Match Fixing.... Rajveer Naina Forever OS.... - Page 2

lovely os

Nice os. Loved Raj -Khushi nok jhok. Nice to see Arnav, Khushi, Raj and Naina bonding. Glad that Raj brought ASR for Khushi's birthday. Raina scenes was awesome.[/QUOTE

Originally posted by: rajveernainalov

Thnx for pm...kya bat he kya bat he 👏
Means maja aa gya...sbse pahli khusbi mili raaj ki presence se nd second miki cricket se.I love cricket.waah...nice concept...and too good OS.
But Mera man tha ki aap Raj ko cricketer ka role deti becauae he is a captain.I think ...but jo aapko accha lage..afterall u r writer..
Anyways fantastic..and plzz KRPKAB uodate kr dijiye.
Thnkew so much

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊[/QUOTE

Originally posted by: rajveernainalov

Thnx for pm...kya bat he kya bat he 👏
Means maja aa gya...sbse pahli khusbi mili raaj ki presence se nd second miki cricket se.I love cricket.waah...nice concept...and too good OS.
But Mera man tha ki aap Raj ko cricketer ka role deti becauae he is a captain.I think ...but jo aapko accha lage..afterall u r writer..
Anyways fantastic..and plzz KRPKAB uodate kr dijiye.
Thnkew so much

Lovely update [/QUOTE

Cute os 😳[/QUOTE

Sweet cute and beautiful os [/QUOTE

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I have seen you writing only on RN.so when I saw an os with RN n arshi I was surprised. First time I am seeing an Arshi RN story.raj khushi friendship bond was so beautiful. Asr as cricketer and naina as raj's strict boss was interesting. Naina is scared of her stepfather. Her past is so sad.loved how raj asked her if he can be the one in her life.asr naina friends was a surprise. Raj surprising khushi on her birthday by bringing her favourite asr was so nice.loved asr confessing his love and other cricketers reacting. Loved RN proposal scene too.though it reminded me of saajun arya n beyhaad it was a very sweet os

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