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chinnulu

@chinnulu

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#221

Loved the Update

Though Arnav wanted to have his wife and son with him and protect them, not wanting to take any risk until Shyam is being caught he had to leave them at Vade's place. Loved how excitement Arnav felt describing his son to Aman. Aman is really a true confident who stood by Arnav even in time of his distress. So that is how Tania was engaged to Arnav. Hope Tania accepts whatever Arnav said to her and realize no one can be forced to love the other and call off the engagement and move on in her life with dignity. Though Dadi's intention of seeing her grandson settled and have a family of his own, being an elder member of the family she shouldn't have forced Arnav and give hopes to Tania promising her to get her married to Arnav when she is clearly aware of Arnav who will not accept if he was forced to do. Glad at least Arnav let Khushi knew what all happened during her disappearance before she comes to know from someone else and think bad about Arnav. Wondering did Khushi left Arvin in Vade's house itself. She should have bought him along with her where Arnav could keep them in front of his eyes all the time by protecting them.

Eager for the next one

Thanks for the PM

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#222

Wiw wat a update. Loved arnav fr explaining everything to khushi.

Bt i hate wen khushi calls him sirji.

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#223

I love how Arnav is filling in the gaps and keeping her in the loop.

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#224

good that Arnav told her about Tina, so no misunderstanding should happen.

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Inquin

@Inquin

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: chinnulu
Loved the Update
Though Arnav wanted to have his wife and son with him and protect them, not wanting to take any risk until Shyam is being caught he had to leave them at Vade's place. Loved how excitement Arnav felt describing his son to Aman. Aman is really a true confident who stood by Arnav even in time of his distress. So that is how Tania was engaged to Arnav. Hope Tania accepts whatever Arnav said to her and realize no one can be forced to love the other and call off the engagement and move on in her life with dignity. Though Dadi's intention of seeing her grandson settled and have a family of his own, being an elder member of the family she shouldn't have forced Arnav and give hopes to Tania promising her to get her married to Arnav when she is clearly aware of Arnav who will not accept if he was forced to do. Glad at least Arnav let Khushi knew what all happened during her disappearance before she comes to know from someone else and think bad about Arnav. Wondering did Khushi left Arvin in Vade's house itself. She should have bought him along with her where Arnav could keep them in front of his eyes all the time by protecting them.
Eager for the next one
Thanks for the PM

That is an awesome awesome update. So now, Tina needs to be bidaai-ed 😉

I love the way Arnav has taken Khushi as his wife very seriously. I also like Aman's loyalty in this story.

One thing I want to say- the Arnav in your three stories are different- One is a nice family guy (my very own arnav), this one is a rough arrogant businessman, and the one in Enigmatic love is a shrewd businessman.

I also like the way you don't paint khushi as a very innocent (someone who has no idea of anything, basically dumb) kind of a person in any of your FFs. Even though they are demure to start with, they know what exactly they are getting into- and accept it headlong.

Your FFs are not immature like some others that I have read. Thanks for the brilliant writing! Please keep going.

Edited by Inquin - 7 years ago

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@cuppycake11

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#226

Beautiful Update as ever 😳

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#227

Nice update,this chapter was all abt their suffering how they had their lives without having eachother both of them were terrible.I don't blame arnav's dadi as she was ignorant abt the situation so she did what was best for her grandson.