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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Very well penned, but too emotional

Hope Raj and shalini r fine
Shalini tik hojaye
Naina vapas ajaye as she belongs there.
Continue soon
Take care


Thanks allot Sri
Aapne kha h baat to manni hi padegi 😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fab update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Ragini, Raj and Naina are suffering from their own feelings...😭...Raj realises his feelings for Naina...😉...Ragini decides to unite Raina...👏👏👏...oh no Raj and Shali meets with an accident...😲...I am damn sure it's done by Huda and Ritu...😡...hope they will be alright...🤔...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: rkchandni


Thanks allot Sri
Aapne kha h baat to manni hi padegi 😆😉

Woh tum ne toh dil kush kardi
Kuch aur mangle hum, shayad tum hum pe meharbaan ho.
Btw exams kaise gayi, result kab mileage
Take care
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

fab update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Ragini, Raj and Naina are suffering from their own feelings...😭...Raj realises his feelings for Naina...😉...Ragini decides to unite Raina...👏👏👏...oh no Raj and Shali meets with an accident...😲...I am damn sure it's done by Huda and Ritu...😡...hope they will be alright...🤔...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...


Thanks dear let's see
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Woh tum ne toh dil kush kardi
Kuch aur mangle hum, shayad tum hum pe meharbaan ho.
Btw exams kaise gayi, result kab mileage
Take care


Hahahaha exam went OK Abhi result aane me 1 month h uske Baad fir exam h so will b busy again
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rkchandni


Hahahaha exam went OK Abhi result aane me 1 month h uske Baad fir exam h so will b busy again

Tum toh hame dara rahi ho, Iska matlab before results tum zaada se zaada updates kardo KRPKAB ff ke.
Good luck for the results, let me know.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Tum toh hame dara rahi ho, Iska matlab before results tum zaada se zaada updates kardo KRPKAB ff ke.
Good luck for the results, let me know.
Take care


Are don't worry usse pehle I will complete this story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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updating in a while..😃
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hi everyone... thanks for liking and commenting on part 28... here is part 29... enjoy... keep reading and keep commenting... n keep smiling always...
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*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 29...

Rajveer bahut kosis kar raha tha... gadi se logon ko bacha bhi raha tha... use khud se jyada shalini ki chinta thi... usne shalini ki taraf ka

gate khola... yahan shalini ko apne accident ki puri baatien yaad aa rahi thi... wo panic ho rahi thi... rajveer shalini ko push karne ki kosis

karta hai... but saamne se ek school bus aa rahi thi... wo bachho ko bachane ke liye galat turn leta hai... aur ek truck se bahut khatarnaak

accident hota hai... aas pass ke log ikaththa hote hai... dono rajveer aur shalini ki haalat kharab thi...

shekhawat office...

aalekh apna phone pick karta hai:- hello... ha veer...

a man:- dekhiye yeh jiska bhi phone hai... unka accident ho gaya hai... ( dhamaake on aalekh's face...).. aap jaldi se st. life hospital aa jaiye

inke sath ek ladki bhi hai... aap sun rahe hai na...

aalekh:- h... ha... ha... main abhi aata hun...

aalekh bhagta hua nikal jata hai... jab tak kuchh logon ne milkar rajveer aur shalini ko hospital pahuncha dia tha... chot dono ko aayi

thi... but shalini ka seat belt rajveer ne use push karne ke liye open kar dia tha... isiliye wo gadi se gir bhi gayi thi... but rajveer ko jyada

chot ayi hai... dekh kar hi pata chal raha tha... doctors dono ka treatment start karte hai... tab tak aalekh pahuch gaya...

aalekh to reception:- rajveer shekhawat...

receptionist:- ji...? yahan to is naam ka koi patient nahi hai...

aalekh:- kya... wo abhi thodi der pehle ek accident ka case aaya hoga...

receptionist:- ji ha... wo ek ladka aur ek ladki the... unka operation chal raha hai... 2 nd floor operation theater...

aalekh (dara hua ):- operation... ( wo daud kar pahucha... baki log to chale gaye... but jisne aalekh ko call kia tha wo banda wahi tha...

aalekh operation theater ke bahar jakar door ko dekhne laga...)...

man:- ji... sahab maine hi khabar ki thi inki... aapse baat hui thi meri...?

aalekh:- ji ha... sukriya...

