Yours Forever..(AK) PG95 **NEW Update** - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
Nice part continue soon plz!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
[quote=proud_2_b_mysel]grt part
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thnx 😳

[quote=Andekhi]Wicked Part!!!

I loved Angad's last dialogue.. And, I am glad he is dreaming about her!

You have handled Nisha & Kripa nicely!

P.S - can't wait to see more of AK in next part.

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thnx a dozens...nxt part is completely ak 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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[quote=berkeleygirl818]GREAT part!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE continue soon!!!!!!!!

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thnx!!! 😳 😃 ...i will cont in few dayz 😊

[quote=huntor]Nice part continue soon plz!
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glad u liked it...i will cont in 2 or 3 dayz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
gr8 part... like to see that angad saw kripa in his dreams loll... cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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[quote=sameira]great part continue soon
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thnx...i will cont on friday...

[quote=nehagupta_9]gr8 part... like to see that angad saw kripa in his dreams loll... cont soon
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thnx 😳 ...glad u liked it...i will cont on friday...
Edited by mitali_s - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 7:

He pressed the door bell and w8ed. Kripa opened the door and remained standing there. Angad stood there awkwardly waiting for her to let him in or was she thinking to shoo him away after having her book, from the door itself.

Kripa was wondering whether she should call him in or not, after all he was here only to return a book.

Angad finally handed her the book and kripa walked inside with it leaving door opened so that Angad can decide for himself whether to come in or leave. Angad took it as an invitation and entered inside. He stood behind kripa and spoke up while searching for Nisha at the same time.

A (stammering) – ermmm…kripa, thanks.

K – Its okay, I don't like disappointing my teachers.

A – ohh!

K – Would u like to have anything?

Angad raised his eyebrows, he wasn't used to a polite kripa.

K – well weather is pretty bad, if u wanna stay for a while u can. I think a coffee would do but let me tell u Nisha is not home and I really doubt that u want to chat with me.

Crap, how does she know that he was searching for her. She really doesn't need spects.

Now, whether he shud stay or not. It would be disrespectful if he left now but he wasn't a typical noble kind of boy. But he has to befriend her as well so it won't do any harm if he stayed back.

She brought the coffee cups and they sat down on the sofa. Kripa was about to take her first sip when she saw that it had started to rain. She ran outside in hurry. Angad was shocked at her sudden reaction.

She doesn't look like a girl who enjoy dancing in rain, he thought.

He followed her as she ran to her balcony. It was a large, open balcony.

Kripa hastily collected the books lying there on a chair. She knew she should not have left the books in the open after she studied them in the balcony in the morning.

She stuffed the books inside her kurti to protect them and ran towards the door where Angad stood staring at her.

While running, she slipped and was about to fall when Angad rushed to her, on an impulse, and took hold of her by her waist.

They stood there extremely close to each other with rain draining their bodies, Water dripped from angad's wet hair to kripa's neck. Their wet bodies were completely against each other gluing them as if they will never separate, warming them in spite of cold weather and wet clothes. They could feel each others breathe and smell each others fragrance.

After a moment of staring into each other eyes, kripa left his jacket that she was holding on to and rushed indoors saying a lame thank you.

Angad stood there in the rain, confused.

That was it. Hope u enjoyed it. It's my first complete a-k part.

Plz do comment if u like it and if u don't.

Suggestions, predictions, comments nething.

Thnx.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwww, it was CUTE!!!!!!!!! 😳 GREAT part!!!!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tht was soo gud!! he is falling for her and so is she!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Gr8 part.... but i cudnt see da pic... neways luvely to see a whole a-k part, n hopefully well get to see more l8r on in this ff. loll 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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[quote=berkeleygirl818]awwwwwwwwwwwww, it was CUTE!!!!!!!!! GREAT part!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!!!!

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thnx a lot 😳 ...i will try to 😛

[quote=proud_2_b_mysel]grt part
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thnx 😛

[quote=sameira-90]great part 😛
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thanks 😛

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