And they were complete..... A RaMusk happy ending...

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I was watching DMG for the first time in HOTSTAR and being a huge Drashti Dhami fan I didn't like the ending for RaMusk...😭... So I decided to write to write a happy ending for them...😊 So here I am writing something for the first time in 20 years


PART-1

AND THEY WERE COMPLETE...


Rahul was sitting at the airport lounge and remembered the last time he was here... After that night... That night when Muskan threw a FAREWELL PARTY aka BREAKUP PARTY for him...When he gave Muskan that doll and asked her to give it to her daughter in future as a gift for Rahul uncle... When Ridhima asked him to stop being such a shallow person and adopt a child if he really wants to be a father... But how could he??!! He wanted to have a daughter like Muskan... That small button nose... Those beautiful doe eyes... That naughty but innocent smile and especially those curly hair... He always wanted her daughter to be the fighter wild cat Muskan used to be... "Maybe she still is" Rahul thinks..."or maybe not"!!I broke her ... In such a way...but it was for her own good!! I know how much she loves kids! We loved each other and that's why she was ready to compromise!! But she wouldn't have been completely happy!! Maybe after a year or a few years she would have craved for a child of her own! Exactly like I crave for a daughter like her!! But she deserves to have a happy life and a happy family,a complete life... A life I wouldn't have been able to give her... Ever... These 8 years, only I know how I had to control myself to not run back to Muskan!! Even had to see a Psychiatrist!! And still it was not possible to let the feelings go... "MUSKAN I STILL LOVE YOU AND I STILL CRAVE FOR YOU"...but I can't go to you... Not again.. I have done this two times before... Not again... And I don't even know where she is!!! Even though Atul told me that Muskan is specializing on Cardiology but it's still going to be hard to find CARDIOLOGIST DR.MUSKAN CHADDA... "Or maybe a totally different surname" Muskan Rahul Gerewal would have sounded so good... Rahul smiled sarcastically... She used to get sooo scared in the name of surgery... Rahul always thought that she will specialize in Pediatric... ...
And his chain of memories broke as a bunch of curly black hair just fall in front of his chair! And it stood up and there was a person behind it...button nose... Doe eyes and a pout...about 5 years old... Cute little girl... Her hair was far too long for her petite appearance
Rahul was about to check whether she was hurt and she was about to run again when a woman with same kind of black curly hair in white Saree caught her and spoke in a husky voice "Dikhao zaraa... Chot to nehi lagi na!!! "Mumma mujhe vindi nehi khaani hai... Please mumma... Please" "Thik hai!!! Aaj no vindi!!but please dont run like this baby... See... Aapko chot lag jaayegi naa" said Muskan...
Rahul couldn't believe his eyes... He was awestrucked... He was speechless... It was as if god has just presented him a painting of his dream but in a much more real shape... Or maybe he was turning into a Schizophrenic... It's not real... It cant be... Muskan is kneeling in the floor in front of him and checking for scratches or bruises in that little angel's body who looks exactly like Rahul has always imagined his or Muskan's daughter will look like
"Muskan" but the word didn't came out of her mouth... Come on ... I cant just loose my voice right now... But he was not able to speak either... But maybe god heard his thoughts! The little angel looked towards him and said "Dr. Rahul" and Muskan looked towards him... An expression of shock in her face
"Rahul..."
"Muskan..." Rahul finally found his voice
"Hi... What a surprise!!!How are you Rahul?? You were in US na??? Yeha pe ???"
"It's a long story... Abhi k liye ye jaanle that I am waiting for my flight to Kolkata!!!" and he looked at the little angel who was looking at him with a lot of curiosity at this moment
"Meet my little bundle of happiness ... Roshni... And Roshni this is..."
"Pata hai!! Dr.Rahul Garewal!!!! Hallow!!! Very nice to meet you sir" and she hold Rahul's hand and shook it... Rahul was so overwhelmed...
"Very nice to meet you too but how do you know my name??!!! We never met before"
Roshni laughed "aap bilkul buddhu ho!! Aap ko meet karna thori hi na parti hai pahechanne k liye!! I have seen your photos! Mumma has sooo many photos of alll of you" Rahul looked at Muskan and Muskan smiled " How can I not tell her about the best days of my life!!! Anyway tere flight kitne baje ki hai??? "
"5 a.m."
"Abhi to 10 a.m. hai!!!!!"
"Kal subha 5 a.m."
"Ooo, to tu itni der tak yeha kiya karega???"
"Magazines parhunga aur coffee piyunga..."
"Yehi karna hai to mere saath chal"
"Kaha????!!!!"
"Obviously mere ghar pe"
Really god!!! Seriously!!! To her house... What does she want... To introduce me to her hubby??? Maybe her hubby too knows him as well... From the photos... Shall I go with her... "How much she told her hubby about me" Rahul wonders...
"Tere ghar!!"
"Zyada door nehi hai!! Chalna!!"
"Ha... Please come with us naa... I wanna hear more Sanjeevni stories... Please.. Mumma keeps telling old stories only.. Please come naa!! " said Roshni
Rahul was sooo confused... But he couldn't say no... When she looked at Roshni and saw the plea in her eyes... She was looking at him as if she knows him for ages







