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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superbbb update all parts are awesome plzzz pm me next time..
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Hello Everyone!!
I know its long time but trust me i didnt forget 😳

Part 6

Nupur had almost dozed off again by the time Mayank returned. She had obediently finished the soup but was trying hard not to think about Mayank's gestures or words.
"Aajao chor aon tmen. You dont look very well."
Nupur sat straight and. Merely mumbled' 'nahe theekh hoon mein.. ap bus ghar drop krden ujhe."
She gathered her stuff and was already out of the room before Mayank could formulate a reply.
after an hour of being stuck in traffic, Nupur was definitely feverish.
"Nupur are you okay?"
"Jee. Thekh hoon mein.."
No matter how her fever was, nothing could have burnt her skin the way his hand landing on hers did.she tried to remove it but he held onto it with a strong grip.
"Sirf dekh raha hoon ke fever kitna tez hai.."
Nupur was feeling too unwell for any kind of fight. Besides how can anyone fight with a man like Mayank?
she gave him a couple of seconds and than pushed her hand out of his grip. He erely sighed but didnt say anything about it.on the othr hand he had alot to say about her health.
'you are burning with fever. And this traffic is not moving at all. Kaho to ghar ke taraf wapis chalen? I wll call your dad. Besides, whenever the traffic clears I will drop you to your home."
"Nahe. Aap mjhe yaheen drop kr.den. mein taxi mein chali jaonge.'
"I never gave you that option."
Nupur looked at him with all the anger she could muster, "Apke. Option dene ya na dene ke mohtaj nahe hoon mein. Mein bus ghar jana chahti hoon. Ap yaheen side per drop krden mujhe."
He didnt reply and just kept driving the car in the directioN of her house. The car was moving at a tortoise's pace. Or a snail's pace. Which ever is slower.
AFter another half an hour of the same torture, Nupur's phone rang.
"Jee papa.."
"Kya bana phir? Rush ka to bht he bura haal hai."
"Jee 1 and a half hour se sarak per he hain. Traffic jam hai bilkul."
She had realised her mistake already but obviously it is the duty of the parents to say it out loud. Emphasizing on it over and over again.
in this cane in next 5 minutes.
"Had he hogaye wese jaldi the kya. Ruk jati. Us bhale insan ko bhe takhleef de.
At this Nupur surely wanted to interupt her father. But once they find an excuse to scold, arguing is the worst you can do to yourself.
"Ab kaho unhen wapis mur jaen. Hm khud lene aajaen gay raat ko. Bure haal hai shaher ka. Nikalne ke zaroorat he kya the.do use phone."
Taking a deep breath she handed him the phone. She did glance at his aused expression. Definitely amused.
By the time the call ended and Nupur found her mobile back in her hands, they were already taking a u-turn.
In complete silence they reached at the house. This time nupur was a bit too conscious of the way all the servants were looking at her.
"Tm mere room mein. Ja kr rest krlo.."
"Nahe mein Diya ke room mein hoon.. mazeed tamasha nahe banana mujhe apna sb ke samne.."
**
Mayank sighed and moved around in his room. As much as he wanted to be irritated By Nupur's behaviour , he kneW deep inside that she was right. It was a house full of servants and Nupur and himself. It was obvious that Nupur was getting uncomfortable.
Hehad called diya to know when she will be returning but due to the traffic, she had gone to aleena's house after the lunch. The place was closest to the restaurant and she was staying the night. Considering the recent events, diya's good mood and her decision to stay with Aleena was a good news. But that left him with the issue of what to do with Nupur's consciousnes.
The traffic jam was one of the worst ones they had ever had in the city and mayank knew it was not going to clear till late at night. And than there was the fact that Nupur practically lived on the other side of the city. He could ask Diya to come back but the procession was about to start and it would further block the traffIc.
he was lost in his thoughts when he heard the knock on the door.
It was obviously a surprise for him when he saw Nupur enter.
"Mein aajaon.."
"Han Nupur. Ao.. kuch chahiay th?"
'nhe.. ' nupur was fumbling with her dupatta and not lookingh at him.
'apko sorry kehna tha..'
'sorry?"
"Mujhe aise Nahe bolna chahiay tha. Mere wajah se ap bhe stuck hai yahan. Traffic ka bhe itna masla hai.."
"Koi baat nahe.. na to mujhe tmara bolna ghalat laga aur na he mujhe koi maslaa hai ke mein yahan tmare sath hoon.."
"Phir bhe.. Diya ka abhe message aya tha wo aleena ke pass ruke ge. Usne apko bhe bulaya but you refused.."
"Mein wese bhe nahe jata. aur aj to tm bhe ho yahan."
He. Heard Nupur sigh and than she looked directly at him,"ap ise baaten kyun krte hain?"
"Kese baaten?"
Mayank unconsciously took a step closer.
'ye ajeeb se baaten.. ap diya ke bhai hain, bachpan se dekha. Hai apko. Apne to kbhe aise koi awkward baat nah ke the. Ab ye aise ajeb baten kyun krte hain/'
"Kyunke mein pasand krta hoon tmen."
Mayank knew he had stepped in her personal space, both physically and verbally.
"And are you really sure about that? I mean you even refused to recognise me a few days ago"
He took another step closer and softly caressed her cheek, "I wonder how can you be so adorable and enticing at the same time?"
Mayank felt the shiver run down nupur's body. And before he could lose himself in her reaction, he mustered all the courge he had and he stepped back
'I like you nupur more than I ever even reotely liked any other girl, and i want to marry you!"
***
Naturally half an hour later Nupur was back in diya's roo, (she had literally ranout of ayank's roo as soon as he confessor proposed , whatever it is hat he had done.
"He actually said more thanhe d any other girl?"
Gnjan was simly stuck on that sentence. "I mean Nuur he proposed you and the reason is that he likes you better? That aint no excuse! I mean.. he actually?"
""Yes gunjan he said that.( she raised the speed and volume of her voice before Gunjan could interupt) And I know the proposal was not up to the mark according to you, (Gunjan did should "according to me at thatBoy. That girljust knew how to analyze her every word) but the point it that it was a proposal. And he qestion is hat should I do?"
"What do you want to do Nupur?"
Nuur knew Gunjanhadwanted to say aot but had settled on thisfor her sake,so she rplied ashonestly as she could without fumbling due to her nerves playing havoc with her, "I want to say yes."
Edited by mulan. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I wanted to say yess!! . .
UFFF!!

