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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi all,
Here is the next update
Chapter 18

Khushi couldn't follow head or tail of what he was shouting, to match his voice, she shouted, "Mr. Raizada, What date?

"Khushi I was there in the coffee house to discuss a deal with the client. So what were you doing with Karan. How long has this been going on??

Khushi was so so irritated with his behaviour, "Why don't you ask your Di if you what to know what I was doing with him. And what does it matter to you? (Aapko kyon faraq padtha hai!! Yay finally I wrote the famous words!!). Very upset with his behaviour, "Hum chalte hai sir, (I am leaving sir).

He pulled khushi holding her wrist and locking it behind her back, "How dare you Khushi kumari Gupta? I have not yet finished. I care because it is office time and I don't want my employees flirting around with clients ASR hissed. A wild sensation ran through both of them. Khushi was shocked at their close proximity.

Yes Khushi had experienced some ear twisting and smacks for all her sanki acts by her amma, and Buaji was always running behind her with her belan, but nobody other than family had physically hurt her. Right now, unaware of the conflicting emotions she was experiencing, she stood there with tears streaming down her cheeks, even though he wasn't holding her tight. Probably it was the thought of him holding her captive, or the fact she still felt protected, rather than hurt, she was confused.

She untangled herself from him, "Sir,.. is all she said before walking out without waiting for his reply.. Wait, what was that, did she hear an apologetic call "Khushi... when the door closed, well, she did not wait to know!!

What Shashi did not know was, there was another man following Shyam to the courts, who was none other than Akash. Some where Devi Maiyya was putting some measures in place, answering her loyal devotee Shashi's prayers.

Akash had diligently followed his Jijaji to the courts everyday. However, owing to his stay in RM, Shyam was obediently doing his court runs from Raizada mansion without straying. Aksah came up with the conclusion of following his jijaji when he was on his next client visit which was nothing but soon enough.

With Shyam now being called away by Buaji to please her brotger, Akash continued his court visits monitoring his jijaji. Akash would follow him from a distance, and each time he ended up near Lakshmi nagar. Something was seriously wrong. Not wanting to get caught, Akash hired different taxis, but stopped as soon as Shyam's rickshaw stopped near Payals house. Intrigued, he wondered, why is Jijaji going there?

Akash was familiar with Lakshmi Nagar, what with his vehicle breaking every 2 days in the last few months especially. Akash was familiar with Happy ji as well. Making sure his Jijaji was still in court Akash went to Happy jis garage on the pretext of getting his vehicle fixed.

Happy ji was aptly named by his parents! He was a happy man indeed, who saw the good in all. And one quality of these people is to divulge all without any ill intentions. So it was no surprise when Akash casually mentioned "Oh, Happy ji, that is Payals house isn't it? all history was narrated.

Happy jis words shocked Akash to the core. "Haan saab that is Payal and Khushi didis house. I know they work in your company isn't it saab? They are very hard working. Khushi didi comes to help me also whenever she can find time. Just few months ago, their parents joined them. What yummy sweets Shashi saab makes.. mmm You must try them. They really went through a lot of trouble saab, thats why Buaji kept a PG. Only recently I heard their Buaji talking about wedding proposal for Khushi ji with their PG Shyam...
It didn't take much for Akash to put two and two together, before he confirmed the identity of the PG.

Happy ji would have still continued if he hadn't seen Akash's face turning pale. He stopped talking and offered him a seat. This was a such a blow to Akash. What on earth was going on? Why was Jijaji staying in Payals house? And yuck, even the thought of the wedding proposal made him sick? He needed to discuss this. But with whom can he discuss?

For one thing was clear. Akash was also ASR. However, their approach was different, when there was a crisis. Akash was gifted with a very rare special trait which many in the world lack. Patience. Perhaps Devi Maiyya had bestowed a bit extra on him. Akash thought for a while, collected himself, and made two important calls. He did not want to come to any conclusion. He made his way to office, as things would take care of itself slowly and he knew he could do nothing now.

ASR was not happy with himself. What was the need to hold her like that, and moreover, why did he feel a sense of warmth and belonging when they were so close. He did not like the void when she left him.

ASR was also not happy with his sister. "Chote I myself wanted her to go with Karan, remember how desperate he was? she would not agree at all and it was decided I should go for the coffee meeting too to discuss the project. But last minute, I skived!! " She giggled,

"You know Chote, Karan is too fast, he has made good progress. He has arranged for a Diwali party for his brother Kunal and the new bride and Khushi might be giving a dance performance with some of her friends. Oh I am so excited, hope your jijaji will be there so I too can go for the party

"What the?.. ", Anjali was so so excited, she did not see the look of horror in her brothers eyes. She continued, "Also you know what Payal told me, Khushi's marriage has temporarily been stalled since she wants to become independent and see Payals wedding first, and their Babuji has agreed. Anjali was all excited while talking.