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"Thik hai!!" Rahul said and smiled at Roshni!! Roshni seems to be eleted to hear this!! She gave a big smile and spread he arms as if asking Rahul to pick her up! And Rahul picked her up and now she tightly hugged him and said "Thank you thank you thank you!!" it was as if she knows him for ages and was waiting eagerly to meet him!! All of a sudden Rahul also wanted to hug Muskan tightly... Wanted to take HER in his arms too!! But he couldn't do so. Muskan was someone else's wife now and the little angel he was holding right now, is someone else's daughter... But Muskan was not wearing Sindoor, or Mangalsutra, or ring...it' not unusual though... Muskan is a modern independent woman and she has every right not to wear them!!!But she was wearing a golden chain with a golden ring in it .. Used as locket.. Maybe her engagement ring maybe!
"Chale???and Roshni please beta niche utro! Aisa nehi karte!! " Muskan said
"Nehi na mumma!! Please"
"Roshni!!!!" Muskan tried to show anger in her voice and her eyes! She looked really cute doing this!
"Rahene de naa!! Bachchi hai!!"
"Par..."
"Mujhe koi problem nehi ho raha hai" I know that this is not my child, but please don't take this moment from me Muskan... I am holding your daughter.. Who looks exactly like you!! Who looks exactly like the daughter I have always dreamed of... My daughter with you Muskan- He says in his mind!
"Ye tera bag hai na??"
"Yea!! Main le leta hu!!"
"Nehi main leti hu!! Tu Roshni ko le"
"Nehi Muskan main le lunga"
"Come on Rahul!! Relax!! I can!! " Muskan smiled and they walked out to get a cab!!
When they took the cab, Roshni insisted Rahul to sit in the back seat with them. Muskan on left, then Roshni at the middle and Rahul at right!! The moment they took the seats, Roshni started requesting him to tell the stories of Sanjeevni days, "wo kahani batao na jab Atul uncle apne sare plants hospital leke aaye the" "wo wala jab aap logo ne busket ball competition kiya tha" and all that... Even after being a CARDIOLOGIST Muskan gets time to tell all these stories to Roshni... She is such a fabulous mom!! Rahul thought!! Rahul took his sweet time and told a few stories requested by Roshni in detail... Roshni seemed to enjoy them a lot!! He occasionally looked at Muskan... Muskan smiled but then seemed she was lost in thoughts... Remembering their old times together maybe...