Mayank's proposal was so breathtaking .. 😳 Love love the prgression and i just love how natural you are in your writing! 🤗

Keep updating my darling!! 😳 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow mayank proposed nupur awesome eagerly waiting for nxt dear and plz pm me from nxt time whenever you give updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG!! Mehak, WELCOME BACK. You'v updated after 6 months. I LOVED THE PART & HE FINALLY PROPOSED..I cannot wait for the next part..Plz update soon..xox.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superbbb update waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sry i m late...bt its very nice to see u again
Wecome back dear
This updt is awesome
Mayank's proposal ws breathtaking
Loved it
Do continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 7
Nupur's mnd was playing all sorts of games with her that night. In a mere few hours she had imagined all the worst case scenerios of both saying yes or no to Mayank.
Also, she spent alot of time considering Mayank as her future husband.
By the time the sun was rising, Nupur had not slept at all and was no longer sure of what she should say to him. She still wanted to say a yes, but she had now considered all the pros and cons and she wasnt so sure WHY?
as if on cue, she received Gunjan's message inquiring, "you decided anything yet?"
Nupur smiled affectionately and replied with, "can I ever decide something without a discussion with you?"
"I. Know Nupur. And I thought about what you said last night. About saying a yes. He is a bit stubborn but he has always been caring towrads you. I think maybe saying a yes wouldn be all that bad."
Npur felt a weight being lifted off her heart.
"But how? I cant just go and say, okay fine. Great lets do this."
"You can call him?'
"NEVER!"
"Ummm.. how about when you meet and if he mentions something"
"I am not going back in that house to do THIS!!"
"Okay how about you simply message him.."
"But what should I say?"
"Honestly I have NO idea.'
"And you call yourself my bestfriend.!"
"Exactly I am your bestfriend not a love guru."
They were still arguing about ways to say a yes. Without realising that both of them have stopped looking at the other possible answer.
They werestill clueless about what to do when Nupur's mother called her in her room.
"Nupur beta I have to talk to you about something."
"Jee mama.."
"Wo Mayank haina.. Mayank Sharma."
Nupur was taken back by mayank's name.
"Jee mama.."
"Usne tmara proposal bhejha hai. Bachpan se samne pala bara hai. Hmen to koi aitraaz nahe. Tmare papa keh rahe thay tmse poochloon aik baar."
"Agar apko koi aitraaz nahe to mujhe bhe nahe.."
...
Nupur was calling Gunjan constantly and she was not attending the call.
"Had hai. Pata nahe kahan chali gaye hai.."
Suddenly her phone rang and she quickly picked up, "Gunjan kidhr the? Kb se phone kr rah hoon. Ab jaldi se baat suno. Mama ne bulaya tha. Kehti hin mayank ke taraf se proposal aya hai. Aur in logon ko koi aitraaz nahe. Meine kaha apko nahe to mujhe bhe nahe. Uff. Keh dia han meine. Subah se samjh he nahe aa rahe the kese kahen.."
"Nupur.."
Nupur heard the voice and her mind went blank. She placed the mobile at an arm's lenght and saw the caller ID flashing the name Mayank Sharma.
she could have just disconnected the call and acted as if it never happened. Or she could just throw away her mobile, pack a bag and go to a far away place for as long as it takes to overcoe this embarassment.
Just when she was about to go with the latter she heard her name being called out again from a distance since she was still hoolding the mobile away from herself.
she took a deep breath and placed the mobile back at her ear," sorry. I thought Gunjan hai.."
"I am glad Gunjan nahe the. Warna mujhe ye sb sunne ka sharf kese hasil hota?"
"Apne kyun phone kia?"
"Tmare dad ka phone aya tha han ka aur mein tmse confirm kiay bagair baat agay nahe barhana chahta tha."
"Hogaya confirm? Mein Gunjan ko call krloon?"
She heard him chuckle and again thought about her other plan to escape.
"Han krlo. Sham ke liay invite bhe krlena."
