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Posted: 8 years ago

Unres here..

Shruthi am .

My hunches are proven right. You bring it on 😉
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Originally posted by: deejagi



😆 hi just read Complexities (both chapters) could not post as I read it on phone. They are intrigued. Will write more later. Yes, need to read Placid yet. 😊


OS corner also pending. 😆 let go also pending 😆
Edited by daydreamers - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shruthi good to know that you are having fun 😃
@beautiful arre Ryan k vajah se toh sab bahaar aa ra h. 😆 end me aashi has to felicitate him 😆
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@DD thanks for the info on Teej. Actually in Kerala you are asked to keep 16 Monday vraths for Shiva to get a good husband. All girls of marriageable age are asked to go to Shiva temples. I had never kept this vrath. Reason is I was slogging in IT in my early twenties. If only I could manage to see the daylight I can keep vrath. My daily routine started at 7am and ended at 10pm in the first 3-4 years of my career. By the time it kind of settled I got married 😆😆
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Coming to story I knew you would guess. 😆😆. Enjoy guessing
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Chapter 78- The Choice

As they came out of the office Sudhir threw the car keys at Sreedhar. Sreedhar looked at his brother. He looked distraught, an unexplained rage boiling within him.

" Sudhir Bhaiyya what happened. Is everything ok "

" Nothing is ok Sreedhar and I don't think it will be ok ever. I cannot drive the car. You drive it "

" What is it Bhaiyya. Tell me. Maybe I can help " told Sreedhar as they got in the car.

" Sreedhar if I tell you now, even you wont be able to drive the car , so you drive the car, I will talk to you after reaching home. First let me compose myself "

Sreedhar was perplexed as he drove the car. What is that worrying Sudhir Bhaiyya that can make him distraught also. Has it got something to do with Suman. Is it something to do with her father.

" Bhaiyya please tell does Suman have any problem, did you get any info on her father planning something"

Sudhir looked at Sree and gave a fragile forced smile " Sree can only issue related to Suman make you distraught. You don't expect anything else my brother. Well you wont also. For you it has been always the perfect world "

Now Sreedhar was in thoughts " If not related to Suman what it can be that can trouble him. There was nothing else" Sudhir was silent and Sree saw his brother looking outside the window and in deep thoughts.

Maheswari was perplexed for various reasons. First a worried and fidgety Renu. Second Suman has not come down till now. Usually after the students go she comes back within 15-20 minutes after the bath and pray in the pooja room and will come to kitchen to help. Now it was almost 1 hr and no sign of her. Vindhya also after coming back from temple was trying to talk but Maheswari could see she was distracted.

Just then Sudhir and Sreedhar entered and Suman came hurrying down the steps.

" Sreedhar I need some provisions. I have made the list. Could you please get this for me tomorrow itself". She moved towards him with envelope in her hand.

When she reached him one look at her face Sreedhar knew that envelope was something else and her lips told him " urgent" . He nodded " Yes Sumanji I will get these tomorrow itself "

Maheswari looked at Sudhir whose face looked as if a thunder has hit him and Sreedhar was also looking confused. Now Maheswari knew there was something all 5 of them knew one way or the other and it is troubling them. Meanwhile Rajasekhar came to the dining table and Renu called the kids for dinner.

One look at her husband's face Vindhya knew the news has reached him. She quickly followed him upstairs. Sreedhar entered his room, kept the envelope on the table and decided to get the bath and then open it.

As soon as they entered the room Sudhir threw the briefcase on the bed and slammed his fist against the wall

" Sudhir what are you doing. Please calm yourself. This is not the time to vent your feelings" came in Vindhya

" Vindhya I should have known, I should have known from Tilak Bhaiyya's silence to speak anything to me on Anu there was more to it than I knew. How can I keep quiet Vindhya when I know my father was responsible for destroying an innocent girl's life. How can I have peace when I know my family has did the character assassination of a girl intentionally. What value does my family gives to the sanctity of marriage when my bhaiyya married a girl, enjoyed Suhagraat with her and then threw her to the wolves when the symbol of their love came in her womb. Yes he can tell family pressure. Did he discuss with someone before succumbing. Did he call me. Ask me " Sudhir what can I do, is there any way to protect Anu" . No nothing. I know Dadu would have blackmailed Bhaiyya, but who asked Bhaiyya to succumb. I hate myself Vindhya. I hate myself for being part of this family. I don't know what more dark secrets my father holds. I am sure there are more" He sat in bed holding his head in his hands.

Vindhya went near him and took his hands in hers and sat beside him. He kept his head on her lap. She held his hands.

Sreedhar was drying his hair with towel as he took Suman's letter and opened it. First line itself held the warning " Sreedhar what you are going to read below can be very shocking for you. More shocking than seeing your Sumi as your brother's widow. But I don't want you to break down. I want you to swallow this bitter pill. Because if you break down we wont reach anywhere and lot of things can go haywire "

He started reading the letter. First the towel went from his hand and he held the letter with both hands. As he read tears started flowing from his eyes. His Papa was involved in the character assassination of an innocent girl. They had forced the girl to kill the first lamp of this family. The girl took the life of a widow to give dignity to her child as the father has not owned it. And that life killed her. It was too much, for Sreedhar it felt like the image he held of his father breaking under his feet. Papa could go this extend to protect traditions and Bhaiyya he succumbed. Now it was betrayal and anger growing in Sreedhar as he continued reading the letter.

" Sudhir listen to me. I understand your frustration. But at this point we have to make a choice and I am asking you what choice you want to make. Do you want to be Rajasekhar Varma's son, Tilak jethji's brother, Anusree's devar or Poornima's chachu"

Sudhir got up and looked at Vindhya. Her question had forced him to think in new direction and Vindhya saw Sudhir composing himself.

