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Posted: 6 years ago
Congo praags...its been 4 years you started this ff...just look at the first part and this one...this FF really change the course of your writing in such a beautiful way...not just the story grows...your way of writing also grows with it...now coming to the part for me the show stealer dialogue was( hi muskaan kya baat hai aaj insaan lah rahi hai) that was such a funny scene...i really laughed out loud after reading this..and drink riddhima is so cutee yaar kya batau...nd Armaan taking care of her was love... really such an cute nd funny parr
Thank you so much for taking out your precious time considering your exam is coming...so best of luck for your exam...i really wish you rock the exam this yime nd scored well...
Continue soon
Take care:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
Armaan to clean bowled ho gaya Ridz ko sexy avatar mein dekhkr ab to Armaan apni Basket ko ek pal k lie bhi nahi chodega kyun ki ladko ki nazar uspr hi hogi bt Ridz was right kisi ne chance maar ne ki koshish bhi ki to Armaan apni ankho se hi uska murder kr dega hehehe...
Atul was sooo cute kitna blush krta hai ye ladka...RaMusk kabhi bhi ek dusre se sidhe muh baat hi nahi kr sakte...Taarif bhi aise krte hai jaise ehsaan kr rahe ho pr yahi unka pyaar hai jo ek dusre pr gaaliyo se brsaate hai...

Oh nooo!!! Ridz ne drink ki???? Ab bajnewali hai sabki band..Bt Ridz ne itni drink kyun ki???Itni ki talli ho gayee...Poor Yuvi halat bekar ho rahi thi uski..Talli Basket to uska Armaan hi handle kr sakta hai..Ab to sabki pol khulnewali hai...

Bahot shaitan hai ye ladki apni hi pol kholk rakh di usne n Rahul ne bhi sabkuch niklwaliya usk muh se...She is sooo happy for her friends us shoot out ne un dono k hi nahi blki un sabki zindgi par asar hua tha n aaj vo is baat se bahot hi khush hai ki sb saath mein hai...

I love Talli Ridz sooo much...Accha hua ghr jaane k lie khudse maan gayee vrna dance krne ki ya phir kisi baat ki zidd krti to Armaan ka bura haal hona tha use sambhalte sambhalte...Awww she is chooo cute yaar,cutest baby Armaan ka baby...Her Talli antics were sooo adorable specially jute wala that very funny..

Hahaha staff member ne Armaan ko Ridz ka bhai bana raha tha Armaan ka to rang hi ud gaya tha...Awww kitne pyaar se kaha usne vo uska boyfriend nahi fiance hai I really loved that scene..That staff member was very nice guy...Har insaan ki soch usk jaisi honi chahiye...

Armaan ka to man kr raha hoga ki basket ko khaa jaaye usk cute cute se antics dekhkr...Armaan to ab nahi chodnewala Ridz ko vaise hi use Ridz ko tease krne mein bada maza aata hai n uski future planning sun ne k baat to bilkul bhi nahi Madame to bahot aage badh gayee family planning bhi kr li hai...

Arre Ridz to good girl ki tarha so gayee naahi kisi baat ki zidd ki aur naahi kiss k lie demand...Morning mein jab use sab yaad aayega to use sharam se laal laal ho jaana hai...

Cute n lovely update..I enjoyed it very much..Thanx for the pm..Ab to Armaan k talli hone ka intzaar hai..Congrats Dear 4-yrs ho gaye is ff ko maine to last yr se read krna start kiya tha...Pichle chaar saal se likh raho apni daily life,exams,study ko bhi saath mein manage krna bahot badi baat hai..Thank u sooo much..Love you..
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Posted: 6 years ago
"tumhe bacche nahi chahiye kya?" LOLLOLOLOLOLOL 🤣
nahi baby tum ho na uski baby aur khud toh baby hai aur bache lega toh tum paagal ho jaogi. :p
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



Tu kabhi nahi sudhregi na?

kabhi nhi
waise unres kar di
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wowhhh !I just finish reading all the parts till now and they were just amazing the whole journey was mind blowing it felt like I am actually watching dmg seson 3 the whole gang thing is amazing plzzz continue soon plzzz
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aesa Lag raha hai Zamaana ho Gaya Hai padhe Huwa..

waese Mazzaa aagaya Padh ke ..
bet thing About This FF Is No Extra drama Roona DhAesa Lag raha hai Zamaana ho Gaya Hai padhe Huwa..

waese Mazzaa aagaya Padh ke ..
best thing About This FF Is No Extra drama Roona Dhoona And All..