Muskan smiles seeing Roshni sitting as close as possible to Rahul... This is what happens when you tell Roshni Chadda stories!!! She remembered the night Rahul left ... Giving her that doll!! How she came back to her home alone... From Arman's house as everyone got busy taking care of drunk Ridhima! Muskan also felt sad for her! Ridhima was such an angel but she was in such a pain!! Muskan remembered how she cried the whole night holding the doll in her arms!! And there was no one to hold her!! It was as if someone was stabbing her heart, as if someone was trying to tear her heart out of her body, as if her heart was breaking literally!! She remembered how she fall asleep near the dawn and woke up dreaming about the night she and Rahul made love! But Rahul was not there with her! Rahul left the night before leaving her alone! And he was not coming back!! Muskan wanted to stay angry at him, but she couldn't!! When he told her how much he wanted Muskan to have a daughter who looks just like her and gave her the doll and hugged her for the very last time... Muskan couldn't stay angry at him anymore! She just felt sorry for him... How much he wanted to have a daughter with Muskan... But he was gone and this time he was not coming back again... Ever ... Muskan decided to move on with life!! She remembered the night she had to help Dr.Shuvankar with a complicated heart surgery for emergency as no one else was there and Dr. Shubhankar suggested her to take Cardiology... Muskan smiled inwardly... I used to be so scared of surgeries and now she was a Cardiologist!! And then...
Muskan's chain of memories was broken as the cab came to a halt
"Hum pohoch gaye" said Roshni
Cute little house thought Rahul! They got down from the cab and now Roshni was pulling him towards the house! Cab driver kept his bag at the door when Muskan got the key and opened the door... Directly opposite to the door inside the hall was a big wall hanging photo of Muskan, a much younger Roshni and a man Rahul guessed to be Roshni's father and Muskan's husband!! He felt as if he had seen this guy before and he also felt a pang of jealousy!! This guy is the father of Roshni and husband of Muskan! Rahul suddenly felt so angry at the person!! He took everything Rahul was supposed to have!! He was supposed to have this family!! No one else!!
"chalo naa!! Mera kamra dekhna hai na??!!!" Roshni was pulling him
"Nehi beta .. Inhe fresh hone do pahele!! Rahul to fress ho jaa... Udhar bathroom hai! Main coffee aur breakfast banati hu!! Roshni ye fresh ho jaaye uske baat tum inhe apna room dikha dena!! Ok??!!"
"Ok" Roshni seemed to understand

Rahul went to the washroom when Muskan went to the kitchen with Roshni at her heels... Rahul took a glimpse and again got jealous of the guy in the photo of the hall!!! He looked at the mirror and saw himself... He hasn't changed much... But Muskan has!!! She seems so much more mature now!!! What she could have done... I left her no other choice!!

Muskan went to kitchen and started making breakfast!! She remembers the night together!! How he took her in his arms, put a kiss on her temple, kissed her eyes,her neck and took her lips!! For the first time in life someone touched her this way! And suddenly his hands were everywhere and so were his lips!! He removed layers of her cloths one by one and removed his own cloths... The feel of his bare body touching her own bare skin! No touch ever felt so good! And then her body felt some sweet pain!! She fekt her own tears falling down the side of her eyes and felt Rahul's lips touching there !!! They went all the way that night... The most beautiful night of Muskan's life!! Nothing else ever felt sooo good.. Except for when she became the mother of Roshni! Muskan looked at Roshni sitting at the kitchen counter beside her.. Playing with her toy bike and she smiled... Hiw much a baby can change someone's life!! Muskan saw herself changing for Roshni!! Roshni was Muskan in miniature... Exactly like Rahul described her daughter will look like, the night he left!

Rahul came out of washroom and saw Muskan and Roshni sitting in the table with breakfast... They both changed their cloths! Now Muskan looked a lot like the old Muskan wearing three quarters and T shirt! Roshni was in shorts and T!

