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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Amazing

Anika is blind here

Anika is held as a captive by some Don

Angel Shivay is already loosing Himself

This is damn interesting

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Wow..amazing concept.

So we'll written, got do engrossed didn't realize when it ended

Eating for next one.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Interesting start and awesome update

Shivaye and Anika characters are very interesting

Looking forward to read more.

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Loving it!!!!

Haha!! You know what I loved the most!!! The way you make Shivay here change shape! The idea of him turning into a butterfly! And then experimenting with what form would suit him best on earth! Just too good! Ingenious, I call it! And then him having to adapt to the conditions on earth and finally coming in contact with a human being! I am super excited about what you will have in store for us in the next installment! This was already so brilliant!

As for Anika, I am full of questions about her. Who is this Don who keeps her under such heavy security? What is the nature of this blindness that afflicts her? What are the limits of this imprisoned life?

Please update soon! This was brilliant! Eagerly awaiting more!

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: twerping
Aaahhh! Pretz! I love this concept! What with American gods making such waves, I was just in the mood for some stories on gods and men(or women) and here you come with just such an idea! It has been a while since a ShivIka fic has me so excited!
So the prologue is tantalising in the way you have set the scene. I love the way you draw out the mundanity of the world that Anika lives in, where she longs to die and yet you show through subtle touches that if one had the eye to see there is so much life in this place...the image of the dog and her brood of pups was so heartwarming. Alas for her, Anika seems to not be able to see that warm sight. Is she literally blind? Or is that her melancholia has made her blind to everything around her?

That thing you say about the window waiting for all other windows to shut before it opens is so poignant. Brings out a sense of such loneliness and isolation. How much of it is self-created, I wonder.

And then comes that awesome incredible twist that had me squealing in joy. I had not seen that coming! Like seriously!
An angel of death on his first assignment!
I love you for writing this! I remember the poem of yours that inspired you to come up with this story, and seriously girl, I had not foreseen the extent of what you were getting at.

Do update soon!

Love,
Twerps.

I am thinking the concept is more beautiful or this comment ! ❤️ American Gods, being a fantasy lover... I am also damn excited to watch that ! How you understood that a loneliness can be self created made me feel very happy! Happy that you are so connected to this story and our thought process is going in sync.

Thank you for being one of the firsts, reading whatever crap I am writing now-a-days !

Believe me, I am as excited as you are for this concept ! 🤪 😆

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice start..

Thank you 😳

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: _SilverLining_
Love the concept di👏 Waiting for update!

Oh Archie 🤗 thank you so much ! I am still waiting for you to unres ur comment about the first chapter ! 😆😉😆

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: itzanya32
Dear! this is really interesting!
Would love to know more about it.A whole new concept!

Do update it soon.

love yaa,
-Anya ❤️

Dear Anya, glad that you liked the new concept ! I m so excited to know write bout it too ! Loving your triangle story aakas-anika-sso ... ! 😉😳