Goa Ki Mast Tou Sirf Start Huwi..

waese Yakeen na Ho raha 4 Saal Ho gaye..
HAPPY 4th Walla BIRTHDAY To ILYLTF..
and Happy 4th waala birthday to You Too Prags As A Writer..

and Thank You for Birthday wish..
as You Know ILYLTF Birthday Is 1 of The reason why this FF is Close to Me

Goa Ki Mast Tou Sirf Start Huwi..

waese Yakeen na Ho raha 4 Saal Ho gaye..
HAPPY 4th Walla BIRTHDAY To ILYLTF..
and Happy 4th waala birthday to You Too Prags As A Writer..

and Thank You for Birthday wish..
as You Know Birthday Is 1 of The reason why this FF is Close To Me..

waese Talli Ridhima Pehle Bi deekhi thi And I seriously thought wo kuch aesa Bakk dgi jisse sab embrace honge But Is baar Sharafat Dikhadi Ma'am ne..

waese tou mai request karne waali thi Talli Armaan Ki But Tune khudh hi mention kiya Now tou I am eagerly waiting kab aayega Talli Armaan ka Update..

update jaldi jaldi but pehle exam pe dhiyaan..

lots Of Love..
byeee..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Exams khatam ho gaye and update aa gaya. Perfect timing! Firstly congratulations on completing 4 years. I joined this journey just a few months ago and it has been perfect since then. Thank you so much for us giving us this version of DMG.
Ab aage badhte hai updates ki taraf. Part 80 was cute and short. And Abhi is such a cutie. (I feel weird saying this.😆 serial mai toh kabhi aise chance nahi mila). Part 81 was the best. Armaan was full on being a majnu. Talli Riddhima has always been a delight to watch and it was no different here. Loved the way she told Armaan about her wishes. The most funny thing was when Rahul said to Muskaan ki insaan lag rahi hai. Excited for the upcoming parts!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Hahahaha I just love the drunken Ridz, she is damn cute and I agree with Armaan...
She given a hard time to all in this state of her, sabse zyada toh Armaan koh...
Ek toh already itni hot and sexy lag rahi thi, aur uske baad drunk hokar itna cute and baby jaise bangaye...
Kare toh kiya kare Armaan, phir bhi sirf wohi hai jo usko sambhal sakte hai...

Boys bhi kuch kam nehi lag rahe hai, aur baatein karte karte Armaan rukh gaye...
hahaha Rahul knew magic hone wala hai, he knew why Armaan got lost and as expected, soon Ridz enter the picture...
Uff sacchi mein yeh Atul kitna sawal karta hai, usko toh pata hona chahiyeh na...
Sirf ek ki wajahse Armaan hamesha kho jaate hai apne kaam bhulke...

Ek minute ke liye Ridz koh laga woh acchi nehi lag rahi...
Lekin Armaan koh woh itna sexy and hot laga, that too when he saw her in such a dress for first time...
Sawal toh karenge na, lekin uske sawal ne Ridz koh confused kardiya hehe...
Ayye hayye, paas aate hi Armaan ne apne baahon mein le liya apne basket koh...

Heehee, yeh log pub jaae aur koi ladke girls koh pareshan na kare aisa toh ho hi nehi sakte...
Armaan aur Rahul toh bardast nehi karenge, koi Ridz koh aankhein utake bhi dekhe toh hehe...
Aur waise bhi, Muski bhi toh thi... Also Nikki and Anjali were too their friends toh girls koh protect karna, boys ka farz hai...

Than come the drunken Ridz and woh isbaar accha accha bola sabke baare mein hehe...
Niks and Abhi koh bhi ek dusre ke saath acche se, pyar se rehne koh kaha...
Muski and Rahul koh, ek dusre koh nehi chodne koh kaha...
Anjali and Atul koh bhi kaise kaha, how happy they could be with together...
Yuvi koh bhi kaha, Naina koh hurt na kare...

Hehehe usko toh Armaan ke saath jaana nehi tha lekin baatein karke tak gaye toh Armaan koh kaha usko lejae...
Pehle toh kaha woh accha nehi hai lekin baad mein woh accha bangaye hehe...
Sach mein she is such a cute baby when she is drunk, I could totally imagine Ridz being drunk in DMG on Rahul Muski break-up party...
Just love every attire of her that she did being in drunk state hehe...

Awww I knew woh bolte bolte yeh kyun bola, Armaan is not her boyfriend...
Armaan ne toh usko propose kardiya shaadi ke liye, so she had accept him as her fiance now...
bechara staff, woh usko confused kardiya...
Woh toh soch raha tha, Armaan uski faida uta raha tha...
Lekin thank god, Ridz ne accept kiya woh Armaan koh jaante hai aur they are in relations hehhe...