man:- sukriya na kaho sahab... bas wo dono theek ho jaaye... wo dono miya biwi hai kya...?

aalekh:- nahi bhai behen hai...

man:- hey bhagwan... inke maa - baap ko shakti dena,,,, bahut kharab hasda hua hai... inki gadi to puri tarah tahas nahas ho gayi hai...

aakhir itane bade truck se jo takraai hai... bas rab dono ko bacha le... ( dhamake on aalekh's face use viren ishita sab ki yaad aati hai...)

aap inke maa baap ko bhi khabar kar do... ( aalekh nods in yes...) achha main chalta hu... rab rakha...( man left)...

aalekh:- uncle aunty... naina... ( aalekh kapte hanthon se phone uthata hai... aur ghar ka number dail karta hai...)...

shekhawat vila...

ishita:- suniye... yeh veer abhi tak shalu ko lekar nahi aaya... mujhe bahut ghabrahata ho rahi hai...

dadi:- ishita... veer hai shalu ke sath aa jayeinge...

viren:- ha tum chinta na karo... ( tabhi phone ring karta hai...) ruko main leta hu... ( viren phone pick karte hai...)... hello...

aalekh ( dare hue);- un.. uncle,,,, main...

viren:- aalekh tujhe kya hua...?

aalekh:- wo... veer... veer... aur di,,,,,

viren:- aalekh... dekh dara mat... kya hua hai...?

ishita:- kya hua...?

viren:- aalekh bol...

aalekh:- veer aur di ka accident ho gaya hai... ( viren was shocked...) st life hospital... ap log aa jao... ( aalekh cuts the call... tears flows

down to his cheek...)... naina...

ishita:- kya hua...? kya kaha aalekh ne,,,,

dadi:- puttar bol... ( tabhi pooja aai...)...

pooja:- papa aap statue ban kar kyun khade ho... kya hua...

viren:- veer aur shalu ka accident... ( dhamaake on alls face...) hospital chalo... (ishita kuchh nahi kehti...)... ishita chalo... ( viren

ishita ko pooja dadi ko pakad kar le jate hai...)...

aluhwalia house...

naina apne kamre me bechain si baithi thi...

naina:- yeh mujhe itna azeeb kyun lag raha hai... sab theek to hai na... raj aap theek to ho na... (tabhi naveen daud kar aaya,...)

naveen:- naina...

naina:- ji bhaiya... kya hua... aap ghabraaye hue kyun ho...?

naveen:- rajveer ka accident ho gaya hai... ( dhamake on naina's face... she was shocked... bagal se ragini naina ke pass aa rahi thi...

use bhi shock laga...)... sath me salini bhi thi...

naina:- raj...

ragini:- raj...

back to hospital...

shalini ka operation chhota aur normal tha... doctor bahar aate hai...

aalekh:- doctor... wo veer aur shalini di...

doc:- dekhiye... jo male hai unka treatment chal raha hai... jahan tak baat ladki ki hai... blood loss hua hai... but she is out of danger...

hose me aane ka intezaar karna hoga...

aalekh:- thank god... par veer theek hai na... wo... aadmi bol raha tha...

doc:-dekhiye sambhaliye khud ko accident bura hua hai... shalini ji khatre se bahar hai... par veer... right...?

aalekh:- rajveer shekhawat...

doc:- ha mr rajveer he is really critical... operation chal raha hai... sambhaliye khud ko... ( doc left... doc ke jaate hi humari nazar

peeche khade shekhawats pe padhti hai...)...

viren:- aalekh...

aalekh:- uncle...

sabhi wahan tensed baithe hai... ki kuchh der me aluhwalias naina aur ragini pahunch jate hai... aur unke peeche ali aur bani bhi...

naina:- aalekh... raj kaha hai...? aur di...? (aalekh kuchh nahi kehta aur shalini ke ward ki taraf ishara karta hai... ishita shalini ke pass

baithi thi... naina door se jakar unhe dekhti hai... viren aakar naina ke soulder pe hath rakhta hai...)...

viren;- shalu khatre se bahar hai... hose aane ka wait hai... (tabhi yudi aata hai...)...

yudi:- dono theek hai na...?

viren:- beta veer ka operation chal raha hai... he is critical (dhamake on naina's face...) shalu out of danger hai... doctor ne intezar karne

ko kaha hai...

yudi:- theek hai... main doc se shalini ke bare me detail leta hun... (yudi left to consult doc...)...

