Bharoosa - I believe in You - Rajveer-Naina(LRL)

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Hey everyone, I am here with an SS on Rajveer-Naina. This was an OS before, but upon many people's request, I decided to continue it making it into a short story! This SS starts after when Naina comes to visit Rajveer in Jail after he was arrested for Colonel Shakti Chandra's murder This SS starts off with the same dialogues, but things changes later on!

Bharoosa - I believe in You - Rajveer-Naina

Part One

Rajveer was feeling cold and devastated. Each wall was carefully designed to hold him back from the freedom which he longed for. A small cell with barred doors and no windows confined him. He was tired, tried of proving himself everyday. He felt helpless, not being able to prove himself made him helpless. There was a battle, not just outside, but a battle inside him. He wanted to do something, he needed to do something, but he felt powerless.

He was laying down on a small metallic frame with a worn out mattress and thin blanket over half of his body. Those dark walls of the cell haunted him. He felt trapped like a bird in a cage. With his eyes closed, he was thinking about the horrible incident; the incident that brought him here. All the scenes started flashing through his mind; the way he was fighting with Colonel Shakti Chandra to take the gun away from his hand.

BOOM

The gunshot got him back to reality, causing him to open his eyes suddenly. When he opened his eyes, he felt something strange. He felt that the atmosphere changed, changed in a good way. He suddenly felt relieved. His eyes wondered around to find the reason for the sudden change in the atmosphere. Rajveer felt someone's presence. He felt attracted towards the cell bars.

He slowly sat up on his bed and looked over towards the bars. Yes, there she was standing. Getting up from the bed, he walked towards the cell bars. He saw tears in her eyes, making him more week and helpless. He can tolerate anything, but not tears in his "Naina's" eyes.

"Naina..", Rajveer whispered

She was just staring at him. She could feel his pain. She couldn't see her "Rajveer" like that. She was hurt, hurt to the core. Her face felt like a stone with no emotions. She wanted to end his pain. She wanted to break the barriers between them and just hug him tightly.

On the other hand, Rajveer was no less. He could see his own pain through her eyes. He could see her vulnerability.

Breaking the silence, Rajveer asked, "mujhse milne ke liye tumhe allow kisne kiya?"

She was still staring at him. She desired to put him in her embrace. Ignoring his question, she finally spoke, rather whispered, "sir.."

Directly looking into her eyes, he asked, "kya Naina?"

Fresh tears started flowing through her eyes. She wanted to say so much. She wanted to do so much, but, she felt impotent.

"I believe in you, sir!", those were the only words that escaped through her mouth, she could say no more.

(slow Rajveer-Naina sad tune started)

By hearing those words, Rajveer felt strong. These were the only words that were needed, but only from Naina - the one he loves.

Rajveer lowered his eyes.

"Mein janti hoon Colonel Shakti ko aapne nahi mara", stated Naina.

He looked back up and again stared into those beautiful hazel eyes. Rajveer was overjoyed with the trust Naina had in him.

"Thanks Naina!", those were the only words that came out of his mouth. He wanted to say so much. He wanted to tell her how much he loves her.

Naina couldn't take it anymore. She didn't have the courage to lose her Rajveer - the one she loves. After her Bhaiya's death, Rajveer was her everything. She couldn't see him like that.

"phir se wohi sab ho raha hai na sir. Phir se wohi dohraya ja raha hai. Ussi tarah...jis tarah unhoon ne Naveen bhaiya ko phasaya, ussi tarah trial chalayga, ussi tarah aapko bhi majboor kia jayega or phir aap bhi...", Naina couldn't complete the sentence. She didn't have the guts and courage to complete this sentence.

Tears escaped from Rajveer's eyes while he just stared at her.

Seeing her moving her head in a negative way, Rajveer finally spoke, "afsoos is baat ka hai Naina ke mein tum se apna kiya hua waada...nibha nahi paya."

"What the hell is he saying? Is he out of his mind? Even in this condition he is thinking about me. Just for once, can't he think for himself?", Naina thought while fresh tears escaped through her eyes as she just stared at him with a surprise.

