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Instead of getting angry, a smile creeps on Rajveer's lips. He stares at Naina for couple of seconds.

"Cadet Naina ah Singh, how can I help you?"

asks Rajveer, with a smile playing on his lips.

Naina looks everywhere else, but him, in nervousness. She constantly changes her vision from Rajveer to the floor and then back to Rajveer. Seeing this, Rajveer's smile gets wider. He has been waiting for this moment. He has been finding a way to talk to Naina and here she is, in his room, behind the curtains. Now, Rajveer has a very good chance of interrogating her. There is no escape for her this time.

Naina sees a gun in Rajveer's right hand and she gets scared. She looks at Rajveer with a questioning look. Without giving her any answers, Rajveer walks towards his bed and puts the gun there. Reaching Naina, he stands exactly where he was before, extremely close to Naina. He waits for her to speak up and thankfully Naina finally decides to break the ice.

"Sir wo..aapka..aapka room khula tha issi liye mein andar aagayi!"

stammers Naina.

Rajveer just looks at Naina while his smile gets wider. So she saw his room open and she came in? Wow! That is interesting! Rajveer makes no effort to take his steps back. Naina is still trapped between the windows and Rajveer. In fact, Rajveer just crosses his arms over his chest.

"Oh really? Shukar hai tumne academy ka darwaza khula nahi dekha nahi toh tum academy ke bahir chali jati!"

replies Rajveer, looking intensely in her eyes.

This is when Naina realises what a blooper it was! She looks towards her right side in order to gather some courage to speak. No movement from Rajveer makes Naina to get nervous. She looks back at Rajveer.

"Sir wo darwaza khula tha or mujhe aapse kuch poochna tha. Mein aapse milna chahti thi lekin aap kamre nahi thay or mein bahir jaane lagi toh bahir se kisi ne darwaza band kar dia.."

says Naina in one breath!

Before she could say anything further, she gets interrupted by Rajveer.

"Or aap wapis mere living room se mere bedroom mein aa gayi, mere bedroom mein aane ke baad aapne drawers khole. Drawers mein aapko kuch nahi mila issi liye ja kar aap peeche parday ke chup gayyi! "

Rajveer completes Naina's sentence.

"Quite adventurous I must say!"

says Rajveer.

Naina lowers her eyes in nervousness. She keeps shifting her vision from one place to another. She has no answers to his questions. How can she tell him the reason behind her being here? How can she reveal her true identity?

Rajveer waits for her to say something. When he does not get a reply from her, he takes few steps back in order to give her some space and in order for her to calm herself down before Rajveer starts his further questions.

"Okay just cool down! Relax!"

says Rajveer!

Naina relaxes a little after hearing this from Rajveer.

"Ab bataye aap mujhse kya poochna chahti thi?"

asks Rajveer, sternly!

Naina keeps shifting her vision from Rajveer to the floor and then again back to Rajveer. She has no idea what to say. She cannot tell him the truth, but she has to think of something.

"Sir...wo.."

says Naina, stammering.

"Haan mein sun raha hoon!"

says Rajveer, smirking

For the first time, he is enjoying this nervous Naina. At all times, Naina always acts stubborn, but today, she is feeling vulnerable and nervous, which is something fun to see!

"Sir..wo mein aapse.."

stammers Naina, whispering.

"Mujhe sunai nahi dia, Cadet Singh! Aap zara zoor se boolengi!"

says Rajveer, bringing his left ear close to her

Just when Naina is about to utter another word, a knock is heard on the door. Rajveer looks towards the door and walks towards it but stops abruptly. Naina gets afraid and she looks around the whole room, nervously, in order to find a place to hide.

Rajveer turns around and looks towards Naina in horror. Even Rajveer doesn't want anyone to catch them alone in a room, that too late at night!

With his right hand's index finger, He points it towards his washroom.

"Naina jao washroom mein...jaldi!!"

says Rajveer, humidly .

Without wasting any more seconds, Naina quickly runs towards the washroom. Opening the door, she hides behind it and then closes it. She forgets to lock the door.

As soon as Naina goes inside the washroom, Rajveer takes a sigh of relief. He quickly reaches in front of his bedroom door and opens it to go inside the living room. Reaching his main living room door, Rajveer takes a deep breath and slowly, he opens the door.

