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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
lovely update dear.ian eagerly waiting whose pair of RK . maan and rk bonding nice.geet such dramabazz.prankster.and chubbly girl.geet know maan is real owner and innocent that sam said about maan all lie. geet feel guilty and both patch up to friend. sowmaya and piya both are caring to rk. whose the person send that letter to RK.i am waiting for that mystery revealed. sry for delay comment and thanks for pm and continue soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Rishbala fans want RK Madhu 2gether n Maaneet fans want Maaneet 2gether.Hence double ending.

Originally posted by: Avinanda120

Hii

di,
Just great.
But di why two ends is it necessary?

Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Fantastic update. Loved it.
Geet knows the reality of maan n rks drama.
Now maaneet r friends but maan has started to have feelings for her.
Rk is confused between saumya n piya.
Waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
lovely parts,,
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Hi jasmine
you are making each and every scene so effective
I like is so much in all your FF's
coming to this story
even this show I have now watched but as usual with your pics I was able to get your
story
its a nice story dear
loving it in all the way
keep updating 😉😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Wow nice part Samera blame Maan for molesting her but Maan is innocent & RK prob it also . At last Geet knows that Maan is a good person,,, Piya RK se pyar karti hai. Nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Romance in Summer Part4 (Ending for Rishbala love story)

Romance in Summer Part 4

I did'nt plan double climax initially.But I did'nt want to upset Rishbala fans.So I wrote this ending for Rishbala fans who want Rishbala to unite.This is only a Rishbala ending.Maaneet fans..plz keep reading this SS as it has not got over yet.The story will move forward.Maaneet ending is yet to come.



RK to Maan:I have found a new way to find the girl who loves me.
Maan:What is that?
RK :I decided 2 find out that girl arranging a birthday party.

RK with Maan's help arranges his b'day party.it was a nice celebration.
Maan makes an announcement:4 my friend,i'm giving a special b'day gift.RK,u luv music right? its 4 u.
suddenly Abhijeet Sawant and; Amit Sana come 2 sing:

Yeh dosti hum nahin todenge
Todenge dam magar tera saath na chhodenge... (2)

Ae meri jeet teri jeet, teri haar meri haar
Sun ae mere yaar
Tera gham mera gham, meri jaan teri jaan
Aisa apna pyaar

Jaan pe bhi khelenge, tere liye le lenge
Jaan pe bhi khelenge, tere liye le lenge
Sab se dushmani

Yeh dosti hum nahin todenge

Todenge dam magar
Tera saath na chhodenge
- sholay

RK becomes emotional and hugs him.
Geet becomes touched by their friendship.
RK makes an announcement:2day as the part of this party,there wud be some fun.
Piya:sure,we'll dance.
RK:no no.only music.
Soumya:i'll sing abhijeet's sweet romantic song.
RK:no.i'll sing a few lines of a song.u hav to sing the rest.
RK whispers to Maan:the girl who sings the rest of the song will be the one who luves me.RK starts singing.


Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se


Geet sings the rest.


Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
- Jo-jeeta-wohi-sikandar



RK becomes happy 2 find out his girl.
He whispers:Madhu...means Madhu is the girl who loves me.
.Maan thinks:So Geet loves RK.I simply thought of unnecessarily things.
Maan feels embarrassed of his childish crush on Geet.

RK dreams of romancing Geet..his Madhu...

Aaa aa...

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai


Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya


Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda-- Bachna Ae Haseeno

RK goes 2 Geet and holds her giving her a romantic smile:so at last i found you.
Geet:what?
RK:u were the 1 who was fooling me.
Geet:What?I did'nt understand.
he tells her everything from the beginning.
Geet:nonsense.u r mistaken.i'm not that person.
he:Geet,i know that u r naughty,but plz don't fool me again,after all u r playing with luv.
she:i know what luv is.u don't hav 2 teach me that.but believe me,i'm not that person.
RK:then how cud u sing the whole song?
she:I had heard this song from ur CD player.it attracted me.it reached my heart directly.that's it.
RK becomes upset and leaves.
Geet:RK...
RK walks off without minding her.

RK goes and stands in front of all.
Dadaji Rajender:Why did you call us?
RK:Because I want to tell you all my truth.
Rajender:What truth?
RK:About my real identity.
Maan:RK..
RK:Maan..you can't stop me today.Everyone has to know my truth today as it's necessary.
Maan becomes helpless.

RK tells every1 how he was playing the drama ..pretending 2 be the owner while the real owner is Maan.
.every1 was shocked.
Dadaji Rajender gets angry:You fooled us.Because of you Maan became low in our eyes.
Dadimaa Savitri weeps:Why did you fool us RK?You could have told us the truth.
Rajendar to Maan:Sorry Maan.Without knowing who you are we did'nt care for you.
Maan:Don't say sorry dadaji.But please forgive RK.He did'nt do it purposefully.He did that only because he was always insulted because of his status.
RK:Dadadji..Dadimaa...I am really sorry.Please forgive me.I promise that I will work harder and gain something,
Rajender and Savitri become so emotional that they hug him.Everyone smiles.
RK tells:I want to tell you all one more thing.
Savitri:Now what else you want to say RK?Tell fast.
RK:there was a girl who used 2 send me gifts writing that she loves me.
They are surprised.
Rajendar:Who is that girl RK?
Savitri:We want to see her now.
RK:but actually she was fooling me.bcoz she did'nt come 2 me at all.If she was serious about her love she would have come to me directly.She does'nt love me.And I am sure that after knowing that I am a loser not a rich man she will never approach me.
Everyone becomes upset.
Savitri:Don't worry about her RK.The one who ignores you knowing that you are not actually rich is not genuine.She never loved you.She was only fooling you.So forget her.