Irritated and jealous, ASR grumbled "Di do you come here for match making or work? Do you think we are all here to listen to whose marriage is fixed, stalled, broken. Di, seriously, I think you should stay at home..

"Oh Chote common I feel so good and confident now a days working. I am getting the hang of it now and I feel much confident. Thanks to those hardworking girls really. They really inspire me. Now see your jijaji has again gone away, you don't take this away as well!!"

"Di please, I did not mean it that way. You can always come Di. In fact, you should come everyday instead of working 2 days from home. May be I should start sending you on business trips as well.,

Arnav felt very sad for dismissing his di. He realised how she must be feeling with Jijaji going away all the time and she having to spend time just waiting at home everyday. "Sorry di,..

Answering his phone, Akash replied, "yes please we need to meet today... it is very urgent"


That's It Dearies for today

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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Poor Arnav can't deal with his jealousy. Good thing Akash is doing the detective work.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
i have just started reading u r story ...this is how ipknnd should have been
i love payal and akash too here
can u PM or scrap me when u update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

i have just started reading u r story ...this is how ipknnd should have been

i love payal and akash too here
can u PM or scrap me when u update

Thanks Anjurish,
Congratulations on your baby girl..
Welcome to my story. Like I have mentioned in the beginning, I have felt Khushi was the one who was always compromising in the show, so I wanted her to have some independence and respect, hence this story!! This is my first story and hope you will enjoy ...

Honesty,
I have never PMed or scrapped before!! but hey there is always a first time, will see how to go about it. By the way, until now I have been quite regular in my updates!!😃
thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Mimima

Will Buaji agree? This Buaji is too much, I dont know what she finds in that slimy snake?
Hey I like your summary!!!



Thank you 4 liked

Now to

ch 18

Awesome update

Arnav is really rude.
I love anjala conversation with arnav
How she feel at home
Aksha is wonderful brother
And i aslo love his way of conversation with
happyji...
And he is more understanding that arnav

Please continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: hala4me



Thank you 4 liked

Now to

ch 18

Awesome update

Arnav is really rude.
I love anjala conversation with arnav
How she feel at home
Aksha is wonderful brother
And i aslo love his way of conversation with
happyji...
And he is more understanding that arnav

Please continue soon
👏



Thanks Lovey,
I am so enjoying your comments.
Love it love it,..

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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
hiya all
here is my next one,...

Chapter 19
This was certainly not one of the reasons Akash would have wanted to meet Payal, but he had no choice. Especially when circumstances where such dire. Pulling a chair for his lady, both settled down in the cosy QD's restaurant near Lakshmi Nagar. Though hesitant to go out for dinner, Payal had to agree when Akash insisted the matter was urgent.

After having some light refreshments, which Akash thought will make her comfortable, getting straight to the point but not to forget his gentleman manners, Akash started, "Payal ji, I cannot thank you enough for agreeing to come here. " when Payal just nodded, Akash continued,

"Payal ji, I will answer all your questions later, but before that you will have to tell me everything, I mean without missing any single information, everything about your paying guest Shyam.

Payal was a bit surprised thinking, we have come all the way to discuss an urgent matter, and here he is asking about Shyam ji?? When Akash continued, "I promise, you will know everything soon, please tell me, how you came to know about him, since when and basically all you know, please do not hesitate

Without beating round the bush, "It's a long story Akash ji, we came to know about Shyam ji in Lucknow when Khushi was attacked by some goondas because of the video footage telecast by your brother. If it wasn't for that, we would have been happily living in Lucknow. Only Devi Maiyya knows what would have happened that day. He saved Khushi and my Babuji from the goondas.

Eventually, we landed in Delhi, and to all our pleasant surprise, Khushi accidentally again met him in Delhi. While conversing, we learnt he was an orphan from Lucknow, trying to set his foot in Delhi as an upcoming lawyer. At that time, he was looking for an accommodation and obviously being indebted to him for saving our honour, our Buaji offered the extra room in her property as she thought it would help in the expenses too.

Rest you know how Khushi got the job in AR, which was only because of him, otherwise imagine Khushi going back to ASRs office after all the history with him in Lucknow.

Akash ji, please tell me why you are enquiring about him because, our Buaji is so impressed with Shyam, she is trying to fix Khushi's marriage with him, but our Babuji has refused straight away though I don't know why. I have also noticed Babuji is behaving strange last few weeks.