During breakfast Rahul finally told why he was going to Kolkata! After his father died 4 years ago his mother wanted to come back to India! But they had their nursing home to run... But finally the decided to sell that and Rahul decided to do some investments in Hospitals in India!
"Why Kolkata Rahul?? Why not Mumbai or Delhi??"
"Woh bas..." Rahul fumbled with words
"Kolkata mein Sanjeevni nehi hai iss liye??"
Rahul couldn't say anything! Muskan was right!
"Relax Rahul! I do understand! I am working at Sanjeevni Delhi by the way, as a senior daughter"
"Great" Rahul imagined Muskan giving duties to Interns like Dr.Kirti... Muskan as Dr.Kirti was the most ridiculous thing anyone can imagine and so Rahul couldn't help but smile...
"meri chhoro, tum bolo.. airport me kiya kar rahi thi"
"woh.."
"arey aap log mujhse to baat hi nehi kar rahe ho" Roshni said pouting
both Rahul and MUskan laughed hearing her complain
"thik hai Roshni madam, aap boliye, aap kiya kar rahe the airport me" Rahul asked
" dada dadi came na? we went to see them off! mumma aap bhi aa jao naa... thore snacks le kar" Roshni replied
"But airport mein VINDI??"
"Woh mumma ne kaha k wo aaj vindi banayegi lunch k liye!! You know I hate vindi so much!! So I ran to annoy her!! Aise hi to maanti hai wo"
Badmash- Rahul thought
" but mumma ko to hospital bhi jaana hoga na?"
"maine aaj chhutti li hai! dont worry Rahul" Muskan replied and went towards the kitchen and Rahul went to Roshni's room with her.The cute little room was colourful with all kind of toys a kid can have- from soft toys to remote controlled cars... from barbie dolls to mini bike...Roshni pulled he towards her toys and started " ye teddy na, mujhe Anjali maasi ne diya and this barbie is from Ridhima maasi, and these cars and bikes.. ye Arman uncle ne diya, aur wo plant Atul uncle ne diya.. unhone to aur bhi plants diya.. aur pata hai Navneeta didi jab bhi aati hai to bohot saara chocolates laati hai aur Nikki maasi bhi"
So all of them visit here often-Rahul thought "but i didn't bring anything for you beta.. i am so sorry"
"but aapne to mujhe sanse aachchha wala gift diya tha" Rahul was confused ... Roshni opened her cupboard and brought out a doll! Rahul remembered the doll.. the same doll Rahul gave Muskan the night they said good bye...
"it wa the first toy mumma gave to me, mumma loves it soo much and i love it the most"
Rahul became emotional, Muskan actually valued his request.. Rahul felt so grateful and suddenly the feelings he started having for Roshni, doubled! and he couldn't stop himself from hugging her! Roshni hugged him back. When they let go of each other Rahul had tears in his eyes!
"why are you crying? please don't cry! you are so much like mumma, she also cries everytime she sees this doll!tabhi to maine iss doll ko cupboard me rakh diya hai"
Mukan entered the room with a tray full of snacks and Rahul quickly dried his tears and started talking to Roshni about her toys and school and for the next few hours all three of them played at Roshni's room. Roshni was really dominating giving orders all the times. Then they had lunch and Roshni wanted to play again! but she was too tired and fall asleep fast. Rahul helped Muskan putting the toys in right places after putting her in the bed and Rahul saw a picture frame on the bedside table. It was the same man from the picture of the hall but with another woman wearing Sindoor, mangalsutra! Rahul noticed the pointed ears of that woman and noticed the same type of ears of the person sleeping in the bed... Roshni...
Edited by moumita.madhuk - 8 years ago
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Part-3
It can be his sister or something.. Even though it didn't look like brother sisterly photo! Right!! Thought Rahul!
"Kiya soch raha hai?" asked Muskan...
"Kuchh nehi" said Rahul! I cant just ask her who this woman is, with her husband!
They left Roshni's room n sat in the hall. There was an awkward silence for a while and then Muskan spoke "so, how is life? Family and all?"
"Told you na, mom is in Chandigarh and she wants to spend the rest of her life there! And di is in UK with jiju and her son Abhay! But enough about me, you tell me, how is your life?? Roshni seems like a little angel but where is her father??? Work??"
"Her father is no more" Muskan had tears in her eyes "he died after about 7 months of Roshni's birth"
And that was a huge shocker for Rahul... No!! this can't happen to Muskan! How can god do this to her! I thought she has a happy family... But her husband is no more... Muskan was alone again... Why!! When Atul gave him the news that Muskan has moved on and has started dating other men, that was a relief for Rahul.. Even though he was jealous... But then all of a sudden Atul stopped taking his calls! But Muskan is taking care of her child alone??!!! God can be so cruel to soms of the most beautiful people!!
"I was elated when bhaiya came back from rehabilitation and started leading a normal life! A small job at a private farm and a girl he loves very much! Risha was such a nice girl .. And we were so happy when they got married and then came the news of her pregnancy!! Ma papaji were so happy that they almost decided to move to Delhi with them... But Risha couldn't survive the childbirth and bhaiya started taking drugs again!! Me and ma got so busy to take care of motherless Roshni that we didn't even notice the changes in bhaiya! And then one day... Police came to our house and informed us about his death due to drug overdose!! And it became even harder for us!! Ma papaji...they were completely shattered! I didn't know what to do!but I knew that they all were my responsibility now... They were mine to take care of!! Roshni's first words were MUMMA and I couldn't help it! I legally adopted her!! But you surely know all these already! You were in touch with Atul."
This was even bigger shocker for Rahul... And he had mixes feelings!!!no! Atul didn't tell me a thing! He didn't take my calls and changed his no- thought Rahul!! Muskan didn't loose her husband! It's a good thing.. But she was still alone! Or maybe she is dating someone- a pang of jealousy towards the faceless person he imagined Muskan was dating... Maybe not... Rahul felt happy... But it was a mean feeling... He can't feel happy about a person dying... That's why he felt like he has seen the person in the photo earlier.. It was Muskan's brother and then he remembered- it means that Roshni is not Muskan's daughter!! Rahul felt weird... His feelings for Roshni felt weird!! That poor child lost her parents at such an early age!! But Muskan is there for her and she was her mother! He heard a distant voice calling his name
"Rahul! Kiya hua??! Kiya soch raha hai??!!"
"Atul ne mujhe kuchh nehi bataya tha! The last time we talked, he told me that you were dating"
"I dated,because ma papaji wanted me to get married! But after a while I concentrated in my career! And then Roshni came to my life!! She gave me such happiness that didn't feel any need to go for any relationship any more! Me and Roshni are a very happy family!" there was something in Muskan's voice that told Rahul she was forcing the word HAPPY
"Mumma" Roshni came to the hall rubbing her eyes and she looked exactly like her bua! Rahul so wanted this family to be his own!! But it is too late!! Muskan made peace with their past! Otherwise she wouldn't have invited him in her house like this and now she is leading a peaceful happy life with Roshni... I cant ruin their peace- Rahul thought!! Not again!! I have already broken her heart two times before!! Both times I gave her hope and then I left her!! I do not deserve this family!! I do not deserve any family!! I shouldn't have come to her home! Not knowing the reality was better for me! He felt soft hands pulling his cheeks! Roshni was pulling his cheeks to draw his attention!!
"Aap firse kiya soch rahe ho?"
"Kuchh nehi!! Aapki mumma kaha gayi" Rahul asked.. He will have to leave ... If he stays any longer with them..he will not be able to control himself
"Kitchen mein! Mere liye Doodh lene. Aap mujhe wo wala story sunao naa jab aap lonavla gaye the"
"Ok" a little bit more.. Thought Rahul and started telling her the story!!

