Rabul ff~Breakups ...the final destination

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

"Shit..."Mr khanna shouted after giving a well deserved kick to his punctured wheel."Isse bhi abhi hona tha"he yelled by crumpling his forehead.Purab, who is well known as Mr Khanna to all his business colleagues are now literally having a hard time to attend his first meeting with ...(let it be a secret 😉 "Arre kya toh nam tha,tota maina..."Purab thought trying hard to remember the name of his would be fiance!!By the way this is not the first would be fiance for him,previously he had five more!!He consistantly rejected them after a little time by plotting some so called "flaws" of them.Actually in real he does not believe in the concept of marriage but to keep his parents heart he agrees everytime so this meeting was also one of those formality.Though today he was going to meet one of his father's friend's daughter,so it was a matter of little concern for Mr Khanna as it would be hard to find flaws for his father's colleague's daughter.Because that girl had already stolen a special place in his father's eyes.She had visited his house quite a few times specially when he was not there so he had never been able to meet her formally!!"Pata nahi uss tota maina ne kya jadu chalaya hai papa pe
ki mare papa hokar bhi woh jyada gungan uss ladki ke karte hai!!"Purab blabbered by getting masseges after masseges from his father to come urgently!!

On the other hand a girl(same girl) was waiting in a five star hotel while checking her wrist watch again and again!!"Pata nahi yeh kyun nahi arahahe,milne ke baat to 11:30 ko hui thi aur abhi toh 12 baj gaye!!"she thought since a little tense because of the absence of Mr khanna...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ok guys this is the part 2...

Part 2:
This entire part is based on Purab's point of view:
After giving a royal ignorance to dad's messages at last the much awaited call of my dad came.Before i could even open my mouth,dad started scolding me for that tota maina as if i had intentionally being late!!I was not even able to tell dad about the mishap of my car let alone defending myself for it.He just cut it off after giving a piece of mind to me!!Though it was justified for him to being rude to me but i being myself didnt really think of the other options of taking a lift or calling a taxi!!I mean why should the Purab Khanna would compromise on his status or standard that too for an unknown girl??!!Naaa that was not me.!! I did what i supposed to do,called my driver to come up with another car...!!.
Here sitting inside my punctured car i was litterally having a riot of laughter after reading the headline of an Indian magazine which had tagged me as the PRINCE CHARMING of every girl!!!Like seriously??Prince charming!! I mean yup after being the victim of 5th time break ups which will soon be turned into 6th...,i am supposed to be the "Prince Charming" of every girl!!Like what kind of garbage this magazines made up??Well no fault of them either as they also need some attention!!And what can be more attention seeking than making the headlines of india's no 1 businessman that too in such an early age!!I boasted off a little after thinking about my not so simple achievements!!

End of pov...
On the other hand the girl was literally tired of waiting and decided to have an exit from the hotel."Kaise ajeeb insaan hote hai yeh
celebrities, na time ka khayal hai nahi manners ka!!Kitne dair tak intezar karwaya phir bhi koyi khabar nahi??!! Baap re Bulbul(yup she is the one) tera yaha se kat lena hi accha hai"she blabbered after being frustrated with the disappearance of the so called celebrity!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3:

The shuddering winterly weather in road was making it hard for bulbul to walk on without taking any transport but she was not in a mood to take one so she continued walking on by grappling herself with both the hands."Hushhh ek toh itni thand hai, upar se jis kam ke liye ayi thi woh toh hua hi nahi!!"She went on blabbering while containing a grumpish expression which accompanied with her harbouring frustration of last 1 hour of waiting, "Akher kya bigar jata uss laatsaheb ka ek phone karne se??Bekar main mare itna wakt barbaad kar diya!Agar milna hi nahi tha toh mujhe kyun pareshan kiya?!!Main kaunsa use milne ke liye mari jarahithi!!Waise bhi jiska panch panch bar shaadi toot chuka ho woh mujhse kya khaak shaadi karega!!Upar se meri atrangi harkate dekhke woh laatsaheb apna doom hilake bhag jata,accha hi hua ki nahi aya!! "She chattered on and on till her home while tagging the "so called" celebrity with various types of nouns like khadoos,fula hua baloon,bigra hua amirzaada etc etc.She was really hurt by the misbehaviour of Mr khanna as no one ever been so unpunctual to her specially when it is the matter of such a sensitive thing like marriage!!Why shouldnt she be hurt after all she prepared herself for this particular day from the last 3 days while going against her wish.She was being literally ordered by her father to show off infront of Mr khanna of what she is not!! In short impressing Mr khanna with the way of behaviour by which he is supposed to be impressed with!!Though bulbul never faked infront of any one but this time it was about her marriage.And she was given that notion by her family that nobody would ever be impressed with her actual self that means with her own identity as she does not fit in within the boundary of the so called "typical society"!!

