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Posted: 8 years ago
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HIII

All the character are same in the serial

Balraj Mann lives with his family in Ambala. Lalit his friend is also staying with his family in ambala. Balraj and lalit are very good friends . Both families are close to each other. Lalit decides to shift from ambala to Canada for bright future. Before leaving he promise his friend balraj that after 15 years he wil come back to India to make his daughter Heer as his Mil . Lalit and balraj are in contact with each other after leaving distance.

AFTER 15 YEARS

Balraj family is one of the reputated family in ambala. Balraj daughter heer has completed her studies and now doing social service for the society. Ek din lalit ka phone aata hai balraj ko . Hiii balu how are u ? Balraj always say jaisa tum chod ke gaye the vaisa hi hu. And both talked. Balraj say wapis aaja ..bahut yaad aati hai ...Lalit said yes i will come and let u know. Lalit apni family ke saath dinning table par ...

Lalit to gayatri ; Gayatri ab jab humne sab kuch hasil kr liya hai yha par ...kya hum sab India chale.

Preet ; Dad what ? India no way ..

Aj achanak se India kyu yaad aa gya aapko

Lalit ; mei yha sirf apni family ko achi parwarish dene ke liye laya tha ...ab jab vo kam ho gya hai to vapis jane ka waqt aa gya hai

Gayatri ; thik hai jaise aapko sahi lage

Lalit ; Prem tum kya kehte ho ?

Prem : bauji jaise aapko thik lage

Lalit ; prem thik hai ...dinner krne ke baad mere rom mei aana mujhe tumse kuch baat krni hai

Prem : ok bauji

Preet ; ab kya baat krni hai ...jo kuch bolna tha vo to bol diya dad ne ...aur pb aap bhi man gye India jane ke liye ..not fair

Prem in his thoughts pta nhi kya baat krni hai dad ko

Prem went to lalit room ; Bauji aapne bulaya

Lalit ; ha prem beta ...tum to jante hi ho ki mujhe hamesha se India wapis jana hi tha ..par is bar wajah kuch aur hai jane ki ...prem meine apne dost balraj se waada kiya tha ki mei jab bhi lautuga tab uski beti heer ki shaadi apne prem se karwauga...mei janta hu tumhe bahut ajeeb lag rha hoga ...ki jis ladki ko tumne dekha ni kabhi baat nhi ki ...kabhi mile ni ...ek dum se shaadi kaise kr loge...

Ek bar tum usse mil lo ...jan lo agr tumhe thik lage tabhi hum is rishte ko aage baadayge...varna mei balrj ko shi baat bta duga ...usse bura nhi lagega...

Vaise bhi is kasam ke bare mei balu aur mere ilawa aur koi nhi janta ...aur meine aj balu se baat ki to usne kha ki usne heer ko bhi kabhi is bare mei nhi bataya...

Tum ek bar mil lo ..baki faisla tumhara hoga

Prem ; Bauji aapne mere liye ladki dhoondi hai to achi hi hogi . Par jaise ki balraj uncle ki beti ko mere bare mei kuch ni pta khi usi ne rishte ke liye inkar kr diya to ...Lalit vo to waqt hi batayega...

Prem thik hai bauji ..hum sab India chalte hai ...aap bas balraj uncle se kahiga ki heer ko kuch na bataye...mei usse ek bar bina kisi bandish se janna chahta hu ...plz bauji aap samj rhe hai na mei kya kehna chahta hu ...thik hai prem ..mei samj gya ..mei balu se baat krta hu...

Prem ok bauji

Preet ne sari convo sun li hoti hai

Preet after his dad has gone ...pb wht is this aapne is rishte ke liye ha kr di ...jab ki aapne ladki ko dekha tak ni hai ...prem : meine kha ha ki ...meine bhi to dad se yhi kha hai na ki mei usse milna chahta hu phle ...vaise mujhe bauji ki har baat manta hu ...bauji ne jo ladki mere liye dekhi hogi vo achi hi hogi ...par ek bar usse milna to bnta hai ...

Preet ok pb mei samj gya ...thik hai agr vo aapko pasand nhi aai to aap usse mana kr doge ...prem : vo to pta ni abhi ...vo to India jake hi pta chalega ...

Preet left from there . Prem ; heer name to acha hai ...pta ni kaisi ho gi vo jise bauji ne mere liye chuna hai ...vaise acha hi hua jo balraj uncle ne tumhe kuch nhi bataya ...hope tumse milkr acha lage ...

Lalit inform balu the prem demand ...and balu accepted it ...Llait inform him that they all r coming to India .