Both sat staring into nothing, for a long time. After listening to the other side of the story, he realised the gravity of the situation. Akash knew there was a strong Payal hidden behind her shy nature. However, he was not sure how Payal would deal with the truth, but she had to be braced with facts now or later. Thinking better, Akash handed her the envelope.

On the other side of Lakshmi Nagar, Shashi sat discussing with his friend what to make of the new found information. Both friends had gathered enough courage, hired a taxi finally to follow Shyam's car to Raizada mansion. Gathering the little information security guards disclosed, they managed to learn the names of Arnav Raizada and Deviyani Raizada. Having Madhumathi as his sister, came to his advantage, he was well informed with all the details. His daughters worked for the Raizadas. In fact Khushi was first introduced to them through Shyam.

Soon everything fit like a puzzle. One conclusion they came to, Shyam was leading a double life, cheating the Guptas, and probably the Raizadas as well. Now he was worried if there were others involved in this? What if this was a racket? Were his daughters safe in their work place? But from what little he had heard from his daughters, they were happy with their work place, and also they had visited Raizada mansion as well quite regularly. Shashi shuddered at the thought of all the complexities involved. What life had come to, for a simple halwai from Lucknow?

Finally, exhausted, Payal tried to put the papers in the envelope. Her vision blurred with tears streaming down her eyes, her hands shook uncontrollably. Unable to see her state, Akash took the papers and the envelop, placed them on the table and held both her hands securely in his huge palms. For once, the demure Payal let herself be consoled. The thorough investigation done by Akash had shook her to the core. She prayed to Devi Maiyya for nothing untoward had happened. Slowly recovering from the shock, she gently tugged. Akash understood.

Her next question increased his respect towards Payal tenfold. "Akash ji, we have been spared, Khushi has been spared thanks to devi maiyya. But what about Anjali ji?

"That's the only question which is worrying me day and night Payal ji. I prayed for all of it to be a lie when I started my suspicions, but how long can we ignore the truth. Di will be devastated. I have done all the investigation. Shyams life before he entered Raizada mansion, his life in Lucknow, Kanpur, his bank statements since the last few years. Then I wanted to know your side of the story as well. Now I think we need to involve bhai or someone elderly. We need to take their advice. The past few weeks has been so harrowing for me. I could not tell anybody about the things happening

Payal gave an understanding look. As if remembering something, Akash questioned, "Why did your Buaji insist for Khushi ji marriage when you are her elder sister. Only after asking the question, did Akash realise how painful it was to even consider the option. It just did not sound right.

Payal felt disgusted even at the thought and said, "Because he has been helping Khushi since we have known him and we think he secretly likes her. Hey Devi Maiyya, even the thought makes me sick, Akash ji. We must do something.

Akash was in a mood to clear all the doubts today, "Payal ji, what is the history behind Khushi and Bhai in Lucknow? Is that why he behaved the way he did when she joined? Looking at how her eyes showed grief, he added, "If you don't mind please

Not wanting to recount her broken marriage and the rest, she said, "Please could you ask your brother about it. But it still intrigues me they both are always at loggerheads. Khushi has never been this bad with anybody, in fact she just loves everybody. She loves life to its fullest...

After completing all the formalities at the restaurant, "One last thing Payal ji, said Akash as they were heading towards Gupta house, "Please could you keep this to your self for now. I will let you know what steps I intend to take going ahead. Bhai and Di have seen so much in life, this will be a terrible blow to them, to all of us actually

Safe in the sanctity of her house, Payal ran to her Babuji, surprised him by giving a bone crushing hug and said, "Thank you babuji, Thank you thank you thank you sooo much. Shashi was taken aback by her display and wondered what must have happened. This was so not Payal. This would not have bothered him, if it was Khushi who was always more expressive of the two, but Payal!!

Last Khushi heard was, "Hai re nand kishore, sanka devi's sanak has finally rubbed on to Payaliya as well. Garimaaa, we are doomed.. Arre someone get my head band, nand kishore


Thats all for, how was it,...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Stumbled on your FF today... was not sure if I wanted to eat but started anyways and I am so glad that I did!
I like the way the story's progressed and how you have shown the various characters posses some brains unlike the serial :-)

Loved Akaash's portrayal in the FF and also Payal. She is far stronger than the serial gave her credit for!
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Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

Stumbled on your FF today... was not sure if I wanted to eat but started anyways and I am so glad that I did!

I like the way the story's progressed and how you have shown the various characters posses some brains unlike the serial :-)

Loved Akaash's portrayal in the FF and also Payal. She is far stronger than the serial gave her credit for!

Thanks dear
I am glad you enjoyed the story so far,.
Thanks for ur positive commends. I would love to hear if I can improve in any way..
Thanks,...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks deary for the support you have been giving. Means a lot really

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