DThan come their conversation which was full of cute and lovely things...
How they were planning to built their future, their family and all...
Haha ek koh ladka chahiyeh, dusre koh ladki...
Jab Ridz pregnant hoge, tab toh yeh dono jhag karke pure phase khatam kardenge :P

Aur baat karte karte Ridz sogaye, lekin phir bhi Armaan koh jaane nehi diya...
Armaan ne bed ke paas beit ke, usse dekhte dekhte sogaye...
Awww such a cute moment that was, ab pata nehi baaki sab dekhenge toh kitna tease karenge...
Gang koh toh bas moka chahiyeh hehehe...
Wonder how Ridz is going to react the following day, maza aayega heehe...

Continue soon...
yes yes yes, Armaan ka drunken moment bhi daalna chahiyeh...
Dekhte hai Ridz kaise usko sambhalte hai :P
Keep posting...
Love it and love u more...
take care :D :*


Hello, hello! :)

Yeh wala chapter likhne mein bohot mazaa aaya. Drunk Ridz toh hai hi itni cute na. Mujhe bohot achchi lagti hai.
Aur thankfully iss baar usne kuch bura nahi bola last time ki tarah. :p

Saari girls itne achche se tayyar hoke aayi thi, toh obviously sab boys clean bowled ho gaye. :p
Lekin sabse zyada toh humaara Majnu. 😆
Woh toh hamesha hi Ridz ko dekhke kho jaata hai.

Ab as always, sab girls itni beautiful dikh rahi thi toh ladke aa gaye line maarne. Lekin tension toh kabhi lena hi nahi chahiye kyuki sab boys haina. Waise, Muski akeli kaafi thi un ladkon ke liye. Agar Armaan aur Rahul beech mein nahi koode hote toh woh un gundo ko pakka akele sambhal leti.

Drunk Ridz is a sweetheart. Woh ekdum cute baby bann jaati hai. I love her! RaMusk ki break up party ke waqt bhi mujhe woh bohot bohot bohot cute lagi thi. <3
Aur kaise sabko gyaan baant rahi thi. Iss time bhi usne wahi kiya lekin thankfully kisiko kuch ulta seedha nahi kaha jaise last time Anjy ko bossy bulaya tha. :p

AR are toh sabse cute hain. Ab kya bolu main. I love them so much! ❤️

Drunk Armaan bhi aayega. Aap tension mat lo.
Love youuu! :D
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TaniDMGlover

Finally...*dancing with joy*
Sabse Pehle to congratulations for completing 4 years of this beautiful beautiful story! May it reach many more milestones <3

Now coming to the part...Pehle to I was waiting so eagerly for you to update and Dekho zara Kya hua ;)
And Oh boy the wait was definitely worth it! I absolutely adored the whole chapter!

That part when some guys misbehaved with ridhima and the way Armaan came and sunafoied those guys and after that the way he hugged ridhima and asked her if she okay *awwie* love love loved that!

Then of course the highlight of the part ought to be drunk ridhima...and us main se my favourite scene had to do when they returned to the room! Oh God that had me smiling just as wide as Armaan! That was done so perfectly I cant even!

The part was as usual beautiful! I can't wait for you to update further...So pls update jaldi jaldi <3


Thank you so much Tanuuu!! <3

I am so happy that you enjoyed the chapter. :D

Armaan is a complete sweetheart, yaar. I ❤️ him so much! He's just the best.

AR ke cute drunken chats were so much fun to write too. That whole interaction made me wanna write Drunk Armaan. Which shall hopefully happen soon.

I will update soon. Pakka. :)
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpiofazy

Congo praags...its been 4 years you started this ff...just look at the first part and this one...this FF really change the course of your writing in such a beautiful way...not just the story grows...your way of writing also grows with it...now coming to the part for me the show stealer dialogue was( hi muskaan kya baat hai aaj insaan lah rahi hai) that was such a funny scene...i really laughed out loud after reading this..and drink riddhima is so cutee yaar kya batau...nd Armaan taking care of her was love... really such an cute nd funny parr

Thank you so much for taking out your precious time considering your exam is coming...so best of luck for your exam...i really wish you rock the exam this yime nd scored well...
Continue soon
Take care:)


Thank you so much, Faraz! :)

Yes, yes. I am so happy because this story has really helped me grow as a writer. :)

RaMusk are my babes. I love them so much! :D
Also, I can totally see Rahul complimenting Muski that way. :p

Drunk Ridz is the cutest, I love her. And Armaan toh... well, he's always such a sweetheart. <3

Thank you so very much for the wishes. :D

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