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Posted: 8 years ago
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2 nd part ...
Lalit with his family reach India ...balraj d teji has come to pick them up...lalit met balraj both hug emotionally d happy to see each other after so many years... Lalit introduce all family members to them...balraj d teji are most happy to see prem ...prem touch there feet ...they got happy d see that lalit has given all values of relationship to their children...
After that lalit d balraj went in one car d others in other car...
In car preet ; bhai excited to meet dad choice... Man mei to laddu foot rahe honge...prem : preet chup kr ja ...preet : kyu bhai khi dar lag rha hai khi heer moti hui to aur bhenji hui to ...to aapka kya hoga ...prem : aisa kuch ni hai mei to kuch aur Hi soch rha hu ...preetv: socho socho..no one is disturbing u ...Harman : tum hi Bhai ko disturb Jr rhe ho ...aur koi ni ...
In lalit car: balraj to lalit...pta hai lalit heer aur meher tum sab ki dekh kr bahut khush hogi ...vo to kabse ibtzar kr rhi thi ki tum log kab aaoge ...lalit ,: kya tumne heer ko sab bta diya hai ...balraj : nhi vo hamari dosti ki kahani sunti rehti hai ...to is liye hamare Milne ka wait kr rhi hoti thi ...aur aj uska intzar khthm hua...
All reach balraj house ...lalit waah balu Tera ghr to bahut Sundar ho gya hai ...ha to fir heer ka architect kiya hua hai ...preet : not bad pb mujhe to lga tha koi tuta hua makan hoga ...but yeh to kya ghr hai ...prem : preet sudar ja...lalit ; balu ab bhr Hi khada rakhe GA ya ander bhi le jayega ...balraj : are ha chalo sab log ...under ...some one open the door ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey chhanchan
Nice start
i think ye ff app ne pahale bhe post kiye the 2 parts hai na ?
Waiting for the next part pls continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes i have start this ff but not able to continue at that time...
so now i start with new fresh one ...
i will soon update the next post ...:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3
Door is being opened by their maid. All settle in the hall ... lalit sees the house and said balu yha to kuch bhi ni balda...jaisa tha vaisa hi hai ... jha hum mil kr baatein kiya karte the ...khanna khaya krte the ... dekh sab vaisa ka vaisa hi hai ...
Balu : shi ka lalit tumne sab vaisa ka vaisa hi hai ...pta hai meher ne kitni bar kha ki bauji ghr ka interior chnge krte hai ...mgr meine kabhi hami ni bhari ...ek bar us bachi ki jid mei aakr meine hami bhr di ...sab bahut khush the ...sivaye mere ...mujhe yeh sab vaisa ka vaise hi chahiye tha jaisa tum chod kr gye the ...tumhari har yaad taza hai yha par ...aj bhi ...tab heer aai aur kehne lagi ki bauji yeh ghr pura renovate hoga mgr aapki yaadein ke saath ...meine pucha usse ...ki yeh kaisa possible hai hai ...tab usne kha sab mujh par chod do ...aur dekh heer ne hum dono ki dosti ko kitna acha bna diya ...badal kr bhi sab yhi hai ...
all smile including youngsters
Lalit : heer ne to bahut acha kiya ...
balraj : ha vo hum dono ke milne ka intzar krti thi ...kehti thi ki kab lalit chachu aayege aur aap unke saath mil kr phir se dubara vo pal jioge ...aur dekh aaj uska intzar khtm hua ...
Both hug ...all smile with their reunion
teji said : abhut hui baatein chale ab aap sab log fresh ho jaieye mei tea bna leti hu sab ke liye ...
uddenly lalit asked yeh dono bachiya kha hai dikai ni de rhi ...
balraj said ha teji yeh dono kha hai
sudden their maid said ...praji vo dono kam se bhr gayi hai aati hi hogi ...heer didi ne aapka phone try kiya mgr lag ni rha tha isliye ...
balraj : ok thik hai
preet to prem : kya hua pb ghr pasand aaya
prem : ghr to bahut acha hai
preet : jisne ghr ka interior bnvaya vo ...
prem : preet d roll his eyes
gayatri : chalo bacho fresh ho jao sab log ...
after freshn up all were sitting in lawn ...
preet was as usual inplay boy mood
prem was working on laptop
d elders were talking on there own topics
a girl enter with lots of luggage d said to maid yeh sab under rakhwa do
girl rush to lawn d said lalit chahu ...
lalit : are meher kaisa hai bacha tu ...
meher : mei achi hu chahcu...
namsate chachi g
hello everyone
all said hey
balraj : meher yeh koi time hai aane ka ...yeh heer kha hai vo ni aai abhi tak
meher : Vo bauji mei aur heer didi dono market gye the saman leine aur aate waqt heer didi ko call aai kisi ki vo kehti ki mei thodi der tak aayegi koi zaruri kam aa gaya hai
but abhi tak to aa jana chahiye tha di ko ...
teji tensed a said suniye aap zara call kariye dekhiye na kha reh gyi hai yeh ladki ...
balraj : teji heer hamara putar hai ...use pta hai ki usne aana hai jaldi vo aajegi tum chinta mat karo ...phir bhi mei use call krta hu ...
balraj call heer
heer pick up the call d said sorry sorry bauji meine aane mei der kr di ...ek kam mei phasi hui hu jaise hi hota hai aa jaugi ...dinner se phle ...pakka ...
balraj ...ok beta aajana varna teri mumma ne mujhe ni chodna ...
heer : ok bauji ..love u
balraj : bye beta love u too...
teji : heer keh ri hai ki vo dinners e phle aa jayegi ...kisi kam mei fasi hui hai ...
teji ; thik hai ji ...
preet : intiha ho gyi intzar ki ...aai na kuch khbr mere yaar ki ...
prem : preet tujhe kya hua yeh gana kyu ga rha hai
kulraj : ha preet ky ahua tujhe
preet : intzar bas khtm dinner tak
prem : preet to sudhar ja
kulraj : yeh kya baatein kr rhe ho ...kaunsa intzar kaisa dinner
prem : kuch ni kul di yeh preet bas pitne vala hai ab mujhse ...


