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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome chapter Sangeetha

Thank you Nonie baby 🤗

The scene between Moora, durdhara and Chanakya was interesting ⭐️
Even Devaki was jealous at one point of time, whenever Krishna looked upto Yashoda for everything... Moora is after all a human being 😊
But Chanakya, like a typical teacher, saved her from her dilemma and taught her a lesson also indirectly ...
Chanakya hit four stones with one solution.. He made Durdhara a pawn for the enemies especially Nand, he extended his trap towards Nand, he gave scope for Nandini to breathe freely, and he kept Chandu-Nandu love a secret...

This durdhara is very cunning unlike that durdhara who is shown in the serial😕
In the Show, Durdhara character was shown like a happy bunny, jumping and playing immaturely... I thought - let me mix up Durdhara and Helena's character 😆

The scene between Moora and Chandra was wonderful 😊

The conversation between chankaya and Chandra was fantastic ❤️
I loved how chankaya explained his reasoning to Chandra 👍🏼
Kids get angry at their parents only na? Apna Chandu is also a young kid, too much in love with his Nandu, that he took it out on Chakku 😃 Chakku, like a proper father, handled his child patiently.. ofcourse, with his usual strictness 😛

Durdhara is a idiot if she thinks she can make Chandra fall for her🤣
Sure, she is an idiot. She doesn't know that Dev is head over heels in love with his Pari...
Moora is an another idiot. Even when Chandra told her clearly that he is not interested in Durdhara, she didn't ask him "Beta, do you love someone?"

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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful chapter 😊
I feel bad for Nandini 😭
Edited by Nonie12345 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
You are one fantastic writer 👏 You just keep your writing so crisp . Take us to one different land . I have said this even before that I so wish we would have got you in actual CN team.The detailing of characters,conversations is beautiful.
and I loved Durdhara character here😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandinisharmaa

You are one fantastic writer 👏 You just keep your writing so crisp . Take us to one different land . I have said this even before that I so wish we would have got you in actual CN team.The detailing of characters,conversations is beautiful.

and I loved Durdhara character here😆



Thank you so much for those lovely words, Nandini
Your words make me wanna come and hug you 🤗

In this story, Durdhara as such was a girl totally pampered, full of inferiority complex, and good for nothing girl. She is not fit for Chandu, but made her way into his life forcibly. Even in CN Show, Durdhara was unfit for Chandu. But I couldn't stand the Queen doing the hop-skip-jump like the way Durdhara did in the Show. That was so unlike the Queens of that era. There's no Helena in my story. So I mixed Durdhara with Helena ki booth 😆
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Awesome chapter 😃
I loved how Chandra took care of his Nandini
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Fantastic chapter
Chandni scenes were nice❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Heyyy
Sorry i got too busy with my exams. I finally got some time off. But I am definitely reading 😃. Loved the last two chapters again. So good to see chandu and nandu finally share some time together. ❤️😳. Hopefully durdhara gets a taste of her own medicine.

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