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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jaschick

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000FF">A new home, physical injury,
a toddler that was completely out of control, everyone knowing about her
situation
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<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000FF">The embarrassment of the house help seeing the newly wed
bride bleeding was causing her to cringe
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<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000FF">"Bhabhi I am OK Avantika sniffled and stopped crying</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000FF"><font color="#000000">Poor girl Teeku - with tons of changes around her, she is also dealing with the change of the known "Chandu" also. I am so glad that everyone at Vaidyas are understanding and standing by her. Missing piece here is a hug from the husband... 😳</font>
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Jas the this husband guy is already a handful with just his twinkling eyes , looks and words when he cares to mouth some. One hug and she will be a puddle 😳 we will ask her to breathe for now like suman said 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad



Jas the this husband guy is already a handful with just his twinkling eyes , looks and words when he cares to mouth some. One hug and she will be a puddle 😳 we will ask her to breathe for now like suman said 😳


Lol... true that !

I was going to suggest follow up lip service since her lips were hurt. But wanted to take it slow with a hug 😆
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Prescription followed by medical exam

Her mother called to talk with Lakshmi about pair pherna visit and learned about her split lip.

Lakshmi was upfront apologetic and embarrassed,

"Aapki beti ko hafta hua hai yahan aaye aur hamare yahan chot aa gayi

Himani was really surprised Chandu would do such a thing, because he was the most well behaved timid kid she had seen. She assigned the reason as losing his parents when he was two. She had never expected him to turn violent at all

"Maafi hum maangenge aapse, Chandu ne aisa behavior kabhi nahi dikhaya. I am so sorry. Yeh to galat hai

"Hum kahe na shaadi mein ki who ukhre ukhre rehte hain, na khaate hain, hamesha rotey rehte hain, na school ka mann hai Lakshmi repeated

"Hamari Teeku hai wahan?

"Teeku ab hamari hai Lakshmi chuckled

"Chaliye Khushi hai Himani smiled self consciously

"harit ko kahen hain unka dekhen, kamre mein hain she said

"Koi baat nahi hum baat mein kar lenge phone Himani hung up

Harit was gone again

Avantika smiled as she reminisced their exchange from a few minutes ago. She felt her lips as she saw Lakshmi enter

"Raat ko hum sula lete hain beta she said softly

"Umm.. nahi soyenge Teeku insisted

Her stomach did a somersault as she feared the outcome of being left alone though in the next room

"Mahina soye na, koshish kar lenge, kabhi neend mein unki kohni ya mutthi lag gayi aapko to raat ko aur khoon niklega Lakshmi said firmly

She found a broken bangle on Teeku's pillow

"Dekhen to choori bhi tor diye hain she lamented

"I am sorry she said glumly

"Kam se kam chhey mahiney pehane rakhen Lakshmi stated

"Ma ne is color ke do aur dabbe made to order karey par hamey mile nahi she explained

"Alka, ya suman ko keh deven, unka kisi se hai baat cheet apne kapdo ke rang ka banwaati haingi she said

Teeku didn't nod

She wasn't ready to give up her maternal connections yet.

"Umm.. hamare paas different colors hain Teeku responded

"Yeh shaadi ke hain, shubh hain Lakshmi told her

"Aa jaayen beta nashta kha lein, Ma ka pone aa ya tha aapke

"Abhi? Teeku's face blossomed

"Aaj kal ke ho, Dilli akele reh chukin hain aap, phir Ma ke naam se itni Khushi? Lakshmi was sad

"Umm... hum roz baat karte hain Ma se Teeku informed

"Harit daftar ho to baat kar lena man marji shaam ko unke liye time nikaal lena

She didn't to what to say

Lakshmi stared at her bent head

"Umm.. abhi nahi hai ghar pe na?

"Neeche football dekh rahe hongey, bhabhiyan kheech laati hain, aap bhi seekhen Lakshmi "taught her tips on how to be needy for attention

"Chandu kahan hain? she asked

"Idhar hee hongey... Yashu (Suyash ) ko kahe hum neeche le jaaven, cricket seekhenge

"Unko pasand nahi Teeku told her MIL

"Pasand napasand ka ka hai, abhi naye dulha dulhan ke saath nahi reh sakte hamesha Lakshmi was done arguing with her feisty DIL, her prescription was handed out Avantika had to take it whether she agreed or not

"Chalen beta?

