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Posted: 8 years ago

She smiled for the first time in his house Ashvin noticed
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Way way way way back there by the balcony... his eyes were really sharp
She followed Chirag out
Ashvin was watching TV he barely nodded to Ashvin and waved to her and leftLOL

"Is there any coffee leftover?" asked Ashvin
Embarrassed as she turned into her corridor without paying him a second look She paused and turned "No" she said softly And went back to her room shut and bolt it...


Hmmm ... do I see a green monster creaking out ? Or left out for coffee ...
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Edited by jaschick - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Me waiting for magic to happen 😳
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The magic would indeed be refrshingly new.
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Posted: 8 years ago

REWARDING FAILURE


"Yes, she must. She must know you dont take it easy when you feel slighted and you do extreme things" he said hanging up


Ashvin lay back on the white sectional outdoor sofa, yanked a half white half navy rectangle cushion from under his back and flung it across the balcony"


The old pop sure knows how to go for the jugular.

The old pop sure knows how to deliver a crushing body blow

The old pop sure knows how to BEAT/ CHEAT A MISSION.


His grand pop has got a number on him and he's hitting on Ashvin"s nerve, the nerve that's prone to extreme imbalance or fury on and off and he's delivering a body blow by saying 'for all your mom's blowing the trumpet of the changed man that you are today and penance and stuff, you still are imbalanced and will be one forever'.

The young scion has to come up with new ways to get his exasperating old man off his back ... to get his grandpop to react not as if it's a rain but a flood or a storm or a hurricane But one cannot escape the reality that THERE'S NO GAME TO BE WON OR LOST IF YOU DONT PLAY IT.




Nisha, this twist was truly nach. Neither is Ashvin R&b nor do I want to equate your third baby to a Harlequin. This is your top brand of spicy tadka. The writing keeps going notches higher and reading this chapter was such a delight and it's truly a REWARDING TRIUMPH. Just loved the update's nuances and its flow in terms of expression. Best wishes.😊





Edited by Errantnomad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Skulduggery

By the end of the chapter the man who accusses Ashvin of it is getting his sweet revenge. Everything's fair in this game. 😆Chrag's not a bad guy to have around. This guy has got his style as well that's charming and the way he behaved as if Ashvin was just a furniture in the room was a killer. 😆

That apart on the ullal side of things that 18500 deposit from Aanu to daughter has got the same debit or credit as the 60 lakhs from daughter to Aanu. It's a scale to be weighed for its allegorical personification of the court's statue of lady justice blindfolded with weights in her hand. How will the balances tilt ????...














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Posted: 8 years ago
COFFEE LOVER
There's an Air to coffee. It's time to smell the Bean. The bean Green😉 or Roasted😃 or Ground reacts to the atmosphere around it and let's out the aroma😉
A chicory like Chirag is needed to add 'body' to the concoction😆


Ashvin' s Haal e dil on the concoction

Maana ke hum yaar nahin
Lo tay he ke pyaar nahin

Phir bhi Nazrein na tum milaana
Dil ka Aitbaar nahi😳

( pretty decent singing by parineeti chopra I felt and beautiful lyrics by kausar munir )























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Posted: 8 years ago
My heart goes out to Ashvin. Pretty good guy. The reality about Balance is that balance is never a static state. How we all wish it was!!!!!

Jayadeva ... The thing about betrayal and lies is the victim realising that he or she wasn't worth the truth. Hope he gets his CLOSURE soon to be able to move on.

Trisha... Forced to choose between her father and lover, she realises that she just loves her Aanu more. But the way she was forced to go about it, there can be no reparation done.

Scars of Time holding them all prisoners . Hope the ocean waves that flow and ebb , like how nisha put it beautifully as if holding nothing some day soon brings peace washing away the bitterness of what has transpired in each of their lives



Edited by Errantnomad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mother Narang ...Her son getting married this way must be as heart wrenching as its to Father shanbhag. But Please please keep Mother Narang 'punching ' in panchsheel marg for some more time Nisha. We can invite her when the coffee is ready. For now The coffee is letting steam and just beginning to brew 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nisha we are waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mr.No socks Ashvin, Ms. soft hands Trisha, Father shanbag, Mother Narang, Old pop , Lungi Dance Jayadeva and Chicory Chirag 😆😆 . Fascinating aliases and Fascinating tale that's caught our imagination. Thank You Nisha .
Edited by Errantnomad - 8 years ago

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