about her behavior that either she’s afraid, knowing her past he would hate her and also she had involved in something he hated...

Dialogue of the update was Arjun’s “ I promise I won’t do anything, you don’t want me to” the way you described how Arjun was saying.., ye line to dhaai karke dil pe la gai

Poor rathod... everyone was upset from him... except Aisha... what an understanding person she was... hope rathod recognizes her feelings and also think rationally... I think he also believes in sikander otherwise he would not react the way he did hearing his name... his denial about sikander was his believing in Arjun... I think he can’t accept that someone can beat his Arjun... too much expectations...

At last about the case... it’s getting more and more interesting... let’s see who’s behind all these...

Thanks for pm

Thank you so much for yet another beautiful comment!!!! These really make my day (or night in this case)smiley31

Itni tareef? Haye I'm blushing 😳

I've always wanted to write a female lead with more shades than the male lead and this story just naturally came up with the opportunity. And yes, I agree that it's similar to Sakshi from Bichhde Kinare in terms of being mysterious but for completely different reasons

Whether Arjun loves her yet or not is not clear. But he finds peace in her and wants her close because she makes him forget all the tragedies of his life. And her withdrawal is scaring him that he might lose the peace he got after years

@bold: OMG I was thinking the same thing. The second I wrote the prologue I knew this was the song I would dedicate to this story. But for some reason I couldn't link the song in the last update. Thanks for mentioning and I will most probably update the song in the next one. Good connection you made there.

Rathore does not believe in Sikandar. He knows that someone else killed Roshni but it angers him that Arjun is running after a person who doesn't exist instead of catching the real killer. And so he takes out his frustrations on Arjun by blaming him.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awesome update


Love it..


Riya is trying to stay away from aejun..

Because she think he will hate Her..but why she think so..?


Is there any connection of her with roshnis murder..?


Sam hurt himself.. was he loved roshni?


Next day again Arjun bring sik subject..


I don't understand s nam ke logo ko mar Raha he Woh.. s for sik.. s for Sameer.. kahi usaka hidden target Sam toh nahi..?


Uff..this is so mysterious..


Please continue soon


Thanks for om


Sorry for late comment..

Thank you Di smiley31

She thinks her secret will impact his life badly and he might hate her for it

Sameer's feelings for Roshni were very unclear in the show so I'm leaving it up to the readers to imagine whether his feelings were platonic or something of love

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

PART 10 -


Awesome update 😳Loved it ❤️It was necessary to have Sameer's perspective and knowing it, he is not wrong in thinking in that way..Anyone in his place would be like that..Poor Arjun, feeling bad for him 😒But Riya is there for him, so no worries End was awww 🤪Can't wait for the next part now

Thank you smiley31

I'm glad you could understand Sameer's POV. He was never at fault for thinking like he did.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: jasu2303

AWESOME update

this story is keeping me in toes

sorry for the late comment I was busy with something else

Sameer was insensitive and I wish sometimes just to punch him and say to him to see the truth I loved the way Aisha tried to say it without making it big

Arjun will surely behind what Riya is hiding and I hope it's not something which he will not be able to handle

And last not the least Thanks for the PM even when I didn't look into the last few updates

Update soon😊

Thank you smiley31

I wouldn't entirely blame Sameer for being insensitive. Anyone else would've acted the same way as him after all that has happened.

Some secrets are best left untouched because once they are revealed, they burn everyone around them. That's all I'm going to say for now.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

arjun asking riya to give him the permission to drop her n promising her that he won't do anything was lovely.arjun telling her sorry for coming near her...riya telling him that she has no problem with that..but she is worried if bcz of that he will hate her...arjun replying that even if he tries he can never hate her was emotional.arjun thinking that sometimes he feels like moving awayfrom her n sometimes so close that even the skin can't be separated was nice. arjun finding her a mystery was nice.sakshi too cares for arjun n her dialogues to him show that.aisha is right in saying that sometimes hatred makes people blind n so they find all the people near them wrong.wonder whether S hints the target or the culprit's name.will sameer be the target?businessman sumit dead due to poisoning.omg..what does it hint?

Thank you smiley31

Arjun is a gentleman despite his anger issues and attitude.

Welcome to the beginning of mysteries lol. It's only going down from here

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Part 11-

Awesome update😳Loved it❤️What's wrong with Riya?...What is she hiding from Arjun, that she feels he will hate her if it comes out?..I hope it shouldn't come out just yet😒Ariya scene was beautiful though😳Team's anger on Sameer was on point..Oh no another dead body found😕What will happen now?Update soon

Thank you smiley31

Her secrets are deep and she thinks revealing them will make Arjun hate her. They won't come out yet

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: MissShaikh

Hey!!

Update next part soon..

Can't wait 💙

Plz add me in your pm list

Added to the list!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: minamma

It's been a long time

When will you update

We all are waiting

I'll update the story by tomorrow

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ishitadalal

Plz update yaar...i'm dying to read the nxt part.

Sorry for keeping you waiting. The story will be updated by tomorrow

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Posted: 6 years ago

By tomorrow, I promise

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