Ajeeb sa rishta-new!

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Hi guys! This is my first fan fic! Feel free to comment! Plzzz!

Starring:

Angad Khanna- Rich guy, has everything in the world but wants more of life and wants to enjoy at the fullest. Very outgoing and mysterious. Forced to study business though not sure what his real dreams are. Just moved into Khandani College

Kumud Deshmukh-Kripa's best friend and Josh's sister. Kumud is very sweet and emotional. Kumud is 2 years older than Kripa. Kumud is getting married to Kshitij, Angad'd brother. Her mother and father, Leena and Rohit Deshmukh arranged the marriage. Kumud has only seen a photo of Kshitij, but is very excited for the marriage

Kshitij Khanna-A very down to earth type of guy. Kshitij is Angad's brother. Does not want to get married. But their father, Jai Khanna wants his son to settle down. In other words, arranged marriage. Kshitij's life revolves around money but Kumud is unaware of these qualities.

Kripa Sharma- A funloving girl, very smart, overacheiver though poor. No family and wants to be an international journalist

More Characters:

Josh

Sahil

Mishty

Kajal

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Posted: 18 years ago
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A boy, of age 20, is sitting alone in a park with his eyes closed. The boy is sitting in a park, all alone, at night. The sky is very clear, stars twinkling and there was a sliver of the moon glimmering over all the stars, watching over them like a mother. The boy slowly opens his eyes and takes a deep breath. His name is Angad Khanna. Tomorrow is his first day at work. His dad is making him work for building character. Angad remembers the exact words his dad told his this morning: "Jis thara tera bada bhai mujhe office meh mudat karaha hain, waise tumhe bhi yeh zimadari nibhani paragi. Yeh salo ke purane parampara hain jo Khannas khob tari se nibharahe hain aur aaj tak nibhaya hain. Mujhe umeed hain ke mera beta mujhe nirash nahin karenga." With that, Angad had reluctantly smiled and said "nahi papa, meh apko nirash nahi karonga. Meh jaldi office join karonga, lekin college?" His dad had triumphantly smiled and said "beta, college toh tumhe jaana hi parenga, but I know that college ka akhri din hain kal toh, phir tum parso office join karna. You know, as a part time job for the summer. Ofcourse I'll give you the weekends off but you got to work hard. Maine es Khanna empire main bohut khoon aur pasina milaya huwa hain. Meh sochraha hoon ke aab tu aur tera badha bhai is business ko sambhalenge, toh meh kyo hadi meh tang ban raha hoon? Jab teri college khatam hogi, mein retire karlonga, aur sari zimidari tum dono ko sopdonga. Khanna Enterprises." Angad sighed as he saw freedom slipping through his hands. Well, atleast he would have one golden oppurtunity. Saat din pe uski bade bhai ki shaadi hain!
The camera zooms in on the moon and revolves around a small apartment in to a flat's window where a girl is sitting. She sighs. The girl is 19 years old. The girl smiles faintly and has a distant far away type of look. Kripa is working really soon. Kripa badly needs the money for college. Just one more year of college! Then, Kripa apni per par khadhi ho sakti hain! Tomorrow, Josh is coming over for the wedding of his sister. Josh and his sister are Kripa's best friends. Their family supported Kripa financially when Kripa's mom, her only living family, died four years ago. Josh has a girlfriend, Mishty lekin thori pagli si hain. Kripa imagines all the fun she will have with her friends at the wedding, akhir uski sabhsi achi dost ki shaadi hain! Kripa was so excited! Lekin ose intezar tha, intezar tha aisi shandar wedding party ki. . .lekin uski 😳
Edited by ashika4eva - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys...well no one seen my fan fic yet...so well i dont know how it is plz reply ASAP!!! thnks! heres the next updated part

