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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Thanks for the PM
Lovely Storyline
RK saved Maan who is orphan and they became best friends, Maan offered RK to stay at his estate and RK accepted , RK family was coming to meet RK and Maan asked RK to behave like the owner of estate and Maan will behave like his assistant, one of RK,s uncle daughter loves RK and RK will have to find her, two daughters Soumaya and Piya came first but Geet did not, RK told Maan about Geet who is very naughty and fun loving but when Geet came she was serious but in reality she was fooling everyone
Eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
wow...loved the first part...
rk want's to marry due to property šŸ˜•
geet is stung by bee due to having a lot of honey and rk name her madu...šŸ˜†
wow...you have mixed risabala, manneet, abay and piya
Geet doesn't to come ...i thought kuch hu toh nahin...she was making them foolšŸ˜†
awesome
Edited by pixi_nightingal - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Thanks. Part 1 n 2 are posted together in one post.

Originally posted by: pixi_nightingal

wow...loved the first part...
rk want's to marry due to property šŸ˜•
geet is stung by bee due to having a lot of honey and rk name her madu...šŸ˜†
wow...you have mixed risabala, manneet, abay and piya
Geet doesn't to come ...i thought kuch hu toh nahin...she was making them foolšŸ˜†
awesome

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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks. Part 1 n 2 are posted together in one post.


Oh..ok thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Lovely update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Both the part was awesome
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
OMG!! interesting start...RK is a person who thinks and takes decision using his brain and Maan is a total sweetheart who takes decision using his heart...I loved both of them who are contradictory by nature , yet they are bestest friends...aww...cute bonding...
RK has three options - Madhu , Soumya and Piya , but only one of them is in love with him...I am wondering what will happen if by chance maan falls for geet / madhu...or may be Geet is for maan and Soumya is the mystery girl...I am loving that u didn't use madhu and geet as separate characters as it would have spoiled the thrill...I want to keep guessing and meanwhile enjoy the journey of two best friends Maan-RK and the way they find the mystery girl and fall in love with their soulmates in doing so...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Romance in Summer Part 3


Rishbala Maaneet readers don't worry.This SS will have 2 endings.So both Maaneet n Rishbala will unite.


Geet is having honey secretly behind a tree.Suddenly she hears a voice from behind:Madhu...
Geet is shocked.
G:Damn it..RK saw me.
She turns back in embarrassment.
To her shock Along with RK,Maan is also there.They both are laughing.Geet is hurt.
G:Why are you laughing?
RK:You can never change Madhu.Still crazy for honey.
Maan:RK had told me why he calls you Madhu.But i never thought it to be true and funny.
Geet stares at RK:RK..you stupid you told your friend everything about me?
RK:Of course yes.How can I not tell him how you became Madhu from Geet.
RK-Maan laugh.Geet can't tolerate it.
G:Look RK...you made me ashamed in front of your friend.I will show you.
RK:Your tantrums are not new to me.So I am ready to face all your mischievous activities which I am seeing since childhood.
G:You..idiot RK...
RK:I am not surprised to see your real avtar Madhu.But I was shocked to see you so dull and calm when you arrived here first.But now you are back to form.Your real self..

He looks at Maan:Maan..you thought I mistook Madhu.Right?Now did you see Madhu's real form?This is the real Geet...I mean Madhu...
RK-Maan laugh.Geet goes away angrily.

The next morning...

RK is walking to the estate.Suddenly he slips and falls down.To his shock he realizes that he has fallen in cow dung.Maan comes there and is shocked to see it.Geet laughs seeing it.
RK:Madhu..you?
Geet:Yes..I only put cow dung here with the help of a worker.I just bribed him and he did the duty.
How is my treat RK?I told you naa that i will show you.This is what I showed you.
Geet laughs.
RK:Did'nt expect this much.
Maan helps RK to get up.
RK:I will take bath and come.
RK goes.
Geet giggles:The whole day you need to bath to get rid of this smell.
Maan gets angry:Enough Geet..You are crossing the limit.Better you control yourself.

