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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
This is an xtra long part, cause guys i have to continue with my studies so i will be continuing this fanfics as soon as i get time 😊

Angad just collapses onto his bed and stays there still, motionless and not even a sound was made.

Angad thinking) How can kripa do this to me. I loved her with all my heart. I gave her all my love. I loved her so much. Kripa, i will fulfil ur wish but i will hate you for the rest of my life. From this day on, i only live my life for me, myself and I ...

Shaila walks in and she puts on a act " angad beta, woh kya hai ki aapka mamaji proposal ne kiya" I would like you to accept this marriege. I have met the girl and everything. She is very nice and good.

We see a girl walking in high top boots. You see her moving her waist in a little short skirt. She puts on her mascara then her lip gloss. She fligs her her and it is none other than

http://shoot.indiatimes.com/roshni/photo13.jpg

She is priya. Then the scene flips back to angad and he accepts the marriage. Shaila wants the marriage to be held ASAP so she decided for the marriage to be held in the next week.

Kavya and Anjali go up to shaila and tell her about their relationship, so she decides to have the wedding the same day and Angad and Priya's...

Kavya nd anjali in their bedroom

K- Anjali i'm very happy today, because i have everything i ever wanted in life
A- im happy also, finally we will give our relationship a new meaning. Kavya and Anjali's softly brushed their lips together then they hugged each other saying at the same time " I love you "

A week passes by fast and its time for the wedding.

Angad and Priya get up to do the pheras/ They got around the fire then we see kripa praying and her diya blows out. We see angad putting the sindoor on priya, then we see someone calling kripa. We see prithvis dead body on the ground and everyone is crying. Immeaditatly prithvis mom takes off her bangles, then we see shaila putting kangans on priya. We now see kripa walking downstairs in a white saree all pale and then we see priya walking in the house with the rituals proceeding.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
so sad i just read itr today but i am not able to figure out why did kripa marry prithvi she could just tell him the truth anyways great job
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
Great part!!!!!!!
Plz go on soon!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: armaghan0

so sad i just read itr today but i am not able to figure out why did kripa marry prithvi she could just tell him the truth anyways great job



remember, prithvi is evil!!!

anywayzz.. great partzzz just donno who told her that angad's marriage was pakki in childhood..

who is that evil person.. priya'z mom??

yaar u must continue asapp!! dont worry tho ill wait till u get free
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
Just for you'll i managed to write a part for you guys... 😉

Kripa is now a widow [ i had to kill someone off, cause new ppl will come in as the story moves on ]

Meanwhile angad puts on a happy face when deep inside is full of pain, anger and sorrow. He decides to move on with his new life with priya. Finally in their bedroom we see priya sitting on the fully decorated bed with her ghoongat covering her face.
Angad with courage finally takes off the ghoongat from her face, priya just stares at his face. She then says
" by the way mr. angad khanna, what did u buy me. And btw, i only like designer stuff and all my stuff need to be by armaani, banana republic, or some expensive brand. Afterall i am priya khanna now.
Angad is thinking to himself " oh god, now my wife is a full b---h... He just goes to sleep thinking about all his times with kripa.

He wakes up the next morning, takes a shower and finds that priya is already dressed. He asks her to make up the beds as he is getting late
P- Angad, what do u think of yourself. I am not your maid, ask someone else to do it. She just leaves the room in a rage
A- I hate her, i wish she'd just disappear.

We then see kavya and anjali walking down the stairs happily. They then tell everyone that they have decided to go to america as kavya needs to continue his work and at the same time they can spend time together. They will be on vacation for 5 months. They bid everyone goodbye but while leaving anjali thinks to herself that she wishes Kripa was there.

Meanwhile Kashish is sitting lonely and bored. She is sad that both her sisters left, and now she has nobody. She is just sitting sadly on the chair when sujal comes.
S- hey kashish, tum kya kar rahee ho?
K- kuch nahee..
S- to mere saath shopping chalo ge?
K- Kya shopping, is waqt?
S- haa, kyun. I need new working clothes and i dont have any sense of style.
K- kashish chuckles
Sujal is just mesmerized by kashish's beauty and just keeps staring.
K- chaliye?
S- Ha chalo... 😳
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2 months passed ...

We see a lady wearing buisness clothes. We see her wearing high black heels, a black blazer, and we see her wearing black pants. When she turns her face it is none other than KRIPA...

We see her walking into a mansion and she is greeted by a girl named Kaajal

http://media.santabanta.com/gal/bollywood/kaajjalsony/10.jpg

Kaj- Hi di, tum kab ayye?
Kri- I just came

Kri- Btw Kaajal i need you to help me, i want to make a new design. { kripa is a famous fashion designer }

Then we see Angad, Priya, Sujal, Kashish, Shaila, Dilip, and dadi ( angads grama ) all in 2 cars following each other.

We then see Kaajal and Her Bua and Kripa eating.

( btw kaajal's bua also lives with kripa, so its kripa, kaajal and bua in one house )

Bua, kripa if u dont mind, i called a few relatives over for dinner i hope you dont mind.