There stands Dr. Shalini at his door. He gets surprised on finding her there alone, because as far as he knows, Dr. Shalini was suppose to come with Dr. Ritu, but Dr. Ritu is no where to be around.

Rajveer just stares at Dr. Shalini and Dr. Shalini stares back at Rajveer in disbelief.

"Captain kya aap mujhe bahir se hi bhagana chahte hain?"

asks Dr. Shalini, crossing her arms over her chest.

"Nahi toh kyun doc?"

asks Rajveer, in confusion.

"To phir agar aap samne se hattege toh mein andar aa jao?"

says Dr. Shalini, dramatically.

Rajveer realises that he hasn't offered Dr. Shalini to get inside. With a smile, he starts to get aside, but stops abruptly. His mind goes back to his room and he realises that Naina is hiding in his washroom. On thinking that, his face colour changes from a happy colour to a horror one!

Quickly, he again goes in front of Dr. Shalini, blocking her way.

"NAHI..."

yells Rajveer, in horror.

Dr. Shalini just gives Rajveer a weird look. She was not expecting this from Rajveer. Dr. Shalini senses something fishy in Rajveer's behaviour.

"What Captain?"

asks Dr. Shalini, furiously.

"Wo doc aap andar nahi aa sakti!"

says Rajveer, immediately!

Dr. Shalini gives him a weird look, again! Rajveer bites his lower lip on realising what he just said.

"Or mein andar kyun nahi aa sakti Captain?"

asks Dr. Shalini, surprisingly.

Rajveer quickly turns his back towards Dr. Shalini. He closes his eyes tightly in nervousness in order to think of a good excuse to tell Dr. Shalini, so she doesn't come inside. Something comes in his mind. Opening his eyes, he immediately turns around towards Dr. Shalini.

"Wo doc mujhe change karna hai issi liye!"

says Rajveer, proudly, thinking it'll be a good excuse.

Something he does not know is she is also Dr. Captain Shalini Singhal, she will not come in his fake trap. Dr. Shalini's doubt increases. First, she looks at Rajveer, then her eyes wonder around the living room. She finds his living room to be messy.

Looking back up at Rajveer, she places both of her hands on either sides of her waist.

"Toh aap washroom mein ja kar change kariye na!"

says Dr. Shalini, smiling wickedly.

As soon as Rajveer hears the word "washroom", and the idea of him changing in there that too in front of Naina, his facial expressions changes. Anyone can tell how scared he is feeling at this time. He looks back up at Dr. Shalini in horror.

"NAHI!!!"

yells Rajveer, immediately.

This sudden yelling from Rajveer jerks Dr. Shalini. She looks towards Rajveer in horror. What did she say that made him so scared and nervous?

At the Same Time in Rajveer's washroom

Naina is still hiding behind the washroom door. Naina hears some female voices from outside. She knows it's Dr. Shalini who is outside because she knows Dr. Shalini's voice pretty well. Although, she is not able to hear their conversation properly. She is waiting for Dr. Shalini to leave so, she can leave from Rajveer's room.

Just then, Naina hears some noises from outside. She quickly reaches the door handle. Opening it, she peeps out of the door to see what's going on outside.

This is when she hears Rajveer's loud scream "NAHI!!!". This jerks her off. Getting scared, she quickly shuts the door and hides behind the door again. In nervousness, she again forgets to lock the door from inside.

Hiding behind the door, she closes her eyes tightly.

"Kahan phas gayyi mein?"

mumbles Naina, while her eyes are still closed.

She quickly opens her eyes again.

"Ye Rajveer sir ke room mein bhi abhi Dr. Shalini ko aana tha!"

whispers Naina, in frustration.

Naina walks around the washroom getting anxious. She does not know when she reaches under the shower. In frustration, Naina's hand accidentally touches the water tap. Due to it being a little slippery, she slips a little and holds the water tap for support. This leads in turning the water tap on and this leads the shower to turn on.

Since Naina was right under the shower, the water comes on her and she gets wet. She immediately turns the shower off and hopes Dr. Shalini did not hear the sound of the running water.

Going in front of the mirror, she checks herself out. She is completely drenched in water. She looks up at the ceasing.

"Agar mujhe yahan kisi ne aise dekh lia toh mera connection is academy se toh pakka katte ga!"

says Naina in irritation.

Realising she spoke in Pooja's language, she slaps her own head. She starts to open her braided hair, in order to dry them.