It was a bad idea. Muskan thought... I shouldn't have brought him at my home... But I got over my feelings years ago... I moved on!! Except the occasional dreams I dream about him! I was over him!! But bringing him here was a bad idea!! I think I should ask him to leave now!! Or I will fall in love with him again!! Usse kiya!! He will leave again... Like the two times before!! I have to ask him to leave!! He can spend the night at the airport!! Waise bhi 5 a.m ki flight hai!!

In the hall Roshni asked Rahul "achchha kiya mumma tab bhi neend mein baatein karti thi!!"
"Abhibhi karti hai??!!" Rahul was curious
"Haa!! Aur jab bhi main mumma k saath soti hu naa.. Mujhe bohot funny lagti hai.. Midnight ko mumm itni bolti hai k lagta hai koi story suna rahu hai!!! Pata hai, wo na sab ko bulati hai apne neend mein!! Aur kabhi kabhi roti bhi hai!! To main na unhe kasske jhappi aur kissi de deti hu!! Aur wo jab bhi roti hai naa.. Aap ko hi bulati hai!! Maine notice kiya hai!!"
"ROSHNI!!" Muskan came to the room with a glass of milk
Roshni was close to tears hearing her mumma calling her in such an angry tone
Before Rahul could say anything Muskan said " Rahul I have to go to the hospital... It's an emergency!! I will be back late at morning so I am taking Roshni with me!! I am sorry but you have to go to"
"Thik hai, par usse mat daat!! Bachchi hai"
"Meri bachchi hai" Muskan pulled Roshni up in her arms from Rahul's lap!
"Ok.. Main apna samaan le leta hu"
"But why mumma?? Aap boldo naa hospital mein k aap nehi aa sakte ho!! Please mumma!! Aur hum log raat mein saath saath enjoy karenge!! Please mumma" Roshni was about to cry
"Nehi beta!! Aisa nehi hota hai!!"
"Roshni!! Mumma ki baat suno!!" said Rahul... He was pained for both of them!! His presence in this world was the reason for their pain!! But not anymore