2 hours later...

sabhi bahut tensed the bcz abhi tak doc rajveer ka operation karke bahar nahi aaye the... par yahan shalini ko hose aa raha tha... nurse

uske equipments dekh rahi thi... sabhi bahar rajveer ki condition ko lekar tensed hai... shalini kuchh badbada rahi thi...

shalini:- nahi... leave me,,,, chhodo mujhe... n nh nh... (nurse shalini ko dekhti hai... bhag ke jakar doc ko bulati hai... sab ab shalini ke

ward ke bahar the... doc yudi ke sath ander jate hai... yudi use calm kar raha tha... yudi ke face pe smile bhi thi,,, sayad use kuchh

positive hopes dikh rahi thi...)... vee... navee... nav... bacha... bachao... chodo... (shalini ko apna ateet yaad aa raha hai... sayad

sabse dardnaak ateet... fir use apne purane accident ki jhalkiyan nazar ati... dheere- dheere... apna pariwar... beete kuchh salo ki

jhalkiyan jab use hose nahi tha... fir aaj ke accident ki jhalkiyaan... ki use Rajveer ka saf chehra dikha... jispe muskaan thi...)...

Rajveer:- Di...

shalini ( chillate hue uth gayi...):- VEERRR... (shalini ki awaaz bahar tak gayi... sab sayad happily shocked the... aaj

shalini ne kuchh kaha tha... itne sal bad...)...

yudi:- yes... shalini calm down...calm down shalini,...

shalini:- veer... veer... bachao use... mera veer... mera veer... veerrr... (aur shalini weekness ke karan behose ho gayi...)..

doc:- dr she is completely all right... sayad shock ki wajah se... par aap is tarah...?

yudi:- she is my patient dr... actually she met with an accident few years back... n went to in trauma... aaj pehli baar yeh boli hai...

doc:- oh really it means... she is...

yudi:- she is now perfectly fine... thanks doc... ( yudi n doc both came out of the ward...)...

viren:- yudi wo shalu... ne...

yudi:- uncle aunty... shalini ki yeh haalat ek accident aur us hadse wajah se hui thi... par aaj ek aur accident ne use bilkul theek kar dia...

naina maine kaha tha na ek shock ki jarurat hai unhe... aur aaj ke accident me unhe wo shock laga... unhone sayad rajveer ko ghayal hote

hue dekha isiliye wo is tarah...

dadi:- matalab... meri shalu bilkul theek...

yudi:- dadi... wo theek ho chuki hai... but unki final conditions unki reports aur check up ke baad pata chalegi... par jitna mujhe pata hai...

mera profession aur mera dil dono keh rahe hai ki sayad aap logon ko 5 saal purani shalini mil gayi hai... (all smiled...)...

naveen in his heart:- thankyou bhagwaan mere sir se ek bojh hataane ke liye thanku... bas ab rajveer ko theek kar do... (tabhi ek nurse

blood ki bottles lekar daud ke operation theatre ki ore jati hai... sab fir se rajveer ke liye pareshan the...)...

huda's place...

huda:- cheers...

ritu:- cheers...

huda:- ab tak to buri khabar aa jani chahiye thi...?

ritu:- dont worry huda... aa jayegi... mere kaan yeh sunne ke liye taras rahe hai ki rajveer singh shekhawat is no more... aur naina

bechari...

huda:- right...aur rajveer ke ghar walo ki jaan basti hai na usme... wo to gaye... tumhari wo pagal saut to waise hi zinda lash hai... ab

rajveer bhi mar gaya to bechare shekhawats... naina kaha tha na... bahut bhari padega tumhe... bahut raj raj karti thi... ab na rahega raj..

na rahegi tumhari khushiya... tum agar huda ki nahi to tumhe raj ki bhi nahi hone dunga...

ritu :- wo to theek hai but plzz yar dont call that pagal shalini is my saut ok...

huda:- kyun galat kaha... ha ha ha...

ritu:- jab maine us naveen ko kabhi apna pati nahi mana... na pyar kiya to kis baat ki saut...

huda:- just wait for the good news...

back to hospital...

aise hi kuchh aur ghante beet gaye... finally doctors bahar aate hai... (naina aur baki sab daud ke wahan jate hai...)...

naina(with tears):- doctor woh mere pati... mere raj theek hai na doctor...?

doctor:- mrs shekhawat calm down...