Dadaji and I will get you the best girl for you.
RK smiles painfully.
suddenly a girl screams:i'm not fooling u RK.i really luv u.Even after knowing that you are penniless I never stopped loving you.Because I did'nt start loving you seeing your money.My love started since our childhood RK.plz don't leave me & marry somebody else.
Everyone stares at that girl.
Everyone is shocked to see her.It is none other than Geet.
RK is surprised:Madhu..you?
Geet:Yes me.
RK:But you said you are not that girl.
Geet:I just wanted to play hide and seek with you for fun.Not because I don't love you.Understand duffer..?
Everyone smiles.
Savitri:Geet...you proved once again that you are the most mischievous girl of our family.
Geet is embarrassed.She looks at RK with tension.
RK goes near her and cups her face in his hands:Madhu...you really love me?Is it true?
Geet:Yes RK.Why don't you believe my love?
RK:But you never talked sweetly to me.You only fought with me.
Geet:Because I did'nt want you to know that I love you so easily.I have been loving you since our childhood despite of all fights which took place between us.Though i expressed anger to you whenever you teased me I used to enjoy you call me Madhu because of my honey crazy secretly.
RK is really surprised:I never understood your love Madhu.Even after coming here you never looked at me.
Madhu:I watched you every moment.But you did'nt notice it as I looked at you without your knowledge.
RK:Because of that I thought it's either Piya or Soumya who loves me.
Soumya and Piya are shocked:What?We?
RK:Ya..because you both were caring for me.
Soumya:That's because you are our good friend RK.
Piya:But you misunderstood our friendship.
RK is embarrassed: I am so foolish.
Geet smiles:Yes ..you are foolish my dear duffer...
Everybody laughs.
Geet:I love you RK.
RK:I love you Madhu.
Everyone smiles.
Rajendar:We will inform your parents and we will conduct the engagement function soon.Then wedding.
RK:I can't marry Madhu until I settle down with my career.Till now I was slack.Now I want to do something serious for my Madhu.Because i don't want to be a loser husband.I want to make Madhu feel proud of me.
Everyone smiles.
Rajendar pats him:Now I feel proud of you my son.
Geet to RK:I will wait for you RK.
They share a sweet eye lock.

The parents of RK and Geet come and they conduct their engagement party..
RK-Geet exchange rings.
RK-Geet start dancing.

Maahi ve maahi ve, that's the way maahi ve
Tere maathe jhumar damke
Tere kaanon baali chamke hai re
Maahi ve


Tere haathon kangna khanke
Tere pairon paayal chhanke hai re
Maahi ve
Nainon se bole rabba rabba
Mann mein dole rabba rabba
Amrit ghole rabba rabba tu soniye
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja maahi ve
Everybody say soni soni aaja maahi ve - 3
That's the way maahi ve
Soumya wears contact lens for the party and walk..
Soumya:I have worn contact lens.Still I find it difficult .Why?
Slok:Because you may take some time to get adjusted to contact lens.Very soon you will be fine with it.
She smiles and walks.Suddenly he holds her hand.She looks at him.
Slok:Shall I have the pleasure to dance with you?
She blushes:Sure.
He smiles.
They both start dancing.

O teri aankhen kaali kaali
Tera gora gora mukhda hai re
Maahi ve
Teri rangat jaise sona
Tu chaand ka jaise tukda hai re
Maahi ve
Maan finds something stuck on his shoe while walking.He looks at his shoe and finds an earring.He takes it in his hands.
Maan:Whose earring is this?
Suddenly he sees Piya without earring in one ear.He goes near her.
Maan:Guess it's your earring.
Piya:Thank you so much.
Piya remembers removing her earring and throwing it down seeing Maan coming that way.She smirks.
Piya does'nt take it from Maan.
Maan:Why are you not taking it back?
Piya smiles at him romantically:Because I am waiting for you to put it on my ears with your hands.
Maan is stunned.Seeing her naughty smile slowly he too smiles.
He puts the earring on her ear.
They share a romantic eye lock,
Piya says:Since the day I reached here I have been attracted to you Maan.Guess the time has reached where i should express my love to you.
Maan says in his mind:Guess finally I found the girl of my life.
Maan holds her hand and runs to the dance floor.They join RK Geet and Slok Soumya in dancing.

Tere gaal gulaabi rabba rabba
Chaal sharaabi rabba rabba
Dil ki kharaabi rabba rabba tu soniye
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja maahi ve
Everybody say soni soni aaja maahi ve- 3(KHNH)





The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Guess what,,,,yeh mismatch ho gaya. O no Geet RK, Maan Piya 😲
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Superb ending.
Even in serious matter, madhu is teasing rk. Naughty girl.
Beautiful story .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Aww I thought maan will wait for his geet..
But maan piya...
Rk geet...
Will wait for your another end dear...
Do update soon
It's actually fun geet first denied rk but when he emotionally bm her,she herself came out...
Maan did gave feelings for geet..
Waiting for next end

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