FF: PYAR YE JAANE KAISA HAI [COMPLETED]

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Bloomie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

nice one

eager to rad ahead

cont soon

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affuaffu

@affuaffu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Nice prrologue & cs

Interesting

Cont soon

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Finally hume Ariya story mill gaye

Interesting concept

Want to read more

please do continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
intresting..

Waise Muze aisa Kyo lag Raha he ke Sam ke papa kuch gadbad he..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm

Kuch nahi poora gadbad hai Sonu 😆

Wait sab pata chale jaayega 😉

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Great cs.

Continue soon.

Thank you for the pm

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chandrima

@chand91

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

nice strtng

plz cont soon

thnks 4 pm

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SATRISHI

@SATRISHI

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

NICE ONE

AAJ KAL MUJHE KISIKA BHI FICTIONS PADNE KA MOUKA NAHI MILARAHI HEI.

HOPE YE POORA PADSAKOON

THANKS FOR PM

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: SATRISHI
NICE ONE
AAJ KAL MUJHE KISIKA BHI FICTIONS PADNE KA MOUKA NAHI MILARAHI HEI.

HOPE YE POORA PADSAKOON

THANKS FOR PM

I too hope to see you back in action 😊

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Suzie

@etfr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Welcome back Di. Missed your writings.

Wow Ariya, samsha n Yogika together again.

Amazing prologue

Lovely interesting concept.

Prologue was nicely narrated.

Love is described very well.

CS was superb.

Hmmm. Sameer's father seems somewhat 'Locha' hehehe. I mean he sound fishy.

According to the sneak peak I think Aisha and Sam's dad knew each other already and somehow Aisha knew something about Pratap being not a good person.

Eagerly waiting for further story.

Ah! I am scared of your threat Di. But whatever your decision be please let me be the part of your blog if you were going to put this story there. Sorry for this late in commenting as well as in my updates. My exams are going on and I just somehow take time to read your and others stories and comment on few.

Thanks for PM

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Edited by etfr - 7 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: etfr

Welcome back Di. Missed your writings.

Wow Ariya, samsha n Yogika together again.
Amazing prologue
Lovely interesting concept.
Prologue was nicely narrated.
Love is described very well.
CS was superb.

Hmmm. Sameer's father seems somewhat 'Locha' hehehe. I mean he sound fishy.
According to the sneak peak I think Aisha and Sam's dad knew each other already and somehow Aisha knew something about Pratap being not a good person.
Eagerly waiting for further story.

Ah! I am scared of your threat Di. But whatever your decision be please let me be the part of your blog if you were going to put this story there. Sorry for this late in commenting as well as in my updates. My exams are going on and I just somehow take time to read your and others stories and comment on few.

Thanks for PM
Continue soom