viren:- kya calm down dr mera beta... wo...

doctor:- dekhiye mr shekhawat... mr rajveer ka bahut bura accident hua hai... humne aur bhi special test liye hai... ek baar uski proper

report aa jaye tabhi hum bata sakienge ki unki real condition kya hai... filhal to operation to kar dia hai n he is under observation... unhe

icu me shift kar dia hai... aap loge sabra se kaam lijiye... (dr left... naina naveen ke gale lag kar rone lagti hai...)

naina:- bhaiya... raj... bhaiya raj ko kuchh nahi hona chahiye... main mar jaungi bhaiya...

naveen:- naina kuchh nahi hoga use...( naina ki nazar ishita pe gayi jo chup chap si chair pe baithi ICU ke door ko dekh rahi thi... naina

naveen ko chhod kar ishita ke pass jati hai...)...

naina:- ma... aap... ma... kuchh nahi hoga unhe...

ishita:- mera veer... pehle shalu ab veer... mere bachhe... viren kuchh kijiye...

viren ( holding her soulder):- ishita... dr ne kaha na... abhi test baki hai kuchh nahi hoga use aap dono sambhalo khud ko... kuchh nahi

hoga use...

bani:- ha aunty... uncle sahi keh rahe hai raj ko kuchh nahi hoga... naina tu bhi sambhal khud ko...

aise hi dekhte - dekhte... pura din aur rat guzar gayi rajveer ko hose to aa gaya tha... par medicine ki wajah se wo so raha tha... abhi tak

koi use nahi mil paya tha... reports bhi aa jati hai... dr viren aur naina ko apne cabin me bulate hai... aalekh bhi jata hai...

viren;- ji doctor kahiye... mera beta ab theek to hai na... kya hum use mil sakte hai... aapne kaha tha ki use...

dr:- ji mr shekhawat... unhe hose to aa gaya hai but...

naina:- par kya... wo theek to hai na... boliye...

dr:- ji nahi... ab aap loge meri baat dhyaan se suniye... bahari taur pe to sirf unka ek hath aur pair fracture hua hai... aur kafi kharoche

hai... but internally he is deeply injured... ( dhamaake on all's face...)... unke spinal cord me chot lagi hai... jiski wajah se he is

paralysed... ( again dhamake...)... and jahan tak baat karne ka sawaal hai... abhi wo kuchh bol nahi payeinge bcz he is too week for

that... but he can ... abhi sirf unka ek hath aur upper body sahi hai... baki ab treatment me depend karega... ( all were too shocked to

say anything... but aalekh said)...

aalekh:- dr... kuchh to ilaaz hoga na... hum veer ka achha se achha...

dr:- ha hai... par time lagega...main yeh nahi keh raha hu ki unka spinal cord damage hua hai... thank god aisa nahi hai... unhe us jagah

chot aai hai... agar unhe proper medicine di jaye,... aur proper dekhbhal ki jaaye... to i m sure time lagega but wo bilkul pehle ki tarah ho

jayeinge... abhi main unka check up karta hu... fir aap loge unse mil sakte hai... ( dr cabin se chale jate hai... unke peeche viren aalekh

aur naina bahar aate hai... sabhi loge unse puchhne lagte hai...)...

yudi:- uncle kya kaha dr ne... achha main khud hi dr achhe se baat karta hu... ( aur yudi dr ke peeche jata hai... as wo khud bhi dr hai

wo jyada achhi tarah se samajh payega...)...

ishita:- kahiye na... kya kaha dr ne...

pooja:- bol na aalekh... naina bolo na... papa aap toh... aakhir veer theek hai na...?

viren ( crying):- kya batau main... ( ishita held him)...

ishita:- kya hua hai use viren...?? boliyeee...

viren:- wo veer...( he told them everything... sabhi shocked the...)...

pooja:- nahi... nahi... aisa nahi... mera veer... ( she is crying ali held her...)...

ishita;- kuchh nahi hoga use... kuchh nahi...( she hugs viren n crying)...

aalekh door khada tha... uska back in sab ki taraf tha... bani uske pass jati hai... aur uske soulder pe hath rakhti hai... aalekh apni num

aakhon se bani ko dekhta hai... aur bina kuchh kahe... bani sab samajh jati hai aur aalekh ko hug kar leti hai... sabhi kisi na kisi ka sahara

liye apna gum bat rahe the... par naina... uska kya... wo to toot si gayi thi... kyuki uska sahara khud beshahara tha... naina apne aanshun

pochti hai... aur icu ki taraf badhti hai ki dr bahar aate hai...