" Sudhir you cannot change what happened to Anusree. Tilak Jethji already has suffered day in day out with guilt. He believes he has blood of his child in his hand. Do you want to aggravate that feeling. Leave Papa for the time being. Just think about the girl Sudhir. What can Sudhir chachu do for Poornima now. Because in what he does lies not only the future of the girl but also the future of other kids in this family. Do we want Poornima to end up questioning everyone here or do we want Poornima to be integrated with this family. Make her accept Aakash, Adwaith and Nami as her siblings and make them accept her as their elder didi. Make Papa and Maa accept her as their eldest grand child. Think Sudhir what do you want to choose "

As Sreedhar reached the end of the letter Suman has put a choice for him " Sreedhar I know by this time you are distraught but I want to ask you one thing. Tilak Jethji and Renu Bhabi wants to accept Poornima in their life as their daughter. What does her Sreedhar Chachu wants to do to help the cause. Does he wants her within the family or he wants at this point to question the past "

" What have you chosen " asked Sudhir

" You very well know my answer Sudhir because I have seen the choice in your eyes "

" Sreedhar if you make the choice to be of Poornima's chachu come to the meeting in my room post Maa and Papa go for sleep. Renu Bhabi, Sudhir Jethji , Vindhya Bhabi and myself are planning to discuss what to do next "

As he folded and shred the letter Sreedhar knew his choice.

Maheswari observed Sudhir and Sreedhar when they came for dinner. They looked stoic and were just eating food absentmindedly. She decided to observe them.

Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh god another cliffhanger.. but Suman and Vindhya have calmed down the storm for the time being. maheshwari is planning to observe the brothers.. will she overhear their discussion.. will she get to know everything that has been hidden from her. will she calm herself and make the choice of being the grand mother of Poornima?
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Shruthi, I don't know what to write for this chapter. Yes it is easy to say and advise something to another person but when it hit hard on oneself it is very difficult to digest. It is the same case with Vindya, Suman & Sidheer, Sreedhar. At this moment they (ladies) are worried about the girl in question and their partners and family and the men are concerned about the injustice done by their family (father & brother) to an innocent girl and they fine it too hard to believe their brother cheated a girl and at no point of time, they thought that may be their brother didn't knew about Anu being pregnant with his child nor about their father knowing that his grand child is alive. Yes Rajashekar succumb to his father's decision as he was insecure thinking he may not be able to take care of his wife and kids without his ancestral property and business as he may not have gathered the required self confidence to go against his father's will. he was weak in that aspect and to cover up his inability, he passed on that ball on his son Tilak and ensured he succumb to the situation as he could not imagine his mother and brothers on street. Its not just him but we see many such people in our day to day life and move on. There are some cases we do go against our will & ideology. Despite knowing it is wrong to pay extra amount than the meter, we do agree to pay extra to the auto drivers, if we have to travel urgently and find it difficult to get any other auto. It was a similar case for RS Varma when he chose his wife & kids against the girl who had just entered their family stealthily. Please pardon me to use the word stealthily for Anu as I can't blame Tilak alone for whatever has happened to her and her child. Had she waited and insisted on getting married and enjoying the Suhagrat only after his parents & her parents approval, she would not have ended up like that and even Tilak who loved her whole heartedly would have mustered confidence and bravery to put forth his minds in front of his parents or at the least his mother. They would have either accepted it or explained him of the consequences of such alliance.

So whatever has happened now has happened and whatever the brothers decide, they should consider all the probable situations that might arise when the get ready to accept Poornima to the family. They should make a very well thought strategy which should include their mother (Maheshwariji) as she will be the one who will have to answer the society on her upbringing and the moral she had instilled in her kids.
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Ria things have to be known and no running away from it
@Jaya when truth hits you sometimes, when your perception break it is really hard, hard to digest. I understand your point on Anu. If you see Suman wanted to take the same step as Anu and Sreedhar stopped her. Yes Suman has lot of pain, she has suffered a lot, but that one step not wanting to have a secret marriage by Sreedhar has kept a clock of honor, pride and dignity firmly on Suman at this point.
That's the difference of Tilak and Sreedhar. Tilak went against the norms, but when the norms binded him he couldn't stand up. Sreedhar decides to go for the norm. It gives him the pain. But the pain of Sreedhar-Suman is taken more as their struggle to get acceptance within the norms, whereas both Tilak-Anu suffered for going against norms also putting an innocent child bear the cross of it. And also their respective families.
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Hai. Shruthi 😊 nice one. It's really tough to handle such situations .
Really Suman and Vindhya calmed down their men well. 👏
Sudhir anger and frustration are reasonable but ,Now it's not a time to argue and blame each other for the past secret. And sreedhar. He is shocked knowing about their father 😲. Being the youngest,he was protected by all .he lead a happy life unlike his brothers until he saw Suman in his house .its hard to digest the truth that bounced back in to Their life's
. He might have felt only Suman life is destroyed due to system and traditions but the roots r very deep in their own family and even his own brothers life is affected whether directly or indirectly . I also wonder what could be the secret of Murali.
They have to anyway handle the situation before it turns worse for them and for Poorni. As Tilak is absent ,it comes for Sudhir and sreedhar to play it well. Anything done in anger will only lead to a disaster and even destroy their efforts done till now.
I am eager to see how Poorni reacts to the truth of her life. 😊 And. Maheswari sensed the storm raging in her sons mind. 😲 ...
Waiting for next update 😊
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