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Sabhi ardians ko pyaar bhara pranipat n hello. I am one of a silent eader n has read almost every work on ardi n couldn't ctrl to post SS by myself. It ll be my first writing so plz bear with my mistakes and silliness. And plz do give ur precious comment if u like the story... I ll be posting my story down

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TAKE ME AWAY. Panchali's pov. I couldn't move an inch. Surface beneath my feet was slipping. He was standing there. In front of my eyes staring staightly in my eyes. Then his image became blur due to tears rolling down from my eyes. He who was my past was standing in front of me. I wanted ro run away but couldn't. I was frozen, i overcame with all feelings of excitement love anger hurt n pain at that very moment.his hazels were penetrating my heart n were ready to TAKE ME AWAY with him AGAIN. Arjun's pov. I was stunned to see the girl who was my life whom i left behind n tried to move forward was there to make me feel all the warmth that i got in her presence n her love. Whom i tried to forget but couldn't. Her dark blue eyes were again drowning me in our past when we were together and filling my heart with love pain n regret i wanted her back in my arms but was that posible.. Both looked in each other eyes trying to find the answer of certain questions which ruined their beautiful past so ruthlessly. Will they be able to get those ans.. Those misunderstandings which spoil their love was there. Will they be able to clear those. Will their love take them away from that ugly past to loving future???
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A new ArDi fan ! Welcome to the fandom dear ! 😃
Congrats for the new story. Lovely start, though short but the prologue is intriguing. Would love to read more and find out about their story. Do update soon and looking forward for an interesting journey. Do pm when you update next time.

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Chapter 1. "What u r looking at?" asked panchali looking lovingly in his eyes. "Not looking but thinking something actually" he replied seriously. "What" she asked confused at his expression. He than smiled n said"thinking that how could i be so fortunate that i got u? So lucky to have u by my side in my pain happiness n..." he couldn't complete his sentence.. His past again wrenching his heart n drowning him in an ocean of betrayel what he got. For him life was nothing more than a merciless path where walking alone was only a truth. No relation actually worked n where lonliness was d only reality but after his encounter with panchali changed his whole persistence... He started believing in love n relations, his idea about life started changing. Still his past was so ruthless that always depressed him. Panchali read his mind. They both were in a cafe on panchali's insist n she felt for him n tried to change his mood by standing n moving away." where u goin" he asked surprised at her action." how could u be so absentminded?" she said angirly n rushed out of cafe. He was stunned on her behaviour n followed her promptly. She was standing in a park near bushes where generally very less people wander... He went near her n hugged her from back n caressed her earlobe n asked whispering "why u r angry princess?what mistake i commited"... She turned towards him by freeing herself from his arm n said "how could u forget today is the day when we expressed our feelings for each other a special no no very special day u forgot n now u r asking me reason for my anger. I prepared so much for today the cafe our lunch n many many things but look at u. U even don't remember let alone wishing." she said n again moved away from him. He started smiling. She continued"how much i wished to have a man who could remember such special days n made me also feel special but u r so different" before she could continue further she felt something round her neck n she realised it was a diamond necklace which arjun was tying n then he turned her making her face him said..." u r the gift what i got from so called destiny n the day when it happened how could i just let that day go so easily. U r precious to me more than my life n i just can't even think to be away from u, then he held her with her arms n pulling her closure he said passionately looking straightly into her eyes " n i just cant tolerate any other man in ur life remember it Panchali u r mine n if something like that happened i ll become a living corpse without u i wont be able to cope up with ur absence in my life". Panchali felt the intesity n truth in his every single word. She immediately drew him into a passionate kiss which was bearing a testimony of her presence in his life forever.. Surrendering herself in front of his love n obsession accepting the fact that she was ready to be his and only his forever... But... Destiny. Can it be changed??? They both who were sealing a promise to be each others forever will go so far n their. Fate would drift away both of them...
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Great start dear! You have a great way of showing the character's feelings. One can feel both the passion and the affection. Oh my ArDi ! I don't want any tragedies but its your story and I can feel a romantic journey ahead! The way he kissed her and then the necklace! Arjun's confession was so heartwarming! Hayee. The part where he said that she is only his was the best part. I hope that remains 😳
Continue soon dear and please try to update more next time. The update is really short, no offence. Aree itna toh Mou review hi deti hai 😆
Loving your story so continue soon. 😃 Eager to know what will happen next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful start Divu. You made me so happy. Welcome to ARDI fan writers land. Arjun and Panchali the eternal lovers should unite in bliss after initial turmoils. You did a good job. Continue soon.
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Chapter 2. "Plz... Try to understand it..u r not getting it..atleast lemme explain once...plz wait"she said grabbing his hand..."wat u wanna tell me haan???that u broke my heart intentionally or u betrayed me bcoz of a strong reason other than love or u never loved me n all that was fake n all???"he said shouting setting himself free from her grip.. His eyes red showing his angish n the extent of pain he was experiencing..tears running from both pairs of eye who staring at each other..."u knew it that to wat extent i loved u i...i trusted u n u... U just played with my felings love n emotion... Why panchali... Whhhyyy???" he shouted at her as was trying to pour all his pain n anguish in front of her..." i can never hurt u Arjun never betray u..." panchali tried to reasoned by taking his face in her hand"U r my love my life my everything...n wat u saw n listen is just ur misconception... It's...it's just a... Just a half..." before she could complete...he stopped her n said" shut up... Dont try to hide ur guilt... U only wanted my money n power just like others n with him... This was ur plan this was ur n his intention n now when i ve caught u... U r making excuses...,he said rudely still eyes red... He cotinued" it was fool of me that i trusted a greedy like u n" "enough... Enough u cant malign my love which is pure n pious with ur dirty words.." said panchali after losing her cool after listening his baseless blamings..."seriously..." he smiled sarcastically n continued" yeah... Sure..but i m not fool miss panchali khanna...i ve understood u n now i arjun singhania m declaring... End of our so called relation... U r no one to me now but a stranger... N so am i...for u"..he said n went away with anguishfilled heart n leaving a stunned n broken panchali there... "Sooo u both finally met haan... Great" a voice took both arjun n panchali in their present n realised that those were just the past memories when they both were even but today r standing at two different ends n were so far from each other... The owner of the voice came near them n said "well i always wanted both of u. To meet"mihir Stepped near to them patting on Arjun's shoulder n said" now when the encouter has already taken place... Let's have some formality... Imean intro."he said smilingly not knowing the fact that these two people r already known to each other r already connected through various threads. Threads of heart soul love pain anguish n passion for each other.."panchali im sure i must have told u bout my friend. Ummm not only a friend but a guide philospher supporter my inspirational mate arjun singhania... The owner of singhania group of industries... N she arjun is my fiancee's cousin my only saali panchali khanna... She is afine doctor n now practices in UK n quite a successful i tell u... N wat u both must know about each other is that u both r alike... Alike in everything n behaviour... Fighter, dynamic yet reserved.. Behave strict but softhearted n loving who always fill one's life with happiness n..." before mihir could complete panchali ran away from there...as if was trying to run away from her past pain love n passion which were being nourished inside her... While arjun also left from there with such an expression n posture as was trying to reverse the time for his sake for her sake for their sake... Mihir stood their confused n worrried on seeing their attitude.. It was looking like they both wanted run from each other cause they both were running towards each other...
"You shoulda understood the situation... Decision in haste always results in destruction n this... This is bout ur future ur life. .. Think once arjun... She couldn't do this to u... She loves u she loves u more than her life, herself..."nishita arjun n panchali's common friend tried to enlight arjun who was ready to end their love relation, their "secret marriage"... "No... No i wont forgive her... She just played with me just betrayed me... I wont... I cant" said arjun whose all emotions were now nearly dead... But he wa feeling somewhat irritated n broken by her words... He visited to her to get some comfort but here she was asking him that he has taken it wrong..."if u don wanna support me than its ok... But dont urge for her... U can see her pain but me wat bout me??? Yeah... Right how could i forgot i m destined to be alone without any friends or..." his voice chocked n unable to bear the pain... He went on his knee sheding tears... He was looking pathetic... Nishita couldn't see him like that...afterall arjun was the man she loved but never revealed her feelings for the happiness of both...she came near him n supported him with concerned look on her face..." why panchali...WWHHHYYY??? Why did u do this to me"..shouted n cried arjun