dr:- ji mr rajveer ko puri tarah se hose to aa gaya hai... unhe private ward me bhi sift kar dia hai... he completely out of danger but khatra

hai... as he is paralysed... agar care nahi ki gayi... ya unonhe tension li... to ho sakta hai ki unka pura body hi...

naina( shouted):- kuchh nahi hoga unhe... kuchh bhi nahi... ( naina ward me chali jati hai... peeche sab log... koi rok hi nahi paya apne

aap ko... but in sabke beech koi tha jo sirf bhagwaan ke pass khada unhe dekh raha tha... ragini ha... wo bas bhagwaan ke saamne thi pure

time aur ab dheere - dheere rajveer ke ward ki ore ja rahi thi...)...

naina jakar rajveer ko dekhti hai... jo ki apni aankhien band karke leta tha... rajveer ko sab pata hai ki use kya hua hai... but humesha ki

tarah apna dard chhipana rajveer ko aata hi hai... sabki aahat se rajveer ne apni aakhien kholi... uski nazar sabse pehle naina pe gayi...

naina ki halat kharab thi... rajveer samajh gaya tha ki naina ko aaj bhi uski parwaah hai... uski mom... wo bas roye ja rahi thi... rajveer

ne kuchh bolne ki kosis ki but wo bol nahi pa raha tha...

nurse:- dekhiye... aap abhi kuchh mat boliye... abhi bahut week hai... aur aap sab bhi bahar jaiye plzz...

ishita aur viren rajveer ke mathe ko chhumte hai... aalekh num aakhon se apne veer ko dekh raha tha... jo uske bardast ke bahar tha... aur

pooja... na chahte hue bhi ro padi... aur bahar bhaag gayi... dr ander aaye...

dr:- dekhiye... ab aap sab bahar jaiye...

sab bahar aate hai... dr bhi aate hai...

naina:- dr hum raj ko ghar kab tak le ja sakte hai...

dr:- kya yeh aap kya keh rahi hai... inhe ghar... ghar kaise...ek hafte tak to yeh hil bhi nahi sakte... aur uske baad hum yahi par inhe...

naina:- nahi dr... i promise u main apne pati ka achhe se achha khayaal rakhungi... lekin main unhe yahan nahi rehne dungi... aap jo

chahe,... jaisa chahe sare instruments sab hum ghar me lagwa deinge,... par yahan nahi...

naveen:- naina yeh tum...

naina:- ek minute bhaiya... boliye dr kya aisa ho sakta hai...

dr:- ji ha... agar aap unki dekh rekh aur excercise ki responsibility leti hai... to ek hafte baad hum unhe discharge kar deinge...

naina:- ji main unka khayal rakhungi...( dr left...)...

rishabh:- naina yeh tum kya... chalo ab yahan se... wo theek hai... zinda hai wo... ab tum yahan nahi rahogi... humne jo faisla...

naina ( shouting):- i dont care... aap keh bhi kaise sakte hai yeh... wahan mere pati... aur aap... mana ki main unse naraz thi... lekin itani

bhi nahi ki jab mere pati ko meri sabse jyada jarurat ho main unka sath na dun... jab unke sath saat fere liye the... tabse unke sath mera jo

rishta juda hai... wo har ek rishte se bada hai mere liye...

rishabh:- par usne jo tere sath kia...?

naina:- mujhe koi farq nahi padta... par aise waqt me main unka sath nahi chhodungi... aur main unhe theek karke rahungi... unhe

purana rajveer bana ke rahungi...

naveen:- naina...

naina:- ab aap loge ja sakte hai... yahan mere pati aur mere sath humara pariwaar hai...

naveen:- theek hai... jab tak wo theek nahi ho jata sirf tab tak... chalo ragini... chaliye papa... (ragini jana nahi chahti thi... but

mazboor hokar chali gayi...)

huda's place...

ritu:- wo bach kaise gaya... uske sath wo shalini bhi thi... achha hota dono mar jate...

huda:- uski kismat ek baar achhi ho sakti hai... bar - bar nahi... hume kuchh aur sochna hoga...

yahan sab ke liye khushi ki baat yeh thi ki shalini ab puri tarah theek thi... sab se baat karti thi... but rajveer ko lekar pareshan thi,...

naina ne use wada kia hai ki wo rajveer ko khayaal rakhegi... sab shalini ko cheer karte hai... even ragini bhi mil kar gayi hai use... par

naveen aur rishabh nahi aaye na shalini ko milne na rajveer ko dekhne... rishabh to gusse aur apne ahankaar me nahi aaye... aur naveen...

usme himmat nahi thi... kyuki agar wo rajveer ko dekhne aata to use shalini ka bhi saamna karna padta... jiske liye wo ready nahi tha...
shalini ko discharge kar dia gaya tha... wo roz rajveer se milne ko kehti... but kyunki abhi abhi wo trauma se bahar aai hai... use jayada

tension nahi de sakte the... isiliye ghar me dadi aur pooja uska khayaal rakhti thi... aur hospital me naina aur ishita rajveer ke sath hoti...

Karyeshu Daashi... Karneshu Mantri...
Bhojeshu Mata...Shayneshu Rambha...
...,,,,...,,,,,,,...,,,,,,...
(abhi bhi rajveer hospital me hai... bolne laga hai... par naina se kuchh bolne ki himmat usme nahi thi... naina uska bahut khayal

rakhti thi... )

Patni, Pati ke liye de - de apni jaan...
Aurat se bhadke naa koi yahan...
(naina rajveer ko soup pila rahi hai... aur uske hath ki excercise kara rahi hai...)

Patni, Pati ke liye de - de apni jaan...
Aurat se bhadke naa koi yahan...
(rajveer ko ghar me shift kia gaya... naina ek pal ke liye bhi rajveer ko akela nahi chhodti hai... wo uski saving kar rahi hai... rajveer use

dekhe ja raha hai...)

sukh me bhi sath de, dukh me bhi sath de...
yeh bane sewikaa... premikaaa...
(naina rajveer ko khana khilati hai... fir uske face ko saf karke... use lita kar use cover karke uske pair ki malish karti hai...)

rajveer ko pyas lagti hai... to naina ki ore dekhta hai jo ki sofe me so rahi thi... wo khud glass uthane ki kosis karta hai... par glass chut

jata hai... naina jaag jati hai... aur daud kar aati hai...

Patni, Pati ke liye de - de apni jaan...
Aurat se bhadke naa koi yahan...
(naina rajveer ko sheedha karke use pani pilati hai... aur uske lips ko apne aanchal se saf kati hai...)

Tyaag aur Samarpan... hai patni ka naam...
yeh pati ki sewa... kare subah - shaam...
(naina rajveer ko chalane ki kosis kar rahi hai... par wo girne lagta hai... naina use sambhalti hai... aur bithati hai... fir uske hath pair

dabane lagti hai... )

brat rakhe... duaa de... puzaran bane...
sirf prem dhaage se... jeevan bandhe...
( naina mandir me hai... aur vat brachh ke phere lekar apne vat savitri ke brat ko pura kar rahi hai... taki uske pati ki umra badhe aur wo

theek ho jaaye...)

mamta ki chandni... yeh aisi raushni...
jo... har... andhera mita de...
yeh naya... roop hai devi ka...
(naina rajveer ko wheel chair me bitha ke park lekar jati hai... wahan dono chup chap baithe... bachho ko dekh rahe hai... naina uth kar

jati hai... aur ek bachhe se ball lekar rajveer ki taraf fekti hai... aur rajveer apne usi hath se ball pakad leta hai... jo kaam nahi kar raha

tha... )

Patni, Pati ke liye de - de apni jaan...
Aurat se bhadke naa koi yahan...
(jahan rajveer hairaan tha... aur apne hath ko dekh raha tha... wahi naina ke chehre pe muskaan thi... aur aankhon me aanshun...)

