RoSid SS: KHAASH mein tum se..... #THREAD 3 COMPLETED - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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emotional update dear...can't wait update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Emotional update. Hope everything will be fine with a happy ending but your alert notes are making me scared. Eagerly waiting for next, update soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Enotional update hope everything is f9 but your warning yr plz dont seperate them give a happy ending waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Emotional update...hope everything will be fine...can't wait for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelsaranya

emotional update dear...can't wait update soon

thank you dear :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasa5124

Emotional update. Hope everything will be fine with a happy ending but your alert notes are making me scared. Eagerly waiting for next, update soon.


unfortunately it is dear... thank you..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: himani_rosid

Enotional update hope everything is f9 but your warning yr plz dont seperate them give a happy ending waiting for next eagerly update soon

i'm sorry for breaking your hope.. thank you dear...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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guys this is the last part of this story guys... and i'm really sorry if i have hurt you all..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 10(b)

Last part



Later in the morning both Roli and Sid freshen up and had breakfast...

Amar came..


Sid turned to Roli..


Sid: few minutes Roli.. I want to discuss few things with amar.. So..


Roli : it's okay.. I understand.. I'll wait outside don't take too long..


Saying this Roli left them both and went out.. Amar closed there door and came to Sid..



Sid : did you get what i have asked for?? What took you so long??


Amar : yes sir.. Here it is.. Convincing Solicitor (Lawyer in other words) took some time boss.. But don't worry everything is done..



Sid : Than you so much amar.. You have taken care of me so well.. I have always considered you as my younger brother.. I have one more wish amar.. Will you??


Amar : order me sir..


Sid : actually two.. One - call me bhai hereafter..


Amar : BHAI.. ( Amar got emotional and hugged Sid )


Sid : Thank you Amar..


Amar : and the other wish bhai??


Sid : And the other one is.. Promise me that you will look after Roli and help her move on in her life...


Amar : Bhai?? What are talking?? Nothing will happen to you..


Sid : even i wish for the same Amar.. But we don't know about the future right and i want you to take care of her if something happens to me..

Amar : i promise you that i'll take care of bhabi..


Sid : thank you so much.. Now please go and tell the doctor that me and Roli will go out
for sometime.. Roli must have already gone to doctor go and make eat breakfast she didn't eat it properly meanwhile i'll look into this..


Amar nodded and left in search of Roli.. Took her to the hotel nearby inspite of her protests.. One word is enough to shut her quickly i.e., Sid ..


Seeing Roli eating and also asking him eat along with her... He went back to the days where his boss has been diagnosed with cancer...


He still remembered preparing for their wedding.. How much his boss and ma'am was exited for their wedding.. How much Sid was planning perfectly for their wedding and he himself booked tickets for their honeymoon as Sid was planning to surprise Roli.. Everything was so perfect... On Their engagement, how happy they were happy and cane the fateful day which destroyed their happy lives.. He still remembered the look on his boss's face when he read his lab report.. How much his boss suffered?? And the lady sitting infront of him, how much she suffered??
GOD how much these two souls suffered? Will their sufferings never end??? I know what bhai is trying to do.. He just trying to make it memorable for Roli... Please god don't test them anymore they have suffered enough...


Both left back to hospital ... Amar asked doctor as Sid wants to go out for sometime but doctor denied telling that it would be risky for him to go out and he won't allow... Sid was disappointed listening this as he has already planned for everything to make spspecial... Looks like even fate is against it... He can't even stand on his feet properly now due to weakness..


Everything was discussed.. Sid's surgery will be starting from next day onwards... Its not a one day treatment... It need to be observed for few days to months to years...



Next day when it was an hour before Sid is taken into the OT , he took hold of Roli ...


Sid: Roli.. I need you to promise me something...


Roli: i will.. If its reasonable...


Sid: i want you to take care of yourself.. Take care of my company because now it's under you.. And i want you to marry someone if something happens to me. Amar will help you.. Promise me you will do this...


Roli : are you out of your mind siddhanth?? You promised me that you'll come back... (Her voice cracked at the end due to cry)


Sid : who are you kidding Roli?? Don't you know the consequences?? Do you think i will want to leave you away?? NO.. I'm doing this for you Roli.. I want to come back for you and trust nothing more this i have ever hoped now... I want to live my life with you Roli.. I LOVE YOU.. please when I can do this for you and your happiness, then can't you do this much for me atleast for my peace of mind??


Roli : if you had asked me for my life, i would have given it away happily.. But you're asking for something which I impossible for me.. And don't think rubbish..nothing will happen to you.. For god's sake be quite and come back for me... (She shouted out of frustration and rubbing her hot tears)


Sid : i know Roli what I'm asking is not easy but you have to do it for me...


Roli : i won't do any promises.. (She to told confidently)



Sid : and i won't move an inch from here until you promise me..


Her damn broke.. Her strong facade broke... She collapsed on the ground crying..


Roli : why are you doing this ? (She whispered with drained strength)


Sid gathered her in his arms.. Hugging her and wiping her tears...


Sid : do you think its easy for me to ask such a big thing from you Roli?? What if something happens to m..


Roli placed palm on his mouth before he continues... Nodding her head as no..

Sid removed her palm down..and continued..


Sid : don't make it more difficult for me Roli.. I promise i'll fight with this and will try to come back only for you.. But if something happens to me, I can't imagine your position Roli.. And that death will never give peace to me.. So please promise me.. I'm not telling you to marry away straighter... I want you to live your life fully.. Whenever you think of me there should not be tears in your eyes, there should always have smile thinking about me.. And ... And if god helps you finding a nice guy who loves like me, then please don't miss him.. Please ...



Roli: nobody can love me the way you love me.. (She told joining their foreheads)


Sid : okay.. But if you find one? Then promise me to atleast try to consider it...


Roli finally nodded...


Sid : thank you...


Sid is being taken to the OT on stretcher.. Roli is holding his hand..


As the OT neared, their hands are getting separated and Roli's heart is gripping with fear.. Finally Sid is taken into the OT...


While Roli kept praying continuously...


After few hours which felt like decades, doctor came out...


When Roli looked expectantly at doctor unable to form words.. And Amar also equally sacred...


Doctor nodded his head sideways and unable to convey the news from his mouth which breaks their innocent hearts...


Roli collapsed on the ground crying bitterly followed by Amar...

roli: KHAASH... KHAASH mein tum se(i wish i could live with you)... jeepaatha...




~THE END~
Edited by tatmantad - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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hope you liked this guys.. i'll try to give an epilogue of this how roli cope up with this...
and then i will continue my other story DIL DE DO YAAR.. waiting for your review guys..

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