Geet asks him in a sarcastic manner:Who are you to advise me?
Maan:Whoever I am..don't bother..but remember that naughtiness is good,but it becomes sour and better when it crosses the limit.Understand?
Maan tries to go away.But Geet blocks his way.
Geet becomes angry:who r u to advise me?

u don't even know who ur parents are.You are just an adopted son of some dead person.
Maan's heart is torn by her words.He hides his tears.
Geet goes away in irritation.

RK takes a bath.Maan sees his hand bleeding.
Maan:Oh..when you fell down your hand got hurt.
RK:It's only a small wound.Never mind.
Suddenly Soumya comes running towards him:What happened RK?Your hand is hurt.Oh my God!
RK:It's ok Soumya.Just a small wound.
Soumya:But don't ignore it RK.

She brings first aid box and starts bandaging his hand.RK smirks at Maan.Maan smiles.
Soumya pats his shoulder:Take care RK.I need to prepare for my thesis.
RK:Ok..thanks Soumya for taking care of me.
Giving him a smile she leaves.
Maan:She is so caring towards you.Guess she is the one who loves you.
RK:Yes..I too think so Maan.Finally I understood who my future wife is.
Maan smiles.
Suddenly Piya comes running towards RK.
Piya holds his hand:Oh RK...what happened to your hand?Are you feeling pain?
RK:No Piya..it's just a small wound.
Piya:But I know that you have pain.



She caresses his bandaged area.
Maan and RK are stunned.
Piya:Are you feeling better now?
RK nods:Yes.
Piya:But take pain killer too.
She goes and brings pain killer for him.
Piya:Have it RK.You will feel better.
RK:Ok..
Piya pats his cheek:Bye RK.Take care.
RK:Thank you ...bye..
Piya smiles at him and goes.
Maan:Piya is so also caring towards you.
RK:Yes.that's what confuses me.Now I can't understand who loves me.Piya or Soumya?




a musical contest takes place in Goa.Geet,Piya,Soumya take place.They all sing.but Maan won the 1st prize.Geet becomes angry & jealous 4 that.
she tells her sisters:he might've given the judges money 4 the prize.
Piya:i don't think so,he is the better singer than us.
Soumya:ya,he rocked.
Geet becomes irritated.


A glamorous girl named Sameera comes 2 see Maan.She has studied with Maan.She is after him.

Maan is shocked:Sameera!
Sameera is holding a red rose in her hand with a seductive smile:My Maan...

She kisses it

and caresses Maan's face with it in a seductive manner.Maan gets irritated:Enough sameera.
Maan:i told u that i can't see u in a different way.plz leave me alone.

she:no,Maan,i can't.





she hugs him tightly.
he:leave me,plz stop it.
hearing the footsteps of Geet,Sameera pretends 2 be innocent and cries:leave me alone Maan.don't try 2 exploit me.i'm from a nice family.i can't do a sin.

Geet was shocked.
Maan:Geet,i did'nt do anything.its she who...

Geet:stop it.i knew that u r cheap.but u r so dirty than i expected.
Maan:Geet...this girl is telling lie.Believe me.
Geet:Stop it Maan.
RK comes:what's the matter?
Geet tells him everything.
Maan weeps:RK,i did'nt do anything like that.
RK:i know,i trust u Maan.You can never do such a thing.
Geet:RK,he is fooling u.don't believe ur assistant.
RK shouts:Madhu,hold ur tongue.u can't tell rubbish about Maan.I will not tolerate it.

Geet gets angry:RK..for this stupid assistant of yours whom you met recently you are fighting with me?
RK:Stop it Madhu.what do u know about Maan?actually we were playing a drama.Maan is the real owner of this estate.i'm only his assistant.
Geet cud'nt believe it.
RK shouts at Sameera and slaps her:tell the truth,otherwise i'll tear ur mask b4 every1 in this world.
Sameera cries:i'm sorry RK.plz don't do that.Maan is innocent.i was the 1 who did the wrong thing.