Muskan held her even closer as she actually started crying!! Rahul got his bag!!
"Mujhe bye nehi bologi aap??" Roshni got down from her mumma's arms and tightly hugged a kneeling Rahul!! Rahul kissed her and realized how unlucky he was and more than that he realized his decisions are more responsible for what he is going through and what Muskan is going through even now!!
"I am sorry Muskan"
Muskan kept mum!!
"I am gonna miss you" said Roshni
Rahul smiled at her and walked out of the door .Muskan closed the door. Roshni hugged her mumma and said "don't be sad mumma!! Papa said na that he will stay in India now!! He will be nack home soon.. You don't be sad!!"
Muskan was astonished "who taught you to call him Papa?? Him??"
"No mumma!! Ridhima maasi and Arman uncle told you na that RAHUL COULD HAVE BEEN A PAPA TO ROSHNI IF HE WOULD HAVE STAYED IN INDIA!! He is now staying in India na??!! So wo to mere papa hi huye naa!!"
Muskan couldn't control her tears anymore.. She knew that she shouldn't cry in front of Roshni... But she just couldn't help it... Tears started streaming down her eyes... Roshni got even more concerned for Muskan "mumma please don't cry!! Papa will be back soon and will stay with us for longer! Aur aap bhi chhutti le lena aur hum saath mein bohot enjoy korenge!!" she was close to tears too!!! Muskan controlled her feelings and said "aise nehi hota hai beta!! He is not your Papa"
"But why mumma??!! He is so nice"
Muskan didn't know how to explain this to a 5 years old "listen beta!! He just cant be your papa"
"Why??"
"Because he hasn't asked your mumma to marry him yet" Rahul said standing at the open door! He had tears in his eyes!! "I forgot my mobile!! And I am happy that I did!!"
"So you will be my papa after marrying mumma??"
"Yes"
"Mumma please marry him na!! Please mumma"
Muskan was crying silently.. She looked away from Rahul...
Roshni went to Rahul and started pulling her inside and close to her mumma!!! She was elated!!
"I am sorry Muskan!! Mujhe pata hai that I was an idiot.. The biggest idiot!! I still am... But please ek aur chance de de!! Mujhe papa banne ka ek mauka de de" the plea in his words and the guilt in his voice!
"But you know the reality of her biological parents now???you think you can really be her papa???"
"Gimme a chance Muskan!! Trust me I will..."
"Do baar trust karne ki galtivkar chuki hu!! Teesri baar wohi galti kaise karlu Rahul" Muskan was trying her best to sound cold
"Do baar galti to main bhi kar chuka hu! Teesri baar nehi karunga"
"Roshni ka dil tora to jaan se maar dungi" and she threw herself into Rahul's arms and broke into tears and Rahul was crying too.. Roshni couldn't understand why were they crying!!
"Why are you crying mumma?? Papa came back na??"
"Because your mumma don't know yet whether Sanjeevni will give me a job"
Roshni was confused but Muskan understood... Rahul WAS staying.. With them and... They were complete...


Edited by moumita.madhuk - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: moumita.madhuk

I was watching DMG for the first time in HOTSTAR and being a huge Drashti Dhami fan I didn't like the ending for RaMusk...😭... So I decided to write to write a happy ending for them...😊 So here I am writing something for the first time in 20 years


PART-1

AND THEY WERE COMPLETE...


