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Posted: 7 years ago

Twilight Trauma

Evening came before she knew it, dealing with an irate upset Chandu was wearing her down. He returned from school at 3 and cried for a good 20 minutes that someone tore his horse picture he made in class

The two other DILs and the lady of the house, Lakshmi tried in vain to calm him down. "Can we go back to Delhi? Chandu insisted

An answer that was almost instantaneous a few weeks ago was impossible now

"Yahan Gauri Garima hai, Yashu hain, nahi beta Lakshmi hugged the tiny body in her cotton saree clad embrace

"Hum khana khilakar sula lein? she offered to her MIL

"Dekh lein beta, teen din se kuch khaaye bhi nahi, inki pasand ka khaana bhi aaya raha, Gauri Garima ne kabhi humko itna pareshaan nahi kiya Lakshmi was sad

It stung Teeku for some reason as if it were her own child Lakshmi was talking about

She nodded tearfully

"Hum inko ache bartaav mein jaise dekhe hi na ho she lamented

"Dilli mein kabhi nahi roye who do saal mein. Srishti ke baad bhi Teeku teared up

"Itna bahadur bacha hai... abhi inka man kaahe na lage hai? Lakshmi wondered

Alka brought him some cream biscuits and a glass of bournvita

"Avantika aap inke pasand ka kuch bana lein she urged

"Arey abhi nahi pooja hogi pehle. Rasoi mein kahan gayin abhi Lakshmi was firm as a guilty flush covered Teeku's face

She had steamed up milk for Harit last night

She was going to be dead if they found out

"Ma hum kuch bana lein? Suman asked worried

"Maggi? " Teeku asked a whimpering Chandu

He sat up his eyes sparkling

"Umm.. ghar par koi khaaye hi nahi

"Hum le aayen?

"Nahi nahi... Bahut log hain Lakshmi sat her down

Teeku had no idea where the stores were nearby

Maggi was bought, Alka made a soupy version

Chandu whined over it some more and finally ate the whole bowl, holding Teeku's hand in his left hand

"Hum kahin nahi jaayenge she whispered

"That's what u said before he mumbled

"This time... Scout's honor she giggled

Lakshmi looked at Alka and Suman

"Itna lagaav dekh lein aap

The women were baffled

"Harit subah jaldi chale gaye, 7 baje, aane waale hongey Lakshmi told her as they wrapped up the toasting jars of pickles in the courtyard

She was elated to hear that

"Aap kuch kahen match ko lekar. Subah shaam TV par ya khelne Lakshmi sighed

"Umm

"Aap nahi kahengi man maani karenge "Bhabhiyon se teerayning le lewen Lakshmi giggled happily "Harshu Rishu kabze mein hain bhabhiyon ke she said happily

"Uh

"Jee kahen beta. Aap kuch kahti nahi

"Umm.. unko cricket pasand hai she mumbled

"KAHE AAPKO? Lakshmi was overjoyed

Teeku was embarrassed and self conscious

"Hum apna phone kahin rakh diye raat ko, do baje uthe to who nahakar nikle she mumbled

"DEKHO Lakshmi was not happy

Teeku didn't say her darling son wears clothes on a wet body

"Sunte nahi kisi ki

"Uh

"Aap pyaar se kahen unko. Mahiney mein ek match. Ya TEEN MAHINEY MEIN Lakshmi cracked up hysterically

Teeku smiled mischievously

"Who kahenge humne rachi saazish

"TO RACHI... Patni hain aap Lakshmi was smug

"Aap kahen Teeku said weakly

"Hamari koi baat nahi sunte kabhi. Gareebon ki sewa mein lage hai. UK mein padhe hain. Hamesha waha ki jeans aur patli si teeshirt Lakshmi waved a finger

Teeku nodded

"Ek din, saare kapde hamare kamre mein rakh dein, aur aapke bauji ne shaadi mein jo kapde diye who lagayen

Teeku laughed

"Jaayen beta tayyar ho jaayen, kabhi vahar chalna hua to

Teeku had showered late, she didn't know why she had to change, she did anyway choosing a blue cotsilk kurta with a yellow embroidery on the trim

And a yellow chudidar... she hated dupattas, but had to wear one

It was almost 9 PM and Chandu was asleep after dinner

She went down!! No sign of Rishu or Harshu or Sita Ramji. The red ceremonial attired doorman was gone too

The chamber was almost empty except for a few clerks and defendents? Plaintiffs? She wasn't sure

She asked a clerk

"Harit aa gaye?

