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San

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

I LOVE YOU BOTH SO MUCH!!!!

PS: Update in half hour, mom will provide me with her high speed internet. 🤣

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DMGThings

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Meraki.
I LOVE YOU BOTH SO MUCH!!!!
PS: Update in half hour, mom will provide me with her high speed internet. 🤣

YAYAYAY! IM WAITING!

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San

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

will update after ILYLTF update again! <3

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Priyanka

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

res
unresed!
Sanjuuu i knw this is going to be fabulous... Just love the prologue

Most of d ff has armaan's perspective..(i think ridhima's has none) so im so so happy u wrote this one..

Loving muskaan and ridhima's bond already...

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nilusoni

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Wow its superb

Omg the way you explained their emotions that's amazing

Ridhima tried to commit suicide gnats shocking

Beautifully written

Continue soon

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San

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Interesting
Continue soon

hey! thank you.

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Wow its superb
Omg the way you explained their emotions that's amazing
Ridhima tried to commit suicide gnats shocking
Beautifully written
Continue soon

thank you so much. it's kind of something i wanted for the show.

Praggs's one is kind of happy while mine is not flowers so I am happy about how it turned to be.

no she didn't, she just wanted to hurt, yes what she wanted leads to suicide but she wan't there yet and was pulled by muski out of that way thank fully.

thank you.

yes will update after praggs update ILYLTF! <3

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San

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: DMGThings
OH MY GOD. SANJUUU!!!! BABY THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!! I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!! <33333333

Definitely can't wait to read more! :D

Ab, I hope you'll update this fast! Mujhe toh poori story abhi padhne ka mann kar raha hai!!

there you go. Praggs I love you yaar! For being on board with this.

Lol! tereko pata toh hai basic plot, itna mat mar. 🤣

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Yaar, the whole prologue is even better!! Matlab, I felt so much ki main kya bolu!

Armaan, Riddhima, Shashank all of them. And ofc, my Muski & Rahul too!! Bas, sab theek ho jaaye, aur kya chahiye? I'm so sure that this going to be an absolutely epic story and gods, I'm in love!!

The way you've expressed both Armaan & Riddhima's emotions is beautiful.

Aur, RaMusk ka kya angle hai, yeh dekhne ke liye I'm so excited! I know that these 4 will be each others strength and support through everything. Bas sab theek kardo! <3333

Write fast, bebu! I can't wait to read more!!

tu kuch mat bol, I am myself surprised at me. 🤣

yeah they are very crucial, I mean puri gang hai obviously but I guess these are the people who have involved much more in AR's relationship than anybody had in the show. nikki was A's bestfriend, she just helped them hid it and AR were pretty tight by then.

RaMusk would remain a mystery for some time. ;) arrey itni jaldi kaise hoga theek ? 🤣

Wrote madam! I wrote it slow because had to search up med stuff.

Originally posted by: DMGThings
I'm re-reading! It's so good! I'm loving it!!

Aur story aesthetic! I just saw it!! Pehle load nahi ho raha tha. <33333333

Love Ya Praggu!!!

i am so happy with the response.

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San

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Mpakeez
Aesthetic?
Really?
But Why..
I mean..

Chal Hatt Kuch Nahi Bolna Mainu..
I Just Read, Re-Read and Continued..
It Is Just Perfect..

Because usse confusion bhadega if anyone really looks at that. 🤣 tu chod mat dekh.

Love You Pakku <3.

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DMGThings

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Aa gayi main!!! Sanju!!!! Bebu tune na... Tune mujhe bohot rulaya hai yeh update mein. Pehle Champ ki feelings dikhake aur fir Ridzy aur Muskaan wala scene dikhake.

It was so very beautiful! I absolutely loved it and adored it and loved and it was just the absolute best!! Tu... Tuna... I don't even have words. This was so freaking good!! I *felt* everything!

Riddhima's pain was just so palpable ki ab main kya bolu tujhe! This was absolutely stunning.

Ab toh mujhe ILYLTF jaldi update karni padegi, if I want to read more. Ab Armaan ko dekhna hai maine. How's he doing, how's he coping? Sab kuch!

You've grown so much as a writer, bebu. Yeh wali story mein poora dikh raha hai. And I'm feeling so proud! <333333