Rahul was sitting at the airport lounge and remembered the last time he was here... After that night... That night when Muskan threw a FAREWELL PARTY aka BREAKUP PARTY for him...When he gave Muskan that doll and asked her to give it to her daughter in future as a gift for Rahul uncle... When Ridhima asked him to stop being such a shallow person and adopt a child if he really wants to be a father... But how could he??!! He wanted to have a daughter like Muskan... That small button nose... Those beautiful doe eyes... That naughty but innocent smile and especially those curly hair... He always wanted her daughter to be the fighter wild cat Muskan used to be... "Maybe she still is" Rahul thinks..."or maybe not"!!I broke her ... In such a way...but it was for her own good!! I know how much she loves kids! We loved each other and that's why she was ready to compromise!! But she wouldn't have been completely happy!! Maybe after a year or a few years she would have craved for a child of her own! Exactly like I crave for a daughter like her!! But she deserves to have a happy life and a happy family,a complete life... A life I wouldn't have been able to give her... Ever... These 8 years, only I know how I had to control myself to not run back to Muskan!! Even had to see a Psychiatrist!! And still it was not possible to let the feelings go... "MUSKAN I STILL LOVE YOU AND I STILL CRAVE FOR YOU"...but I can't go to you... Not again.. I have done this two times before... Not again... And I don't even know where she is!!! Even though Atul told me that Muskan is specializing on Cardiology but it's still going to be hard to find CARDIOLOGIST DR.MUSKAN CHADDA... "Or maybe a totally different surname" Muskan Rahul Gerewal would have sounded so good... Rahul smiled sarcastically... She used to get sooo scared in the name of surgery... Rahul always thought that she will specialize in Pediatric... ...
And his chain of memories broke as a bunch of curly black hair just fall in front of his chair! And it stood up and there was a person behind it...button nose... Doe eyes and a pout...about 5 years old... Cute little girl... Her hair was far too long for her petite appearance
Rahul was about to check whether she was hurt and she was about to run again when a woman with same kind of black curly hair in white Saree caught her and spoke in a husky voice "Dikhao zaraa... Chot to nehi lagi na!!! "Mumma mujhe vindi nehi khaani hai... Please mumma... Please" "Thik hai!!! Aaj no vindi!!but please dont run like this baby... See... Aapko chot lag jaayegi naa" said Muskan...
Rahul couldn't believe his eyes... He was awestrucked... He was speechless... It was as if god has just presented him a painting of his dream but in a much more real shape... Or maybe he was turning into a Schizophrenic... It's not real... It cant be... Muskan is kneeling in the floor in front of him and checking for scratches or bruises in that little angel's body who looks exactly like Rahul has always imagined his or Muskan's daughter will look like
"Muskan" but the word didn't came out of her mouth... Come on ... I cant just loose my voice right now... But he was not able to speak either... But maybe god heard his thoughts! The little angel looked towards him and said "Dr. Rahul" and Muskan looked towards him... An expression of shock in her face
"Rahul..."
"Muskan..." Rahul finally found his voice
"Hi... What a surprise!!!How are you Rahul?? You were in US na??? Yeha pe ???"
"It's a long story... Abhi k liye ye jaanle that I am waiting for my flight to Kolkata!!!" and he looked at the little angel who was looking at him with a lot of curiosity at this moment
"Meet my little bundle of happiness ... Roshni... And Roshni this is..."
"Pata hai!! Dr.Rahul Garewal!!!! Hallow!!! Very nice to meet you sir" and she hold Rahul's hand and shook it... Rahul was so overwhelmed...
"Very nice to meet you too but how do you know my name??!!! We never met before"
Roshni laughed "aap bilkul buddhu ho!! Aap ko meet karna thori hi na parti hai pahechanne k liye!! I have seen your photos! Mumma has sooo many photos of alll of you" Rahul looked at Muskan and Muskan smiled " How can I not tell her about the best days of my life!!! Anyway tere flight kitne baje ki hai??? "
"5 a.m."
"Abhi to 10 a.m. hai!!!!!"
"Kal subha 5 a.m."
"Ooo, to tu itni der tak yeha kiya karega???"
"Magazines parhunga aur coffee piyunga..."
"Yehi karna hai to mere saath chal"
"Kaha????!!!!"
"Obviously mere ghar pe"
Really god!!! Seriously!!! To her house... What does she want... To introduce me to her hubby??? Maybe her hubby too knows him as well... From the photos... Shall I go with her... "How much she told her hubby about me" Rahul wonders...
"Tere ghar!!"
"Zyada door nehi hai!! Chalna!!"
"Ha... Please come with us naa... I wanna hear more Sanjeevni stories... Please.. Mumma keeps telling old stories only.. Please come naa!! " said Roshni
Rahul was sooo confused... But he couldn't say no... When she looked at Roshni and saw the plea in her eyes... She was looking at him as if she knows him for ages




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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Thank you Sri
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Thanks Bobby
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Loved the story Mou ❤️
U gave RaMusk a happy ending..enjoyed it 🤗
Edited by bobby13rocks - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
awesome
definitely a good ending which dmd did not give
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Originally posted by: zariya1234

awesome
definitely a good ending which dmd did not give

thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: bobby13rocks

Res

Will reply after going thru the 2nd n 3rd parts

take your time Bobby...

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