Bulbul, an accountant by proffesion,despite having all the luxuries to lead a grandeur life,loves to sponge a simple yet peaceful life.She finds happiness in every little things around her life like making a crying child smile,helping a helpless person,gifting toys to the orphan childs etc.She is not much social but a little introvert,likes to spend her time with orphan childs and most of the time stays alone..

On the other hand, purab was finally able to arrive into the hotel while crossing a lot of hurdles. He directly went towards the booked table,which his father booked for him and bulbul.After reaching there he was totally blowed by the absence of bulbul. "What the hell??Jis tota maina se milne ke liye itna mehnat kiya,woh toh abhi tak pauncha hi nahi!!"Mr khanna thought while drinking a glass of water."Shit dude i shouldnt have been so early."purab imagined since using his ultra common sense!! 🤣

Precap:First meet...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...jusr Awesome...please update the next part sooon .. ...
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Here junior khanna is purab and mr khanna is used for both of dad and purab and to make it clear i have bracketed them.

Rabul ff:Breakups the final destination...
Chapter4

After reaching her home the first thing she noticed was her father's tensed look while higgling his hands.Anybody could have said her father was having a hard time with the pressure of his daughter's marriage on his head.Mr chopra always took her daughter as a liability with the typical prejudice that daughters are mend to be the outsiders.They are not supposed to take their clan forward.Thats why Mr chopra is having three daughters in the hope of becoming a son's father but to his bad luck he was never been able to be a son's father.Thats why being a rich girl bulbul never really got the chance of having a lavish life.Though she had opportunities to have one but every time her father taunted her for little little things whereas her two other sisters were no exception,they were also the victims of their dad's regular taunting quota,and due to that they had shifted to hostel while having a fixed amount of money sent by their dad for the survival..
Bulbul wanted to take over her father's business but she never had the courage to pursue her wish.She wanted to left the house quite a few times but was never been able to stop caring about her parents so had to dodge that idea every damn time!!

"Papa..."bulbul called by making a squeezed voice,well as much as she could have at that time!!Hearing her voice her dad literally ran towards her while shooting her with a bunch of questions like what happened,what was purab's reaction,was he happy etc etc...After listening all this questions one thing which seriously pinched her heart that her father was not at all interested about knowing her perspctive,her feelings,all he was concerned with the guy's reaction regarding her.
"Arre tu jabab kyun nahi derahihain??Purab ko tu pasand aya na??!!"Mr chopra yelled...
Finally reality strike her that her father was never concerned about her neither her sisters.Realising that she replied
"Woh papa Mr khanna toh ayehi nahi!!Maine bohot der tak intezar kiya aur call bhi kiya tha lekin kuch pata nahi chala isiliye maine socha ki shahed woh nahi ayenge"Well her answer had shot up her dad's anger to another level.
"Chali ayi matlab???Tu intezar nahi kar sakti thi??Woh kitna bara businessman hai pata hai na tujhe aur waise bhi woh ladka hai toh thora bohot der karna uska hak banta hai.!!"
That was it!!!!Bulbul was not able to keep away her tears anymore.The way her dad differentiate between a girl and a guy had always hurt her but this time he was literally asking her to throw away her self respect and wait for the guy till the time he would be able to turn up!!!
Her dad would have imputed her with some more questions but his phone rang at that very moment which forced him to stop from further countering.That was actually mr khanna's (purab's father) call.Bulbul was not able to hear their conversation as her dad made his way to his room before picking up the call!!

Both of the daddys had conversed and came into a conclusion that purab's daddy is holding a puja in his house tomorrow in short making the ways of bulbul's entrance in his son's life!!