Back to the Living Room

Dr. Shalini just looks at Rajveer in horror. Getting a little dramatic, she puts her right hand over her heart.

"Captain kya aap mujhe heart attack dena chahte hain?"

asks Dr. Shalini, faking to be serious.

Looking at Dr. Shalini, Rajveer realises what he just did. He lowers his eyes out of embarrassment. Seeing this Dr. Shalini smiles.

"Chaliye Captain washroom mein abhi ja kar change kariye!"

says Dr. Shalini.

Rajveer again looks back up at Dr. Shalini in horror.

"Nahi doc please..."

pleads Rajveer.

But Dr. Shalini is also Dr. Shalini. She does not listen to him. Pushing him to the side, she gets in. Grabbing his hand, Dr. Shalini drags him to his bedroom.

Getting in his bedroom, she looks around and finds his whole room messy. A gun laying on the bed, and all of his drawers open.

Deciding to question him later about it, she leaves his hand. Getting a shirt and jeans from his closet that was in the living room, she comes back in his room.

She hands him the shirt.

"Chaliye Captain jayye washroom mein!"

says Dr. Shalini

Rajveer firstly looks at the washroom then looks back at Dr. Shalini with pleading eyes.

"Doc please..."

pleads Rajveer

Dr. Shalini crosses her arms over her chest.

"ABHI!!"

orders Dr. Shalini.

"Fine!!"

says Rajveer, getting annoyed.

Now, Rajveer knows he has no way to escape from Dr. Shalini. He decides to go inside the washroom. He starts taking steps towards the washroom.

Inside the washroom, Naina can hear someone's footsteps. As the footsteps comes closer, her heartbeat picks up pace. She closes her eyes out of fear.

After few seconds, Naina hears the washroom door opening slowly.

END OF PART


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Lovelyyy update... I am loving this cooler version of this scene... I love shalini... She is truly a cupid... Now waiting to read what happens in the bathroom.. Hehe
Continue soon
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Awesome update
Shalini is really Cupid
Now raj is going to washroom where naina is hiding
Waiting to see what happened there
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh god this is sooo good
I wonder what will happen next
Please jaldi update karo wait nahi hota
Best
Misha
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Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Lovelyyy update... I am loving this cooler version of this scene... I love shalini... She is truly a cupid... Now waiting to read what happens in the bathroom.. Hehe

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Thank you so much for liking it!
I love Shalini too! 😊
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Shalini is really Cupid
Now raj is going to washroom where naina is hiding
Waiting to see what happened there
Continue soon
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Thank you so much!!😊
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Thanks!!😊😊
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Oh god this is sooo good

I wonder what will happen next
Please jaldi update karo wait nahi hota
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Thank you so much!!😊😊
Will update today!!😊😊
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Part 3 - Last Part


After few seconds, Naina hears the washroom door opening slowly. Her heartbeat picks up pace and she shuts her eyes in fear and nervousness. Turning her back towards the door, she tries to hide herself in the wall, out of nervousness. Suddenly, she hears someone's footsteps.

Naina turns around immediately after hearing the footsteps. As soon as she turns around, she finds Rajveer in the washroom, with his shirt and jeans in his hand, locking the washroom door behind him.

Naina's eyes widens at this. Her heartbeat picks up pace on the thought of being with Rajveer alone in the washroom. Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness and fear. She constantly changes her vision from one thing to another.

As soon as Rajveer turns towards Naina after locking the door, he gets stunned. He finds a wet Naina, with open hair and her eyes are cascaded downwards. He hasn't seen her like this before. He checks her out from top to bottom and adores her simplicity! A smile creeps on his lips.

Naina feels someone's intense gaze on her. She looks up immediately and finds Rajveer looking at her with a smile. Rajveer's smile disappears when he finds Naina looking at him and he realises that she caught him red handed looking at her.

Rajveer gets nervous and he lowers his eyes out of shyness and embarrassment. This catches Naina attention. seeing a shy Rajveer, it makes her to blush. Then, suddenly, she realises she is in the washroom, that too with Rajveer. Her cheeks starts burning with this thought. She gets goosebumps. She gathers some courage up and decides to ask him about him being in the washroom.

"Aap yahan kya..."

she starts speaking, loudly, but stops.

As soon as Naina starts speaking, Rajveer immediately walks up to her and puts his palm over her lips as he pushes her to the wall, slightly, to shut her up.

