To Heaven and Back(Fantasy)_ Shivika SS_Chapter 6_(25.11.18)_Page 20 - Page 9

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

Originally posted by: _SilverLining_

Res! Will be back very soon, promise😛

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Unres

Ahhh Di🤗 You are one brilliant storyteller! Beshi hocche ! 😆

I just thought of reading this story from the beginning once again and though I've read it before, it was still a joy to go through all the chapters at once. Your descriptions are something out of this world, man! I love how layered your writing it! Aww, you really reread it! 🤗 Thank You!

Coming to this chapter - Annika's wish blew Shivaay's mind😆 Poor him, he doesn't know who he's dealing with. On track or off track, no one can win against Annika ever. Period. 😆 True 🤣

I wonder what Surve's story is? Why is he so attached to Annika That part is quite intriguing!

Also what will Shivaay do next? How will he fulfill her last wishes?

That part where he looks at her from behind the pillar was really HOT! I could seriously imagine the whole thing in front of my eyes - your writing was on point! I am so glad you all liked that scene, how I visualized the scene was mesmerizing to me too. Here, I will thank Twerping, I think because of her that scene came out exactly how I visualized it!

Waiting to read what happens next. Do update soon!

Originally posted by: taahir004

Again a Phenomenal Chapter

The manner in which you describe the surroundings every littleaspect is taken into consideration and this fact just adds such spice to your story

it seems as if Shivay might be having second thoughts about Anika its as if he is been drawn towards subconsciously

asking her again that she wanted to die before so he is there and when she says she does not know it seems as if the urgency in his tone to take her soul is there as he tells her she has wishes which can be fulfilled within seconds but he also somehow realizes he needs to keep patience

while Rajan finds Anika in high fever and he treats until her fever subsided but in this he remembers

Mahapatra and his daughter how he had killed her all because her father too had killed many innocents but now Rajan himself believes because of this act of misdeed his Anika is suffering

and she in semi sleep wants to know if dawn has arrived as she knows the reaper will come

wow sh really came up with such wishes that even the poor reaper will have such a hard time now

now I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter