The Assassinated Burglar: A TS

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Aloha people! It's an amazingly beautiful day, isn't it? 😳So the calendar shows 13th of April. Just another day, right? Wrong! It's a huge day in the life of your favourite writer and beloved friend! (i have every right to be a bit narcissistic today! 😎)

Wondering what makes it that humongous? Two years ago, on this very day came into existence a girl who loved to play with words, Words that had tales to tell and tales that conquered hearts (no matter how bad they were😛) It was on this very day two years back that a writer was born and she has never looked back ever since!

Yeah, i am very much talking about myself! 😎 It has been an unbelievable journey, a journey of words, a journey of love and a journey of me from writing crap to being tolerable at last!😆
Yeah, i know, i am not at all jocular.🥱

I wipe off my tears as i say this, i am grateful! Grateful from the bottom of my heart to everyone who has loved and encouraged me! Everyone who has been there for me no matter what! I am so overwhelmed and my words no longer get along. All i have to say is that i love you all and i won't ever ever be able to thank you everything you guys have done for me! Thank you my lovely friends. I can't really name all of you individually because that's impossible but i still want to mention some of you who have special places in my heart, my Aryavrat Ki Sena (Janu di, Bhaiya,Sumi, Mili,Lola di, Gargi di, Mishti di, Swatz, Praks, Anu,Shivi, just love you all) my ArDi gang (Sam, Mou, Aanvi and Sayu, guys you complete me) EDKVians (Zoya, Prii, Resh, Mittu, Anu, Apri, and the list just grows) and my outstanding BC pals too! Lastly these two crazy sisters who have always been my inspirations, Srutha and Shreya along with my bestest,sweetest Didu! ❤️ This is for all of you!
And the most of all my sassy soul sister (Yes, i am obsessed with alliterations) , my jigar da tukda(Too cheezy? Naah, it ain't enough😳) my support system i am nothing without, my beloved Mahi! ❤️❤️❤️
This is for you! And dedicated to our craze for murder mysteries! #DeliberateRepetion😉





PS-Once again THANK YOU guys! I am terribly sorry in case i forgot to mention anyone but it's just because you are still ruling over my heart and refused to get put to words.😳❤️

PSS-For everything i have written till date, check the link below-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4548068
I have an endless list and you're never going to be able to terminate its expansion! 😈

PSSS-This is losely based on the american series called Castle.

And it sucks!
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PART-1


Castle scratched his head menacingly in the moment of leisure, leisure not derived from unoccupancy and idleness but that borrowed from the coven of persistent, bizarre thoughts his mind had gotten into. His reliable imagination that had faithfully served both as his respite and his boss at work had now turned a traitor, as it went on and on with seeing, rather dreaming of himself with the muse for the lead of his impending novel, Kate Beckett or say Nikki Heat. He was tired of convincing it knowing too well that it won't budge. Martha, his nosy mother, had come in to spy on what he was up to, n number of times or so it felt and every time he had only ended up calling her Beckett! Yes, he had called his own mother and daughter Beckett at least once but it wasn't his fault, Kate had taken over his mind and soul, his heart and the thumping of it.

And then the spiteful and the unforeseen took place, Kate herself came in through that door.

"Mom, please! Stop bothering me with sceptical glances like that for the heck of it!" He cried without on his own caring to look up at the 'trespasser'.

"Castle?" She looked on at him, her face taken over by a shock "It's me!"

"Detective?" An astonished Castle turned and stood up on his feet at once "Ermm, i'm sorry please have a seat!"

She comfortably seated herself on a cosy armchair facing him.

"And now, tell me what brings you here Miss Beckett? How may i help you? I knew you would be missing me at work today!" He said flashing a flirtatious wink.

"Not really! I haven't been bitten by a mad dog to miss you of all people! " She frowned trying really hard to conceal the fact that her heart was indeed missing him.

"So then, why are you here if you weren't?" He smirked.

"Ermm..It's about a case! "

"A case? " Kate was observing how instantly his face lit up and she smiled a little.

"Yes, apparently a case. This is about a homicide... "

"Obviously! You aren't a Detective specializing in murders for no reason! " Interrupted Castle.