I am having the chapter 4 in parts..
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After their conversation Mr khanna was really not happy with the junior khanna as he(purab) had literally neglected his(mr khanna) warning and didnt really bother to turn up into the hotel within an hour!!!As a result he dialed the junior khanna's number to give him a well deserved piece of mind!!
"Haa papa..."well the junior khanna answered his daddy's call in such a voice as if nothing happened!!
"Where the hell are u purab??Is it really the right way to behave with a girl??"
Girl????!!!!His father told something which was
simply not understood by him as for him the girl was yet to arrive[B][/B] 🤣
So the much shocked junior khanna replied"ladki... kaisi ladki?????Papa koyi ladki barki nahi aya hai iss hotel main.Infact main kitni dair se intezar kar rahahoon!!"
"Like seriously purab?????"Mr khanna yelled from the other side while still not able to get over his son's foolishness "Tumhara dimag toh kharab nahi ho gya hai ???Bulbul tumhare liye kitni dair tak ruki rahi aur tum ho ke baheki baheki baatein karne pe tule hue ho".
Well that came as a total shocker for the junior khanna.The girl for whom he was waiting for half long hours had gone without even informing him!!!
"Purab??Are u there??I am talking to u damn!!"asked the much concerned dad.
"Haa papa i am coming ,bye.."dashhh thats it.He cut the call while still trying to get over the fact that his so called tota maina had left the purab khanna uninformingly.
"Hello purab...???"and there mr khanna went on with the sudden cut of the call by his son!!

"Chali gayi!!!Aise kaise chali gayi???Mujhe chorke chali gayi???"and here the junior khanna's well known sulking had started.He was venting on and on while having a plan to revenge on that tota maina for her misbehaviour!!It was literally clear that he was having no intention to spare that daring girl at all.



Bulbul and purab both of them were informed about the puja by their respective dads while both of the individuals were having a different point of view for that day.For bulbul it was another day in which she was supposed to be pretentious and fake infront of the purab khanna whereas for purab it was an opt opportunity to have his revenge on her.

The next day:
As usual bulbul was forced to wear a heavy designer lahenga with heavy jewelries by her parents for the puja.She was literally being trained by her mom about how to behave infront of Mr khanna(purab).Though she was looking extremely beautiful but it was not her,it was not her personality.She never knew that she had to give up her own identity to have a relation with rich people.She had met purab's mom and dad several times but never ever in her life she felt that they need a classy wife!!!They always looked happy with her.Even if they needed one then why the hell they would even prefer her as they knew her and about her type!!Restraining all that questions in her heart she and her parents finally arrived into the khanna mansion.Though bulbul came here a lot of times but this time cant be compared with those other times as it is regarding her marriage.And for the first time her arrival into the mansion made her nervous.Nervous because of the fakeness she have to put in infront of mr khanna(purab),nervous in the sense getting caught infront of him and making herself a laughing stock for him...No no no she does not want that.She does not want to embarrass herself infront of him.But what to do?She does not have any choice,she is being pressurized to do all this!!

She was having hella difficulty while walking on high heels as she is not used to it.She always prefer flat shoes.Many people in the puja were having a weird look on her.The amout of make up she had put in and also the uncomfortableness she was having,were somewhere making her spotted infront of everyone...She wanted to flee away from there somehow,and she did so by going into the washroom...

Washroom, her usual place to cry her heart out,it was no exception today either!!Her eyes were moistened and became red.This was the worst phrase of her life.Never ever in her life she felt so underconfident and embarrassed!!

The washroom was attached to purab's room.And purab was getting ready in his room. He had worn a light sherwani.A simple outfit but he was literally looking killer...Actually more than getting ready he was preparing himself for the revenge...!!!He was having a masterplan under him which he was all set to execute...

After making himself ready for everything finally he got out of his room..While crossing the attached washroom,some pinch of sound was heard by him most probably a weeping sound from the washroom which he decided to follow up..

He opened the door of washroom while being concerned about the weeping sound.The thing which he saw after that was not something which he expected.There was a girl who was crying profusely while also trying to make her face right as her makeup was totally messed up!!The girl was visible for him through the front mirror,he could have seen the agony of that girl in her eyes.The girl was literally mesmerizing for him.And he definitely did not like water in her eyes.There was something in her which was attracting him like magnet!!He decided to approach towards her and ask her the reason of weeping...

Precap:Execution of plan!!



So its altogether chapter 4
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yay...finally the next episode is here...and now I am he'll eager for the next update...pleeeaaasssee update sooon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey...when are you updating next...can't wait for the next update.

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