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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Interesting and very gripping narration Divu. It is too good . You deserve applause. Sorry I couldn't read earlier got busy with personal work.
Continue soon Divu because too much gap between updates hinders the flow of the narrative.

Good going Divu. Liked the story and can't wait for the next. Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Mile Ho Tum Humko...Bade Naseebo Se
Churaya Hai Maine...Kismat Ki Lakeeron Se...

"Finally we are together Panchali n now legally you are mine dear mine"said Arjun cupping Panchali's face lovingly overwhelmed with joy n looking absolutely out of world n august in his attire of groom...Yes they both got married secretly...a court n a temple marriage... Simple yet magnificent marriage..."Yes i am yours Arjun n we will be together forever... You me n our beautiful small world"...said Panchali keeping her hand on his n smiling with satisfaction.
"Where are we going"asked panchali as arjun chose an unknown route to her..."in our own dream land... A land of love n togetherness" said he smiling n looking lovingly at her...
After 10 minutes... She was standing in front of a beautiful house...she was awestruck on seeing that house...before she could say something... Arjun took her hand n entered in house...there was a big hallway connecting all the adjacent rooms... The hall was parted into dining kitchen n sittingarea...the hall connecting 4 rooms...two bedrooms one guest room with one tv room... The master's bedroom was so huge with light colors n it eas decorated for their moments together for first time after being a husband n wife... The lights were dim with small decorated lanterns n candles...with huge bed decorated with flowers n their smell... A small goblet of water decorated with lotuses n lit diyas...gentle breeze making the whole enivornment majestic..."wa... When... How... I mean""shhh" Arjun shushed Panchali n replied almost whispering..."this is our little world... Just you n me n no one else... We are not that fortunate that we can spend each n every moment together but i can atleast do something to have a gala time whenever we are together... Isn't it???he asked with a pale smile... Tears started rolling down her eyes n she hugged him tightly... Her heaving of shoulders were enough to made him understand about her feelings..."you love me that much arjun... I am blessed to have you as my husband but do i deserve that much love... I am even not letting you reveal your biggest happiness in front of tge world you are struggling because of me n u...""enough Panchali..enough never ever say that u r the reason my struggle...said he while stroking her head lovingly... "Infact u r the reason for my strength my happiness... Just because of you i started believing on relations n their values... You helped me to overcome my past n to move forward to have a future...you are my life panchali... N i can understand there must be some reason which is not letting you to reveal the news of our marriage... I trust you baby... But promise me you will always be mine will never leave my side otherwise i will die" panchali covered her mouth with her palms not lettin him speak further..." never say such words... You are the reason i am living arjun n i promise i wont leave u baby ever"...saying this she hugged him again tightly n. He returned the hug taking her close possesively... Arjun whispered in her ear almost making her feel hot n she sighed heavily..."tonight is here darling.. I dont think i have to remind you the importance of marriage first night...do i dear??" Said he while his grip tightening on her waist pulling her closure... She blushed n hesitatingly looked in his hazels which are smiling with mischief n also penetrating her body soul n her whole being..."a..ar...arjun...i..i" before she could complete he took her lips sweetly yet passionately... She moaned lightly as he deepend the kiss n her hand rounded his neck n one hand in his hair playing with them... The kiss was hot passionate n bearing their togetherness... Before parting he bit on her lips n she sighed... Both heaved hard due to lack of oxygen but never let go of each other... Arjun's eyes were clearly showing his yearning for her n his touch filled with desire...Panchali was going mad with love n wantoness... The magic that he was creating with his appearance making love to her only through his eyes... Both lost their control n arjun picked panchali up in bridal way n move towards the bed. ... Their eyes were locked n not breaking it with beautiful smiles on their face..

He gently placed her on the bed n started taking off her jwelleries n decorating her body with his chain of kisses... Now she had no jwellery on her body n she was looking like nymph to him..."you are so beautiful...my gosh"... Said he whispering...she smiled n extended her arms inviting him... He joined her n kissed her om her neck n collar bone nibbling in between... She looked at him with immense love n rounded his neck while he smiled with his one hand on her waist while with other balancing himself on his elbow... She pulled him towards herself n kissed him deeply... His hands pulled her towards himaelf further n now both wete kissing in a sitting position...his hands went behind her n worked on the dori of her choli n in jiffy it was open n down to her shoulder all the way kissing her on her neck jaw line n shoulder while her hands started working on sherwani's kurta n it was off him in no time...he slowly took her choli of her dropped ot carelessly...both were breathing heavily... He maid her lay on the bed n started kissing her on her nose cheeks chin n on the lips...his one hand on her waist n other holding her wrist in its position...while her one free hand in his hair... He started kissing her own her neck shoulder collarbones while her eyes closed because of sensation... Her breathing was coming in short n so was his as he reached her bossoms her throat escaped a moan which she killed immediately biting her lower lip... N her grip tightening in his hair... He was playing with her control n senses... Tormenting her with slow pace of their love making... Making her mad n uncontrolled with wantoness as his hands were doing magic on her body... His short breathings on her nape n chest were taking AWAY her sanity n senses... Unable to control n bear... She begged him panting..." dont torment me arjun... Plz" but he didnt budge or cared he moved down to her abdomen n worshipped her waist very slowly almost killing her in the process..."ahhh plz arjun dont do this to me... Plz""what u want baby i am not getting you" said he continued with his devil love game..., i beg you""for what dear"" i beg you to complete me to TAKE ME AWAY with you"... She said almost outta breath. He looked at her n smiled... He again came up n started kissing her anew on her lips, chin,neck,chest n waist n slowly very slowly he took her... She gasped n cried but arjun kissed her n killed her pain... N they both became one...

"You are the most beautiful thing that has ever happened to me...you are my love my breath my life panchali... I love you... I love you so much n words are not enough to tell u...""shhh you need not proove anything to me"said panchali shushing him by keeping her finger on his lips..." i know everything n i also love u ... So dearly" panchali smiled n so did arjun. N hugged her close n said..." you r mine panchali... I ll never let u go"" i wont leave you ever arjun never"

A beautiful world got destroyed n they faced the punishment of the crime thy never committed...

Well i know this is the worst update n u all can definitely kill me... I wrote the chappy for more than three times n it got deleted somehow all times n iwas frustated... As i am also late in posting the chappy... So i wrote it in haste n its kinda short aswell but trust me upcoming chapters will be fantastic... Just dont get disappointed...
Edited by Divu55 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Interesting concept loved it past and present is going parallel in this ff
ardi loved each other even married each other but part ways because
of some misunderstanding and again met loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update Divu. Curious to know why they drifted apart. And is there a past birth awareness? Waiting to read further. Update soon.

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