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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03
hey buddy,, hope all is going good...😊
well, I read the part ago, but wondering what to say.. Aisha's mind track... it seems little confusing to me...😕
whatever, coming to the update...
so started with defeated Pratap still hadn't changed at all. instead he insists on challenging to oust her from Sameer's life and still thinking about making new plot.. oh god!! this man is just disgusting...😡
finally Yog woke up.. Anika told him everything and he was relieved..😊
Sameer is so happy for Ariya and so Aisha.. finally father and son united..
Mr. & Mrs. Rawte wanted the kids to join their anniversary.. and Sasha happily agreed.. Yogika were also happy for them..
later the convo between Sasha... well I would say it was more an urge rather than being beautiful or, emotional whatever you say.. after all these dramas, plots & conspiracy considering Aisha's health Sameer had to talk with her about the things happening between herself..
but of course, I have to admit that I really loved the sweetness of Sasha...😳
whatever, it was a relief that finally Aisha focused on Sameer's talk last night. She really should consider her own relationship with Sameer now... bahut ho gaya..
at evening all headed to Rawte's place.
Mr. & Mrs. Rawte were really happy to meet them after so long... and they also supported Sasha...
hmm...yaha tak toh samajh aya buddy, but why being so serious while talking about the children...😕
maybe Mr. n Mrs. Rawte could have brought the topic of having children casually but Riya's point of view was very strong...
if Aisha really considers her relationship with Sameer then what's wrong of having child? why she was hell shocked?
even after returning home, she was afraid and lost...
🤔🤔🤔

anyway, it was really nice.. 😃 loved it, buddy... so many things bearing many mysteries.. 😉
waiting for you to unfold them..😳
really nice update...😊

Thanks Buddy glad you like it .. Hope you are well too 😊

Aisha mind is clear and firm for Sameer and his love her hitches are because of Pratap that to for a strong reason

Pratap won't change his ways as usual Aisha answers him back like he deserves.. He is disgusting and would pay for it heavily in the end

Yog come to his sense and Anika told him the entire story what happened and finally both took a sigh of relief

Broken Rawte family unites again to celebrate Surya and Naina 40th Anniversary . Sameer is specific happy as he is going through the same and even Aisha is happy too

Sameer could sense Aishas confusion and her plight .. That's why Sameer urged that closeness and asked her to speak out what was troubling her . .. He knows that after all this conspiracy and attitude he needs you ease her and make sure that he is by her side.. .. True their sweetness is adorable 😳

In the party and after speaking to Sameer Aisha finally decided to focus on their relationship yes bahut HK chukka . Like Sameer said they too have a personal life and they shouldn't make others effect that

Yes in celebrations all enjoyed and Naina along with Riya brought this topic casually but unfortunately nothing normal happened with Aisha since her marriage... She wasn't serious but guilt ridden that what they both have missed .. If they would have been together before she too had a beautiful family 😊

Buddy let me clearly tell you Aishas confusion ... it's completely about Pratap .. . As he is a complete snake devil mind can she trust him with her kids ? . ... Will he be considerable to his grandchild in such situationsAisha cannot ignore the fact that he is Sameer father and part of family

Second Aisha and Sameer need time with each other to be comfortable as Man and wife which Riya rightly said that they haven't got ... This void of 8 years hasn't changed their feelings but have changed their mindset ... Aisha wasn't sure how Sameer will take her love now .. .

Now Sasha are middle aged couple and mature enough.. So both need time to adapt things but again Pratap due to his devil mind is not letting them live in peace and this is Aisha hitch that Pratap might harm anyone for his ego like he killed her father

Well after things at the party she was feeling guilty that and for her behavior as in her confusion she didn't realized that sameer too have suffered like her that's why she in guilt she snuggle to him and started crying

Sasha leaving bitter past behind will start fresh in the next part after Aisha confession and will be Unseprable

More fun coming up

Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊

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Suzie

@etfr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#422

I am back to reading your amazing work, Goldie Di.

Sorry for not reading or replying earlier. I got lots of PM to read so I kept your PMs to read later and together with all prepared for roller coaster ride of emotions as I know your story will make me smile or cry at times.

So now I got time and here I will give my feedback, chapter wise.

Just read chapter 4 and I did cry on reading their heart wrenching past. Very emotional yet superb update.

Arjun is right Samsha should believe in their love and step ahead.

Sam outburst was much needed and Aisha now got a clear view of the past which had hurt too much.

Yeah, Sam identified Aisha and also saw her hidden mangalsutra. The update was written so nicely.

Thanks for PM.

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Suzie

@etfr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#423

Chapter 5 is awesome.

Good to see Samsha stood up for their brother/sister against the man who destroyed their life once.

Yog and Anika are married and enjoyed their first night together. And they are ready to face their tomorrow or should I say their past.

Loved the update.

Samsha and Ariya are happy for Yogika.

Thanks for PM

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Suzie

@etfr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#424

Uff Goldie Di, I am falling for Aisha's character and dialogue in this story. Literally, I am fan of her dialogues. How does you manage not to become an screenplay writer of TV serial.? You should have. The dialogue you wrote especially Aisha's are amazing. And the way Aisha treat Pratap was too good. Makhmal (velvet) mei lapet ke thappad Dena. Wahi wali feeling aarhi hai after reading her dialogues and her hand twisting treatment. Hahaha. Totally loved it.

