AsYa, ArShi & AbhIya FF: MDII *[Chap #4 Coming Soon]*

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Start.😊

The Banner was so Nice.😊

Zoya was so Cute.😊

Arnva and Abhay bonding with Zoya was so Nice.😊

Asad(KSG) and Khushi Part was so Nice.😊

The Story is getting So Interesting,.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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Zainab Hanjra

@Zaini_Hanjra

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

res..

unres..

Amazing maina!!

I didn't knew that you are such an amazing writer!!😆😆

Proud of you beta😃

Zoya's bond with her brothers is amazing!

Such type of bond that we both share!!

You just blended Asad's role beautifully!

Zoya seems to be mysterious!!

What are you up to miss!!

Haseena(KM) ofcourse I loved her as usual!!

Seems like they all have a mysterious past!!😲

Cont. soon.

No thanks for pm coz it was an obligation!!😆

Of course😃

Edited by Zaini_Hanjra - 8 years ago

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

The banner looks very beautiful

And coming to the update

I just loved it.

Zoya is really the princess for her brothers

Loved their bond

And asad family is very nice too

I think something terrible happened in the past which changed their lives.

Continue soon dear

N thanks for the pm

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GorgeousSmile

@GorgeousSmile

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Res! 😊

Unres!😃

Zoya's entry was amazing!!😊

You penned it down beautifully!👍🏼

The sibling bond was AMAZING between Arnav,Abhay and Zoya!😳 I loved that!!❤️

Was nice bonding of Khan siblings also!😊

And this new Asad was quiet cool!😎 Glad to see him in new role!😆

This story is so a mystery! Waiting for the mysterious past to be unfolded!😉

WELL WRITTEN with somewhat like could imagine the scenes with each and every details of around!😳 Not much details still what was was enough to imagine things! For me at least!!😆

And waiting for their love stories to get start..specially my AsYa!!😳 I guess it'll be in different manner also!As everything is different!😛😉

But...I hope you would keep intake the sibling bond still then!

In their love stories, the sibling bond shouldn't be affected or less showed what I mean is exactly!😛

lastly, congrats for the new story!!🤗🤗

Its going to ROCK...is Rocking!!🥳

Edited by GorgeousSmile - 7 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Nice start
CS was good
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: enthusiastic
congrats for new story dear

Thanks!😊

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Roulan15
Congrat 4 D Story
Tanx 4 D Pm
Do Update

Thanks!!

I have already updated Chapter #1 on Page #1.

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Wow interesting plot
Looking forward to know their past
All characters are amazing
Love zoya being princess of her brothers
Thanks for pm
Update soon

Thanks!!

I am glad that you liked it!😃

Will try to update soon!😊