Me & U-AK FF/not continueing

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I'm starting a new fan-fic..... obviously about AK... so yeah... the first part will be soon... but i will continue once every two to three weeks.... the parts will be semi long... so yeah...if i stop continueing it means i dont have enough time and that the post should be closed! anyways the first part will be soon!😉
Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool...waiting for intro/character sketch 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice can't wait for the intro isn't there a song clled me & u i heard it by cassie umm i think i forget anyways start soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can't wait for the 1st part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cant wait for the first part erm milly ure right cassie sings me and u 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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im always right shaz unless its something u say i fall on my knees 😭 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can't wait for the first part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWSOME 👏 👏 INTRO CONTINUE SOON 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please dont write in caps! and dont tell me to continue... cuz I WILL CONTINUE WHEN I CAN... its annoying when you keep requesting the same thing! it bugs me and makes me not want to continue anymore... so one more time some one says that... this fanfic is over with... 😡
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There is a girl sitting on a bed decorated with flowers hanging from the top of the ceiling and rose petals lying on the bed. The girl is wearing a red and gold shaddi dress. The veil is covering her face. She is looking down as though she is shy and is blushing hard or disappointed and crying. The door makes a creek and the camera shifts to the door. You can see a man with flowers over his face. He is wearing a groom's outfit. He slowly heads towards the bed. Just as he was about to sit next to his wife someone calls him. "Angad, beta" Naina called. "Yes?" Naina comes over and she sees Angad sitting next to the bride. Naina feels a bit guilty for coming at the wrong time. "Sorry beta. I didn't know you were with my bahu." "It's ok Mom" Angad responds to his mom's statement. Naina shuts the door and leaves.

It was true; he was sitting next to the bride. He had gotten married to one of his worst enemies and he was a bit mad about that but at the same time he was going to get revenge from this girl and was really happy. Angad lifts the veil off the girls face and you see a beautiful face and it is none other than Kripa. She is looking down and she has tears coming out of her eyes. Angad lifts her chin and smirks. "Isn't it funny Kripa? Once you were the one that said you would never spend a night with a guy like me, but look at your luck Kripa. Now instead of one night you have to spend your whole life with me!" Angad laughs a bit. He touches Kripa's face. "How should we spend this night, honey?" Angad says in an evil voice. Kripa starts to sob now. Angad gives a smirk and throws Kripa's veil. Kripa stares at it and then Angad. Angad makes Kripa lie down. Kripa closes her eyes and tears stream down. Angad puts her legs on the bed.

Kripa felt as if her life was coming to an end. She had always dreamt of getting married to her prince charming but Angad wasn't the one she had imagined. Kripa thought Angad would spend this night with Kripa without any feelings for her. When Angad hadn't touched her for five minutes, she opened her eyes to see where Angad was. She saw Angad in the arms of a girl. Kripa was shocked. Angad turns and sees Kripa with her eyes open. Angad smirks big. "Kripa, this is Misthi. She is my girlfriend. Since I got married to you, I want to give Misthi the night of a bride, as I have no intention of spending a night with you. I hope you don't mind, sweetheart." It sounded so sarcastic to Kripa, the way he had said honey and sweetheart to her. When Kripa didn't answer Angad called her again. "Kripa, if you don't mind. Can you sleep on the sofa today and tomorrow and forever?" Kripa smiled. "It would be my pleasure." Kripa took a blanket and went and sat on the sofa. With every step, her anklets made a soft sound, like a bell. Angad looked at Misthi and made her sit on the bed and picked up Kripa's veil. He put it on Misthi like she was the bride and not Kripa. Angad went in the bathroom and came out the next second as if he had just entered the room. He passed Kripa and went and kneeled down in front of Misthi. He took of the veil and placed it on the dresser table and gave her a passionate kiss. Kripa decided to go to sleep as she had a long day and she didn't want to watch Angad and Misthi romancing all night.

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The sun shone on Kripa's eyelids. Kripa was still dressed in her bridal dress. She slowly opened her eyes. She blinked a few times. Then she turned to see Misthi's clothes scattered everywhere. She looked on the bed and saw Angad and Misthi hugging each other tightly and Misthi in Angad's shirt. Kripa didn't want to see them so she stood up and walked to the closet and took out a white and blue sari with gold embodied beads. She didn't notice that her anklets were still on and they were making noises. She walked to the bathroom when she suddenly passed Angad and saw him awake and staring at her. Kripa looked away and kept on walking to the bathroom. She closed the door.

When Kripa left, Angad turned to Misthi and saw her still asleep. Angad shook her a little. "Angad. Let me sleep." With that she held Angad closer. "Misthi, it's 10 am and mom would be coming anytime. You don't want her to see you, do you?" Misthi's eyes opened and she sat up letting go of Angad. "Let her see Angad. She made a mistake by not getting your opinion on this marriage." Angad was a bit mad that Misthi was blaming his mom. "Misthi look...." He didn't get to finish because Misthi had kissed him. Angad responded to the kiss. Misthi and Angad were playing with each other's tongues when they heard a door open. They broke their kiss and looked at the bathroom door. They saw Kripa in a sari, wearing sinndor on her maang and the mangalsutra around her neck. She was also wearing jewelry that matched. Her hair was still dripping and she had light make-up on. She was also wearing her bangles. Her beauty mesmerized Angad. Kripa notices Angad and Misthi together and smiles.

Kripa walked over to the balcony and looked at the amazing view while remembering her childhood. She remembered her parents and how they would always try to give her everything she wanted. Unfortunately, her parents had died and that was the reason for this unexpected marriage. Tears started to form in her eyes. Kripa was only at the age of 20 while Angad was 24. A difference of 4 years. Angad worked at his dad's company, unwillingly. Naina hoped that he would get more responsible when he had a wife to impress. Kripa was still in college before getting married, but now she had to take care of the housework.

Angad got up and so did Misthi. When Kripa came out of her trance, she walked back into the room and was about to head out the door. "Kripa," Angad called. Kripa stopped and turned around to face him with Misthi. "Yes?" she replied calmly. "Misthi and I are going to take a bath so you clean up this mess and put Misthi's clothes in a bag." Angad ordered and with that they both went to the bathroom. Angad was grabbing onto Misthi's waist and Misthi had her arm around Angad's neck. What does he think I am? Some kind of maid? Oh well, if I don't clean it, Mummyji will ask about it. So I better clean it up. Kripa picked up all the clothes that belonged to Misthi and out them in a bag. She put Angad's clothes in the laundry basket.

next part in the first week of january....😉

Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 18 years ago

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