Chapter 6 was super amazing.

Another game of Pratap. But with twist, what happen to Aisha? Instead of getting drunk she fell unconscious. Hope she is alright. Sam's worry is right

Thanks for PM

Edited by etfr - 7 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: etfr
I am back to reading your amazing work, Goldie Di.
Sorry for not reading or replying earlier. I got lots of PM to read so I kept your PMs to read later and together with all prepared for roller coaster ride of emotions as I know your story will make me smile or cry at times.
So now I got time and here I will give my feedback, chapter wise.

Just read chapter 4 and I did cry on reading their heart wrenching past. Very emotional yet superb update.
Arjun is right Samsha should believe in their love and step ahead.
Sam outburst was much needed and Aisha now got a clear view of the past which had hurt too much.
Yeah, Sam identified Aisha and also saw her hidden mangalsutra. The update was written so nicely.
Thanks for PM.

Thanks Suzie dear glad you like it

No issues dear .. . You were away from IF for a span of time ... No issues as your wish jsisa Karna hai waise Karo I don't mind

Thanks a lot for your wonderful words they really mean a lot to me 😳

Yes it was the complete past of Sasha and it was really heart wrenching too it was important to take some decisions as it's a matter of life... Arjun was right Sasha should take step

Yes the misunderstanding has to be cleared in some or the other way .. . Summer knows Aisha well moment he saw Aisha he understood everything

More fun coming up

Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: etfr
Chapter 5 is awesome.
Good to see Samsha stood up for their brother/sister against the man who destroyed their life once.
Yog and Anika are married and enjoyed their first night together. And they are ready to face their tomorrow or should I say their past.
Loved the update.
Samsha and Ariya are happy for Yogika.
Thanks for PM

Thanks Suzie dear glad you like it

Yes they had to as they didn't want to make Yogika suffer because of Pratap

Yes finally Yogika are married and enjoyed their first night

True not just Yogika even Sasha are ready to fight with the person who brought them at this point

Yes Sasha are contended for Yogika

More fun coming up

Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: etfr
Uff Goldie Di, I am falling for Aisha's character and dialogue in this story. Literally, I am fan of her dialogues. How does you manage not to become an screenplay writer of TV serial.? You should have. The dialogue you wrote especially Aisha's are amazing. And the way Aisha treat Pratap was too good. Makhmal (velvet) mei lapet ke thappad Dena. Wahi wali feeling aarhi hai after reading her dialogues and her hand twisting treatment. Hahaha. Totally loved it.
Chapter 6 was super amazing.
Another game of Pratap. But with twist, what happen to Aisha? Instead of getting drunk she fell unconscious. Hope she is alright. Sam's worry is right
Thanks for PM

Thanks Suzie dear glad you like it

Thanks a lot . ... Aisha is now a strong lady and now a strong sister she has to do a same way

Really you think so 😆 I am obligated by such words

Aisha ke dialogue were tit for tat as Pratap devil mind needs such kind of treatment .. . Directly thapad khane laayak karma kiya hai Aisha to fir bhi makhmal main lapet ke maara hai

Twisting hands 😆 about aashirwaad to dilwaana tha to aise HJ Sahi

Hmmm yes he is devil mind he won't leave it easily. . Aisha Ko kya hua that you will see in next part .. Yes she fell unconscious

More fun coming up

Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊

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Suzie

@etfr

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#428

I did said about your excellency of dialogue writing na.. you are fabulous.

Chapter 7

Superb, awesome yet emotional update.

Sameer is breaking on seeing such an insensitive, insane father of him who has directly and indirectly tortured his love that her life is in danger.

Nicely written update.

Thanks for PM

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Suzie

@etfr

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#429

Chapter 8

Uff what an update! So much happened.

Suryakant met his granddaughter and happy seeing his son happy and settled with his family.

Suryakant and Riyanshi's convo was lovely.

Pratap is such game minded person. Ugh! I hate him. He pretend his own heart attack to stop his son and Aisha got to know it.

Woah! Aisha and her give back nature, she played with Pratap and infront of his eyes named all his property to the son he doesn't call as his own. 'apke do dushmano ko business and property deni padhi.' good move.

Amazing update

Superbly written

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Suzie

@etfr

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#430

Chapter 9 superb amazing lovely update.

Aww. Suryakant went to meet his granddaughter again and Naina finally asked her gift. Arjun and his parents meet along with Riya and Riyanshi's appraisal about Suryakant being correct at his point and Riya's happiness on finally having her house complete it was so emotional yet Beautiful.

Yog warned Aashi for her behaviour. The sick minded Pratap ask Aashi to trap his own son taking advantage of his unconsciousness. Anika and Aisha were alert and saved Yog for the trap and the way black belt Anika warned Aashi was super dooper awesome. Hehehe laaton ke bhoot baaton se nahi maante, very correct. 🤣

Oh god! My stomach ached due to laughing at Pratap's stupid stunt and his shocked dumbstruck state. Hilarious.

Nicely written

Thanks for PM

Edited by etfr - 7 years ago