Kripa- Not at all bua, as it is i wont be returning late from office tonight ...
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I know this part was confusing so i'll just clear some things up.

- kaajal and her bua live with kripa, how they came in the story? i'll tell later.

I'll update in the next hour 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
After eating, Kripa leaves to go to office. Meanwhile, we see angad's whole family including Kavya and Anjali cause they came back all stop at a huge mansion. We see fountains in front of it and we just see kashish and anjali staring. It is the most beautiful house they've ever seen. Then bua and kaajal welcome them in the house.

Priya- Bua is this ur house?
Bua- no, it is one of my closest friends. She is like a daughter to me and like a sister to kaajal.
Bua tells them to enter.
They all look around and just gaze at the sight. The place is so clean.

They all sit down and start talking. Bua and Kajal doesnt really like the way how priya is behaving with an attidude.

Just then kripa walks in

Kripa - Kajal mera file kaha hai?

Then we see kripa shocked and just staring. The whole place becomes quiet.

Bua- aree kripa, aao na beti.. betho
Kripa sits as everyone is left stunned.
Dilip - Bua, where is the owner of the house i'd love to meet them.
B- actually shes here right now, its none other than kripa.
All are just left shocked.
Anjali- Kripa, yeh tumhara ghar hai.
Kripa - Ji
All are just shocked.
Kripa- bua, i have to leave and.. bua just cuts her off.

Bua- i dont care, you will stay home tonight. Why are you always working, dont you ever live?
Kripa just stays quiet.
Dilip- So kripa what do u do?
Kaajal - uncle, kripa and i are both fashion designers we have our own clothing line and everything...
Priya - oh thats nice, so are you married?
Kripa- she sees everyone staring, " I was, 2 years ago "

Priya - kya matlab, aapka patti kaha hai?
Kripa - ji woh, mera patti is duniya me rahe nahii.
All are just left shocked. Angad, Anjali, Kavya, Sujal and Kashish are just speechless.
Priya - so ur a widow?
Kripa - unfortunately... " excuse me "

She runs up to her bedroom and starts to cry at the window. She sits by the window cill and just stares outside the window letting the cool breeze sway upon her light skin.

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Kripa finally goes back downstairs after getting a hold of herself. She goes downstairs and everyone is having dinner. She goes downstairs and sits beside bua and kajal. Everyone is talking but she is just quiet the whole time. Angad notices it and feels weird.

Priya- vaise kripa, have u ever thought about getting married? I mean ur still 27, ur still young.
Kripa- hmm.. i never thought about it. I have karan, bua aur kaajal, muhjhe kuch nahee chahiyee.
Priya- karan?? karan kaun? is he ur boyfriend?
Angad started to get jealous...
Kripa- no he is my son ...
Angad- Kripa u have a son?
Kripa- not biologically, i adopted him. Hes only 4 months old.

Kashish- Kripa that is so sweet, can we see him.
Kripa brings him down everyone is just mesmerized by him...
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plz leave comments guys 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
very gooddddddddddddddddd.........me liking it very much........... 👏
please continue soon..... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very gudddddd!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 PLEASE update soon!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
Okay, I'll post the update in the next 15 min, today is extra special cause tomarrow is a day off for me 😆

So im just gonna relax and continue this ff 😆

Thank you, for all ur lovely comments. 😉

<3 always Aishu
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
All are just mesmerized by karan.


They all think that he is just so cute. He then starts to cry and kripa talks to him like a baby and everyone is just surprised with kripa's behaviour. They never knew that kripa was a natural with children.

Kashish- kripa how are u so good with children?
kripa - pata nahi, but its a strange feeling when u hold a child in your arms and say that its your own. I know that karan mera beta nahee hai,lekin i want grow him as my son.

kashish - oh okay.
Priya- all i know is that i dont want any children, theyre just brats..
Kripa- no not all children are like that. Just wait till you get a child of ur own, then you'll know.
Priya - yeh nahi ho sakta ..
Kripa- kyun yeh nahi ho sakta?
priya - i dont care whether angad wants a child or not but all i know is that i do not wanna loose my figure [ and she just storms off ]

Kripa- i'm sorry bua ji, shes mad because of me. I'll go apologise.
Kaajal- kripa, there is no need.
Kripa- par?
Kaajal- kripa she is the one with the problem here so why should u apologise?
kripa- okay.

Just then the phone rings.
Kaajal - kripa, someone wants to talk to you.
Kripa takes the phone and walks out of the room.

Back in the family room **

Kaajal - you know what bua, i think that kripa and rajeev make a good couple. They both get along with each other so well and they're best friends.
Bua- yes thats so true...
Anjali, Kashish and Angad arent really comfortable discussing kripa's marriage.

Just then kripa comes back and bua ji tells her that she, dilip and naina will go into another room to have a private conversation.

Its just kripa, angad, sujal, kashish , kavya and anjali.
Anjali- kripa how did u become so rich and all this?
Kripa- after prithvi's death i went back to university and got my degrees and therefore im a fashion designer.
Angad- why kripa why? why did u leave?
Edited by aishika_pyar_5 - 18 years ago

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