Chapter 1

Angad is at Khandani RS College. Khandani College is a very ideal college. Kripa attends there, but all her fees are paid by Rohit Uncle. Kripa decided to pay for next year herself because Rohit Uncle would be hosting the entire wedding of his daughter and Kripa did not want to be a bhoj. She did not want to be dependent on anyone. Angad was driving a red convertible to college with Sahil, Angad's best friend.
Angad drives up to the college. Kripa and Gauri are nearby an enourmous tree.
G: (squeals) Wow! Look at that car! Amir baap ka beta lagta hain, nay?
Angad slides out of the car as Gauri says this.
K: Ha, woh red tee wala, really cute
G: Usko choro the other blue tee guy looks sooo hot na?
K: Toh jah shaadi kar le
G: Hmm, itni jaldi? No, but if you want to go and propose, be my guest!
K: nah, tikh hain lekin mere type kah nahin hain.
G: Ha ha I'd like to meet your type then
K: ha, whtever…(jokes) chal bell ring hui…jaldi chal warna profesor khoob pitay karega!
G: (groans) Are, meh toh bhool hi gayi, mujhe jaldi jaana hi parenga…mujhe report deni hain! Kripa see you later yaar!
K: Tikh hain, bye! Good Luck! (whispers) god, she is irresponsible…
Kripa hurries behind her. Kripa glances back. The red guy was saying waving to the other guy in the car. The blue guy took over the steering wheel and drove off. Amir guy bhagne laga…kripa ke taraf! The guy was running very fast and couln't stop and was about to bang right in to Kripa!
K: (screams)
A: Watch out!
Both of them topple on each other and fall sideways with papers flying everywhere and books laying flat on the floor. Angad is on top of Kripa and can not get up since Kripa's hair is tangled in to his chain.
K: Sorry, I should have moved but….ugh I'm sooo sorry!
A: Don't sweat…waise har din nahin hota ke meh ek larki se takratha hoon aur is bahane se class peh late hota hoon! (smiles warmly)
K: (smirks) Kya?
A: Joking! Lekin pehle din par hi late, very bad impression na!
K: (laughs)
Angad tries to get up, but in the effort falls back on her and both of stare at each other, in to the depths of their eyes. Angad coughs and Kripa looks away.
K: (nervously) Here, why don't I try untangling us
A: Thanks. So, what do you have now?
K: Science. OMG! Profesor Raj is going to kill me! I am soo late!
A: you better run
K: (groans) ugh! See you around! (looks at Angad) By the way, aap ki tarif?
A: (laughs) I'm known as Angad.
They both start walking fast to their classes
A: Aur –
K: Kripa. Kripa Sharma.
A: So see you around Kripa!
K: I never see you!
A: (glimmer in his eyes) That's cause I'm a newby…I mean I moved here from JRS college cuz of my dad…business reasons…thought I'd spend the rest of the final college days here. You know, blending in. . .
K: But…on the last day of school..?
A: I know…but I'm like that...when I want something I want it. And I wanted an experience in this college.
K: Oh. (looks at angad curiously)
A: so, here's my class.
K: Good luck! Bye!
Angad doesn't answer but just waves
A: (in his mind) Kabhi alvida na kehna.
K: Kya, tum bole kuch?
A: Nahi toh (smiles)
K: o…

To be continued…..
Questions? Comments? Concerns?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!!! kabhi alvida na kehna 😉 ....this sounds really interesting!! continue soon 😛 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was awesome! Im glad Angads not a stuck up guy, lol. Great part & cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnks guyz for boosting my spirits! here I'll post the new chapter now!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnks guyz for boosting my spirits! here I'll post the new chapter now!
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AWESOEM PART!!!mindblastingg!!!!!u r a gr8 writer!!!



CONT SOOON I AM WAITINGG



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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 2
K: I hate my life….kyon? Why me?
G: Relax, kuch nahin hoga, all you have to do is…what exactly do you have to do again?
K: Ure, buddhu, mujhe ek theen page ka essay likhna hain on the lesson today! Aur woh bhi sab ek ghante meh! By the end of today! Just cuz I was late once…oos larke ke chakar mein meh kaha phasgayi!? Kya karo…no the question really is when do I do the essay?
G: Skip lunch. . .go to the library instead.
K: Lekin tum?
G: Meh? I'll eat lunch with. . .someone…but you go…the essay is more important.
K: Thanks youre so sweet
G: I know!
K: Lets go to class now

In the library
K: God, only one more page left
Angad is sitting nearby watching her with a newspaper covering his face. Kripa is busy typing on the computer as fast as she can.
K: Only 6 more paragraphs…agh! Look at the time! Only 15 minutes left…hurry Kripa hurry!
A: chuckles and gives a loud hiccup
K: (turns around)
Angad hides his face again behind the newspaper
K: Angad! What are you doing here
A: (looks around innocently) Kripa, what a pleasant surprise!
K: Hahaha very funny.
A: Ok, I've been spying on you
K:That's bads manner you know.
A: That's my speciality
K: Kya?
A: (laughs)
K: do u have any idea what happened cuz of u?
A: (sheepish) srry, so how much you got left?
K: Ai… dekho, cuz of u phir se meh hui late! Only 10 minutes left…Uh oh!
A: Why don't I type it for you?
K: Um, u type fast
A: (remembers his business course taken at his fathers orders) lets just say that I've had experience
K: Here you go. . . this is the rubric. Are you sure you can do this
A: Yep
K: Ok then I'll just sit here and wait I guess (nervous)
A: You do that.
After some time Kripa peeks over Angad
K: Angad, are you over 3 pages?
A: (typing furiously) Yea, why too much?
K: Its ok you don't have to type all that…I just needed 3 pages
A: Ok, here I'll print it out
K: Thanks soo much!
A: (embarrased and looks down) yea, I, Its ok
K: (too busy to notice and picks up the papers printing)
A: soooo um how was the last day of hell?
K: Hell? Oh, yea, it wuz ok
A: Really, I thought otherwise.
K: Like?
A: like hell
K: Angad, you're so funny
A: whtever
K: Ok two more classes and the third year of college is over!
A: So…what are u planning this summer?
K: me…nothing much working and chilling
A: So, you want to join my bros wedding?
K: Why not? Sure when?
A: June 21st
K: Omg, I am sooo srry! I cant come, my best friends wedding is on that date and I'm holding a special show that I obviously can not miss. Sorry Angad!
A: Its ok
K: The bell rang, we should get going
K: I guess this is the last time we are meeting until 2 months right?
A: Yea
K: But you never know, kismat can meet us anytime
Kripa rushed in to a crowd of students leaving angad to wonder
A: (whispers) maybe kripa, maybe

to be cont…

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys i wont be able to update until later (2 to 3 days know) unfortunately! Why don't you pm me your usernames and I'll notify you when i can update again...but keep on checking, na!

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