a short story about a lover!!

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10th grade
As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl next to me. She was my so called "best friend". I stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was mine. But she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it. After class, she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed the day before and handed them to her. She said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I wanted to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

11th grade
The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had broke her heart. She asked me to come over because she didn't want to be alone, so I did. As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine. After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie, and three bags of chips, she decided to go to sleep. She looked at me, said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Senior year
The day before prom she walked to my locker. "My date is sick" she said; he's not going to go well, I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that if neither of us had dates, we would go together just as "best friends". So we did. Prom night, after everything was over, I was standing at her front door step! I stared at her as she smiled at me and stared at me with her crystal eyes. I want her to be mine, but she doesn't think of me like that, and I know it. Then she said "I had the best time, thanks!" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Graduation Day
A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I could blink, it was graduation day. I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it. Before everyone
went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and cried as I hugged her. Then she lifted her head from my shoulder and said, "you're my best friend, thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. A Few Years Later

Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is getting married now. I watched her say "I do" and drive off to her new life, married to another man. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't see me like that, and I knew it. But before she drove away, she came to me and said "you came!". She said "thanks" and kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.
Funeral

Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my "best friend". At the service, they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years. This is what it read:
I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn't notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell him, I want him to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love him but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me!
I wish I did too... I thought to my self, and I cried.

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hope u liked it

Mrs Laiba Laksh😳

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Shazii thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was awesome but so sad awwww but it was a very god story luved it if the boys anagd tell u shudve wrote shaz loves u and shes not shy lol jk anyways luved it just like i luv yu 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: memze

it was awesome but so sad awwww but it was a very god story luved it if the boys anagd tell u shudve wrote shaz loves u and shes not shy lol jk anyways luved it just like i luv yu 😛

haha no way! i would name the girl Laiba 😳 but at the end inb my diary i would write i luv u but i luv Lakshya more 😆 😳but still its a sad story 😔

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome soo sad but gr8 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwww great story but also sad 😭 😭 😭 they both were shy but htey should have said it once ohhhhhhhh I'm gona cry god why dose my brother had to be at home beacuse now he is going to tease me if I cry 😭 pls do write another stroy like this bu tnot with sad ending 😊

GREAT AWESOME AMAZING NICE STORY 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i read that it was from some love thing website forgot but yeah it's nice
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 loved the story but but it was veryyyy sad man 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i read this before.. its soo sadd.. yet soo beautifull!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

i read this before.. its soo sadd.. yet soo beautifull!!!!

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yeah its my friend who send me i dunno from where she took it! i just luved the story so posted it😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my gosh, that was so sweet! I loved how all the lines flowed with each other! The dialogues were awesome! That was really really good!

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