"Ssshhh...ahista bolo..."

says Rajveer.

Rajveer does realise their closeness or position, but Naina does. Her heartbeat picks up pace. She can feel his warm touch over her wet lips. This succeeds in giving her shivers in her entire body. She closes her eyes out of shyness and nervousness. She makes no effort to remove his hand from her lips, in fact, she does not know why but she does not mind it.

Rajveer just stares at Naina. He adores her simplicity and beauty! He adores her shyness, her big brown eyes, her innocent face, her wet hair that are kissing her shoulders! Rajveer feels weak in his knees, seeing her like this!

He tries to control his emotions by changing the topic. He makes no effort to remove his palm from her lips, in fact, he does not even realise what he is doing. He again looks at her and a question arises in his mind. How did she get wet? To control his emotions, he decides to ask her in order to change the topic.

"Ye tum geeli kaise hui?"

asks Rajveer, confusingly.

Naina immediately looks up in his eyes. Rajveer waits for her to say something, but she does not utter a single word, she keeps staring in his eyes, intensity. Rajveer gets confused by Naina's behaviour. Why is she not speaking up?

"Bolo..wase toh tum itna bolti ho toh ab kya hua? "

he asks her, mockingly.

Naina gets irritated at this comment of Rajveer's. With her eyes, she signals him to look at his hand that is over her lips. Rajveer follows her vision. This is when he notices his palm on her lips. He immediately removes his palm from her lips and stands a step back. This succeeds in making his heart to skip a beat.

"Aap apna hath hatate toh mein kuch bolti na!"

answers Naina, mocking him back.

This makes him more embarrassed. He lowers his eyes. This when Naina realises what she said. It makes her heart to skip a beat and she lowers her eyes.

Rajveer decides to change the topic and decides to remind her of his first question. He looks up in Naina's eyes.

"Tum ne bataya nahi ke tum geeli kaise hui?"

he asks her.

Naina remembers the incident that took place few minutes ago with her and the shower. Looking towards the shower, she points her right hand's index finger towards the shower. Rajveer follows where she is pointing.

"Ye aapka shower!"

says Naina.

Now, she looks back at Rajveer.

"Bilkul aap ki tarah hai...bina kuch kare hi kaam begaar deta hai!"

mumbles Naina, under her breath.

This does not go unheard by Rajveer. He makes an angry cute puppy face. With his right hand's index finger, he points it towards himself.

"Mein kaam bigaarta hun?"

he asks her surprisingly.

Naina smiles wickedly and nods her head in a 'yes'. This irritates Rajveer.

Something comes up in his mind and he smiles. With his right hand's index finger, he points it towards Naina.

"Pehle apne aapko dekho phir tumhe khud hi pata chal jayega ke kaam kon bigaarta hai!"

he mocks her, smirking.

She looks at herself and finds herself wet. She knows what he is pointing towards. He thinks she got wet because of her stupidity? This frustrates her more. She puts both of her hands on either sides of her waist and makes an angry face.

"Mein kaam bigaarti hun?"

she asks him, angrily

Rajveer nods his head in a 'yes'. He is trying his best to control his laugh by pushing his lips together. Angrily, Naina decides to ask him something else.

"Pehle aap bataye ye Dr. Shalini is time yahan kya kar rahi hain?"

she asks him.

Rajveer gets surprised by Naina's sudden question. Why would she ask this question?

"Aray mujhe kya pata ke wo yahan kya kar rahi hain."

he tells her.

He knows he is lying to her because he knew Dr. Shalini was suppose to come with Dr. Ritu. But why is he lying to her? He does not know why.

Naina senses something fishy. She feels like he is lying. This makes her more mad. She takes a step towards him while he takes a step back.

"Jhoot mut boliye...sab pata hai aapko..."

says Naina, pointing her index finger towards him.

This again shocks Rajveer. Why would she ask him such questions? So she can enter his room at this time and Dr. Shalini cannot? Wow!

"Tum toh aise sawal pooch rahi ho jaise meri biwi ho!"

utters Rajveer in amusement.

"Haan to..."

she starts speaking, but stops abruptly.

This is when she realises that she was actually questioning him like a wife. She takes a step back and her heart skips a beat. She lowers her gaze out of embarrassment.

When Rajveer sees her like this, this is when he realises what he said. He bites his tongue in nervousness.

