Great update. i am new to your story, but i love your writing skills.
Call me sadist or grey or black person but i love arnav's obsession and possesiveness. why? well i don't know. and i dont want to change him. i know there is no justification for his behaviour, its his natural behaviour and persona which he himself can't handle and i don't want to change him. he is extreme persone, when he hate someone, he will destroy that person. but if he love someone , he will love her like nothing matter to him more than that person. its not like he don't have any giudence but he knew no one can help him other than khushi.
He knew he can never ever able to leave khushi , and giving time and leaving separately is not an option. because he knew his and khushi's relation has been damaged to such extend where khushi will choose to love spending whole life in hell, but will never give him chance to live with him.and he can't live without her. he will not sacrifice or let her go for anyone including her and his mom or anyone.
And to be truthful , i don't want him to ever let her go or sacrifice her. i know i am too harsh on khushi but i am fed up of separation track or redemption track. yes i don't want anybody to feel offended but there is so many stories where hero will torture heroine than after sometime heroine will leave him for some reason and there start guilty and remption track, its too predictible . why can't heroine fight back , why she has to give up at one point or other. and why hero has to change for heroine or anyone. can't they accept each other with their flaws , strength and weakness, light and dark side.can't they make each other a better person.
I know asr character has lots of dark side, he is selfish, jealous person, angry,obsessive,manipulative,rude, but other side he is insecure, impatient,confused about feelings and my question is why he is like that. He has everything a loving mother , caring brother, money , fame except his father. so why he is like that, who made him like that, why his mother couldn't control him and couldn't able to provide good upbringing where other hand she made sahil a good and nice person. till date i only read asr's dark side in ur updates but there has to good side of him other wise why his mother love him more, why his brother care and obey him, relations is not only reason i think otherwise he has nice and good friend , i don't think its only about money and fame. i believe every person has good and bad side , and i want to explore ur asr's good side which make him such dominating person.
Now come to khushi , except fear , ur khushi has good side in every department , she is nice and kind girl, who has talent , mind , innocence, beauty and i can see glimpes of brave girl which she is not aware of, but asr knew this side of her. and only he can make her fearless girl. She thought staying away from asr will help her to live in peace but is it complete true? i don't know i have no reason or point but i am not agree with her. because from my sight i feel no problem can touch her or scare her except asr, if he is her destroyer but he is her protector too. who show her that no problem is bigger than him. if u can face asr than u can face any problem. i know its illogicalš.
She has to face asr , i think first she has to accept asr's dark side only than she can see his good side if he has.let her know how much power she has , because she is too ignorant to her power. she is the only person who can control asr. make him perfect partner. i don't want to her, to change asr but give him right path.let him know how can he win her.
I know asr has hardly done any good deed or to say he did nothing good in this ss but is it compulsory that he has to change his complete personality for khushi. can't khushi love him the way he is and give him right guidence which his mother could't do?
I know , i write too much but i just want to give u my thought and expectation.
And its ur story , u can write whatever u want , i will love it. because u r awesome writer. and i know u will do complete justice to ur story.
Bye
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