RK:did u hear Geet?
Geet bent her head.
her eyes become wet :i'm sorry Maan.
Maan smiles:its ok Geet.
he extends his arm:can u become my friend?
Geet smiles.she holds his arm:sure.


Maan's friend Slok comes from abroad.
Maan is really excited.He hugs Slok happily.
RK:Since your friend came let us party Maan.
Maan:Sure.
Slok:Party...cool...
At the party...
full of dance and music.
Piya goes near RK:RK...let's dance..
RK:Sure.
RK thinks:She must be the one who loves me.How interested she is in dancing with me!
RK starts dancing with her.


Jadoo Teri Nazar, Khushboo Tera Badan
Jadoo Teri Nazar, Khushboo Tera Badan
Tu Haan Kar Ya Naa Kar
Tu Haan Kar Ya Naa Kar
Tu Hai Meri Kiran



Suddenly Soumya comes near him:RK...you won't dance with me?
RK stammers:Soumya..I...
Soumya:Please dance with me.Otherwise I will feel bored.
RK:Ok Soumya..Piya..please excuse me.
Piya:Ok.
RK starts dancing with Soumya.



Jadoo Teri Nazar, Khushboo Tera Badan
Jadoo Teri Nazar, Khushboo Tera Badan
Tu Haan Kar Ya Naa Kar
Tu Haan Kar Ya Naa Kar
Tu Hai Meri Kiran
Tu Hai Meri Kiran-Darr

RK thinks:It's so confusing.Both want to dance with me.How will I find out who loves me?
Slok notices RK-Soumya dance.
Slok:This RK is flirting with both girls.I will stop his two timed flirting.
He goes near them.
Slok:Hey..may I have the pleasure of dancing with you?
Soumya is confused.
Geet:Soumya..Slok is the chief guest of our party.Dance with him.
Soumya nods:Ok...
Soumya dances with Slok.

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa-Race
''
Slok and; RK were dancing with Piya and Soumya.Geet is sitting alone.
Maan comes near her:why,u r not dancing?
Geet:no Maan.i'm not interested.
he:a smart girl like u don't like it?unbelievable.i know why u r not dancing.u don't have a partner 2 dance with.thats why,right?
she smiles.
Maan:Geet,can u dance with me?
she:ok. they dance 2gether.Maan was having a special feeling towards her while dancing.



Kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai - (2)

Kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai
Do char din se lagta hai jaise
Sab kuchh alag hai, sab kuchh naya hai
Kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai

Chije me rakh ke bhul jatee hu, bekhayalee me gungunatee hu
Abb akele me muskuratee hu, badalee huyee see meree ada hai
Kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai-Kal ho na ho




He thinks:Have I started loving Geet?
He smiles.

Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww...Jasmine , as I have been telling , this ff is mindblowing...awesome dear...I am loving the way you are giving us each couple's scenes...well why two endings??? I am confused , do tell me...I loved RK-Madhu fights , crazy chidlhood friends...Loving their scenes...then Our Rk fell in cow dung...aww , sweetheart geet is abig Prankster but I to loved the after scenes...I mean , ok Soumya came...cared but then even Piya came...CARED?? This is confusing...who loved him , who'll get him?? Though I am feeling soumya ka pata saaf hai...Slok ji jo agg gaye uske liye...šŸ˜› so is it Madhu , hey dear , if you are actually thinking for two endings then please do tell me how , I am really confused...I loved the Mannet fight and their friendship scenes...Hate Samaria , well Rk Trusts maan , felt happy seeing it...I loved AbhIya scenes a lot...awesome ff...mysterious too...even loved SoumAbh scenes ...waiting eagerly for next part...update jaldi...Love you...be happy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PArt 3
Well loved everyone and new entry...
Nice
Edited by pixi_nightingal - 8 years ago

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