Tum kaise mohabbat karte ho? Update pg.7 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsum yaar, 👏 pease continue soon 😉
Edited by crazyfanar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guyz

Recap: P&K go shopping and sujal shows up..

Piyush:Kashish where r u? I have the food? Sujal!??
Sujal lets go of Kashish's hand like it got burnt.

Sujal: How r u alive??

Piyush:Fine,ill tell u. After the accident i was taken to the hospital(im not sure if it happened, i only started watching a yr ago) and i was starting to lose my memory...a few days before my memory went away completely i told the .doctor to take someone who was already dead and do plastic sergury on him to make him look like me. THen i told him to take him to the house and make it seem like i was dead. And then my memory went away.For a few yrs i became a new man. but then i saw kashish and my memory came back to me again. Then i found Kashish after what u did with her and then she asked if she could marry me and i sed yes.For a few yrs evrything was perfect we had kids, but then u came along and u kno the rest

sry ill finish it later i have to go out rite now
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Next part..oh and btw there will be some new characters introduced in this update.

Piyush:Thats it.thats how i survived.

Kashish:Oh man!Piyush!We have to go to Shweta and Rohit's house today!!

Piyush:Oh ya we havnt seen them since their wedding.

Shweta and Rohit are the ppl who took care of Piyush after he lost his memory.They r both Prerna and Bajaj from KZK.

Sujal: 😕 Wat?Who is Shweta and Rohit?

Kashish ignoring S:Lets go piyush!

Piyush:Okay okay we r going!
Shweta and Rohit's house is the bajaj mansion.

Kashish rings the doorbell.



Shweta:AAh!Kashish how r u?
and she hugs Kashish

Kashish:Im fine how r u?

Shweta:I am fine.Hi piyush how r u?Ure not annoying my Bhabhi i hope.

Piyush:Im fine no im not she is annoying me!
Kashish hits Piyush on the shoulder

Voice:Who is it Shweta?



Shweta:Its Kashish and Piyush!And come downstairs on time for once!

Rohit:Im coming im coming!

Piyush:Rohit!get down here or else we r leaving!

Rohit:U know sometimes i wonder if u and Shweta r rlly related.

Kashish's phone ring
K:excuse me.

Kashish:Hello?

Driver:Ji Kashish Ma'am wo where do i bring the children?

Kashish:Ek kaam karo just bring them to Rohit and Shweta's house ok?

Driver:Ji Kashish Ma'am.
*phone ends*

Just then her phone rings again.

Kashish:Hello?

Sujal:u know kashish i rlly like my kids.

Kashish:How would u like them, then dont even come near u.

Sujal:for a price of 2chocolates each they do.and i have them.

Kashish:What?U kidnapped ure own children?
Piyush enters the room

Piyush:What?Sujal kidnapped the twins??

to be continued..........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guyz,

Recap:Shweta and Rohit are introduced, Sujal calls Kashish and tells her that he has kidnapped the twins.

Kashish hangs up the phone
Kashish:Nahiin toh!where did u get that idea from?

Piyush:Oh so whose call was that?

Kashish:Just the driver's.He was wondering where to drop the kids.

Piyush:Oh ok.

Kashish:Lets go back inside.
They go in.

Piyush:Hey where did Shweta go?

Rohit:Oh she is in the kitchen doing..uhh making...no ummm whatever she doing something in kitchen 😕

Kashish:Okay ill go help her.
She enters the kitchen.

Kashish:Shweta? Shweta where are you?

Shweta:I'm rite here Kashish(btw the kitchen was rlly big).

ill update more later
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! 👏 👏 👏 its really gud! do carry on! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I've Just Started TO Read It , But Awesom Going.... Hope For More improvement 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great story 👏 👏

pls continue soon

Edited by Ravinder duggal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
Really really good!!

Fabuloussss!!


Anam...😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guyz
sorry i wont be able to update for a few days, im rlly sick, my sis is writing all this for me cuz i cant move from my bed...
sorry!!!Will update as soon as possible 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Okay guyz...im feeling much better!

Recap:Shweta and Rohit are introduced, Kashish finds out that Sujal has taken the twins but doesnt tell Piyush.

Yeah after Kashish helps Sh. they leave and wtv...😆
Its like 12:30am and Piyush is asleep, but Kashish can't.Piyush thinks the twins r sleeping.
Kashish thinking:Why did Sujal take the twins??

Scene Changes to Sujal:
(they r in the car)
Vikram:Uncle, where r u taking us?

Gayatri:Haan uncle, mumma humari intazaar kari hogi.its already 12am and we have school tomorrow!!

Sujal:Kids, ure mom and dad have gone out of town, so she told me to take care of u guyz until they come bak..

Vikram:Okay.

THey reach Garewal House:

Veena:Sujal!where were u and who r these kids?

Sujal:Mom..these are my friend's kids, she and her husband have gone out of town so she told me to take care of them until she comes back.

Veena:Okay

Vikram:Namaste Aunty, mera naam hain Vikram.

Gayatri:Namaste Aunty aur mera naam Gayatri hain.

Veena:Vikram aur Gayatri, bohaut pyare naam hain.

A while l8er when the twins r asleep, Sujal enters Veena's room.

Sujal:Mom, mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai.

Veena:Kaho sujal

Sujal:Woh,..mom..Vikram aur Gayatri..

Veena:Woh dono to guest room main sora hai hain kyun?

Sujal:Nahiin, mom yeh mere bache hain.
Veena stops whatever she is doing.

Veena:Matlab?

Sujal:Haan mom, yeh mere aur kashish key bache hain.

Scene changes to Kashish/Morning/

Piyush is eating breakfast.

Piyush:Kashish, bache kahaan hain?

Kashish:Woh..unki tebiyat theek nahiin hai,toh woh aaj skool nahiin jara hai hain.

Piyush:Okay,main office jaraha hoon.

Kashish:OKay bye

Piyush:bye oh ill bring medecine for the kids.

Kashish:ok.

After he leaves Kashish calls Sujal:

Sujal:Hello?

Kashish:Sujal why did u take the twins?

Sujal:Oh Kashish, they r my kids.And besides they think u have gone out of town with ure husband.And that im supposed to take care of them.

Kashish:well tell them that we came back because Piyush is now asking about them and i cant keep making excuses.
Sujal please!

Sujal:Tum itna beg karahi ho to theek hain.Ill bring them over now.

Kashish:Thank u sujal
and she cuts the phone.
she turns around and is shocked!

Pre-cap:Who is the guy?Will Sujal return the twins??
Okay i think thid is a full update instead of the bit by bit update.😆
Edited by iloveroses95 - 18 years ago

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