"Yeah so, a man was found murdered last night. His name was Dunst, Rob Dunst" Continued Beckett reverently ignoring his previous enunciation "In his apartment, near Roosevelt Avenue and he was apparently a burglar, a tactful, clever creature who dared to steal priceless, historic ethnic Indian Jewels from the Central Museum, about a fortnight ago and even the NYPD had failed to nab him. However as of now, he lies dead and the jewels are gone. "

"A robber robbed? Ooh, this is going to be interesting! Bring it on!" Exclaimed an excited Richard "So what are you waiting for? Let's get to work babe..!" Attempting something coquettish again, he stopped at once feeling the lurking, evasive, vulnerable gaze on him and smiled widely "I mean, let's go Detective!"

~

The car halted in the parking lot of a 10 storey building in the proximity of Roosevelt Avenue and Richard Castle descended with his partner Detective Beckett. Passing many a door, they were at last in the flat, it was large, airy and roomy. Esposito along with Dr Parish were examining the body while the other officers had by now rummaged the place, looking for clues pointing towards the killer.

"Hey Castle!" Greeted an exhilarated Esposito "Good to see you!"

"Good afternoon Mr Castle!" Followed the doctor and Beckett twitched her lips and sighed at how no one really cared she was there too, something that couldn't evade Castle's keen eye. Recollecting her indifference during their previous conversation, he bent nearer to her ear and whispered cautiously

"Tit for tit!" And it all infuriated her further.

Composing herself, she looked at her buddy for some much needed diversion, in what appeared to be a demanding glare.

"So Lanie, what did the corpse have to reveal? " She asked liberally.

"He was stabbed to death, very brutally stabbed, about 10 times right in the stomach" she answered as Castle winced a bit thinking of the pain he must have gone through, he still wasn't used to these dead bodies though he never gave it away. Meanwhile Dr Parish continued "We found the knife as well, look!" She said stretching the knife towards Beckett.

"Finger prints?" Interrogated Beckett again.

"None!" Said Lanie in despair.

"This seems like a dead end, Beckett! We could find nothing, save the knife!" Said Ryan, exhausted though he looked.

"What about the knife? Just a plain one or something special about it?" Interceded Castle who had until now been on his behavioural rule-breaking spree, taking pictures and meddling with the possible clues of the crime scene.

"Plain!" pronounced the doc.

"I think this was one of this guy's acquaintances who knew well of his lair. Greed took over making him go disloyal and killing him for the jewels. " Concluded Kate.

"No, remember detective you said he was shrewd. Do you really expect him to tell anyone of his hiding place, he was wanted by the NYPD, he couldn't have taken that risk." Remarked Castle.

"So then, who according to you?"

"This is definitely an insider someone from the museum staff who was aiding Rob"

"Are you suggesting that there is a double-dealer involved?"

"How else do you think he could have managed to steal that jewellery under such tight security? Certainly someone was helping him."


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Caskett 😭
Chalo koi na, main phir bhi padhungi 😆
Res 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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*breaks head on wall*
Oh hell! How did I forget? I'm such a bad friend!😭 Its indeed a great great day. Thank you sooo much for all the love you've given me. 😳
Cheers to our friendship!🤗

RESWA 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic part Ramya⭐️
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Okay...I am not going to res...This is awesome...I am actually hyperventilating. *breathe in breathe out*. Firstly, I am so touched with the mention. I didn't do much. You are so adorable Donut, it's rather impossible not to love you little sister. 🤗

Now coming to Castleee...you wrote Castle..!!! 🤗You are so freaking awesome. It sounds interesting. I'll be waiting for the next part. Throw in a siggie there...❤️


Waiting for Sherlolly!!!😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Rammy🤗
The day'd already passed, sorry I'm such a night owl😆
Congratulations!
And really thanks for the mention, we all are immensely proud.

Tbh, you know I'd hardly read all your works till date...I used to read PraJa and ArDi when I wasnt a member here( Idek if it were yours or not). However from the past few days, I am seriously loving every bit of your writing. The flow you have makes me happy and inspired. Awesome you are!
I loved the intro part😆
And then Caskett! Redo or ThaDi, any of you jumping upon reading this TS?😆
From what I've known them( ittu sa that I know😆), the essence of their companionship was captured very well:)

Looking forward to read some more stuff written by you :P


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations ! And lets say res !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one! Very interesting! Can't wait to read ahead!
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Originally posted by: Shrinika13

Caskett 😭
Chalo koi na, main phir bhi padhungi 😆
Res 😉


Oh. Em. Gee. You are a fantastic writer. Hating to admit this, cause Dii meko maar daalegi, maine Castle ka sirf 2 epi dekha hai, but yeh padhke I was in the story!
You have skill re! You are an amazing writer!
Meko aur chaiye!
And, I love you for that mention, I am so so so honoured 🤗

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