Mohabbatein Devakshi/Haira/Arya/Vitharv TS pt3-pg10 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2 and 3 were mind blowing as always...wonderful end , though I wasn't surprized knowing Vividha was alive (I read it earlier na) But still enjoyed all those scenes to the core , loved the fact that though you didn't knew about most of these Jodi's still you wrote on them so beautifully and even got beautiful Pic's , Somendra's love for Indira won , it was so beautiful , loved the way he made Parvati realize everything , ArYa too were beautiful , happy Maya confessed her love , DevAkshi completely suited their roles , best friends turned hard core lovers , amazing...Maya being Vividha's sister came as a surprize to me (I had forgotten it) But enjoyed them all completely , Atharv's love for Vividha was amazing , My favourite character Atharv...Favourite scene , I had one when Vividha wished back Atharv...that was the best scene , Atharv's love brought back Vividha to normal , favourite Jodi DevAkshi...I don't know why but I loved them a lot here...thanks alot for this beautiful ff...a co-incidence , I watched Mohobbatein today on TV...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Thx a lot.beautiful comment.If u have noticed I added more scenes n dialogues in this version.Even felt like turning it into a SS.but dropped that idea as I felt lazy


Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Part 2 and 3 were mind blowing as always...wonderful end , though I wasn't surprized knowing Vividha was alive (I read it earlier na) But still enjoyed all those scenes to the core , loved the fact that though you didn't knew about most of these Jodi's still you wrote on them so beautifully and even got beautiful Pic's , Somendra's love for Indira won , it was so beautiful , loved the way he made Parvati realize everything , ArYa too were beautiful , happy Maya confessed her love , DevAkshi completely suited their roles , best friends turned hard core lovers , amazing...Maya being Vividha's sister came as a surprize to me (I had forgotten it) But enjoyed them all completely , Atharv's love for Vividha was amazing , My favourite character Atharv...Favourite scene , I had one when Vividha wished back Atharv...that was the best scene , Atharv's love brought back Vividha to normal , favourite Jodi DevAkshi...I don't know why but I loved them a lot here...thanks alot for this beautiful ff...a co-incidence , I watched Mohobbatein today on TV...😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thx a lot.beautiful comment.If u have noticed I added more scenes n dialogues in this version.Even felt like turning it into a SS.but dropped that idea as I felt lazy



Yup , I saw it ...I think you added ViAtharv scenes na?? But seriously loved reading this again...Now wished you had actually converted it into one...no problem , I loved it has a TS too...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Vitharv scenes are more in this version.Also in the IPKKND Mohabbatein Khushi's father was not the Principal of college.Even in other couple scenes i made changes

Originally posted by: .Piyali..


Yup , I saw it ...I think you added ViAtharv scenes na?? But seriously loved reading this again...Now wished you had actually converted it into one...no problem , I loved it has a TS too...😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Vitharv scenes are more in this version.Also in the IPKKND Mohabbatein Khushi's father was not the Principal of college.Even in other couple scenes i made changes


Oh , I didn't realized in other couple's scenes though...maybe because I have forgotten somewhat the first version...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow awesome updates loved all parts and ending thank you for pm and sorry for late reply
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Hi Jasmine
Thanks for giving Devakshi
liked them in the ff and
loved the ending too
one of a masterpiece work from you side
😉😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
thanku.never knew that u like Devakshi

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi Jasmine
Thanks for giving Devakshi
liked them in the ff and
loved the ending too
one of a masterpiece work from you side
😉😉😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

thanku.never knew that u like Devakshi


ya that was the show I Watched after MATSH end so like them they too make a good pair 😉😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Loved the first chapter. Thanks for including Somendra and Indira .Loved Somendra and Indira love story. Indira is a widow who loves to give smiles to others but she only doesn't have a smile of her own as she is happy to keep others happy.Somendra comes into Indira berang zindagi to add colour to her life .He wants to make Indira life colourful by expressing his love to her and being accepted by her in laws but her in laws will make Indira life hell to which he doesnt want that too happen.Love Somendra he is so much concerned about his lady love.
Maya and Arjun dance is so sweet am suprised that Maya isn't interested in him and has no feelings for him even after the dance .For her status is more imp and she hates Arjun .Felt sorry for Arjun that his love is been rejected not because he is flirty but because of Maya comparing their standards.
Devakshi dance is so beautiful but soon Dev happiness falls short when he sees her with Karan and he is happy that Sonakshi found her love. But Karan betrayed Sonakshi and Dev supported Sonakshi and he fighting with Karan for Sonakshi. Sonakshi felt blessed to have a friend like him and i didn't wanted to break the friendship even after they both go in different directions.
Loved the concern from all the 3 boys for Atharv. He tells them about Vividha who was his love and he was a ex student and he used to romance with Vividha during class hours so sweet. Its getting interesting now

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