"itni door aake bhi mein red box ko hasil nahi kar saka", fresh tears started to escape his eyes as he continued, "or aaj...or aaj ek begunaah ke khoon mein main inh salakhoon ke peechay hoon. You know what hurts me the most Naina? Aaj wo log jeet gayye."

Rajveer looked everywhere else but her. He was trying to hold his tears back.

Naina couldn't see her Rajveer like that. She couldn't see him week and couldn't let him lose.

"Nahi sir..", Naina spoke immediately, "aap aisa kaise keh sakte hain? Aap..aap aisa nahi keh saktay sir", she wouldn't let him lose.

"Nahi Naina maine..maine umeed nahi choori hai. I still hope ke mujhe is system se insaaf milega, kahin koi to hoga jo...jo ye samjhay ga ke mujhe phasaya gaya hai. Koi to hoga...", said Rajveer.

"No he can't just hope, he can't just wait for someone to help him. What if no one helps him? What is I loose him like Bhaiya? No...I can't let him just sit and hope", thought Naina as she looked at Rajveer with teary eyes.

"Sir agar mein aapse kahoon ke aap mujhe ek promise kareein...toh aap mujhe promise karege?", asked Naina

"Kya Naina?". Rajveer asked

"sir agar is system ne aapko insaaf nahi dia toh aap yahan se bhaagh jayege. Aap Naveen bhaiya ki tarah unko apne aapko torture nahi karne deenge...bikul nahi sir. Aapko bohut pehle bhaagna hoga...sir...please promise me...", asked Naina for a promise

Rajveer was speechless. He didn't know what to say. He knew that Naina respected him, but, today he found out that she also loves him like he loves her. She can stay away from him, but she cannot see him in pain. She wouldn't be able to see him being tortured like her bhaiya.

For few minutes, he stared into her eyes. Then looking down, he saw her hands holding the bars. Moving his hands further, Rajveer placed his hands on top of Naina's hand while he closed his eyes tightly. Tears started flowing through his eyes.

There was silence for few minutes as they were feeling each other's warm touch. Rajveer didn't speak through his mouth, but, his touch ensured her that he will fulfill her promise. Rajveer tightened the hold on her hand.

After few minutes, he opened his eyes and saw a smile on Naina's lips. Letting go of her hand, he turned around to go when Naina spoke, "Sir...Mein aapko itni aasani se haarne nahi doongi..chahe is ke liye mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna pare."

That's it! That was the only thing that he needed. He needed her, her support her trust, but most importantly, he needed HER LOVE!

Rajveer turned around and there was a bright smile on his face. He again came towards her.

"I believe in Cadet Naina ah' Singh!", Rajveer said with a gorgeous smile on his face. Hearing this, another smile came on her lips.

Both Rajveer and Naina stayed like this as they stared into each other's eyes!



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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely os
emotions are well described
if possible can you continue it by extending it
keep writing on Raina and LRL
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing os
Emotions have come out very well
Loved it
Waiting for more...
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Nice os
Beautifully written
Do write more os
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS.. But I found it too short.. I hope you will continue this one... Maybe into a short story???
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Originally posted by: MANNNAYAK

lovely os
emotions are well described
if possible can you continue it by extending it
keep writing on Raina and LRL

Thank You!
I was not thinking of rxtending it, but, now, I might turn it into a short story. I have another ff going on right now, so, after that finishes, I will hopefully continue this one!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">Lovely OS😳</font>

Thank You Totally inspired from your writing! As I am a big fan of your writing 😊
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Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Lovely OS.. But I found it too short.. I hope you will continue this one... Maybe into a short story???

Thank You! I agree this is a fairly short one! I was not thinking of extending it, but, since you and few other people said, I will definately make it into a short story! I just have another fan-fiction going on right now on Rajveer-Naina, so, after that finishes, I will definately continue this one!! Thanks a lot for the suggestion!

Do read my ff and OS on RN, if time permits! 😊
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Originally posted by: Raj_Naina_LRL

Thank You!
I was not thinking of rxtending it, but, now, I might turn it into a short story. I have another ff going on right now, so, after that finishes, I will hopefully continue this one!