"Wo..."

says both at the same time, in hesitation.

Naina looks down again out of shyness on her own stupidity. When she looks up, she finds Rajveer coming closer. He starts taking steps towards her. She notices how Rajveer's right hand is at his back, as if he is hiding something. Naina's heart skips a beat. She gets nervous and she constantly changes her vision from Rajveer to the floor then towards Rajveer again.

Naina starts moving backwards as she sees him coming closer. With every step he takes, her heartbeat picks up pace.

Rajveer keeps gazing at her intensely as he takes his steps towards her. He smirks seeing a vulnerable Naina! He enjoys it quite a lot! His gaze falls on Naina's feet and how she is moving backwards. He smiles seeing this.

This process repeats until Naina's back hits the wall. She finds Rajveer extremely close to her. She sees Rajveer's right hand coming at the front, the one which was at the back. Naina closes her eyes tightly.

"Ye lo paani saaf kar lo!"

says Rajveer, smirking.

Naina opens her eyes quickly. She finds a towel in Rajveer's right hand.

"Towel?"

asks Naina, surprised.

"Haan towel! Tumhe kya laga ke mein kya karne wala hoon?"

he asks her, surprisingly.

Rajveer does not realise what his question did to Naina. Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness and her cheeks start turning red under his intense gaze.

"Nahi...wo...kuch nahi!"

replies Naina, with her eyes cascaded downwards.

Rajveer realises the double meaning of his question. He also lowers his gaze and his heart skips a beat. He extends his hand to give her the towel. Naina looks up immediately. She hesitantly takes the towel from his hand.

Rajveer takes his steps back to give Naina some space. Naina starts rubbing her hair with the towel. Rajveer looks at her and gets mesmerized by her beauty and simplicity.

To control his emotions, he turns his back towards her and closes his eyes tightly.

"Mein check karta hoon ke Dr. Shalini gayyi ke nahi!"

says Rajveer, nervously , without turning around.

"Hmmm!"

replies Naina!

Without turning towards her, he opens the washroom door slightly to check. He doesn't find anyone in his bedroom. Getting out of the washroom, he goes towards his living room. Rajveer takes a sigh of relief on not finding Dr. Shalini anywhere.

Rajveer looks towards his table and finds a note there. Walking towards the table, he picks up the note and starts reading it.

Captain,

Mujhe kuch zaroori kaam aa gaya hai toh mein chalti hoon!

-Dr. Shalini

Rajveer closes the note and puts it down. He takes a sigh of relief. Going back to his washroom, he tells Naina that Dr. Shalini is gone, so, she can now come out.

Rajveer and Naina, they both walk towards the living room. Naina starts walking towards the door when a thought crosses Rajveer's mind. He smirks.

"Naina!"

he calls her from the back.

Naina turns around immediately and looks at him. He takes few steps towards her.

"Yes sir?"

she asks him.

"Wase tumne jawab nahi dia ke tumhe kya laga tha ke mein kya karne wala hoon?"

he asks her, hiding his smile.

Rajveer knows exactly what Naina was thinking, but, of course, he won't leave a chance to tease her. Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness and her heartbeat picks up pace.

"Sir...wo...k-kuch nahi..."

stammers Naina

"M-mein chalti hoon!!"

says Naina in one breath.

Without waiting for Rajveer's answer, she marches out of his room leaving a smiling Rajveer behind.

Running, Naina reaches at one of the corridors and she rests her back against the wall.

"Karne kia aayi thi or ho kya gaya! Maine toh sir se koi sawal hi nahi poocha bhaiyya ke baray mein!"

mumbles Naina.

"Ugh stupid me!"

she slaps her own head and rushes towards her room.

Inside Rajveer's Room

He is still standing there smiling like a little kid. He takes a seat on his red couch. Picking up a file, he starts reading it and a thought crosses his mind. He immediately puts the file down.

"Maine jo Naina se poochna tha wo toh poocha hi nahi!"

mumbles Rajveer.

He slaps his own head.

"Chalo koi baat nahi, next time pooch loonga!"

He says, smiling.

Picking up the file, he gets back to read it while the smile never leaves his face.

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-

THE END


Edited by Raj_Naina_LRL - 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Raj and naina both are super cute
Bathroom scene is really good
Jo puchna tha wo to bhul hi gaye
Totally love it
Do write more stories
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