"Hum change kar lein? she asked

"Haan naha dho lena Lakshmi reminded her gently

Teeku never showered before breakfast on weekends and during Roorkee visits

This was all new

She showered and wore yet another gorgeous, icy blue kurta with a fire red salwar and dupatta, the kurta had hundreds of tiny hand made fire red patterns all over the front.

"Ab kaisi hain? Harit walked in and asked her as she was sifting through a giant hatbox of scuncies

"Hum theek hain she said without looking up at him

"Dekhen hum he insisted

She turned and glanced quickly not drawing attention to what he was actually want to draw attention to

He walked over by her open cupboard door, it had full length mirrors on both sides

"Is it swollen?

"She swept it with her tongue and lied "No I don't think so she said her insides knotting up crazily

"How can you tell without looking? he asked

"There is a mirror on the outside of the closet door

"And the closet doors are open so the mirrors are folded to the side he said hands in his pocket

She didn't dare tell him she felt the lip with her tongue

She shut her hatbox elaborately

Hoping she could fold him up and shut him inside

"Avantika? he called her name

She turned towards him with red cheeks

The way he said her full name was... umm... unsettling

He reached for her lip with his finger

She intercepted it, he grabbed her hand and held it behind her, as she struggled

"Uff she groaned, trying to hide her face in a affected pushing her braided hair routine

He imprisoned her other wrist

"Aapki Ma hamey abhi kehkar gayin hai, I am not supposed to break the bangles she told him off

He was unmoved.

"You don't even seem obedient he poked her.

"I AM obedient she said accusingly

"how? he asked

"Umm.. I am obedient she repeated lowering her gaze so she wont have to look at his eyes

He let his hands feel hers behind her back sending color up her face

"I had to ask you thrice to turn around he informed her bending down on her face.

"I.. umm.. already told you I am better she said weakly

"It doesn't look like it he said

He smelled like the most seductive combination of some soap and aftrershave

She had never been imprisoned by a man before. She staggered drunkenly, his gaze flicking across her in amusement

"Aapki Mom ginengi bangles, agar ek bhi kam hue hamari wrists mein to its not my fault he gripped a little firmly testing his grip

She strained pulling away.

"U shouldn't be worried then! he chuckled

She shouldn't but she was... she didn't know why

He transferred her wrists to his left hand and reached for her face with his right

"U let him take a swing at you twice? He has hurt you in two places he said peering down deeply

She ran her tongue over her bone dry lower lip giving him a puzzled look

"Your tongue is more powerful than my eyes? he grinned

"Ive had it 26 years she said proudly

"Cant beat that! he exhaled audibly troubled by the thoughts that tormented him.

He let go when they heard footsteps and they put distance between them

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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg Nisha ... and u had to stop there ! 😳

Mr.Grey is too much ! He is going to get her into trouble with Mrs V !
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Posted: 7 years ago
Uff maar daala Nisha 😳 😳
They are progressing from hulchul hui thoda shor hua , dil chor hua teri ore hua..' to bheege honth Tere .. pyaasa dil mera' quite fast 😉 😳 😛
Nisha pl continue. Age kya hua???
Edited by Neha07 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Her prescription from MIL :

Showers before breakfast, bangles intact for 6 months, grabbing attention of hubby, putting some space with Chandhan and the list grows !!! Her mom was put in place as well in a nice way.

She is using the prescription she received to pause the medical exam. And that's not gonna work with Bareilly Brit.

You are turning the heat up Nisha ! 😳

Aparam ...
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow, What a title prescription followed by medical exam.
Adv Harit Vaidya is slow killer.
Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Wow, What a title prescription followed by medical exam.
Adv Harit Vaidya is slow killer.
Thank you.


Absolutely... a sloowww killer
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Posted: 7 years ago
this bangle thing is taken very seriously in UP. I remember my grand mother used to say that one is not even supposed to use the word toot gayi - as in its broken, it is considered inauspicious. you have to say choori "mol" gayi... I still remember this very distinctly. Gosh an era gone by. I also remember my grand mother liberally using Hindi muhavaras in her language.
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Posted: 7 years ago
See Shru
I had no idea I actually made that one up, thanks for corroborating my theory

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