Thanks for thinking to extending it
Please continue this when you are having time
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Part Two

In Jail -

Rajveer is seen sitting on his metallic bed with his head down, somewhere lost in deep thoughts. Suddenly, the cell door opens and we see Major Nair.

"Congratulations Captain", says Major Nair as he walks into the cell of Captain Rajveer.

Rajveer, who was lost in his own thoughts, looks up surprised hearing Major Nair.

Walking up to Captain Rajveer, Major Nair announces, "aaj phir aapki chaheti Cadet Naina Singh ne namumkin ko mumkin kar dekhaya, aapka trial sab ke samne hoga."

Smirking, Major Nair throws the file down, instead of handing it to Captain Rajveer.

Leaning downwards, Rajveer picks up the file and starts to read the file. As he starts to flip the pages of the file, a smile creeps on Rajveer's lips.

Naveen's Voice-over -

"I believe in you, sir. Rajveer ki ummedein bhi sham ki tarah dhalti ja rahi thi. Ussay mayausi se bachaye rakha toh sirf Naina ke lafzoo ne , I Believe in you, Sir!' Ye sirf ilfaaz nahi thay, ye ek naara tha, a battle crime. Rajveer ke sath hui nainsaafi ke khilaaf haala bolne ka waada. Naina Rajveer ke sath na hotay hue bhi uske sath thi, uska wishwaas ban kar."

After he finishes reading the file, he smirks as he closes the file.

"Well Done, Cadet Singh! Well Done!", says Rajveer with a smile. The expressions on his face clearly shows how proud he is of his Cadet Singh!

"isse pehle ke aap mujhe kahein ke mein aapka samparg legal council se karwoon, mein aapki jaankari ke liye bata doon ke is waqt wo log legal council seminar mein busy hai. Jis ka mathlab ye hua ke aap ke defence mein abhi koi bhi wakeel majood nahi hai.", announces Major Nair with a smirk as he can see and feel how helpless Rajveer is.

His smile vanishes as he looks over towards Rajveer, he is surprised to see a bigger smile on Rajveer's face. Getting frustrated, Major Nair leaves from the cell leaving a smirking Rajveer behind!

Another smile creeps on Rajveer's lips seeing a frustrated Major Nair. "I believe in you Cadet Naina ah Singh", says Rajveer with a smirk, "mujhe pata hai tum kuch na kuch toh zaroor karogi, tum mujhe aisay harnay nahi doogi."

KMA Mess -



Our super 6 cadets are seen sitting in Mess with a cup of coffee as they all are discussing about Rajveer's trial.

Taking a sip of coffee, a worried Huda asks, "Phoolan, tunay toh Rajveer sir ka open trial karwa dia hai, lekin legal council toh is time council seminar mein busy hain. Ab hum kia kareinge?"

"Chief, mujhe lagta hai hemin Abhimaniyu sir se baat karni chahiye", replies Yudi

Getting frustrated, Aalekh gets up and yells, "oye shainay, Captain Abhimaniyu kya kar leinge is baaremein?"

"Aalekh Bhai shaant ho jayye", says Ali as he tries to calm Aalekh down.

Pooja, who was listening to all this, now gets annoyed. Stomping her feet, she utters, "tum sab ke sab missed call ho, zaroor Naina ke paas koi idea hoga. Kyun Naina?", Pooja looks around the table as she tries to spot Naina, but, Naina is nowhere to be seen.

"Aray ye Naina kahan gayyi? Abhi toh yahin thi?", asked a worried Pooja

Listening to pooja's question, a bright smile appears on Aalekh's face as he knows what Naina's next step will be towards Rajveer's trial.

Next Day -

Today is the day of Rajveer's open trial in court. Everyone is busy in their own thoughts. No one knows what will happen today in Rajveer's trial.

