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Posted: 8 years ago
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A very different CS and concept
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm So Sorry for Late Comment,I was Busy in Internal Exam.😭
The Prologue was so Interesting.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting Character Sketch

Saras - royality and Kumud will be Umrao Jaan
Edited by taahir004 - 8 years ago
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Part 1
There is a huge palace where a well-known courtesan named Kumud is living. She is known as Umrao to the world. Everyone is talking about her art, beauty, and innocence. Suddenly they hear a sweet, melodious but melancholy song from Umrao.

The song is
ek toote hue dil ki aawaaz mujhe kahi
sur jismein hai sab gum ke woh saaj mujhe kahiye
main kon hoon aur kyaa hoon kis ke liye zinda hoon
main khud bhi nahi samajhi woh raaj mujhe kahiye

An old man is passing by. He asked, "Such a sweet and melodious voice. I wonder who is this lady."
The other men said, "Don't you know? In the entire Faizabad, she is the well-known courtesan who entertains people. Everyone is dying to see her. You are a poet. No one other than you can know her better than you."

Mirza: I have heard a lot about her. I am getting to see her now. I want to meet her.

Umrao is now living with her servant Raisa who serves her day and night. She calls, "Raisa." She comes and said, "Yes, what I need to do now?"

Mirza knocks the door. Umrao's servant opens the door. He said,"I am Mirza Shahi Musraf. I want to meet Umrao Jaan."

Raisa: I will ask her & tell you.
She goes to Umrao & said, "A person named Mirza wants to meet you."

Umrao: That famous poet? Fine, He can come in.

Raisa goes to Mirza & said, "You can come in."

Mirza goes to Umrao's room & said, "Adaab"
Umrao: Adaab.Please be seated.
Mirza: Thanks. I would not have questioned you about your song but your voice has forced me to ask you this.
Umrao: I have learned all this from you. Whatever I am today, it is because of you.
Mirza: Don't say like that. Music is very much in your blood but what happened to you today? From where the pain has been associated with your voice?
Umrao: It is only the pain that gives birth to song & poet.
Mirza: Great. I want to hear that.
Umrao: Which story do you want to hear?
Mirza: You have seen life very closely. There cannot be any other story.
Umrao: What to say? You have taken away my identity.
Mirza laughs: What you said?
Umrao: In the whole world, my name is tarnished & you are ignorant about it.
Mirza: Splendid! But this only Umrao jaan can say.
Umrao: Who is Umrao & whose jaan I am? I was an ordinary girl from Faizabad. My name was Kumud. Even now I am Kumud.
Mirza: Kumud?
Kumud: Yes, you have heard right. I will tell you the same story of that innocent girl.

Flashback:

Kumud was living in a small house with her parents Vidyachatur Desai, Guniyal & brother Yash. They belonged to a poor family. Her father Vidyachatur Desai was running a small shop who worked for 18 hours in a day only to meet their daily needs. Kumud was living with her parents & brother blissfully.

Kumud was digging the mud. Yash comes there. He asked, "What are you searching?"
Kumud: I am searching for my ring. I lost it. Mom will beat me.
Yash & Kumud search for the ring. The two men Dilawar & his man comes & asks, "What are you doing here?"
Kumud: Nothing. Just like that.
Dilawar: Whose daughter are you?
Kumud: Obviously I am my dad's daughter.
Dilawar: Where is he?
Vidyachatur comes. He said, "Hi, I am here. So you are the enemy of my life?"
Dilawar: You have given the statement against me & I was behind the bars for 7 years but I was released before my term.
Vidyachatur: I wouldn't have told the truth. But I could not lie when I was asked to promise before the holy book.
Dilawar: Fine, you keep your policy. I will keep mine.
Vidyachatur goes home taking Yash & Kumud with him.
Dilawar bites the sugarcane
Dilawar: That scoundrel. He greeted me as if I have not come from jail but from the holy place.
The other man laughed.
Dilawar: His daughter is beautiful. I think she will come handy for me to take revenge.
Vidyachatur reaches home with his children.
He gives sweets to his children
Kumud: Dad, you are so nice. You give us sweets every day.
Vidyachatur: What a loving daughter you are. You make me proud of you & take the reward. God bless you.
He kisses her.
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Part 2
Guniyal welcomes VC, Kumud, and Yash and said, "Today is our neighbor's daughter wedding and look at your state. Wash your hands and face. We need to leave now."
They go to the place where the water has to be filled.

Guniyal: From which tree your girl goes and plays with the mud?
VC: Don't curse the tree as it bears all the heat only to give us the shade.
Kumud: Even dad works hard day & night facing all the difficulties but does not allow us to feel the pinch.

Guniyal: Your daughter has become mature.
She gives the sweetbox to VC and washes Kumud's hand. She sees the missing ring and asked, "Where is the ring?"
Kumud gets speechless.
Guniyal (In a louder tone): Where is the ring?
Kumud: I lost it.
Guniyal slaps her. Kumud cries.
Guniyal: Why are you crying? Is this the first time I've slapped you?
Kumud: I am not crying because you slapped me. I am crying because I lost the ring because of my carelessness. Dad works hard day & night.
Guniyal is moved. She said, "Never mind. Dad will get another ring for you."
Guniyal hugs her.
The family goes for the wedding. The background song is
Ab Kiye Ho Daata Aisaa Naa Ki Jo
Ab Kiye Ho Daata Aisaa Naa Ki Jo
Agle Janam Mohe Bitiya Naa Ki Jo
Agle Janam Mohe Bitiya Naa Ki Jo
Jo Ab Kiye Ho Data Aisa Naa Ki Jo

