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Here's an alternate storyline about what happens after Raj tells Naina that he killed Naveen. Part 1 of three part series.
PART 1
Naina feels like her world has crashed. The man she trusted and respected was her brothers killer. What was she supposed to do? She wanted to hate him but she couldnt. But she knew that their relation was irrevocably altered.
Rajveer wasnt just her beloved mentor. He was also her brother's killer. But for now she needed to support him in his mission.
Rajveer didn't expect Naina to show up. Not after what he told her. But she did. And her support was critical in capturing Ritu. Putting her behind bars and protecting the nuclear triggers. He was proud of her. Proud of his protege
Proud of his Naina
FORGIVENESS
Hospital
Naina had suffered some minor bruises. Rajveer went to see her
Raj: Cadet Singh you dont know how much your actions mean to me. i will forever be grateful to you. For participating in this mission. For forgiving me..
Naina: I haven't forgiven you. You have done a lot for me. And I respect you for that. But I cant forgive the man who killed my brother. Would you have been able to - if you were in my place?
Raj: No. It was stupid of me to expect your forgiveness when I cant forgive myself. But cadet Singh I want you to know that I'll always be there for you.
Naina: I know and I appreciate it.
NAVEEN'S INNOCENCE
The months pass. Rajveer is obsessed with proving Naveen's innocence and he has ample support from Naina and Abhimanyu.
Naina and Abhimanyu had grown close to each other. Naina trusted him like she had once trusted Rajveer. And Abhimanyu - Rajveer could see that he was in love with Naina. And that killed him. Raj knew that Abhi was a good guy. But it broke his heart to see love for Naina in Abhi's eyes.
Finally Raj is able to prove Naveen's innocence even getting shot in the process. '
Naina: Sir thank you for everything. Thank you for giving my brothers honour back. For giving my family a fresh lease of life.
Raj: But you still don't forgive me, do you?
Naina: Sir.. I... appreciate... but i...
Raj: No, that's ok Cadet Singh. I don't deserve your forgiveness.
NAINA AHLUWALIA - BEST CADET
The months fly by. It's time for Naina's batch to graduate. She is declared as the best cadet of her batch. Raj actually has tears in his eyes. For once he doesn't stop himself. He goes and hugs her. Naina's voice is choked as she says
"Thank you sir... thank you for everything. I..."
Just then a voice interrupts them.
"There's no better sight for me. The two most important people in my life patching up."
Raj moves away as he sees Abhimanyu walk towards them. Abhimanyu puts his hand around Naina and pulls her close to him.
Abhi: My best friend Rajveer and my fiance Naina.
Raj is horrified as Abhi shows him the huge diamond ring on Naina's finger. Naina avoids Raj's eyes.
Abhi: I spoke to uncle and aunty last week and proposed to Naina last night. She said yes.
Raj: Congratulations. I wish you two all the happiness in the world.
Abhi is called away.
Raj: Do you love him?
Naina: He makes me happy and my parents really want me to marry him.
Raj: Do you love him?
Naina: I am happy. I need to go!
Naina rushes away.
RAJVEER - THE KILLER?
Rajveer discovers that Naveen died of slow poison and not of his gun shot. He is desperate to get his hands on the red box to prove his innocence. To Naina.
Col. Shakti: Rajveer things are very complicated. Very powerful people are involved. Let it go!
Rajveer: I have to prove my innocence. Get to the bottom of this
Col. Shakti: The military doesnt think you are guilty.
Rajveer: But someone else does.
Rajveer tries to get his hands on the keys. Just then there is a loud gun shot and Col. Shakti falls to the ground.
A few hours later Raj is arrested by Abhimanyu.
Naina: Abhi you cant arrest him. Rajveer sir can't be a killer.
Abhi: Really? He killed Naveen.
Naina: That was different. I wont let anything happen to him.
Abhi: You know that supporting him means going against me!
Naina: I have to support him. I have no other option.
RAJVEER'S TRIAL
Captain Salve: I realize that this is a really emotional moment for you, Captain Ahluwalia
Naina: My brother was poisoned. Rajveer Sir didn't kill him?
Salve: No and Col Shakti had the red box that proved that. That's why Major Rajveer killed him when he didn't hand over the red box to him.
Naina: But the courts didn't consider Rajveer Sir guilty. He didn't need to prove his innocence to anyone.
Salve: No he didn't. He didn't have to prove his innocence to the army or anyone else. But he did want to prove his innocence to someone else. He was desperate to prove his innocence to you, Captain Naina... To the one he loves.
Raj looks up with tears in his eyes. His deepest emotions had been exposed.
Naina was surprised. Rajveer Sir loved her.
Abhimanyu was boiling with rage.
Udne Ki Aasha
Jaane Anjaane Hum Mile
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