Naveen's Voice over -

Aaj phir ek baar ithaas dohraya ja raha hai. Aaj phir ek baar ek begunnah ka trial ho raha hai. Aaj phir ek baar sab ki umeedein toot ti nazar aa rahi hain. Jahan ek taraf mera dost Rajveer, jissay pura wishwaa hai ke uski Cadet Singh ussay harne nahi degi. Wahin dossri taraf meri behan, Naina, jo phir se ussi door se guzar rahi hai jis door se wo pehle guzzar chuki thi. Phir se uski zindagi ke ek eham shaks ko jhootay ilzaam mein phasaya gayya hai. Meri behan Naina, jo ke meri maut ke waqt kamzoor parh gayi thi, aaj ussay kamzoor nahi balke takatwar banna tha. Naina apnay "Rajveer Sir" ko kabhi nahi harne degi. Wo phir se ek or insaan ko nahi kho sakti jo us ki zindagi mein itna mayni rakhta hai, jis se wo pyaar karti hai. Lekin sirf Naina ki ek pareshani hai, wo ye ke jo wo sooch rahi hai karne ko, kya wo ussay karna chahiye? Kya ussay ye kadam uthna chahiye? Ab dekhna ye hai ke kaise meri behan Naina mere dost Rajveer ko bachati hai.

Court Room -

Two orderlies are seen walking in the court room and putting the necessary things needed for Rajveer's trial.

Moving on, we see Pooja, Aalekh, Huda, Ali and Yudi walking in and taking their seats.

Next we see Dr. Shalini and Suriji walking in and they take their seats. As they take their seats, Major Nair is seen standing at the door. He looks around the whole court room. Finding an empty seat near Dr. Shalini, he walks up to her and sits right next to her, while Dr. Shalini just looks away.

Finding another seat next to Dr. Shalini, Captain Abhimaniyu walks in and sits next to her. Now, she is stuck between Major Nair and Captain Abhimaniyu.

Suddenly, we see a lady walking in with an army uniform. The camera focuses on her uniform where a name is written, which clearly says, "Capt Salve". As she walks in, she stops next to where Major Nair is sitting. Looking towards Major Nair, she gives him a quick smile and then proceeds to her seat, a prosecution lawyer's seat. Yes, she is the one who will be fighting the case against Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.

One by one, the three judges, Brigadier Chandook, and everyone else comes and take their respected seats.

Now, it's time for Captain Rajveer. We see Captain Rajveer walking in his army uniform without his ranks. Two security guards are next to him and his hands are handcuffed. Before he walks in, he stops at the courtroom gates and looks around. He finds everyone present there except for one person, his Cadet Naina ah Singh. His eyes start searching for her. A sudden disappointment appears on his face.

What could be so important that she is not here? Is there anything more important for her than being here for his trial? What could be the reason for her disappearance? Where is Naina?

Moving inside, Rajveer takes his seat and the security guards takes off his handcuffs.

Case proceedings begin.

Looking towards Rajveer, a judge asks him, "Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, aapki taraf se case kon ladh raha hai? Where is your defence lawyer?"

Before Rajveer could answer anything, everyone hears sounds of clicking heals.

As everyone turns towards that sound, they are all stunned to see what's in front of them. They see a lady walking in a lawyer's dress code, with many files in her hand. Her hair tied up in a pony tail. Everyone is surprised to see the person walking in. Yes, it is none other than Rajveer's Cadet Naina ah Singh.

Walking in towards the judge's desk, she places some papers on the desk and she says, "Captain Rajveer ki taraf se ye case mein ladoo gi, or ye hain mere legal papers."

Everyone is shocked. They have no idea what the hell is going on. As if we describe Rajveer's condition, he is just staring at her with his mouth half open and his wide eyes. He has no idea what is going on. Naina a lawyer? What? How?

Rajveer's thoughts are interrupted by Captain Salve's voice, "I object sir, Naina sirf ke Cadet hain. How can she fight a case without being an official lawyer?"

Seeing Captain Salve's confusion, Naina smirks and hands a file to Captain Salve and says, "ye hain mere legal papers. I am a qualified lawyer. Itna aap issay parhiye, utni dair mein apnay client se baat kar loon."

Giving her the file, Naina walks towards a shocked Rajveer. Taking her hand out in front of him, she announces, "Hello Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat! Let me introduce myself. I am Advocate Naina Singh Aaluwalia, defence attorney! Mein aapka case ladna chahti hun, agar aapki ijaazat ho toh?"

End of Part


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Please comment with your feedback, any suggestions, questions or concerns, as I am happy to hear them all!

Edited by Raj_Naina_LRL - 8 years ago

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