Jo Ab Kiye Ho Daata Aisaa Naa Ki Jo
Jo Ab Kiye Ho Daata Aisaa Naa Ki Jo
Agle Janam Mohe Bitiya Naa Ki Jo
Agle Janam Mohe Bitiya Naa Ki Jo
Jo Ab Kiye Ho Daata Aisa Naa Ki Jo

They reach home after the wedding.
Kumud: Marriage is the most special and the happiest occasion. Then why they have cried at the time of sending their daughter?
VC and Kumud laughed. They said, "People cry because they will be missing their daughter."
Kumud: Will you all cry if I go to my in-law's place?
VC: Of course.
Guniyal: Your mom will go mad crying for you.
Kumud: If that is the case, I will not marry.
VC: You will get married.
Kumud: No dad, I won't marry. I will be with you.
They go inside the house. Yash and Kumud go to the bed.

Guniyal: Kumud has got a proposal. Veer's parents are asking us to fix the marriage date. What do these people think?
VC: Yes, we have to get Kumud married but expenditure will be more. From where will I get money. People get carried away looking at our big house but this house is the inherited one.
Guniyal: For that Kumud cannot be single. We have to find out some means to arrange for money and get her married.

Flashback pauses.
Umrao: Raisa.
She comes.
Umrao: The lamp is getting extinguished. Please add more oil to it.
Raisa takes the lamp to add the oil.
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Part 3
Flashback resumes

Umrao: This is how my fate had lost its light when I went to save the wounded bird to Dilawar's place. That was the time he came to me & said he knows the medicine to cure the bird. I went to the room with him only to find nothing or no one was there. It was an empty room.
That was the time he got an opportunity to abduct me. He blindfolded me, tied the cloth to my mouth, hands & legs, put me inside the gunny bag & took me to the bullock cart that was heading towards the unknown places. The cart had dashed my dad. I had overheard that conversation, That was the last time I saw my dad.

Dilawar: Can't you see & walk? If anything happens, people would say that I have taken my revenge.
VC: It is nothing like that. We don't have any enmity towards each other. The sweet box had fallen down. What will I tell Kumud?
Dilawar to the cart driver: Move ahead. He looks to be innocent but he will get to know if he does not find Kumud.
Cart Driver: What you intend to do?
Dilawar: Kill her.
Cart Driver: If you kill her, what will you get? Instead, sell her to the kotha. It will ruin her, cause disgrace to her parents & you can get good money.
Dilawar: That is a fantastic idea.

They bring her to the Khannum & bua Husaini.
Khannum looks at the girl & said, "Come here, Don't get afraid."

Khannum then takes Kumud to Bua Husaini. She asked her, "What is your name."'
Kumud: My name is Kumud.
Husaini: Where are you from?
Kumud: Bangla
Husaini: What is that Bangla?
Khannum: Faizabad is Bangla.
Husaini: So you are from Faizabad?
Kumud: I have not come here. These people have abducted me and brought me here forcefully.
Husaini caresses Kumud and said: Oh how sad! God knows whose daughter she is.There are so many people who are abducted and brought to the kothas. Do they fear God?It is not our fault. If she is not sold here, she will get sold elsewhere.
Khannum gives a nod and said: She will be fine here at least but look at the girls in other places how they are treated.
Husaini asked Dilawar, "How much do you want?"
Dilawar: I want Rs. 20000/-
Husaini: If you want 20K, you will get it at the cop station. I will give you Rs.10000/-
Dilawar: Don't make this mistake. The girl is very pretty. She will give you good business.
Khanum: You talk too much. She is pretty but she is a human being. I will give you Rs. 12000/-
Hussaini: If you are agreeable to that amount, fine, else take her away.
Dilawar: I agree with the amount.
Khannum: Fine then you wait outside. I will bring the money.
They send Dilawar with the money.
Khannum: From now on, she is our daughter.
BH: Give her to me. I will take her responsibility. You take care of other things.
Khanum: Fine. But I will not call her Kumud. I will call her Umrao.
BH: Wow, nice name.
She said, "From now on, your name is Umrao."
BH kisses Kumud and takes her to the room.


While sleeping, Kumud gets to hear Vidyachatur's voice and gets up at the start. and said, "Dad."
BH: What happened my girl? I guess you have got a bad dream. So you woke up.
Kumud: The dream was good. I saw my dad in my dream.
Bua Hussaini caresses her and said, "Sleep."
Kumud once again gets up and tries to leave but Khanum's veil comes to her hand which wakes up Hussaini.

She asked, "What happened?"
Kumud: You will beat me.
BH: I will never beat you. I am like your mom.
She hugs Kumud & asked, "Where you want to go?"
Kumud: I want to go home.
BH: Your house is very far & you don't even know the routes. The outside world is very bad. So don't even think about going out. As long as we are alive, we won't even make you feel that you miss your parents. I have some set of clothes for you.

She shows her various dresses & asked, "How do you find them?"
Kumud: Beautiful
BH dresses her up with the jewelry & asked, "Now you won't go anywhere right?"
Kumud nods.

Flashback pauses.
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Lovely updates dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Very nice start
Loved it
Continue soon

Edited by coolhi1988 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... interesting start...So Kumud is away from her parents nd is with different identity!!!By the way what does Kotha mean??VC's truthfulness landed his daughter in trouble...Why they r thinking to marry off Kumud so early?She is young naa?Thanks for d PM...update soonish!

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