Arjun stopped near a tree fisting his hand n gave a strong punch on it as if trying to catch the moments which has slipped away from his hand n he couldn't do anything... His eyes were filled with passion n anguish n he said to himself" i ll get u panchali... Back in my life... I ll keep u so close that u can't go away from me... I llwipe all the pain of our past
... U r mine n always be...
"He want divorce from u panchali... Wanna end d relation" said vidit with lots of struggle [ he came to know bout their relation in morning itself n was stunned but didn't dare to tell their father but in evening itself... He is witnessing the news of his sister's divorce... Nishita called up vidit n told him on arjun's insist] panchali who was shading tears was now just listened to her brother blankely n with disbelief while vidit was in tears on seeing his lifeless sister... He went near her n shook her saying" plz sissy control urself plzzz... Dont do this to u... Panchali...ctrl" while panchali didnt2 react anything... After his futile trial of sometimes vidit stopped n was not able to think...wat to do... Than he heared her saying..." he couldn't do this vidit...cou...couldn't do this to me. He... He loves me vidit more than any one... He.. He just cant do this... No... Nooo". She shouted by taking her head in her both hands n wept bitterly...
Panchali on other hand was standing in her room overcoming with all those pains she bore... All those passionate hugs kisses n time they spend together...their obsession for each other n tears were continuously rolling down from her eyes... She ctrld herself.. N firmly said to herself" no i wont let him again come near me. Wont let him... TAKE ME AWAY" little did they know... Their lives were gonna change from this encounter n it was just a start... A beginning of their love hatred game...



P.S. I couldn't update earlier so sorry for that n here starts the trial...BTY... today's8 june my bday as welll so consider it as a treat from me n plzzz do comment... N yeah i know. Kuch zyada hi sad ho gaya but trust me guys upcoming updates will really make u feel... I dont think i need to elaborate much😆 sooo enjoy
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Happy birthday Divu! 😳
Nice update. Was really interesting to read about their past as well as their emotions dawned upon now. Don't really know what happened but really curious to know. I hope their misunderstandings are cleared soon and Arjun does as he says and makes her his again. Waiting to read more. Update soon and next time filled with ArDi moments. 😉
Thank you for the pm,
Sam
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