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Posted: 8 years ago
See how the mirror neurons get activated by the writing of Nisha...Sonal jumps into the fray too...more the merrier.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting to exhale

The Dubai Paris flight was delayed by more than 4 hours due to some technical snag
Ranjan and Nivi slept in the First Class lounge, Nivi curled up on Ranjan's chest

II snoozed periodically lifting her head up to see if it was time.
He lounged in a corner listening to music, drinking bottles of water and typing on his ipad
Lasya played in the corner with a baby sitter

Sofia couldnt go to Paris so Sam was bringing Lasya by herself
To a high society Delhi wife that was blasphemous.
She was out shopping the duty free even though R&B assured her she could do that on her return

Sam flew out of the country once a year or even less these days.
Tan did, but he wasnt a shopper

R&B got up and walked over to II and sat down by her on the plush sofa.
"Hey" "Looks like we might board in an hour" he muttered

"I just wish we could just stay here for a day or two" she grumbled

"Just live in Dubai airport?" he asked gently smoothing her hair back from her forehead

The women returned from Mumbai after a whirlwind two day trip.
Nandu had returned from London with his ear pierced and Shravu had been caught smoking the first week of 8th grade.
Munirka had descended into pandemonium of sorts. Mr Iyer had to stay over a couple nights with Vandu just so Bala wouldnt go off the cliff

Bala's Dad's health was deteriorating and and so Kamakshi Athai had abandoned her own husband briefly to care for her brother aka Bala's Dad
II almost didnt want to leave Akka behind

She invited her to stay over at MM for a week. But Athim was too embarrassed that Bhallas would find out about Shravu's kartoot.
Amma had a new principal who wasnt exactly supportive or encouraging.
She got written up for how her CBSE book was still unfinished.

With one of R&B's partners threatening to quit, II did the wifely thing and set out to support her husband by being with him
Sam was struggling with her SIL's divorce and Nandu's teen angst

"U think Dad knows about Nandu" she sat up, groggily

"Does it matter?" he asked gruffly

"Yeah" II muttered with a faraway look... "it does"
She could still tear up, weeks after the trauma

He claimed he was experimenting. But nobody knew for sure.

"Bache badey hokar kya kya karte hain" she exclaimed philosophically

He nodded, playing with his ear buds

"Sometimes I feel its a good thing we didnt have a boy" she said

"U think girls dont smoke" he smirked

There was a loongish silence

"I dont know. I must be pretty backward. No Iyer I know of smokes" she said cringing
"Except Nandu" she said

"Its good he did it al now" he said

"Yahi baat tum mujhse teen hafte se keh rahe ho. It wont hurt Akka any less if she found him smoking at 20 or 30 or 40" II ranted

They looked at each other deeply

"U think Sam would like to go to Spain or Versailles?" he asked chaging the topic

"Kitne din rukengi?" II asked yawning and leaning back

"We could do a quick 4 day trip or something"

"Well dont u have to do paperwork for the departing partner?" she asked

"Umm.. yeah... but I could get away" he sighed

"HOW many bottles of water did u drink?" she asked

"Just 3?... this is my fourth" he said bending to pick one half filled one up from the floor"

The Emirates lounge crew walked over with coffee and a smile

"Did u have a good nap?" she asked politely

II nodded.. and smiled "is it filter coffee?" she joked

"Are u a Tamilian?" the girl of Indian origin asked

II nodded, tapping her red ruby on her right nostril...

ii sipped slowly...he took her hand and gently played with her fingers

"U need to calm down" he suggested

"I mean I wanted everything to be frozen in time... Nandu 9, Amma Appa at DII... and lasya a 6 month old..."
Lasya turned to look and came charging towards R&B

"MY POT" she said for my spot

Climbing on to R&B's lap

"See" II laughed derisively
"Manny's not going to be too happy because at that point she was divorced and single" he chuckled
II nodded wearily "Haan... u are right" she agreed

"Atleast ghar pe ek shaadi to hogi ab" she sighed

He couldnt for the life of him understand how upset teh Iyers at both places were over Nandu's antic

II tried to explain that they all suspected it was part of a larger pattern of him just not fitting in with the Iyer family rules

talks were on for arranging a janeu ceremony for him soon before his grandpa's health sunk further

