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Posted: 8 years ago
@Hemaji Poorni is junior MV 😆😆. She can give takkar to her dadi 😆😆.
Of course Naina marriage Maya gang plays the part. She tells naa target each one individually. So now they are also pulling strings in their own way. Each person protecting the system has to fall. For that right strings needs to be pushed😆😆. Sudhir, Sree, Suman gave Maya the major breakthrough in Mahasivrathri and Maya is now cutting through the opening.
You understood the symbolism of Sree putting the colors after someone else put it 😆. Her friend threw color on Suman, she didn't threw back. The first one on whom she put the colors is Sree signaling even if someone tries no one can take Sree's place in her heart and he knows it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi shruthi..
I have followed your analysis in dahleez forum.
I have followed starting of this story but did not get time to comment.
I will start reading after exams.
You are brilliant writer.

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@Hiral thank you dear. Take your time. Will be waiting for your comments
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Originally posted by: sshirley


Yes just and commented..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow now there is going to be another one to one between Sree Suman. Bringing them even more closer.. healing some more wounds.
Naina is scared and the perceptive Rajat will definitely understand this. Hopefully Naina will change from her old ways. I'm hoping she brings together the seperated pair of Rajat and Sudeepta. From not being aware of love and pushing herself on to a man to being aware of the love and also understanding their pain of separation and moving out from between them. If she does this I'll love her just like I love sudhir and Co..
Sorry for the delay in commenting. After reading I tried commenting a few times but net on mobile phone was getting disrupted.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@Hemaji Poorni is junior MV 😆😆. She can give takkar to her dadi 😆😆.

Of course Naina marriage Maya gang plays the part. She tells naa target each one individually. So now they are also pulling strings in their own way. Each person protecting the system has to fall. For that right strings needs to be pushed😆😆. Sudhir, Sree, Suman gave Maya the major breakthrough in Mahasivrathri and Maya is now cutting through the opening.
You understood the symbolism of Sree putting the colors after someone else put it 😆. Her friend threw color on Suman, she didn't threw back. The first one on whom she put the colors is Sree signaling even if someone tries no one can take Sree's place in her heart and he knows it.


Wow amazing Hemaji.. 😃Thank u for decoding Shruthi. So helpful for me😳

Love your thought process as always Shruthi..⭐️👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 139- Pichkari

It was Holi. Since it was not being celebrated in Varma house Rajasekhar and Tilak went to the office saying there is backlog of work and they need to clear it. Children insisted on seeing the Holi fair so Sudhir had taken all of them to the fair ground. Even Poornima tagged along as she felt she needed a break.

Only Sreedhar was in the house, but he was busy writing his retail plan. Thinking of finishing it that day. Ladies were preparing lunch

" Maa masala tea " told Sreedhar as he stretched his arms and got up from the dining table.

" Yes Beta give me some 5-10 mins" told Maheswari

Sreedhar went near the door and stood there. From there he could see their gate and he could also see children playing with Pichkari. He smiled as he thought about the Holi the previous year. He had come just for 1 day break to play Holi with family.

" Sreedhar this year I have got a hiding place. You cant catch me with pichkari" told Murali. Murali never liked getting drenched in Pichkari. And Sreedhar's favourite hobby was ensuring he gets drenched with colored water from Pichkari. It was always hide and seek for Holi. Before Sreedhar could go out and get his hands on pichkari Murali will escape and Sreedhar will running across every alley in search of his brother. There were Mohalla boys who helped him with tips and every year he managed to catch his brother and drench him in pichkari before the day was over.

"Bhaiyya don't challenge, you know I have always won the challenge" told Sreedhar

" Let us see this time " told Murali

Like Murali told Sreedhar was finding it difficult to find him. He had searched across alleys, common hiding places, even went close near many people to check if it was Murali as it was becoming increasingly difficult to identify people as everyone had colors in their face. Sreedhar had literally given up and then it struck him. He had raced to the house and opened the attic door and saw his brother inside the attic

" Caught you Bhaiyya " and he dragged Murali to the garden

" Now get my pichkari treatment " he zoomed the pichkari at Murali

" Sreedhar " and he heard a crash. He came back to the present only to realize he had held Suman's hand unexpectedly and due to the impact the tea cup she was holding had crashed. Sreedhar looked at Suman and unable to control his emotions he went to his room and slammed the door shut

Suman looked at him trying to hide her emotions as she bent and began cleaning the floor

In the room Sreedhar kept his head in his hand and began to cry " What sin I do to deserve this God. Why it has to be between my brother and my love. Couldn't there have been better way. The last time I saw Murali Bhaiyya I had drenched him in colors. Never thought I will not see him again and the woman whom I took in my arms will stand in front of me as his widow, my bhabi. Why in one month everything was changed. Why? Why did you take him away so brutally. It is all my mistake. If I had told about Suman then the marriage wouldn't have happened. You would have been there. She wouldn't be put through this much suffering. US, US and US. My US dream cost everyone everything" he lamented

Maheswari made the tea second time. Vindhya offered to take it. Maheswari gave it to Suman

" Go, he has to accept truth. He has to know Murali is not there and we all have to live with that. There is no point lamenting about it. Memories will be there. But memories should never make you run away from reality" told Maheswari

Suman opened the door of Sreedhar's room. He was still sitting with head in his hands

" Sreedhar " she called gently. He raised his head and looked at her. Suman could see his eyes were red from crying

" You feel color of love went more deep than you intended " Suman asked

" Which love Suman. Both love for me is deep. I was only lamenting why God gave me this tough choice between you and Murali Bhaiyya. If you were not there obviously I wouldn't have been there. I could never take that guilt of ignoring your multiple pleas to get married. But if you were not there neither would Murali Bhaiyya survived as mom says. If you had committed suicide Murali Bhaiyya would have never been able to take that brutal rejection by a woman"

" Maa says that way" asked Suman

" Yes she says that way. She had said it when she knew you were not in agreement to marry Murali Bhaiyya. Then if both of us are not there what would have happened to Sudhir Bhaiyya. His sole purpose of giving up dreams were we both. I am sure Bhaiyya might have gone insane if destiny had given him that. And Tilak Bhaiyya well less said the better. Papa the family for whom he had sent away Anu Bhabi, that family itself wouldn't have existed"

Suman looked at him " So don't you see Sumi, you exist, so I exist, hope exists. Isnt it an irony. You manipulate people to meet your selfish needs then in one stroke the nature, God whatever you call it that power shows you, who is the ultimate master"

" Tea" she held the cup. He took it from her hand " Sumi yes I have pain, it will be there. But don't ever think, I will ever think loving you was a mistake. You are the best thing that has happened to me Sumi and I will love you always " . Suman looked at him , her eyes glistening seeing the warmth and love in his eyes for her

Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hai Shruthi .
An emotional episode . Why r the varmas not celebrating Holi? Due to Murali ?
How Sree reminded of Murali is so beutifully written.
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Posted: 8 years ago
A bit complex but will write later
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Ria hemaji knows me very well from DABH days 😆😆. You can say she knows the way I write or where I will take it 😆😆. By the way guys for next week till 12th the story updates will be a bit erratic. Reason I am travelling and there is some network issue which is not yet resolved. I will try to give an update tomorrow if possible. Not sure because I have to update Rainbow. So please bear with me 😃

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