Patni, Pati ke liye de - de apni jaan...
Aurat se bhadke naa koi yahan...
( rajveer ko tension lene ko mana kia gaya tha... par wo leta tha... is wajah se... uski kuchh reports negative aayi hai... naina ki ummeed

feeki pad rahi thi... as jitna wo rajveer ko theek karna chah rahi thi... rajveer ki haalat kharab ho rahi thi...)

jo nahi hai.. patni...to kya hai pati...
iski mannatto ka... sila hai pati...
(naina ne rajveer ki salamati ke liye mannat mangi hai... isiliye apne kness ke bal par seedhiya chadh kar mata rani ke darbaar par ja rahi

hai... aas pass ke log use dekh rahe hai... uske knees se khoon nikal raha hai... par use koi fark nahi pad raha hai... use bas rajveer ki

salamati chahiye...)

jo kabhi bhi patni, se... dhokha kare...
wo na zindagi me... kabhi khush rahe...
(naina rajveer ko mandir laati hai... aur uske hatho se milkar puja karwati hai... aur uske hath se daan karwa rahi hai... aur rajveer bas

use dekhe ja raha hai...)

jisne bhi hai kahi... yeh baat hai sahi...
samjho ise... isko jaano...
yeh toh hai sundara... mallikaa...
(naina ek mazar pe jati hai... aur mannat ka dhaga bandhti hai... aur ek tabiz lakar rajveer ke gale me pehna deti hai... naina ki mannto ka

sila tha... uski sewa ka sila tha ki rajveer theek ho raha tha... yeh 4 mahine naina ne sirf rajveer ki sewa ki thi...)

Patni, Pati ke liye de - de apni jaan...
Aurat se bhadke naa koi yahan...
sukh me bhi sath de, dukh me bhi sath de...
yeh bane sewikaa... premikaaa...
(naina rajveer ko ek mandir me le jati hai... aur abhi dono mandir ke peeche khade hai... naina uth kar rajveer ko dekhte hue peeche

chalne lagti hai... jahan khaai type ki jagah hai... rajveer dekhta hai.. aur shocked ho jata hai...)...

rajveer:- naina... pagal ho gayi ho kya... peeche gir jaaogi...

naina:- aapko kya karna... aapko to maza aata hai mujhe dard dene me... wahi kar rahi hun...

rajveer:- naina aisa mat kaho... main main sharminda hun... tum janti ho...

naina:- main us bare me baat nahi kar rahi... itani hi parwaah hai to bacha lijiye... itani hi parwaah hai to uthiye... mere liye na sahi apne

pariwaar ke liye... warna main to ja rahi hu... apko theek karna tha... par ab sayad usme bhi nakaam ho gayi main...

naina peeche chalne lagi... rajveer ke hath to theek ho chuke the... but wo abhi bhi chal nahi sakta tha... rajveer uthne ki kosis kar raha

tha... par use dard ho raha tha... uski aankhon se aanshun behne lage... naina ne apna face turn kar lia... par ruki nahi... kyuki wo janti

hai... yeh karna jaruri tha... rajveer dheere - dheere khada hota hai... naina bas 4 kadam ke bad girne wali thi... rajveer uth kar 3 kadam

chalta hai... aur gir jata hai... naina mudti hai... aur apna hath aage karke khadi hoti hai... rajveer sir utha kar naina ko dekhta hai... aur

fir kosis karta hai... aur khada ho jata hai... aur kuchh kadam ladkhadate hue chalta hai...

Karyeshu Daashi... Karneshu Mantri...
Bhojeshu Mata...Shayneshu Rambha...
(naina ka hath tham leta hai... aur apne pass kheechta hai... naina uske seene se takra jati hai... rajveer use hug kar leta hai... but itna

achanak chalna rajveer ke liye bahut jyada tha to naina ki bahon me behose ho jata hai...)

movie:- Hum aapke dil me rehte hai...

naina kuchh logo ki madad se rajveer ko hospital laati hai... aur doc ko sab batati hai... doc rajveer ka complete check up karte hai...

doc;- hats off to u mrs rajveer... aapne sach me chamatkar kar dia... warna accident ke baad jo inki haalat thi... koi aur hota to kam se

kam sal ya do saal leta chalne me par aapne to sirf kuchh mahino me unhe puri tarah theek kar dia...

naina (Smiling):- matalab raj...

doc:- ji ha he is absolutly fine now... reports jitna mujhe inki previous reports se lag raha hai.. positive hongi,,,,, bas kuchh din ka rest aur...

fir yeh wahi rajveer ho jayinge jo 4 mahine pehle the...

naina ( tears);- thankyou doc...

rajveer's ward...

rajveer ko hose aata hai... aur use sab yad aata hai... wo apne pairo ki taraf dekhta hai... aur move karta hai... wo hill pa rahe the... tabhi

doc aur naina aate hai...

doc:- hows u mr rajveer...?

rajveer:- m fine doc... doc mere pair...