rest in next part ...hope u enjoy

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4
At night
All were heading towards dining table for dinner
Balraj : meher
Meher: ji bauji
Balraj : meher jara phone to laga dekh heer kha reh gyi hai bahut der ho gyi hai ...
meher : ok bauji
meher ne phone lagaya aur heer ke mobile ki ring tone dil to pagal hai instrument rang and meher turn
lo aa gyi heer didi
all look in that direction
heer is wearing kurta long shirt dress with hair open and a wide smile on her face
prem was looking continuous to her
teji ran to heer and said in harsh tone
heer : tumne time dekha hai kitna ho gya hai ...tumhe waqt ki bilkul bhi parwa ni ...heer was looking down ...as she is getting scolding from her mother
Heer : soory ma vo
teji : heer tum aur tumhare so imp kam bas yeh khthm ni hote hai
balraj : teji bas kr dekh vo kitni thak ke aai hai aur tum use dhant rhi ho
Teji : aap hi ne bigad kr rakha hai heer ko
heer : sorry ma vo aage se ni hoga aj sach mei fas gyi thi
juneja's were seeing this maan's scene ...
balraj : teji bas baba mei dhant duga heer ko baad mei ...thik hai ...heer aage se tum kabhi ni der se augi ...ok
heer with smile : ok bauji
heer sorry ma aj yeh aakhri baar mei late hui hu ...aapse wada krti hu ..aage se sham se phle aa jaya karugi ...ok
teji : promise
heer : promise
all smile
heer sudden saw lalit
are lalit chachu ...d went to them to touch their feet
lalit : heer kitni badi ho gyi hai
heer : ha vo to hai
lalit : god bless u bacha ...hamesha khush raha kr
heer : thanku chacha g
heer went to all youngsters
all said hii to heer
prem was looking at heer while she was interacting with his siblings
finally heer meet prem
prem was continuosly looking at heer
heer : hii
prem was looking at her
sudden preet said bhai vo heer di aapko hii bol ri hai
he get out of that charm
and said hiii
and both shake hands
heer said to all aap sab ko khana shuru kijiye mei fresh hokr aati hu
prem was looking at her
preet ; bhai heer di gai
prem : ha
preet : kya baat hai phla phla pyar hai ...phli phli bara hai
prem : preet tum phir se shuru ho gye
preet : bhai love at first site
prem : preet aisa kuch ni hai
preet : koi baat ni chalo ab khana kha letehai ki vo bhi ni khana
aisa kuch ni hai mei maa ko bol deta hu ..ki aapko bhook ni hia
prem : preet chal ab
all head towards dinner
heer also join them

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Posted: 8 years ago
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you're updating this regularly - I may check this out when I have free time.
Nice to see you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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woww read all 4 parts its awosome superbbb
waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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woww awosome parts
loved loved loved it
Heer prem mil gaye ⭐️
pls contnue
pls update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice story
All 4 parts are good
continue soon

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