ariya os: dil pe jor nahi.. - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
hai dear amazing start
loved it
welcome to writing world
the story seems interesting
pls cont soon
thanks form pm sheetal didu
bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
interesting
love to read more
update soon.
thnx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

awsome update..

love it..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm Ruhi..



thanksss u like ..
n will try updateee soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: hijabEfajr

loved it conti soonish



thankss for u r like..
n will try updateee soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: anishk_dashika

Nice start dear..
Whoa!! Roshni wants something from Arjun and he is denying...and she is playing with her health...kuch bada twist lagta hai...let's see what you are up to...
Continue soon.
Thanks for PM sheetal didu.



thanksss dear..
n yesss twist to hai.. but
u have to wait for this..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: nicronyariya

Nice

Par kya ye ariya story hai????
Cont soon
Thanx for pm



ofcourse ariya story dear..
I m ariya lover..
but es mai rosh bhi hai.. but don't worry..
rosh is angel to my story..kk
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: etfr


Amazing and interesting concept.

Love to read more.
nicely written
please continue soon
Thanksruhi1985sheetal for PM.



thanksss dear for u r like..
I will continue..
updateee soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sana1819786

hai dear amazing start

loved it
welcome to writing world
the story seems interesting
pls cont soon
thanks form pm sheetal didu
bye take care




thanksss..
I will continue..
updateee soon..
thanks for u like n com..to encourage me..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
first all of u thank for u r commentms
n lovelyyy response to encourage me write more.. special thanks for sheetal di.. she's help me n encourage also...thanksss di..n
here r next part..


part : 2

arj : water le ka rosh ke upar chidkata hai..kuch dar baad rosh ko hosh ata he... wo dekhati hai arj us ke said mai he..

arj.: rosh kesi ho tum ??

rosh apan mu dusri tarf leti hai..

arj : us ka hand apane haat mai leta hai ..
rosh : usa se haat chod na ka try karti hai..
but arju nahi chodta.. or us ko juss de ta hai but rosh na mai sar hila ti hai.. or us ke ankh se asu gir pad te hai..

arj ye dekha ke us ka haat kas ke pakda ta he n say plzz rosh mera liya ye juss.. but rosh apna sar na mai hela ti hai ..

arj : okk jo tum bolo ge wahi hoga..

rosh : sach arj.. tum ready ho na..
I m so happy.. I love u.. I know ya abhi tume glat lag raha hai but ye humare liya sahi he..thankuu..
or wo arj ko hug karti hai..

arj : tum khush ho to mai bhi khush hu.. chalo ab khana khalo .. do din kuch nahi khaya .. ab mai khilauga..

rosh is so happy.. water in eye's..see arj.. n nod..


sameer home


sam sofe pe betha hai or soch raha hai.. kya ho raha hai .. arj n rosh ke life mai.. wo ek tarf arj ke liya sochta hai ki arj is Right.. wo roah ke liya kuch bhi kar sakta hai but wo rosh ki jid ke aage jhuke ga ki nahi ye pata nahi..or dusari traf rosh us ki sister wo us ko bhi dukhi nahi kar sakta or kuch kar bhi nahi sakta dono ke liya.. ye sochte sochte wo apna ankha band kar ke sofe ke back said sar rakhta hai..

achanak ek chota se hand us ke eye's ko close karte hai..esa sam smile karta hai or bolta hai.. are ye kon hai.. ?? are diya ya monty to nahi..??

the one little boy 4 year old.. angry n
say babasa aap ka samrth..aap se ab katty..n sam ke aage ake khada hota hai.. to show finger in sam.. n sam use dekha ke hassa padta he n say are baap re ab hum kya kare mera baby to gussa hogaya ab jo mai new video game laya hu wo.. ??

samarth now happy n smile to sam n say . sachi babasa aap ne humare liya game laye.. n hug sam.. sam to smile n hug too samarth..
kesa na lata mera sam ne jo bola tha to babasa ko to lana he tha na us ke liya.. n sam kiss little one forehead..