doc:- u r absolutly fine...

rajveer:- matalab main... i can walk doc,,...

doc:- yes u can... but dheere - dheere...

rajveer:- thankyou doc... thanks alot...

doc:- thanku mujhe nahi apni wife ko kahiye... aapko meri dawao se jyada inki care aur sewa ne theek kia hai... u r indeed a very lucky

man jo aapke pass inke jaisi patni hai... ( rajveer looks at naina... naina floor pe dekh rahi thi... fir bahar chali jati hai... aur doc

bhi...)...

rajveer:- yes m the luckiest man in this world... thankyou naina...

aise hi 10 din aur beet gaye...sab bahut khush hai... kyuki ab rajveer bhi bilkul theek tha... aise hi pura din beeta... bahut kuchh badla

hai in 4 mahino me... viren ne huda aur ritu ke khilaf complain ki thi... but dono hi ab bail pe riha hai... par case chal raha hai... is beech

naveen shalini se mila usne manfi bhi mangi... but shalini ne manf nahi kia hai abhi tak... jahan tak ragini ka sawaal hai... usne accept to

kar lia hai ki rajveer sirf naina ka hai... par wo chahti hai ki sahi mayno me dono mil jaaye... kyuki yeh bhi sach hai ki in char mahino me

naina ne purani ek bhi baat ka zikra nahi kia tha rajveer se... wahi aalekh bani aur pooja ali charo rajveer ke liye khush hai... aur wo bhi

Rajveer aur Naina ko RaiNa bana dekhna chahte hai... aur jahan tak ghar walo ka sawaal tha to sabhi ne obiously rajveer ko manf kar

dia tha...

a fine day...

rajveer ko aalekh ghar chhod kar chala jata hai... as itane din se rajveer ki jagah aalekh ne sab sambhal kar rakha tha... aur ali bhi uski

madad karta tha... is baat se naveen ne koi objection nahi lia... obiously naina ki wajah se...

rajveer apne kamre me aata hai... aur kuchh soch raha tha...

rajveer:- aaj main naina ko apne dil ki baat bata dunga... yes... ab aur nahi naina mujhe tumse bahut kuchh kehna hai... bahut kuchh sunna

hai... par yeh hai kahan...? naina... naina... naina... ( koi jawaab nahi deta...)... ( rajveer neeche jata hai...) naina... (shalini aati

hai...)...

shalini:- are veer kyun upar neeche kar raha hai... abhi itna mat chal...

rajveer:- ok di... but naina kahan hai...?

shalini:- bhabhi... pata nahi... main to pooja ke sath bahar gayi thi... kyun kya hua... bhabhi ko miss kar raha hai... (she winks )...

rajveer:- shut up... batao na kahan hai...?

shalini:- are mujhe kya pata mom se puchh...

rajveer:- u are useless... ( aur ishita ke room ki taraf jata hai...)...

shalini ( chhilla kar):- tere se kam...

Viren _ ishita's room...

dono bed pe mayush se baithe the ki rajveer aata hai...

rajveer:- mom... mom wo naina kaha hai...?

viren:- wo chali gayi...

rajveer:- chali gayi... matalab... kahan gayi...?

viren:- apne ghar...

rajveer:- oh kab aane ko bola hai usne...

ishita :-woh nahi aayegi... ( dhamake on rajveer's face...) yeh le tere liye dekar gayi hai... ( ishita rajveer ko ek letter deti hai... rajveer

wo letter leta hai aur apne room me chala jata hai... aur khol kar read karne lagta hai...)...

Mr Rajveer...

sorry Mr RV... main jis maksad se aapke ghar me thi wo pura hua... kahin na kahin main apne aap ko doshi manti thi ki mere pariwaar

ki wajah se shalu di ki zindagi barbaad ho gayi... aap hasna bhool gaye... par ab sab kuchh theek ho gaya hai... di ab theek hai... aur maine

ma se wada kia tha aapko theek karungi... ab aap 100% theek ho... ab mera is ghar me koi kaam nahi... aapko aapki azaadi aur zindagi

mubarak ho... bas insaaniyat ke naate mujh par ek ehsaan kar dena... kosis karna ki humara aamna saamna kabhi na ho... good bye...

Naina ### aluhwalia.. (shekhawat likhne wali thi but scratch kar dia...)...

Tears flows down to Rajveer's eyes...


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