"Kyun? Sham ko invite kisliay?"
"Sham ko tmare parents ne ghr bulaya hai. Baat pakki krne ke liay. Diya ke wajah se Mein abhe koi bara function nahe chahta. Tm Gunjan ko bula lo.."
"Hmm.."
"Kya hua?"
"Kuch nahe .. mein Gunjan ko call krloon.."
"Han theekh hai.. sham ko milte hain.."
Nupur disconnected the call and took a few deep breaths before calling Gunjan. She narrated everything but not with the same vigour and she wasnt sure why.
Gunjan on the other hand was very excited. "Sham ko mein to abhe a rahe hoon, acha ye batao sham ko pehno ge kya? Nupur tm wo pink wala pehan lo?'
They kept on discussing cloths and stuff and before Nupur could reflect on her mood, she was pulled into the hue and cry downstairs for everyone was panicking and she had to go manage the situation.
...
Everyone seemed happy at the gathering. It was a small function, but everyone seemed to be having a great time. However Mayank and Gunjan kept glacing at Nupur. She seemed, ... Off.
Gunjan had first thought it was because everything was happening so quickly. But she couldnt shake off the feeling that soMething was bothering Nupur.
neither could Mayank overlook the stark change in her tone. On the call she seemed excited, anxious but excited. Now she sounded troubled. That is if she said anything. Mostly she just kept quiet.
soon after the dinner the girls gathered in the other room but Gunjan had no chance to talk alone with Nupur.
aleena: "wese Nupur tmne bhe kamal kia parhane diya ko aye the, aur parha Mayank bhai ko dia."
Diya:" aleena.."
Aleena: "mein to bus aiwen he mazaq kr rahe the.. wese function proper bhe hona chahiay. Koi tuk banta hai aise.mayank sharma ke baat pakki hue hai akhir. Zaroor tmne kaha hoga Nupur.."
Diya:" -Nupur ne kyun kaha hoga. Mil kr decision lia hoga. Aur wese bhe ye ink personal matter hai Aleena.."
Aleena:"tm abhe se inka personal matter bana do. Aik to tmara masla nahe samjh aata mujhe>"
Gunjan: acha ap dono chai piyen gay? Ao Nupur hm ja kr bana len na.."
As soon as they were in the kitchen Gunjan hugged Nupur and asked, "Nupur mujhe tension ho rahe hai. Kya hua hai tmen? You seemed so happy and excited. But ab tmara ajeeb sa mood hai and dont lie to me."
"There is nothing to tell Gunjan. Mein.. mein hmesha kehte the ke yahan per sb manage krlia hai agay husband aisa ho jo sb khud manage kre. But na subah call per aik dum mayank ne aik dum se bus sb decide krke bata dia aur mujhe .. matlab.. I dont know.'
"Ye sb tm mujhse bhe keh sakti ho Nupur.."
Nupur and Gunjan both looked up to find Mayank standing at the door.
"Andaza to mujhe tha ke kch bother kr raha hai tmen but is baat ka andaza nahe tha.."
Gunjan:" mein zara Diya aur aleena ko dekh aon.."
Nupur pleaded with her eyes for Gunjan to stay and Mayank gave expression to hr words.
"Aik minute Gunjan. Ye baat mein Nupur se tmare samne krna chahta hoon.. this is new for me. Ghar ka bara hoon iseleye raye lene ke ya discuss krne ke adat nahe hai. Per iska ye matlab nahe hai ke mujhe tmara khayal nahe hai. Ya tmara nazriya mere liay important nahe. Mein koshish kroonga ke ainda ke is baat ka khayal rkhoon."
Gunjan: (looking at Nupur) tm bhe koi baat mere samne krna chahti ho ya mein jaon?"
Nupur glared at Gunjan while Mayank merely chuckled. Nupur saw Gunjan genuinely smile at Mayank and along with what mayank had said she felt herself relaxed.
she looked at mayank to find him looking at her as if waiting for a reply. She smiled and simply said thankyou. But Gunjan and Mayank bot knew that wasenough for the moment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMGGG !! Nupur mayank getting married 😳 😳 .. ahhh i lovedd the part.. esp the call confusion .. hayee 😳 .. i am all grinning and smitten .. loved the part .. plz ab jaldi likh lena 😳 .. love uu 🤗
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Wow Mayur get marry but nupur in confusion mayank understood and tried to clear her dilemma superb update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and plz try to give further updates as soon as possible

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