Sam returned with atleast 15 bags

And a huge smile

From Cartier to Louis Vuitton to Birkenstock to Prada

She sat on II 's other side on the sofa

II waved her hand at the employee

She brought more coffee


'Abhi kaisa lag raha hai?" Sam asked caringly

II nodded

"U must think... see how these Punjabis are, her son got his ear pierced and she went shopping" Sam smiled self deprecatingly

II didnt say anything

Nandu and Shravu were in completely divergent homes

There was no comparison

R&B chuckled at that comment

"thanks Sam" he muttered

Ranjan woke and smiled shifting the baby positioning her arms correctly before going back to sleep

II didnt have the heart to leave him alone
Manny and Makarand were at his posting city

Manny would live "outside the cantt" for now she said so she wouldnt get him into trouble

Ranjan didnt say much, he was just like R&B but Manny worried him the most

If Sam's in laws were to leave then Sam's emotional health would bounce back for sure he was certain

Their refusla to watch Lasya was heart breaking but he knew Sam had Tan's love and support


"Weve led a crazy like II" Sam chuckled

II nodded...
"Once Dad walked in on him having sex in his dorm room" Sam said...

In an attempt to reassure her SIL Sam had committed the cardinal sin... shared some 12 year old trivia about her baby brother's voracious sexual appetite

"Sammm!!!!!!!!" r&b's breath caught in his throat, as II inhaled audibly, as her breath choked her


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Posted: 8 years ago
Ye lo...
ho gaya kachra Paris trip ka aur sath mein Spain Venice or vessels or wht ever
Sam u hav digded out the most sensitive spot of there relationship
Dude is already in a mess of moving out of a partner now let's seen how II will react
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waise how it would be nice if II don't show any reaction this time and say sage is now used to all of this
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely to see the ypdate...Sam complicates matters now...is there some mix up in names or am I mixing stuff reading from a phone ...while on the move.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting to Exhale...

Too brilliant a title Nisha... the end of the chapter had dude and II inhaling their breath , the air caught in their throats ...Wow what a Contrast... . Everything about the lounge set up was so in place... the flow was a delight to read ... II lounging in a sofa... Sam coming in and sitting on the other side of the sofa...with her bags, II waving her hand at the staff crew for coffee. When we read a book we never think too much about their style of writing because we take their skill for granted as they are published. Your mind is transported to the set up you visualize .

Please don't self discount your flair for descriptive writing . When we read, we just look at the gist of the contents and Many times we as readers we fail to notice the nuances that helps us visualize the scene setting You give.

Thank you very much

P. S your browser has been auto filling Nandu in place of shravu the last two updates I think
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: moonwearer

Lovely to see the ypdate...Sam complicates matters now...is there some mix up in names or am I mixing stuff reading from a phone ...while on the move.





There's a mixup dear where there is Nandu it should be shravu
in the cigarette fiasco
Edited by sonalgupta2004 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's not only teen angst,but it's like there's angst, restlessness in Sam, II, Ranjanji, Dude which everybody is waiting to exhale. Sam can't wait to do some retail therapy... , just is relieved getting away from shanthy niketan and in her anxious state of her teen ear piercing feels the Iyers have a more disciplined life style and blabbers stuff without giving a second thought to it.

Dude was extra sweet this chapter towards his wife, his touches, his holding hands with his wife had a lot of warmth and the conversation was so husband -wifey but trust an external influence to phero paani on that comfort.

Even if a wife knows that the past affairs are really past, even if she trusts him now, any trigger that reminds her of her husband's flings gets the wife insecure , for that moment atleast ... even if it's a passing mention.

Sam needs to be more careful about her casual mention of her brother's teen to adult years.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nisha weekend hai so please an extra update
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Posted: 8 years ago
One cannot completely run away from the past, it will put up its head sometimes even if not regularly. The challenge is to somehow move forward without letting the past have too much of an effect.


A rich resourceful family sitting in an airport lounge going to Paris should they not all be happy from a certain point so view? But they all have their own issues and anxieties. This is absolutely not a fairy tale even when the lead characters are so accomplished and the possibilities for a wonderful life seem so limitless. However, the limitations of human existence comes through so elequantly. That is why the story is so real and it makes us think about our own vulnerabilities and failures.

Thank you!
Edited by ocean28 - 8 years ago

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