The clerk shook his head

The ladies of the house never talked with him

A man approached her

"Yeh faram bhar dengi? he asked

She looked at his scruffy unkempt form and felt compassion

Took it, and stood in the reception/lobby room where she had waited 3 months ago

A wall had a five feet tall slim writing marble desk between the two doors

She bend down and began to fill out a longish district court form

"Bahu hain, chhotey ki?

She nodded

"Hamara case unke le jaane ki koshish mein hain, kahengi aap? he begged

She nodded tentatively

"Who gusse mein hain

"Kyon? she asked shocked

"JV sahib ke jaise hain. JV sahib ne 2016 mein hamare bhanje ke qatl mein the man's eyes glinted with pent up resentment

Teeku was a little intimidated.

"6 mahiney ki sazaa bhi nahi hui batao the man raised his voice

Teeku stopped filling out the form

"Dikhayen aapko... JV sahib ne The man fished into his soiled pockets

Teeku took a nervous step back

"Avantika? Harit's deep voice rescued her

She turned to him in gratitude...

"what are u doing here?

"Umm... aap aaye nahi... hum neeche dhoondne aaye

"Umm.. u could TEXT me he was not happy

"Nayi biwi intezaar kar rahin hai. Mere bhanje ki saadi ko 6 mahina hua. GAYA NA WOH TO? The man began to cry loudly

Harit panicked looking for the doorman

Waved a clerk inside the office room

"Sharmaji

"Sir?

"Kidhar gaye, Aslamjee?

"Duty khatam, 9 baje taq rehti hai na

"Avantika please go up

"Apni biwiyon ko hifaajat se rakhte hain, hamare bhanje ki patni the man yelled and pulled Avantika's hand. Harit accosted him and pushed him angrily "Haath na lagayen

Avantika sprinted up

Harit appeared after 30 or so minutes... she had already been scolded by Lakshmi

Sita Ram had shushed Lakshmi

Teeku was crying in Harit's office

"Avantikaa? he was furious

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Posted: 7 years ago
Reality check for Avantika.
Practising criminal law is not easy.
Being Judge and good one is even more difficult.
I guess Avantika will be more worried for Harit now.
She will never forget to check on him if he is late.
And for first time Adv Harit is angry with his wife.
I am sure this will bring them really close on another level.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Harit is going to scold her in front of his parents ?
The after effect of that would be fun.
Waiting to see these two address all their concerns;
Chandu
Their pent up desire
Harit's career
Avantika's non existent career.
Joint family
Cultural difference
Will they consider moving to Delhi.
Delhi is best city for advocates.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow, I never even thought about Harit's profession apart from being a lawyer for the poor. Being a criminal lawyer is a tough job and needs nerves of steel.

My mother has told me stories about her grandfather who was a criminal lawyer many many years ago. Apparently, her grandmother (his wife) would never come out of the house-I always used to think it was because back in the day ladies weren't encouraged to go anywhere on their own, but maybe she had to be careful even back then?

You always surprise me Nisha, just when i think the next update will go a certain way - you go in a direction completely unexpected! Thank you!👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Jolt for Avantika this brush with an unstable miscreant. Now we know why that area downstairs is off bounds for ladies and children...

Certain incidents we don't forget. This will be one of them for Avantika for years. A little rough evening . After this twilight trauma she needs some post trauma care.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I think this is why every family is defined by its practices which are otherwise called as internal controls or internal routines based on their family situation that go on to become traditions or culture. It's diffucult for a new person to process this blindly but more time they spend they get to understand may be the reasoning behind it. It's a fine line between blind faith and rituals anyways .
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Posted: 7 years ago
She has no idea about life in Bareilly. She is like a drunk puppy now
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

She has no idea about life in Bareilly. She is like a drunk puppy now



So true
Would love to see him furious and her reality check
Good going Nisha 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow, this update went in a different direction.Totally unexpected! Awesome Nisha! 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Turn of events. Back to earth /Bareily earth !

She was her dad's ladli. Lived by herself in Delhi. She got into a situation at home in Bareily. Scoldings from MIL, unhappy husband - poor Teeku. She is going to be miserable. How's Harit going to handle the situation? Eager to know what happened next ...

Scared, Cry on his shoulders, taken to his bed ...
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago

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