this seen see ayesha n smile too both n happy too see .. there bond..
n go to bedroom.. for other work..


arjun home..

arj rosh ko khana kilana ke baad bhar ata he room ke n try to call some one but call not received..than arj send msg..
phir use sam yaad ata he or wo use call lagata he..

sam in room see samrat exited too play gam..tabhi sam ka cell bajta he .. arj ka name dekhate he sam jaldi phone utha ke bhar ata he..

sam: hello arj.. rosh kesi he..??
us ne kuch khaya...tum ne baat ki..??
or tuje pata he na use ab mera call uthana bhi bund kiya he.. mujha kuch smjha nahi raha.. arj damit kuch bol kyu nhi raha..??

arj : sam kaminaaa... bol ne de ga to bolu ga na sare khandan ek jesa he..non stop talking..wait to hota nahi tuja se...or mujha he damit suna raha he.. ab agar ek word bhi bolana to samjha ya sajhavu..

sam.: okkk yaar tu bol bus..

arj : haan baat ki... or wo ab thik hai khana bhi khaya tu tension mat le k .

sam : really.. wo man gaye teri baat.. thank God..

arj : sam ..

sam : kya hua arj.. any serious..??

arj : mai tayar hua ab...maine haar maanli .

both side silence..sam ko kuch smjha nahi arj kya bol raha he..jab smjha aya tab..gussa se..

sam : kya matlab... tu ready hai .. what .. ye kya he arj tu to use smjha na gaya tha na fir ..?
(sam now frustrated n say.. )

arj sub sam ko bata ta he kya hua or kya nahi or use ha kesa bol na pada ...

sam sun ke chup hota he..thodi dar baad .. thoda relaxe feel kar ke .. arj ki feelings smjha ke use ab us ke friend ko support kar na he.. esliye..

sam : arj ek trafa se bhatara hai... ab wo happy bhi rahe ge n apna upar dhan rakha ge... or rahi teri baat to tu rosh ke khushi mai khush rehta hai.. or meri khushi tum dono ke khushi mai..


arj : sam tu or wo hai esliya mai ab tak haar nahi maani..tu rosh ka bhai he nahi mera best friend bhi he..agar tu na hota to ye arj kya karta pata nahi..but ab mujha tera sath chiya sam..
arj is now emotional..n feel lonely..

sam understand arj feelings..kesa nahi smjha ga arj us ka best friend he nahi use bhi jada he..

sam .: arj esa mat bol yaar mai to tera sath mar ke bhi nahi choduga..
esa haalat mai to mai hamesh tera feasla ka sath hu..chal ab jada tention mat le sub thik hoga..

arj jesa kuch soch mai ho.. reply too sam..

arj : hmmm

sam .. kya hua ?

arj : us ka kuch call.. ?? mai ab wait nahi kar sakta sam..

sam : nahi kuch mai try karuga..k

arj no reply..arj is lost in thinking..

sam : arj..kya hua bol..

arj : kuch nahi.. tu bata humara samrth kesa he..??


sam .:. thik he..or ab tu so ja.. ab rosh bhi thik he na.. ab tu thik se so ja jada stress mat le..kk

arj : hmmm gud night sam.

sam.:. gud night tcc arj..
call cut kar ke sam eye's close karta he..give deep birth n just control to Barth properly..


sry for any type mistake..
I will write n cell phone that's why..
n reply me to now u like updateee or not ..
waiting for u r.. reply..



n one more inf ... sheetal di send pm u my story..
Edited by ariya143 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Arjun finally maan gaya Sam arj aur roshni ke basre mein soch raha Hai Sam aur samarth cute conversation arj Sam ko batata Hai spne sur rosh ke convo ke bare mein aur use Haan Kar bhi di aakhir rosh aisa kyu kar rahi hai agar Shaadi karwana chahti Hai to kyu kya Riya Arjun se pyar karti Hai isliye per tab to riya negative Hui na uff lots of confusion fan update Gauri eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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